Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:49 PM Title: Prologue
He is called Hawkeye for a reason. He favors high places like the hawks. High mountain air is very clear and pure like him, Redwood trees are the tallest trees and redwood has a very different smell than pine. It is a nice smell. As to his bow I would go with bees wax as that is what bowstrings were coated with in the olden days to hold the strings hold together so he is somewhat of a tridionlist even if his bow is metal for strength. I did not want to say he smelled like iron as that is always noted when Bella smells blood, so I thought it should be a different metal smell that would repersent strength.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Guardian
Clint would smell like the high mountain air, redwood trees and tinge of metalic strength.
Interesting. I've got a couple suggestions from other readers, but they're more along the lines of gun smoke and bow resin. I haven't made a final decision on what I'm going to use for his scent yet, but I've got a few options now, lol.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Guardian
Hi I just have to tell you what a bang up job this story is. I love your world in this story can't wait to see where else you are going to take us. Thanks and keep up the great work. Can't wait for more updates 😃
I'm really enjoying writing it, so I'm glad you're enjoying it too.
Date: 21 Jan 2017 4:48 PM Title: Prologue
Don't be sorry, for my over eagerness. The quantity of stories in general has not decreased but the quality and the completion has. I am so excited i found your story. I'm very grateful to all the authors out there.
Not weird to enjoy your own writing.
Date: 21 Jan 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: When Good Men Do Nothing
this story is awesome. Really cool to see a completely different take on e bella character and to experience what she'd do in this particular situation. You've done a great job and I and I'm sure hundreds of other people are the same in waiting impatiently for your next update. Cheers, Max
Thank you so much for reviewing!
I think I actually got a little tired of how Bella's often portrayed. It's like she's either subservient or a complete 180 of how she was in the books. I like the idea of Bella being stronger but still retaining the sweetness and the protective instincts she's known for. I didn't want her to be canon Bella, but I also didn't want the changes in her to be completely unrealistic. Her behavior now seems like it's natural, like it's a real possibility given how much time has passed and what's she's been through, so I'm glad you like her.
Date: 19 Jan 2017 4:51 AM Title: Prologue
I was so excited when I saw this up thinking you updated. Great story I'm enjoying it tremendously. I love Clint and Bella stories so thanks for a great one.
Sorry, haven't updated yet, but I'm hoping to have a new chapter ready by Monday or Tuesday. I got sick this week and honestly just didn't have the energy.
I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I am too, actually. I'm having so much fun writing this. I absolutely love Clint/Bella stories, but I've only seen three or four out there. That's why I decided to write it, honestly. I ran out of Clint/Bella stories to read.
Weird fact, by the way... it is entirely possible to get addicted to reading your own work. Doesn't matter that I already know what's going to happen, I need to read it anyways!