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Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was great, thanks and loved the misdirection, I really enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 16

Jings, Crivens, help ma boab! I love it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh my! xx

Alexis

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Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'll hold him, while she punches him in the nuts lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

Smooth, he's real smooth xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ooh, Lauren the bitch, no matter where or when lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Liking Jade, she's obviously got her back xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice, I know I'm gonna enjoy this xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

I hate that Bella and Peter got hurt a little, but glad that they are together again.    I do wonder what Mackenna will do to her traitor husband.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh hell....You're gonna give us another twist.  Can't wait to see who else dies before James gets given to Billy Black.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Well that was yummy!  ;)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Carlisle was a little evil troll and his kid was just like him.  ugh...

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh hell...You surprised the hell out of me.  I love being shocked at a turn a round or expected ending.  I do hope Demetri is OK and not really hurt though.  I do like him and Jade.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

I can't wait to read how this came about.  I loved that Edward was beaten to a bloody mess.  Does that mean I am a secret sicko???  nah....  LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh hell...half way through this chapter, I was hoping Bella was dreaming.  I hope Peter still likes her.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

Still am glad that Bella has Jade in all this cluster fuck.  Carlisle seems smarmy.  ugh......

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

I like when Jasper and Peter are protective of each other, trust each other , but let each other handle their own dam shit.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hopefully Carlisle and Esme will kick Edward's dumb ass in different ways.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

I laughed that the only things that really upset Bella this chapter was being woke up at the ass crack of dawn and the thought of having to call fuckward.  LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

I wonder if Bella knows Peter has 'claimed' her.  hmmmm.....   I'm glad Nahuel and his sister will be safer now.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

I liked Maria laughing with Bella.  Bella isn't haveing to pretend at all really, she's just being herself mostly.    I wonder why Charlotte would care who looked at her brother.... hmmmm.....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

So we know some of the crooks are worse than others, but I really despise crooked cops.  I'm getting that feeling from Carlisle's desparation.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

Everything about this whole thing seems shifty to me.  I'm glad Bella has some 'qualified' people that know what is going on.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well I am glad that Emmett and Demetri didn't forget about Bella......I was going to be mad at them too.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Bella has at least 1 friend that she can bitch too about all the stupid pig men that are surrounding her and will surround her.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm starting to think Carlisle may be more than stupid, he maybe an ass as well.  Poor Bella.......

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds like Edward is even worse than I thought and the chief is even dumber than I thought.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Human Edward is slimy??  That's new and I hope he and his dad get theirs.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

loved it!

love all your fics!

dont ever stop writing!

...please...

ty...

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

wow,

what a twist!! brutal on edward...

after i finish this fic, i cannot help

but re-read with the full understanding of

bella's true ID... it makes the story

different than the first read...

well done...never would have guessed!

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 20

Awesome story! 

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the plot twist.  I just wish there was more.

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