Date: 04 May 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
Love this story! Very well written I love ur twists and canyon wat for more!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
I bet renee is jealous at first but then realizes it can better her too.
Date: 04 May 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻 these last chapters are great as always can't wait for your next post. Hope it's soon❤️❤️
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
I really wanted her to get her kiss.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
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[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: An Interruption
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[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
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[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
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Date: 03 May 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
Great chapter. I wish they were longer
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
OMG ! Love it! Can't wait to read more .Hope Monday gets here Quick LOL! Great writing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
I hope he kisses her to make it clear that he has the only claim on her and vise versa
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Searching for Him
Is alice a cullen too?
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Glimpse of His Life
An angry edward is a yummy edward!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: Memories of a Monster
So now where do they go from here?
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Secret Meeting
So he is mobward & he was watching her in the beginning of her shopping trip. I love the little clues he drops. Maybe it was another mobster that he is in competition with.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Life Imitates Art
Renee is too self centered to notice anything. I hope bella notices that edward did not admit to meeting bella earlier either.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rainy Chicago Days
Poor bella. I think edward is just seeing what a crazy mother bella has.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
I hope she doesn't tell her mother.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
Is he in the mob? How would he have conveniently found her? It seems he has eyes everywhere.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
I'm so intrigued!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6: Secret Meeting
Please update soon!!! I love this story!!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
love it! Can wait for more!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
Just read the last chapter you've posted..and I can't wait to read the next you have me hooked.
Date: 25 Apr 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
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Date: 25 Apr 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
Love this time period of history. Can't wait to dive into the next chapter❤️❤️
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rainy Chicago Days
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Date: 08 Mar 2017 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
I see he still "drives like a Cullen" even if he's not a vampire in this story ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 08 Mar 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
Love this story so far! Sounds like the type of bookstore I would love to visit. Just for future reference , though , Margaret Mitchell only ever wrote one novel! Keep up the great work !
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
Can't wait for the next chapter I'm liking this so far
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
So I really like what I've read so far! Definitely hooked on the story. I did notice some misspellings as I was reading. In chapter one you wrote defiantly instead of definitely then in chapter two you wrote shutter when it should have been shudder and in this chapter, chapter 3, you wrote access when I believe you meant assess and then you wrote discuss and I believe you meant disgust and you also wrote lead when if you meant lead as in leading someone kind of it should have been the past participle and it should have been led. Not trying to make you feel bad because it's easy to make these mistakes and I really enjoy the story, they were just small things that I noticed while reading and I figure it can help you as you write the following chapters! Seriously though really enjoying what I've read so far! Hopefully Renee doesn't try to steal Edward's attention from Bella because she is jealous, but I see things going downhill when it comes to Renee and Bella's relationship. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I would love your help! You have a great eye and it's so hard to edit your own work. I use spell check on Microsoft Word, and it can be sort of bad at times for this reason. My email is thehighlanderprincess@gmail.com I would love to hear from you
Date: 02 Mar 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
http://www.haslams.com/ This is the bookstore I took my kids to every Saturday. They loved it.
Author's Response:
That bookstore looks amazing! It was established in the 1930s and the store is so beautiful, i am definitely in love. Your kids are super lucky. I work at a used book store right now while i'm in college :). I'm an English/writing major, i work at a book store, and i have a huge library...so i definitely love books. Thanks for sharing that with me! I'll have to visit next time i am in florida!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
So sweet you made her an artist like you 😉
Author's Response:
Haha I had to! Its the only job I know something about haha. I'm glad you noticed :). I'll have to email you some of my artwork :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
Bella doesn't know what's happening....yet hee hee
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
Chicago is here too awsome. I get to be the first review yeah me!!! I just subscribed to the blog I know how faithful you have been with updates, even with your busy life, I don't want to miss any. I am loving all your stories thank you for the great work. Ajfflady