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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok I'm sorry, got my chacaters mixed up....I wonder when will Edward find out her name is Bella and that Alice knows her.



Author's Response:

It's ok you just had me confused

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

ok sorry..  I must read it again..I guess I'm confused....



Author's Response:

It is an Edward Cullen and Bella Swan, twilight based story. There is a reason for her telling Edward that her name is Kate

Reviewer: canada02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 56

Salut

Je ne reçois plus aucune alerte pour ton histoire 

S'est bien dommage, car je l'adore

😉 Bree

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi had to use google translate to read your review. I post a chapter or two every weekday. That will not change unless something happens to me.

i also post when I update on a lot of Facebook groups 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 56

thank you for the updates... I wonder when will Christian find out her name is Bella and that his sister Alice knows her?



Author's Response:

Christian there is no Christian in my story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 56

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 54

:) 

Reviewer: canada02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 53

😉

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 51

So sad that she was afraid he wouldn't return! Great chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

What a cool day they are having

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 53

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 53

love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 52

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 51

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 52

i think she needs to come clean with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 52

He knew she would he is such a good guy.  She needs to tell him her name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 51

She has all of his info

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 50

When is she going to tell him her real name? I love that Edward left his wallet as a show  show of trust

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 50

He is showing her how to trust

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 49

nice updates

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 50

I really enjoy this drabble fic I am worried what edward is going to do when he realizes that her name isnt kate. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 49

that is a start.  I still cant believe her mother is such a bitch find her and make her pay

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 48

He is trying to put her mind at ease

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 47

Please she needs to open up to him

Reviewer: canada02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 49

Belle histoire 😉

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 49

:) :) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 49

so when is she going to tell him her real name ?

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 46

nice updates

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 46

nice updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 46

OH shit she is gettin scared poor girl

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 45

fun times

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 46

i hope she tells him the truth

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 46

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 45

:) 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 44

These chapter need to be longer 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 44

they are going to have a great day

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 43

nice update

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Her parents are assholes...

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 43

she needs a freind

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 43

She would love to that was so sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

She has to protect herself

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 43

Good story, just wish the chapters were longer

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

great update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

What now he can't let her go.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

i hope she gives him her right name

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 41 BPOV

So when is going tell him her real name

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 40

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 40

That was just because they are ment to be and it all begins with a hot dog

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 40

i hope he learns her real name soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 39

I still don`t understand why she doesn`t get a job? she could at least buy food for herself. Thank you for an update 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

nice update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

i don't like james

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 39

James is a dink 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

James screwed up he is a bad man.  that is ok Edward will feed her better food.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 38

Someone already got it fast

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 37

Yay! I wish she had given her real name....I don't want him to not trust her. But, maybe he'd understand her fears? 

grear chapter!,

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 37

she lied to him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 37

She did not tell him her real name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 36

so happy he went to find her

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 37

She gave a facke name 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

ohhhh

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 35

nice updates

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

can't wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

He has to find her. 

What country are you from?

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 35

I want more and more lol I am really enjoying this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 34

wait intil alice finds out it's bella

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 34

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

It is going to kill Alice when she finds out it is Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

thank you for update...well done

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 33

He has to find her will Alice know who he is talking about?

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 32

On chapter 16 did Rosalie had the idea to have Edward meet Bella or is it just me

Author's Response:

That is an interesting point you have found but no that's what I planned

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 32

His eyes are open now when it comes to her.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 32

nice updates

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awww Edward those are life lessons if she keeps you away from your family why keep her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

It is a good thing he found out before it was to late and the baby was his

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Tanya is not fooling anyone lol

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

That was a way short chapter 

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Great story! Anxious for him to meet Bella again. Wish these were longer, but I get it :p

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

nice story so far

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29

thanks for the updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 29

Tanya is a piece of work WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

Alice will want to go kick her ass

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

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