Date: 15 Jun 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
Is Alice going to say something about Bella
Date: 14 Jun 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
She is cra cra lol
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
Jajaja Edward Edward every woman wants to have your baby man I want longer chapters pzzzzz this is getting good I can't wait for both of them to meet
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Tanya is a nasty person glad she left.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
WOW the Tanya has balls to show up there after what she had done.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
She is a pushy bitch
Date: 09 Jun 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
He cant leave her there James is going to be mean to her.
Date: 09 Jun 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
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Date: 08 Jun 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am getting so excited he is going to see Bella
Date: 08 Jun 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
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Date: 08 Jun 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Is Bella going to pick up the hotdog he throughs away and he is going to see her do it?
Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a mother? Am hoping Bella does well at the end of this fic, and for her mother to beg in the end.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really wish these were longer instead of just a paragraphs. And when are we going to meet Edward?
Author's Response:
You get to meet Edward tomorrow. It's a drabble which is why it's only a paragraph each time but I'm updating each weekday
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
So sad. Poor Bella
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Renee is a evil spitful bitch
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Her mum was a horrible person
Date: 05 Jun 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Will we hear from Edward? And I do wish these chapters were longer
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want to kick Renee in the face
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
You really should state if this story is a drabble. The amount of lines/words you have in 17 chapters could equal 1 regular chapter.
Author's Response:
So you are that stupid that you couldn't work that out for yourself that I have to tell you that my story is a drabble
my story is a drabble.
Date: 02 Jun 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
School is a cruel place
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
There are 'Mean Girls' wherever you go....
Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella she thinks she is unlovable :(
Date: 30 May 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
She needs more good people around her
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
The path that you are going with story is interesting. The only thing is that it's to slow and I am starting to loose interest in it, too short chapters and a lot of rambling. I would like to see what happens. I might look it up in a few months.
Date: 25 May 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett trust Rose
Date: 25 May 2017 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
A promising fic that leaves you wanting more and wandering wth.
Date: 25 May 2017 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmmm, more confused. Why o so little chapters, l hope it gets better and bigger as you go along.
Date: 25 May 2017 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh dear, who ould be at the door. If Bella has a house, how come she is penniles. I don't understand the concept and why she is this predicament.
Date: 25 May 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aaaah poor Bella.
Date: 22 May 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wish the chapters were longer.
Date: 21 May 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
She has good people around her she needs to open up to them
Date: 18 May 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Sad she doesn't talk to Alice and let her help her where she can.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
She is trying so hard to survive and better herself at the same time.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Crappy parents she had/has.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
These are really short chapter. Hope things work out for Bella.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no. What does James mean to Bella.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no. What does James mean to Bella.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no. What does James mean to Bella.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder of Charlie really felt that way .
Date: 18 May 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Her Mum sucks.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow at 5 years old she was out by herself.
Date: 18 May 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. Sounds like she had a bad childhood
Date: 18 May 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella worrys about her friend being caught up in the life she is living?
Date: 17 May 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
I wish your chapters were longer
Date: 16 May 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
James is a bad man dont like him.
Date: 16 May 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
I`m sorry but I don`t get it. Why doesn`t she just get a job? That could help to buy some food. Seniors always have a job like waitressing or nanny or walking dogs, etc.
Date: 09 May 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Renee is a terible person
Date: 05 May 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
someone cared but not enough. she has lead a tough life
Date: 05 May 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Renee was a piece of shit poor excuse for a mother.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
As I said her parents are horrible people. Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
NY is cold in the winter for sure.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Kids are inconsiderate.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
What horrible parents.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder what happened to Bella that she's in the position she's in.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank goodness for forceful Alice.
Date: 05 May 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my who's at her door.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
So sad for her having to live like that.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really interested seems really good so far. I wish it was longer per chapter π
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Someone should have helped her
Date: 26 Apr 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Post more. And why are the chapters so short??
Date: 17 Apr 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Very short chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
So sad. Poor Bella
Date: 16 Apr 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
She and Alice know each other from high school. Does Alice have anything to do with Edward?
Date: 12 Apr 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
More than a box in the apt that she shared with her mother.
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see what you're doing with this story
Date: 04 Apr 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
But then would'nt there be more than a box there?
Author's Response:
More than a box where ?
Date: 04 Apr 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
How did she get the apartment. I know she says it's fully paid for and on her name but how?
Author's Response:
Hi it's where he mum and her lived until Renee left her
Date: 04 Apr 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning