Date: 03 Feb 2018 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh, that monster totally either playing her saying her dad is dead or he killed her I know Edward wouldnt.
Date: 03 Feb 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 37
I thought she knew who he was. My mistake, or is she purposly keeping things from Jarvis? or whoever he is. Did Edward kill her father? Did I miss that? Or are the Jarvis people fucking with her head to get her to talk? Yikes, I'm sorry. I missed some details here, I guess. 3 of you continued your mobward contest stories, I am reading them all, and sometimes get confused, despite making notes on each story. Again, sorry!
I just turned the page to February on the calendar you sent me. It is so beautiful where you live. Thanks again for that thoughtful present!
Date: 03 Feb 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
OMG! They killed Bella’s Dad to make her think Edward did it! I hope she keeps her wits about to know that Edward wouldn’t do that to her. Will they get Jasper inside to her in time?! I hope you’re able to update soon!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 36
I would rather find out what is going on with Bella, save the outtake for later.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2018 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Come on get another chapter done
Date: 28 Jan 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
Find what happened???
Date: 28 Jan 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 36
Find out what’s happening with Bella.
Date: 28 Jan 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love this story, but you can't leave a cliffhanger like that!! We already know about their lemons, please let us know what is happening.
Thank you
Date: 28 Jan 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love this story, but you can't leave a cliffhanger like that!! We already know about their lemons, please let us know what is happening.
Thank you
Date: 28 Jan 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
OMG! I’m sitting on the edge of my seat! I’d love either chapter, but in this case I really want to know what’s happening!
Date: 28 Jan 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2018 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh crap.....there are so many awful people that I don't even know who took Bella much less what they want.
Date: 28 Jan 2018 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
Find out what’s happening!!!
Date: 27 Jan 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks for the chapter! I am usually the first to want lemons, but in this case, although I am sure to be outvoted, I think, I'll pick to see what happens next. Is this Mr. Jarvis' doing? I have to know ! Thanks again, your story keeps me on my toes and I like that!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I'm voting for lemons!!!!!! Lots & lots of lemons!
Date: 27 Jan 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh that's an awful choice to make!! Lol
I really love how this story is building. Either chapter will be fun to read so it is plus all around. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep up the great work! ;)
Date: 27 Jan 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 36
I want to know whats happening lol
Date: 27 Jan 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 36
Find out what happens please
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2018 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Excellent chapter. Thanks for writing a page turner. I vote for finding out what's happening. ðŸ‘
Date: 27 Jan 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
As much as I want the lemon, I really want to know what happens to Bella.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 35
Amazing chapter as always:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
Never noticed but I love these characters. They're complex and I quite like that the mob stuff takes a bit of a backseat to other necessities in Edward's life. Wonderful chapter. Thank you for updating
Date: 21 Jan 2018 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this side of Edward! I hate to think of what he’s gonna have to do with regards to his mother, but whatever happens is her own fault. How exciting to be in love and happy! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! This story is awesome and I love getting the alert for a new chapter!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love everything about this! THANK YOU!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 21 Jan 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
I think you should write your story how you want to write it! If the guest reviewer wants a different Edward, then she or he should write that character. I completely picked up on the fact that this story was about Edward the man. However, I am seriously interested in what he will do to Mr. Jarvis and Tanya’s dad when he finds out about them.
Date: 20 Jan 2018 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love it just the way it is, loved the chapter
Date: 20 Jan 2018 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
I crack up when readers attribute things to a story that THEY AREN'T WRITING! Geez folks, if you want a story to go somewhere other than the author is taking it, go write it yourselves! I, for one, love to just get lost in the story, appreciate it for what it is, not what I want it to be. I just don't have those thoughts. Thanks for all the many varied stories you give us. I have loved every one of them, but the dirtier, the better for this old pervert! Ha ha. One day let's talk about one of your unfinished stories and where that might be going, ok? Usually I don't do that, I leave it alone, but this one I would like to ask about. See ya next time!
Author's Response:
You know you can pm me any time . What do you want to know ?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love this story about edward the man! I think it's sweet how he is discovering his first love!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 35
Edward's mom doesn't deserve respect right now with how she is acting.
Date: 16 Jan 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful. You've managed to strike the right balance of excitement, fear and creakout. Thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
So very good. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
Excellent chapter. I suspect I know where this is going, but I'm always wrong. You'll surprise me big time. Thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 15 Jan 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
Really good. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
So very good. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2018 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Really good. Many questions as you intended. Thanks ðŸ˜
Date: 14 Jan 2018 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 34
Is there any chance that you will give us a clue or two as to who this person is and why he is after Bella? Something, Anything!!.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2018 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 34
So dad is cheating. And esme saying she is the real head of the family what does that really mean?
Date: 13 Jan 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
oh I don't like Edward's mother! At all! Will she try to mess things up between Edward and Bella? I think so. I wonder what it will take to make her accept Bella. Or if she will ever accept her...I like Bella's assessment of Edward's home. I think she got that right. I don't like that Esme was able to make Edward doubt Bella, even a little, even for a moment. Thanks for another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2018 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm happy not to have to worry about that. Thank you for letting me know.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2018 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 34
Too many scumbags (yes, I am including Esme) wanting to kill Bella. It mzkes me uncomfortable. If you plan for your story to enter sexual assault or rape territory, could you warn me please? I am very sensitive to that part of my past and would really appreciate any tip offs to this kind of crime coming up. Thanks for your consideration.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review. I assure you I wouldn’t write about anything non consensual because I abhor reading it. Please don’t worry there will ne none in this story
Date: 12 Jan 2018 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
Think I may have already reviewed but just in case. Read straight thru. Couldn't stop. Awesome. Can't wait for next update. Hurry please.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
So so good. Read almost straight thru only stopping when necessary. Can't wait for next update.
Date: 10 Jan 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 33
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 08 Jan 2018 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 33
excellent, what does mother want
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well it looks like they are catching some things. But there are too many bad people wanting Bella hurt.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm dying to know just who this Jarvis is, what he wants, how he is doing what he is doing. He seems to be one step ahead of Edward all the time. I'm sure that pisses him off. I hope it's not an inside job...thanks for this, and all the other marvelous stories you write. I love reading them! I hope you have a prosperous new year.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
I just love this Edward when he is in full on protection mode!! He is just so yummy!!
Date: 06 Jan 2018 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 33
God this story is so good! I cannot wait for the n st chapter! He needs to put his mother in place! I do not like this woman at all!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2018 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 33
Keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ok get to writing, need to know what happens next
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2018 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great story can't wait to read more ! Happy Healthy New Year !
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Way to go Bella
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love the story!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 32
I wonder if that was part of Elezars's crap. hmmm.....
Date: 31 Dec 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
Awe poor Bella, Edward just can't help himself. Aazing chapter.
Date: 30 Dec 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 32
Uh oh! I wonder how Bella is gonna take this?! How traumatizing to have your Home and especially Your bedroom invaded. I’ve had my home broken into and it have me the creeps for quite a while. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Will they compromise & now move into her favorite penthouse?
Date: 30 Dec 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
Yeah, she should be safer with him until Mr. Jarvis can be found and the threat removed! Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year! Thanks, I appreciate all the effort you go to in bringing us such quality entertainment. I truly do!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
So now we know edward needs to kill tanya's father too.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for the update...So Tanya father is behind Mr. Jarvis...Tanya's father better hope like hell the boys don't figure it to soon or all of them will be taken down, Tanya's whole family...I can't wait for the Cullens to figure it out...until you post again
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward and Bella have a lot more enemies than they thought. It's sad that his own mother is one. But Tanya and her dad were expected.
Date: 27 Dec 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 27 Dec 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
Esme has no idea how serious Edward is. Hopefully she’ll back off before he wreaks havoc in her world! I love this story.
Hope you had a Merry Christmas!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 31
Esme is a real bitch in this one and that is not something I'm used to. I like it....can't wait for Bella to bring her down a peg or two.
Date: 26 Dec 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow they are a piece of work
Date: 26 Dec 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well I think we know who is behind the harrasment. I think Bella would pull the tigger just fine. lol
Date: 26 Dec 2017 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Esme has no idea how serious Edward is. Hopefully she’ll back off before he wreaks havoc in her world! I love this story.
Hope you had a Merry Christmas!
Date: 26 Dec 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
How refreshing it is to see things from different points of view! Tanya and her father showed me that she is still that same cheating, conniving bitch that she has always been. I see that her father is planning Bella's demise. Yikes! So, it seems, is Edward's own mother. There's another conniving bitch! I guess that life in the mob, for women, tends to make them that way, even if they didn't start out like that. No wonder Edward acts like he does. Bella is his perfect match. I hope you had a nice Christmas. Happy Boxing day! I wish we had something like that here. In the US, people are rushing out to stores to return the gifts they got for Christmas that weren't to their liking. I have always hated that. I am home just resting and reading. Thanks for everything!
Date: 20 Dec 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful. Every word was a joy to read. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
Dam! Esme is a real bitch.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
Ugh. I don't like Edward's mother. I hope she wises up, accepts Bella, so she can still be in her son's life. I don't doubt who he will choose should she make him do so. A wise mother understands that, especially with sons. Thanks for another lovely chapter. It's great to see Edward fall in love.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Go Edward!!! I love the fun playfulness of Bella and Edward. I really love the way he put his mother in her place. She needs to but put if his personal life. We’ll see how well she actually listens. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Edward finally put his mother in her place!!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter. A lot of fun. Thanks
Date: 10 Dec 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love that they spent some time with Emmett and Rose. Bella is bringing out the real Edward more and more. I love it. I love how Edward and Bella are getting more real with each other. I wonder what Esme is going to do to try to split them up?? I can’t get enough of this one. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
Ok you def. made up for us not getting many details on their first night together!! Thanks a bunch!!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
I really like 'take charge' Bella. I do hope Esme gets put in her place soon.