[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
So happy with the update.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lovely chapter. I hope Edward buys the penthouse, Bella just loves the place.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
If Bella doesn't like liars, she is going to hate Edward.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Sweet. I loved it. Their first real conversation that included communication But lacked the usual shouting and four lettered f words . *huge sigh*
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful. Thanks
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Intriguing. Thanks
Date: 04 Oct 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
A small world indeed. Lol
Date: 04 Oct 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
She is a smart cookie. Loved it. Thanks
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loving Rosie and Emmy. Lol.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Really enjoyable. Thanks
Date: 04 Oct 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Interesting. Very interesting
Date: 04 Oct 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good chapter. I wonder if Charlie was the out of town police chief. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Lol. Brilliant. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh A challenge. Lol. Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting. Glad she's suspicious. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Now that's gotta hurt.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is a prick. Interesting character. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad Bella could see Edward. He just wants to be loved by Bella. She is finally giving him a chance and not writing him off.
Date: 02 Oct 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 01 Oct 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally they opened up to each other.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 01 Oct 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
They finally had a date! And it went so well once Edward relaxed a little. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: 30 Sep 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well isn't he the cutest, ever! Bringing her a "picnic basket" and sitting on the floor to eat it. I love his uncomfortability with this and that he did it anyway. I love that they're getting to know each other a bit. I love that he told her the truth about his arranged marriage. Thanks for the chapter. Hope you get your new computer soon...
Date: 30 Sep 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well isn't he the cutest, ever! Bringing her a "picnic basket" and sitting on the floor to eat it. I love his uncomfortability with this and that he did it anyway. I love that they're getting to know each other a bit. I love that he told her the truth about his arranged marriage. Thanks for the chapter. Hope you get your new computer soon...
Date: 30 Sep 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well isn't he the cutest, ever! Bringing her a "picnic basket" and sitting on the floor to eat it. I love his uncomfortability with this and that he did it anyway. I love that they're getting to know each other a bit. I love that he told her the truth about his arranged marriage. Thanks for the chapter. Hope you get your new computer soon...
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally they are moving in the right direction!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2017 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
I mostly saw fast tempered and bad tempered, mouthy, yelling, snippy rude Edward. I didn't see 1 anything I would want a second date with. The only thing (sort of) he did nice was pick up on Bella's discomfort to go to that restaurant and brought a picnic to her instead (that someone else packed.)
The are just too night and day personality wise. And I hope Bella isn't the one to change anything. That would be sad.
Date: 21 Sep 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
They need to Edward more credit. He is not an ogre.
Date: 19 Sep 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it cant wait can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Is Edward's mother going to be a problem.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
How intriquing. I hope that barman's family are not flamed.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Are you shitting me!!!!! Mommy dearest is telling the HEAD of the Cullen Family to basically get his ass to her brunch or else!!!! Edward needs to pop her titty out his mouth and grow some balls!!!!!!! I bet Bella has the balls to put her in her place.
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[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Are you shitting me!!!!! Mommy dearest is telling the HEAD of the Cullen Family to basically get his ass to her brunch or else!!!! Edward needs to pop her titty out his mouth and grow some balls!!!!!!! I bet Bella has the balls to put her in her place.
READ. YOU. SOON π’
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2017 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Is jasper going to turn on them?
Date: 16 Sep 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Edward. I guess Esme is a snob. Got it. Lol. Their lunch date should be interesting. Edward has to quit thinking that Bella is like the other socialite women he's been exposed to and think more down to earth everyday Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved it!
Date: 16 Sep 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why doesn't Jasper want him to tell her who he really is? Is it because of her dad? Maybe because she might not be interested in him if she found out? No I think she already knows...we shall see. I wish you posted more often, but will take what you can give me.
What's up with The Body? It isn't marked complete but I haven't seen a chapter in a long time. Is is on haitus?
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2017 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well crap! I don't know who I was more annoyed with in this chapter. Esme for her meddling and bossiness, Edward for his rudeness or Jasper for his bossiness....... Esme definitely...... She needs to mind her own dam business and someone needs to tell her that. :)
Date: 15 Sep 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait to find out.
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella needs to be with edward ASAP!!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hmmm, what did they figure out?! Wonder why Edward is scared of his mom? And who does she have with her? Loved it. Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Could Jarvis be caius voltury
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Esme is trying to set up poor edward.......
Date: 08 Sep 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ahhhhh suspense!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella be smart and stay with Edward. Mr. Jarvis is so creepy.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is going to lose his shit when he finds out about this!! This Mr. Jarvis is creepy already. They need to take extra care in how they deal with this. I'm so glad Bella had the thought to go to Quil! Love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh dear! Mr. Jarvis is an unknown person who is stalking Bella! Hopefully they can track down who he is before he hurts her! She really should move in with Edward but I bet she won't.
Thanks for the rec! I am already reading Mods and Rockers and enjoying it immensely!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this chapter. I want to say James but I think he was already taken care if so maybe Aro or someone in that nature....dam i need to go reread chapters lol.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is going to blow a gasket & probably insist that she moves in with him. Maybe he can buy her that penthouse she really wants.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
No Sweetie...... Thank You!!!
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[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
No Sweetie...... Thank You!!!
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Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think Bella is as full of herself as Edward.
Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, I'm a new reader, and will be a follower now. Isabella is a great, really real person.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 25 Aug 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
He actually asked her out without demanding! Lol. Love it. I wonder what his mother is gonna say! I'm super curious as to what all jasper had to say about Alice hanging out with Bella and getting drunk. Can't wait for what's next.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just loved this chapter. I also want to state that I am jealous as hell of anyone who can eat and not end up looking like a whale!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just loved this chapter. I also want to state that I am jealous as hell of anyone who can eat and not end up looking like a whale!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Got to love alice!! She might just be my fave alice so far!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Got to love alice!! She might just be my fave alice so far!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Got to love alice!! She might just be my fave alice so far!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Got to love alice!! She might just be my fave alice so far!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Got to love alice!! She might just be my fave alice so far!!
Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Alice is a firecracker, isn't she? I love that Bella is getting to know Edward's family before anything becomes official between them. I also love that he's taken to properly courting her. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 20 Aug 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 20 Aug 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
I can't wait for Bella and Alice to talk! I'm positive that they're gonna be close friends just like Bella and Emmett and Rose. Edward needs to stop and listen to what Emmett is telling him. If Edward would step up and just talk to Bella, he just might get to spend time with her. In the meantime, everyone else will get to know her. LOL. As always, I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I love this story and I really love Mobward!!
Date: 19 Aug 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I review because that is just what I do, for all the stories I'm reading. I'm glad that your review count is up, but sorry, that matters little to me. It's how the story makes me feel that matters to me and yours have always evoked strong feelings, one way or another. That is why I like them and why I review.
So Edward doesn't like her getting to know all his family before him, does he? I think that our miss Swan will do whatever the hell she wants to do and if he is going to go after her, he might well learn to put up with that. These two are both strong-willed people and their union will be oh so interesting to watch. It has been so far. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
Now that alice is involved she is going to work everything out and help edward.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sweetie... As much as I enjoy knowing you read my review..... I'd be ok with bypassing a response and welcome faster updates ( but that's just me) he he he ππ
Date: 19 Aug 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
well lets see if he can get her by stopping the Bling push
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love thus story so much. Poor Edward he is so confused on how to make a real woman happy lol
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2017 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
She has meet Alice now and kissed Edward. Awesome. More please.
Date: 17 Aug 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was a classic move. I can't wait to see Edward's counter move
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now after that kiss how can he not run to her?!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
She is jus what he needs. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love Rosie and loved that she didnt try to slap Bella. :D
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 15 Aug 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
No she can't she need to show Edward not all women are like Tanya you want her you work for her
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ballsy Bella! Love her diva-ness.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2017 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
good for you Bella, he will break
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love this Bella. Great chapter as always.
Date: 15 Aug 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Omg!! I can't wait to see how he reacts to all of that! Uh oh, is Emmett going to get in trouble?! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh that was one hell of a move! Kissing him, I mean, not returning the jewelry. Maybe now that she knows a bit more about him, she will be more inclined to let him in, a bit...we shall see! Love the story, love the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2017 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
OOOOH I want more loving this Bella
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay, go Bella!!
melissa
Date: 11 Aug 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to give Edward a chance. She is just frustrating. Edward needs to be loved.
Author's Response:
Really you think she flustrating, what about Edward isn't he just as bad ?
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love this Rose! Can't wait to find out what all she tells Bella. Sounds like Bella, Rose, and Emmett are going to be good friends! Love it.
Author's Response:
They will be great friends
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Rose is awesome!! Such a great idea making her jointhem. So it looks like the cullen boys like down to earth women.
Author's Response:
I wanted them to be surrounded by real people instead of yes people. Does that make sense?
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm ready for more!!!
READ YOU SOON πΊ πΊ πΊ
Author's Response:
Thank you I have the next six chapters with my beta so we are on track x