Date: 31 Jul 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 30 Jul 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
demanding little shit
Author's Response:
Which one ? That could refer to most of them lol x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
; )
Author's Response:
Xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope the figure out who that creep is soon. Granted it could make her run to edward faster to be safe.
Author's Response:
Maybe she will need some help x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ok so I think mr Jarvis is the stalker emmet is looking for he was acting weird last chapter
Author's Response:
Maybe ?!?
Date: 29 Jul 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward needs to calm down or he WILL die young! Geez! I'd also like to know who is silently courting her...and I love that Bella has a great appetite!
Author's Response:
Courting her or stalking her ?
Date: 29 Jul 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Thank you xx
Date: 29 Jul 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you xx
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank You this made my Saturday morning. The chapters always seem to short because you always leave ME!!!!wanting MORE!!! I like Bella's attitude she's not angry maybe a bit confused which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Edward needs to find his balls and just tell her how he feels. Poor Emmett (he he he) Update well... When you can I'll be waiting IMPATIENTLY!!!! but with a smile. :)
READ YOU SOON🌺
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmet is right Edward
Author's Response:
He will realise eventually x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
So what will Emmett tell Bella?! I can't wait for that conversation. Love this story. Edward is way off the mark with Bella, just as Emmett thought. It who is the guy bringing pastries and coffee?
Author's Response:
Emmett and Bella will become good friends x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ohhh I want more!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love forward bella.
Author's Response:
Got to love a strong Bella
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
I knew exactly which tiffany key he gave her. I love the key series. Granted i would only ever be able to afford the cheapest one. That was very creepy what happened in the apartment! Who was it? Surely it wasn't edward with contacts in?
Author's Response:
No definitely not Edward
Date: 22 Jul 2017 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Have to say that so far this is one of the most unpleasant Edwards I've ever read, hopefully Bella will keep him on a short leash until his manners improve!
Author's Response:
Good that's exactly what I wanted. He will get better x
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just love love your story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review x
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder if that would be someone that has to do with James?? Love the chapter. And when you going to update teh body i miss it lol.
Author's Response:
I will work on the epilogue for the body this week I promise xx
Date: 18 Jul 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad he didn't do anything with Irina. I really didn't want to read that.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it and can't wait to see will happen next!
Date: 15 Jul 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
It does make sense. I look forward to more. Thanks!
Date: 15 Jul 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh he's so 😢 sad
Author's Response:
He is at the moment
Date: 15 Jul 2017 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
Does he decide to sell the house & use her as his realtor?
Author's Response:
Maybe ...
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
; )
Author's Response:
Xxx
Date: 15 Jul 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well well well. We have a spunky miss Bella in the story, don't we. I must tell you I am reading several different mafia stories, all fom the contest, and have to make notes to keep them straight from each other. I'm glad Edward didn't go all caveman on Bella and will try to win her over the old fashioned way. I always enjoy reading you and am sure I will begin to have more of an understanding of this story with succeeding chapters. Thanks!
Author's Response:
I didn't want to do the normal mobward , I wanted it about the man not what he did for a living. So it's how his life has affected him and his relationships with other people. Does that make sense?
Date: 12 Jul 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Lol,
bella is going to make this "foul loud mouth"
speak more respectfully and quietly....
sometimes quieter they are, more dangerous they can be ...
love it..but need more Tanya's colorful input.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 08 Jul 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
ha ha - that told HIM. I bet Emmetts jaw was on the floor
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 08 Jul 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yes that was Classic
Author's Response:
Thank you x
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE LOVE this chapter. i love how fiesty Bella is and that she doesnt care who Edward is or what he says.
Author's Response:
She is not quite sure who he is , but he has rubbed her up the wrong way so far !!
Date: 08 Jul 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, snap! Love how she handled him. I was hoping he would buy the apartment that she showed him just so she could have her commission. Now, THAT would impress a girl for sure, wouldn't it? Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
I haven't decided yet wether he buys it or someone else does. What do you think ?
Date: 08 Jul 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Way to go Bells.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 07 Jul 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
She is so spunky! I would go out with him.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
She will when he realises he just has to ask x
Date: 03 Jul 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good riddance Tanya!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 02 Jul 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 02 Jul 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love how he dealt with the overly indignant Mr. Denali. Not only did he show them that he knew how to deal with this situation, he held himself as head of the family and put both of them in their places also. Well done! Good riddance to Tanya. I wonder if she will go quietly or will she raise a stink about this...thanks for the chapter. See ya next time!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie for the review, glad you enjoyed it x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
That went reasonably well for Edward. Awesome stuff. I am so looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Cat and mouse, I love it.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
Thank you x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya will not be happy but so what. LOL
Author's Response:
No and at the moment she doesn't have any other options x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is such a smart cookie.
Author's Response:
She is that x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, no messing with Edward.
Author's Response:
Well maybe a little x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, no messing with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Emmett, Edward is horrible. lol
Author's Response:
To emmett st the moment yes but he will soften x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOL Bella has no idea what she is accidently got herself involved with. Awesome.
Author's Response:
Not really no x
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for this update it always makes me smile to read another chapter! I was really wanting to see what happens when he gets to the condo.... Bummer. I guess i have to wait for the next update. :) i will say this chapter gave me tons of chuckles. Edward watching tanya over & over, the description of her dad, the old guys arguing, my favorite was emmett calling and saying he lost her again.
Author's Response:
There is loads to cover yet and you know my stories, they never get it together quickly c
Date: 24 Jun 2017 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh please can we have a little peak of Edward mind from these chapter please
Author's Response:
I'm not a big fan of alternate POV but I will do a few outtakes I thinkx
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was really hoping he would come to the penthouse again. I want him to ask her what she wants or what it will take to be with him & she can tell him to buy her the penthouse. I love the craziness of the two of these characters!!
Author's Response:
You should know by now too easy for me , it will be a while yet before they actually talk x
Date: 24 Jun 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2017 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really love this edward! He is so full of himself!
Author's Response:
He will get worse before he gets better x
Date: 24 Jun 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review x
Date: 24 Jun 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 18 Jun 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 17 Jun 2017 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tanya had that one coming
Author's Response:
She did thatx
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
That is so awesome, one way to get back at her.
Author's Response:
He hit her where it would hurt the most
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 17 Jun 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear is Edward a devious one. Almost as devious as Tanya, as she had the drop on him for years before he noticed it. She will be so mad to have lost all her antiques AND all her money. I guess she deserves it after what she did to Edward. Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it , just wanted to show no love lost in the marriage
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, what a departure from the other stories. Just wondering if you're finishing The Body? Sorry, I had to ask. I love this story and how strong Edward and Bella both are.
i think the switch is so well done. You must have thought about this story a lot because it is just perfect. I LOVE what they did to Jacob Black and the picture of that girl strung out on meth was so accurately depicted. Drugs make a very sick and selfish world.
i think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait to read more.
Oh, I loved Deprivation so much. Great sexy story. I am about 1/3 done with your other one.
Author's Response:
I will do an epilogue and some outtakes for the body, I just needed a little break from it. Thank you so much for your kind words I'm really enjoying writing these stories so it's great to know you enjoy them xx
Date: 11 Jun 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is way more observant than they gave her credit for. I wonder how crazy the first confrontation will be! Loving this story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It will be up soon
Date: 10 Jun 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just re-read the whole story up to here. With so many mob stories coming out of the contest, it is difficult to remember who is writing what. I am following 3 or 4 of you from that contest, as I am a regular reader of each. Now I made some notes on each story so I can remember what is what. I do remember Jacob getting 2 inches of his penis cut off. That was particularly grisly. I like that Bella is a successful business woman and on her own. She knows now who is following her and I eagerly await how this will progress! I'm off to make more notes now and glad to have another of your stories to read! Thanks.
Author's Response:
i know what you mean about monwars. One of my fears about writing a story was it's been done so many times how do you make it new ? I hope this is a little bit different from the norm. There won't be too many grisly moments it will be more about Edward and Bella. Hope you enjoy it. Thank you for your continued support I really appreciate it x
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
Thank you I'll update weekly hopefully x
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
She is going to show up on edward's doorstep. Edward won't even have to keeep chasing her.
Author's Response:
Don't be so sure x
Date: 10 Jun 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is really observant.. I wonder how Edward will react to being spotted
Author's Response:
In his usual calm and collected way
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
I thought he was going to leave what he cut off. Now jacob will only have a teeny weenie weiner! Hahaha!
Author's Response:
Could leave it there needed to make a serious point hehe
Date: 05 Jun 2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok 1st things 1st get all your valuables away from crazy ass wife hey I hope they can get enough dirty laundry on her to get rid of her 2nd Edward Bella does not seem like a girl that would fall to your charms its goin to take a lot of work to wing her heart
Author's Response:
Edward has no idea at the moment what he is going to be up against x
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Author's Response:
Don't worry the rest of the story features Edward and Bella, not much gore and torture x
Date: 04 Jun 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ouch! I almost feel sorry for Jacob, but what the hell was he doing, messing around with the boss like that! I squirm a bit at parts like that, but this is a mob story so what do I expect. Thanks for the chapter!!
Date: 04 Jun 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this but please dont replace Emmett
Author's Response:
Emmett has his own agenda don't worry
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I love this Edward. I wonder what that says about me lol.
Author's Response:
Like the rest of us we would take Edward any way we could have him xx
Date: 01 Jun 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Don't get on Edward's bad side. I wonder if Bella will soften him up in the way he treats people?! Love it already. Can't wait for what's next.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love your story can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am so loving this story, please update soon!
Author's Response:
We should update weekly x
Date: 27 May 2017 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice to see you back
Author's Response:
Feel like I've been gone forever !! Xx
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder how he is going to sweet talk bella after locking her in a closet?
Author's Response:
Whie to go before we get there I'm afraid .
Date: 27 May 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oops. James is dead and can't testify. I like Edward's idea of using Jasper and consigliere instead of Emmett. Will that happen? I'll keep reading and see. Edward sure is a hot head! Thanks, I'm looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response:
This is going to be very different. Hope you enjoy it x
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love for u to continue this. I LOVE all mobwards and the chase between them would be very intense! How do u charm a girl, you locked in a closet? You buy thr pentjouse. ;)
Date: 22 Apr 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it please do more
Date: 21 Apr 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is this something your going to work on? I do hope it is
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love this story. Not good at reviews. I don't give advice or complain or ask for anything to be changed. Trust the author and don't read if you do not like the story. Again, thanks for making my day. I love anything mafia inspired. Pamela
pamjhanley@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I do hope you add to this one I loved it again
Date: 18 Apr 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this!...Please continue it. Lots of ways to take the drama.
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely liking this.
Date: 17 Apr 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love mobward and I do hope you decide to continue this story. I'm definitely interested in where this could go. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love your work in general and would love to see this develop ...! I luv mobward!
Date: 17 Apr 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read this in the contest. I'm glad you entered, even though I see you didn't win anything. I liked the story ok. I"m not sure how this could be rated "T", though, what with all the violence with James and the screwdrivers. I do hope you continue it someday and will keep it on alert in case you do.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story I hope you continue with it.
Date: 17 Apr 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope there is more to this story.