Date: 09 Dec 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Felix has admitted that he needs help. I still do not trust Liam. I would think that getting drunk would be a HUGE NO NO with all the threats that are going on. That would be bed if they were drink and could not defend themselves.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
thank you for the update....well done...I hope all go well, we don't need any more drama..until you post again
Date: 08 Dec 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my famous last words Emmett but wow Bella was perfect with Felix
Date: 08 Dec 2017 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I do NOT trust Liam!!!!!!! I feel so sorry for Felix.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
I cried feeling so sad for Felix.
Date: 08 Dec 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's offer to Felix was a much better plan of action. Felix was feeling demoted due to his injuries and abandoned by his work family as well as the loss of his surrogate brother.
What ever happened to the threat of an attack during the funeral?
Alice and Jasper are slowly rebuilding their physical relationship. Is a baby next for them?
Date: 08 Dec 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's offer to Felix was a much better plan of action. Felix was feeling demoted due to his injuries and abandoned by his work family as well as the loss of his surrogate brother.
What ever happened to the threat of an attack during the funeral?
Alice and Jasper are slowly rebuilding their physical relationship. Is a baby next for them?
Date: 08 Dec 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Bella came up with a good compromise for Felix. Sadly I think Em's final exclamation is going to come to pass and not in a good way.
Date: 07 Dec 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
I feel so bad for the family. They have to get Royce and Stephan and make them suffer.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
It's the reality of the lives they lead. Sad but a good read. Thank you for writing
Date: 03 Dec 2017 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Demetri was a good friend a strong protecter and one hell of a tatoo artist I am sad that Edward will not get the tat from him. It shows what a good man he was by all those that cared for him.
Date: 03 Dec 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love it. Can wait to read more.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
So sad.
Edward and Bella should just have a secret justice of the peace wedding before their big one. This story gets better and better
Date: 02 Dec 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was so sad! Poor Felix and everyone else. My heart breaks for Felix. He made me cry.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awww poor Demetri. Matteo was just Canon fodder for the sleeve balls.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Everyone's family looses in battle whether they play by the old rules or not.
Bella's support is something even she didn't realize this family needs. Her expertise is also a calming factor.
Date: 02 Dec 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can’t wait to read what happens next, I absolutely love this story.
Melissa
Date: 01 Dec 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
It seems like Marcus would want to team up with Edward's crew to go against Stephan and Royce. hmmm.... I wonder why that wasn't brought up. I feel so bad about Demetri. He seemed really sweet in his conversations with Bella.
Date: 01 Dec 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
Darn....I really like Demetri!
Date: 01 Dec 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh no so heartbreaking so much pain for them but now what will they do
Date: 01 Dec 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I swear every mob story when Demitri is a good guy he dies. Great chapter please update ASAFP.
Date: 30 Nov 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, so sad.. I wonder who is puling the strings. Great chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 31 Oct 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow nice birthday. Jasper and Alice have a hard road ahead of them. Awww for losing Demetri or Felix
Date: 31 Oct 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Somehow Rene's entangled in this battle. She's probably the female voice they never revealed.
Date: 29 Oct 2017 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
Things really are hotting up. Wow
Date: 29 Oct 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
So good. Fantastic cliffhanger
Date: 28 Oct 2017 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome! Just love this story...
Date: 28 Oct 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
I wonder who survived. I love that Bella got a tattoo for Edward and the family. I feel so bad for Alice. Can’t imagine how difficult this all is for her. They’re all on edge. Hopefully they’re able to stick close together. Don’t the Cullens have a family they can team up with to increase their manpower? I love this story and Mobward so much!!
Date: 27 Oct 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Demetri is alright
Date: 27 Oct 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
thank you for the update...well done
Date: 27 Oct 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope it wasn't Demetri. We just got to know him. They need to go on the offense. This is getting crazy.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG you just killed me lol. I am glad she got him to go to his grandfather he needed it. she does not take his shit lol
Date: 27 Oct 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
All of that stress would be so horrible. They won't have to wait for a war. The bad guys are just taking the Cullens out 1 at a time.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Omgosh! Who survived? So happy that Edward visited his grandfather. Maybe his grandfather will help him with this war. Maybe Edward will remember something that his grandfather said that will help.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awaiting more.
Sherry
Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my now it hit close to home now who made it
Date: 19 Oct 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
I absolutely love this story!! I hope that a new chapter is out soon! I have this story in my favorites folder so I can be notified when you update. Thank you and keep the updates coming!!
Date: 07 Oct 2017 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
I loved this chapter. I may need to pick up smoking again, lol. I'm looking forward to them getting into a 'war' with Royce. Emmett is right, Rosalie made her bed, let her lit in it.
Sherry
Date: 06 Oct 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
So much drama! The ladies better get used to extra protection. This could get messy.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love the role playing. Very HOT!!!!!! I'm worried about them going to war. Can't wait for the next chapter, as always.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Whew! That was really hot! Need a cold shower after that. I may have to give that scenario a shot myself. Can’t wait for the next chapter. I love this story!!
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
They like to play so much fun lol. Royce is just proving that Rose is his property. Poor Emmett
Date: 05 Oct 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, this is such an awesome story. I have a feeling they are going to be going up against someone they know and wouldn’t suspect which might end up biting them in the butt. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
Date: 04 Oct 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 04 Oct 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
yummy play time. Can't say I feel sorry for Rosalie, but yea Em need to get his temper under control
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice seduction scene! Hot. Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel for Rosalie. I know she treated Emmett badly, but no woman deserves to be treated like Royce is treating her. What can I say...I have a soft heart.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice seduction scene! Hot. Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel for Rosalie. I know she treated Emmett badly, but no woman deserves to be treated like Royce is treating her. What can I say...I have a soft heart.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice seduction scene! Hot. Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel for Rosalie. I know she treated Emmett badly, but no woman deserves to be treated like Royce is treating her. What can I say...I have a soft heart.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice seduction scene! Hot. Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel for Rosalie. I know she treated Emmett badly, but no woman deserves to be treated like Royce is treating her. What can I say...I have a soft heart.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Nice seduction scene! Hot. Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel for Rosalie. I know she treated Emmett badly, but no woman deserves to be treated like Royce is treating her. What can I say...I have a soft heart.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
So we have a lot to look forward too huh? I know Rosalie made her bed but.... Anyway so we have a CLIMAX to look forward too also. Can't wait I'm looking forward to it.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 04 Oct 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my that was hot hehehehe but damn things are coming but how soon
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
It would seem that Royce is taunting the Cullens.
Is Collin safe?
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
It would seem that Royce is taunting the Cullens.
Is Collin safe?
Date: 04 Oct 2017 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
I don't think Rose thought she would be treated like that. She was kind of dumb and naive about everything.
I loved the teacher/student sexy time. ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can''t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
It is getting hot here.
Date: 22 Sep 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Glad Alice is doing better. Those passion parties are awesome, aren't they?
Date: 22 Sep 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
thought something might happen since carlisle wanted to leave early
Date: 21 Sep 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sounds like they are going to have so much fun ;)
Date: 20 Sep 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh me, Bella is going to punish Edward!!!!!! Can't wait to see that.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
I didn't understand - Jasper had a 'feeling' so they left the ballgame but stopped at a bar. I thought they were heading to get their women since jasper had a 'feeling'. All in all, I'd say the men folk are in for a good time. I can't wait to ready about Edward's punishment dished out by Miss Swan.
Sherry
Date: 20 Sep 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
The female advise segment was a hoot. Especially Esme!
Did Jacob have to take care of Miss Jessica? Lol
Date: 20 Sep 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
I really liked the addition of Anthony and Nina with their kids. The sexy bachelorette party was fun reading all about the characters banter and teasing.
I'm really anxious to read the teacher/student sexy times, the wedding and the honeymoon.
But I am NOT looking forward to any angst. I can handle violence, but angst?? ugh... just upsets my stomach.....
Date: 20 Sep 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
All of your chapters are magnificent. These two are the prime example of a beautiful loving couple.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhe oh my goodness hahahahahahhhahahahahahhaha I loved it more Please
Date: 19 Sep 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Alice will over come!!!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter! Thank you. <3
Date: 09 Sep 2017 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 💙
Date: 08 Sep 2017 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Alice doesn't see how strong she really is. She is getting better everyday.
Date: 07 Sep 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Glad to see Alice get her spitfire back.
Sherry
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nice to see Alice seeking help from those around her that she trusts.
Has Stephen thrown Edward off his game? Or did Emmett's pep talk reinvigorate Edward's resolve to end this situation?
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nice to see Alice seeking help from those around her that she trusts.
Has Stephen thrown Edward off his game? Or did Emmett's pep talk reinvigorate Edward's resolve to end this situation?
Date: 06 Sep 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Happy back to school to you! Sorry, but I know Summer is too short for you. I heartily applaud you, my daughter, and all those who teach. We would be a poorer world without all of you!
This chapter was great. A little bit of fluffiness in between the hard life of a mob person and cohorts. It's all good. Thanks!
Date: 06 Sep 2017 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Alice needed to talk to Lauren that did a lot of good. Edward will not allow anyone to talk bad about Bella Walter found out lol
Date: 06 Sep 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Alice will overcome this horrific experience, and Bella is just making Edward better and better. Is that possible?? :D
Date: 06 Sep 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
not quite the normal mobsters
Date: 06 Sep 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella and Lauren are just awesome. Like seeing a nice, cool Lauren for a change.
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad that Alice is getting better. Stephan and Royce are really causing lots of crap.
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
I loved it now what will his uncle try next. Alice will get stronger a little every day more please
Date: 31 Aug 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am thinking that the ladies might have to go into hiding. Royce and Stephan can only attack woman. They are not mad enough to come after men.
Date: 31 Aug 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Alice will make it now she knows that devil is gone
Date: 31 Aug 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sick, twisted retribution; but considering the offense, a fitting end to Alec.
Let's hope Jasper can keep his cool in future encounters and Alice heals emotionally through Bella's caring assistance.
I'm beginning to think Marcus is calling the shots.
Date: 31 Aug 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad Bella was there to help Alice in the dream state and after. Smart, quick thinking for her too.