Date: 16 Nov 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ah Leah. Jealous, as always. I hope she doesn't turn on them because of her hatred for Bella. The plans can wait until after Sam is dealt with. I agree with that. Bella is afraid to find out why her parents left her. I'm sure that is a scary thing to deal with. I do love this story and all it's unusual twists. Thanks and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you and happy Thanksgiving to you as well! I hope to give Leah a reason to not be so bitter, but she'll have to wait her turn.
Date: 16 Nov 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Leah needs to get over herself already and stop being jealous. I love Carlisle so much, glad he's taking on this fight for them.
That really is her problem, which I hope to eventually solve for her.
Date: 16 Nov 2017 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
I like the changes from the original story even if they're subtle. Very nice. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you! I tried to walk a thin line between canon and completely different.
Date: 09 Nov 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
You never cease to amaze and entertain me with your stories. This one has enough canon, to be recognized as a Twilight story, but is twisted in ways Mrs. Meyer never thought of. I think that is it's best feature. To give the Volturi dominion over shape shifters is a dangerous thing to do. I would think they would want to wipe them all out. Can't wait to see what happens! Thanks.
It felt like such a canon thing for them, too, to want to take out or control the unknown. They hunted down real werewolves in canon, and of course the threat they posed to hybrids. I can't wait to write them.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
That was fun! I could just almost see the looks on Edward's face as her words affected his usually stoic character. These two were wound tighter than a drum and very much needed the fun, frolicking, and even the competition. I very much enjoyed this chapter. Thanks!
Lol, they were wound up! Thank you.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
This is such a lovely story. I love how you're connecting her up with her quileute heritage. I don't think I've read another story that does this. I'm not usually a wolf fan, but I'm your fan, so reading this is enjoyable to me because of that and because of the unique plot line. Thanks.
Thank you. I'm always grateful that you follow my stories. :)
Date: 19 Oct 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my, he found things on her family, she's so excited she has family. LOL, her friends spotted that her happiness is so much more with Edward there.
A little bit of information to make her curious for more, really.
Date: 15 Oct 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
It had been too long but way to make up for lost tim...opportunities. So very good. It is amazing how much if a difference a little maturity makes to characters. And, it doesn't hurt that they are both romantics. Such a good read. Thank you for your intelligent writing.
Thank you so much. You flatter me.
Date: 12 Oct 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
well that was a very nice, lemony chapter! I love lemons...but feel badly for the poor kitty, Frank. Will he ever get used to Edward? Thanks for the new chapter. I enjoyed it...
I'm really not thinking it'll work.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
They are finally together! Yes! Been waiting for this, now it's here. Cat cockblocker. LOL! A lot happened here. Upheaval with the Quileutes...you packed much into this chapter. Eagerly anticipating the lemons next chapter! Thanks so much for your wonderful stories!
Thank you so much! The cat was planned for awhile, just not the way it appeared. That happened on its own, lol.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am guessing "Air. I need air, or I would never stop kissing you."
But i still dont feel right but its a guess lol. I feel that Edward might have wanted to eat the cockblocking kitten lol. Love the chapter I am so happy that they are together again.
Lol, the kitten is safe. The quote starts with A thousand different possibilities ran through my mind in an instant.
Date: 28 Sep 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Uh oh, indeed! There is another vampire nearby that is NOT Edward? Yikes. Who could it be? Thanks for the update. I enjoy this story immensely!
Thank you so much, Judy! We'll have to wait for next week, I'm afraid.
Date: 21 Sep 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward seems like a thoughtful, considerate sadsack with a brooding quality much like canon Edward. He is Bella's mate, obviously, but will he enter her life in Seattle if he finds her happy there without him? I think he is stil pondering that. He sees her for who she is, but still wonders what she is. He accepts her completely. How wonderful it must be to feel that way...
He is broody, but I've tried to steer him away from depressive. He's going to figure out what he needs to do to get back to her- soon.
Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
I like that you've written Jessica and Angela as not their typical canon selves. Thank god Bella has roommates she can get along with! Can't wait to hear from Edward again! Thanks!
Although with Jessica wanting her MRS degree, I feel like there's only so far I can change her, lol.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Assholes. First of all you didn't need to take her from the fucking woods if years later you choose to abandon her again, W T F. Also she's not theirs to disown? Whatever happened to respect and wonderment. "Oh wow we found her in the woods after this earthquake she's important" to "Lol fuck her, slso freebie sex tape anyone?" I'M SHAKING WITH RAGE.
But like yes, be free Bella. You got this, you were meant to shed wherever you please. Also show Efward your wolf form.
LOL Emmett should meet her wolf form too. I can picture him going "Hot damn!" Touch her and say "Oh literally too." Or something just as silly. I love Emmett.
LOL. There is a reason, it's just not going to be apparent for awhile. Everything will work out.
Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Carlisle's POV is the only thing that makes me feel better and have any hope, judging by what went on in her so-called trial. The wolves are deplorable and have no sense of family ties, kicking Bella out just like that! Ugh. Thanks for the chapter, ALL of it. I really enjoy reading this story!
Thank you so much! Carlisle will come up with a plan.