Date: 22 Feb 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Besides you, my favorites are RobzBeanie, Pattyrose, Write Sisters, AliciaW68, Bornonhalloween, CaraNo (who writes OF as Cara Dee), and just too many more to list. I tend to keep reading those who finish their stories with regularity and who write happy endings. I know there are a lot of you out there, but I'm down to just a dozen or so that I still read.
I love how they're gearing up for the fight, finding out just what each can do, and honing their strengths. Thanks for everything!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
Beautiful ceremony and, he surprised her, so sweet. I loved Carlisle's way of doing the ceremony for them, so unique. And Charlie now sees that others love like he loves his wife.
I think Charlie's eye were opened, for sure. Thank you.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
What a beautiful ceremony. I loved reading it! I voted once, but will try to vote again today or tomorrow. I always vote for you wherever I see your name. Thanks for everything!
Well thank you! I tend to forget to vote every day, but I set a reminder on my phone for this. I get to vote for good authors, too!
Date: 09 Feb 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Idk why, but whenever people mention Chelsea breaking the bond of a mated pair my skin crawls. I thought she couldn't do that according to Marcus (or S.M. herelf stating it)? Anywho, That's cool, Bella should whip out a shield like magic.
I have spent way too much time reading the Twilight Wiki. She can make or break bonds, and she's kept happy by Corin, who's gift is to make people near her content. She was only spoken of in Breaking Dawn, and Bella was easily able to deter her efforts.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
So the fight is shaping up. I see that. Good. I'm eager to see how you play that! Thanks for the status update on your stories. I am happy to wait however long it takes you to get to where you can comfortable post whatever you have. Truly. I love reading all your stories!
Thank you! I know what I want to happen, but it's hard to get the words down sometimes.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
sorry but this whole situation is a big deal...a life changing big deal.
yet, bella is thinking about school and job that is preventing her
from finding her parents...yes, they are important aspect of life but
as i said, the situation is a great big deal on a whole another
It is, that's exactly right. It's monumental for her future.
Date: 01 Feb 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
it was excellent, Edward had to calm her down and what a way to do it, lol. So glad the ladies had a nice day out shopping, they needed that. That sucks that the Volturi are coming.
And Charlie might be thawing out.
Date: 26 Jan 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad charlie opened up and yelled at okd quill. I wonder what causes her exhaustion. Can I suggest an outtake of Em trying to become Frank’s friend, I hope he does eventually
I promise to fit it in somewhere, because I have always pictured him and Frank!
Date: 25 Jan 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 32
I agree! Quil had no right to force his will on anybody! Imprinting happens by mutual feelings, not like someone imposing feelings on another. I'm glad that both Bella and Charlie were able to confront him. So the Volturi are still coming? How will the problem of he getting so tired after shifting be solved? Also her losing her shield while in animal form could also be dangerous in any battle. Can't wait to see how you play that out! Thanks.
She has to figure out how to cope with her differing talents.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
yes, that was a thrilling time in the movie. you captured the feeling very well here. yours is a lovely alternate to canon, while staying true to the spirit of it. Thanks so much!
Thank you! I thought they deserved it.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story has short chapters. This one was nice, but it's hard to comment on any major plot points with this one. I think she's come to some sane conclusions regarding her parents. I am eager to see how the big battle plays out. Thanks!
That's understandable. This was more about discussing her feelings about Charlie and the origins of the ring.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love the hyperbole with which each declared their devotion. LOVED it. It's that kind of fairy tale stuff that I always wanted for myself but at the same time knew it was only possible in stories. Thanks for a wonderful, romantic chapter!
That's exacty what I'm thinking when I write Edward. What are all the most romantic things I'd love to hear? Thank you for your support!
Date: 30 Dec 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope it's awhile before shit hits the fan. Right now I'd love to get to understand these characters a bit more, and maybe see some development. I love Bella's POV and her way of showing rather than telling.
We'll have some time. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm not trusting Charlie so much by how you've described him so far. I hope that changes. Bella's powers are amazing! Are you building up to a fight with the Volturi? No, don't tell me, but I'm thinking you are. Love how you've written Renee and Bella. I like that Renee isn't a flighty air head in this story. See ya next year!
I'm trying to sort of stay in line with canon. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
My family cant do laundry on new years day either lol very bad luck if we do.
I am very worried about Charlie I hope he doesnt turn against Bella turning her into to volturi so him and his wife can escape.
That would be dastardly!
Date: 21 Dec 2017 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
once again, you surprise and thrill me with your twisted version of canon. there is just enough canon to make it recognizable as a twilight ff, but also enough of your own take to make the story fresh and new. i have always loved that about this story! i'm wondering if Charlie and Renee can risk coming back to Forks and if the Quileutes can bend enough to accept all this. They will be a better tribe if they can! thanks for the new chapter. have a lovely holiday!
Thank you so much! You help make all of this worthwhile. I think it's going to be similar to canon, with the addition of Renee and Bella being quite powerful against any enemies.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm hoping carlisle gets her a place but why does edward have to leave now that they know. Or can she go to the extened family too?
It's more for Carlisle to convince the wolves they're following the rules.
Date: 14 Dec 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
At least they stopped and came back as they heard Carlisle yell. I hope they lose their fear and are able to have a relationship with Bella and she'll get answers to her family history that she needs.
I hope so!
Date: 14 Dec 2017 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well! This is an interesting turn of events. Charlie is a shape shifter? Renee is human? They should be accepting of Edward and her, then. What are they so afraid of? I know. You'll tell us. I'll wait.
He is a werewolf, yes. Renee is a shapeshifter. :)
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
and so we continue. Rose's attitude still sucks. the Volturi may or may not be on their way, and an additional danger. the renegade quileutes may or may not also be an additional danger. we are kind of up in the air on many things now. Will they find Renee and/or Charlie? I eagerly await the next chapter to see how it goes in Brazil. Thanks..
Thank you! Rose tries to be practical, it's just not in a tactful way.