Date: 28 Jan 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I’m so glad they have already arrested Maggie. I wonder what all she has to say about her actions. More delusions, I’m sure! I hope that Mike gets a hero’s award for his quick thinking and actions that saved Bella and the girls! I’m so glad they are all ok. I live this story. Can’t wait for more.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! An amazing chapter. I totally didn’t see that coming at all. I knew Maggie was off her rocker, but holy crap! So glad Mike came to the rescue. Wonder what happened to Maggie after Mike hit her car? And there’s a baby on the way!! I so love this story. I hate the thought of this story coming to an end alrearly day!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap, this story is amazing! There were twists and turns which I loved. Please tell me we will see what happens to Maggie and Angela. I really want her to get it. I also want to see Eleazar come groveling on his hands and knees. I love Mike! Great guy!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's great to get a chapter of this story, but not so great to read what happened. I hope Maggie is put away for attempted murder, which is what she did, and if Bella loses the baby, then murder. Can't these guys catch a break? All these people who are making their life hell need to be gone, like now! I do enjoy the story but not the horrible things, like this, that happen to them. Thanks.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am more worried abou Buckley, Maggie and her crazy dad than I was about Charlotte. But at least she gave some true info and has a chance. Buckley's ex-wife might have a lot to say as well.
Those girls really lucked out getting away from that family and it's aquaintances.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE that the judge put Buckley in his place. He made fair judgements. Just the fact when it was said that the kids have no say is a huge red flag. Glad that Edward is cutting ties with Eleazar and family. You know Angela is involved somehow.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like how Edward and Bella called their bluff. Charlotte probably won't even be able to be found or be high on drugs when she is. Maggie and her dad sure are having their plans back fire. Bella and Edward getting married will stun poor Maggie to death. LOL
That Buckly guy is just an ass that will probably end up doing something to get thrown in jail and getting his own kid taken away. Sounds like Angela is going down too.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to find out what Maggie and Charlotte are REALLY up to and what part this Buckley character plays in all of it. I think they are up to no good, have an ulterior motive of some kind, and don't really care about the girls at all. I think that Edward will find out what their deals from Jenks or maybe just by doing what the court wants. I think the court is on to that bunch and will deal fairly with everything. I love reading this story, love how Edward and Bella's relationship is going, how the twins and Alice are planning the wedding and everything. I can't wait for more of this marvelous story, but of course, I will wait. What other choice do I have? Have a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. See you next time!
Date: 20 Nov 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Way to go Edward! So glad he verbaly bitch slapped that bitch! I fear it may have some bad after effects before it actually pays off though. Hope not, but wouldn't be surprised.
Had to laugh at Alice being timid about the wedding and Jasper being a looser at all things kids cards. LOL
Hope you both have a good Thanksgiving. Spend time with your families. We will be here when you get it done.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
First, Edward needs to cool down and listen to his lawyers. Second, they have the law on their side. They legally adopted the girls. I think the wedding idea is cute, but I think Rose and Emmett should stand by Bella and Alice and Jasper should stand by Edward. They supported them when they were single parents and continue now. They are also old enough to sign legal documents. The girls are not.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG. Could Maggie be any stupider? Like Edward would touch her with a ten foot pole, let alone his dick after all the trouble she is causing.
I just knew that asshole was involved somehow.
I like the cabin idea. That should be fun.
Date: 31 Oct 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh! That was a terrible place to leave them.
One would like to hope she is the to help, but you know it won't be. She wants Edward so you can bet your ass she is there to cause more trouble. Can't wait till she finds out they are engauged.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was shocked at who it was for and the connections they have to the people around Bella and Edward. Now it makes perfect sense why Charlotte was commenting about Edward’s profession. They’re only after the money, of course. I’m looking forward to more. I love this story!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Noooooo not another cliffy!! This was a great chapter and loving them getting so close. I hope the drama passes quickly and they can get back to some family times. Wonder what Maggie the pain wants. This was probably all her to get Edward for her own.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is just crap. They can't take their babies away. I know they will win, but I hate that they have to go through this garbage. I am glad that they are engaged though. Have to look at he silver-lining in all this mess. The girls will be so excited.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
How awful to have someone served papers at a school in front of children and parents! Shows the true character of the individual behind it and the person who served it should be ashamed for acting like such a jerk with the grinning. Where I live the Constable is usually the person who serves papers and they’re in uniform. I think it’s Mr. Buckley who has served Bella. Guess we’ll find out. Emmett is so awesome in this story. I love the talk he had with Bella!