Date: 22 Sep 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the kid swap. They need to know their other parent as individuals. They are different kids and need to explore their strengths. I hope Edward wins this game, so they both can win in the long run. Bella is too competitive. She needs to learn that sometimes you win by loosing.
Date: 18 Sep 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow. I missed this chapter! It was after I read 10 and went to mark it on my spreadsheet that I realized I never read 9, so I read it now. What a sizzling chapter. Now I know how they first ended up getting sexy with each other. I love where this story is heading, or where I believe it is heading. Thanks!
Date: 18 Sep 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Lovely chapter! I love the girls' day out with the other girl's parent! They seem to all be blending into becoming one family. I also love how Bella and Edward are getting more flirty and playful with each other. I'm having a great time reading this. Thank you!
Date: 12 Sep 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Bella is going to have a girlie day with Cordie. What are Edward and Maddie going to do? Can't wait till they both jump each other. Their sexual buildup is going to be so mmm ugh that they may hurt each other the 1st time they have sex. Lol!!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! They get formal confirmation that their girls are indeed sisters and twins, which they already really knew. It was good to get official confirmation, though. I have to say my favorite part of the chapter was their pool game at the end! It was so hot and obviously foreplay! Keep it coming...
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh this is sooo good! Cordie and Kassie and sooo cute and funny. I am loving this story and I can't wait for Edward and Bella to get together!!!!!!!!!! This slow kinda burn is killing me LOL! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the white wolf and her twin. I loved what Jake told Cordie about her drawing. I like Rose's idea that they move in together. They should move into Edward's and keep the girls together and build their friendship. I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 28 Aug 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think they are progressing well. The more boob action was great! lol. It is a good thing the girls are not older they would really be in trouble as far as the trap goes. Love this Jakey he is great.
Date: 28 Aug 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Women like Maggie make me want to, first, puke all over them, then punch them in the nose. I don't do that, but want to...j/s. Edward and Bella are becoming friends already! I wondered at the end part about the wallpaper and what is written underneath, then I remembered he used to live in that house! Well, well, well! Pornstar endowed, is he. I'm sure she will keep that thought tucked away in her mind until the time is right. Thanks for a lovely chapter.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Was thinking both sides were wrong in the beginning but they both made up for it when they apologized. The girls are just too cute. Carlisle found out some very interesting information. Glad Bella stood up to Alice too and didn't let her railroad her with the clothes.
Date: 21 Aug 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that Eddie and Bee Bee are getting along so much better now. Oh I know it's for the sake of the girls, but who knows where that will lead? I'm sure you two do, but I can guess also. I can hope it does! This is a lovely G-Rated story and I can enjoy one of those once in a while. Thanks.
Date: 21 Aug 2017 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
The girls were whispering and Bella thinks they are up to something. Are they planning I. Trying to get their parents together? I just wonder what the girls are thinking a out them looking like each other. Will we get their POVs?
Date: 18 Aug 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think things are going just fine at the moment. Their competitive streak could get interesting. I think it's wonderful they are getting to know each other, as well as letting the girls bond. I can hardly wait to get into the mess with DCFS.
Date: 14 Aug 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Things are going MUCH better now and I love that! I'm hoping, in the end, that Edward and Bella come together and make a whole family with their girls. Wouldn't that be lovely. Of course, I'm hoping for a bit, or more, of some citrusy goodness in the story. It may be too family friendly for that, but I hope not. You gals write lovely stories. Thanks!
Date: 11 Aug 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Somehow my alerts weren't showing up and I missed this.
Just read straight through. Love the concept and what you are doing with this story. Edward is a bit of an entitled arrogant ass in the first few chapters, but I'm sure Bella will bring him around.
I absolutely LOVE the twins. Kassie is a hoot! Calling Edward Teddy, I just roared with laughter! That was great.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful talents with us!
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved the clothes switch and that it didn't work!! That was awesome! I haven I doubt that the teachers at school or someone who doesn't know them well wouldn't be able to tell. It's great that Bella and Edward are reaching out to each other for thoughts and opinions. I think it would be a great idea to let them talk to a therapist just to be on the same safe to check in on their own thoughts and feelings about all that has happened and is happening. Can't wait for the nedt chapter.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh what a sweet chapter! They had a lovely visit to Edward's home and made some significant plans for the future. I know the DNA tests will only confirm what we know, that Kassie and Cordie are twins. I'm eager to see what develops, if anything, between Bella and Edward! Thanks for this story. I like it a lot.