Date: 24 Apr 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
It’s so great to see the girls becoming individuals independent of each other with their own styles. I loved Edward and Kassie at the stock exchange! She’s gonna be a force to be reckoned with when she’s older! Of course, Bella and Cordie at the theater was great too. That was so scary when Bella faded out. I’m so glad the boys are here and everything is okay with them. I can’t wait to hear how everyone adjusts to having two babies in the house. I’m a mother of 5 children with my middle daughter sing only 14 months older than my twins making it more like triplets a lot of the time. It was extremely busy and difficult at times to juggle, but we all survived and my twins will be 18 in June. Can’t wait to see what life is like for all 6 of them. I hope you’re able to give us multiple time periods in the Epilogue to see how crazy life is for them all. It’s sad that this story is ending, but I’m sure there will more great stories to come!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update...well done...Kassie on stock exchange..to funny, girl knows her stuff...Cordi getting tickets to see play again and all her signatures, I'm happy for her. Thank god Edward made it on time for the babies!!!well done...until you post again
Date: 23 Apr 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Whew! That was a close call! Maggie had to cause just one more problem for them, didn't she? I hope that's all and am happy she didn't get to go to a mental hospital. It seems like this story came to an end very quickly and I will miss reading it when it is over. You guys have written another loveable, angsty, happy story. Thanks for all that you give your readers. I, for one, always enjoy them. One more to go, then it's over. Thanks again...
Date: 28 Mar 2018 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the trip back home. Glad she got a chance to say goodbye. Figures about the trial. I got stuck on jury duty a bit back and were almost to day 3 and they changed their plea. Ugh so annoying.
Driving lessons are an awesome idea. Cant wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for this new chapter. It left me wondering just exactly what happened with Maggie that she pled guilty. I know what you wrote, but there seems to be more underneath. At least it feels that way to me. Maybe I am imagining it...Time seemed to zoom by in this chapter. I know you are heading to wrap up the story in just a few chapters, so I guess that's why. I'm with Edward in thinking that Maggie certainly did not get a big enough sentence if there is still a possibility she can get a little psych time and then be free again. I was hoping she would get harsher sentencing. We shall see. Thanks for writing this lovely story. There has been some angst, as there is in life, so I'm good with that on a realistic level. I can't imagine anything else coming back to bite them in the ass. They have endured enough. Until next time...I hope you two are well and thriving.
Date: 26 Feb 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's so nice to get a chapter of this story. I love it a lot and miss it when the chapters are so far apart. No criticism...I know you guys are doing the best you can and I always appreciate your efforts. I like that your Michael Newton is a nice guy. Too many stories make him not so nice. He needs some love too, sometimes! It hurts to see Bella healing so slowly and being in a lot of pain. Everyone is doing their best to take care of her. She's one lucky woman! I hope you guys are doing well. See you next time!
Date: 28 Jan 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
I’m so glad they have already arrested Maggie. I wonder what all she has to say about her actions. More delusions, I’m sure! I hope that Mike gets a hero’s award for his quick thinking and actions that saved Bella and the girls! I’m so glad they are all ok. I live this story. Can’t wait for more.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! An amazing chapter. I totally didn’t see that coming at all. I knew Maggie was off her rocker, but holy crap! So glad Mike came to the rescue. Wonder what happened to Maggie after Mike hit her car? And there’s a baby on the way!! I so love this story. I hate the thought of this story coming to an end alrearly day!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap, this story is amazing! There were twists and turns which I loved. Please tell me we will see what happens to Maggie and Angela. I really want her to get it. I also want to see Eleazar come groveling on his hands and knees. I love Mike! Great guy!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's great to get a chapter of this story, but not so great to read what happened. I hope Maggie is put away for attempted murder, which is what she did, and if Bella loses the baby, then murder. Can't these guys catch a break? All these people who are making their life hell need to be gone, like now! I do enjoy the story but not the horrible things, like this, that happen to them. Thanks.
Date: 04 Dec 2017 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am more worried abou Buckley, Maggie and her crazy dad than I was about Charlotte. But at least she gave some true info and has a chance. Buckley's ex-wife might have a lot to say as well.
Those girls really lucked out getting away from that family and it's aquaintances.
Date: 21 Nov 2017 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE that the judge put Buckley in his place. He made fair judgements. Just the fact when it was said that the kids have no say is a huge red flag. Glad that Edward is cutting ties with Eleazar and family. You know Angela is involved somehow.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like how Edward and Bella called their bluff. Charlotte probably won't even be able to be found or be high on drugs when she is. Maggie and her dad sure are having their plans back fire. Bella and Edward getting married will stun poor Maggie to death. LOL
That Buckly guy is just an ass that will probably end up doing something to get thrown in jail and getting his own kid taken away. Sounds like Angela is going down too.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to find out what Maggie and Charlotte are REALLY up to and what part this Buckley character plays in all of it. I think they are up to no good, have an ulterior motive of some kind, and don't really care about the girls at all. I think that Edward will find out what their deals from Jenks or maybe just by doing what the court wants. I think the court is on to that bunch and will deal fairly with everything. I love reading this story, love how Edward and Bella's relationship is going, how the twins and Alice are planning the wedding and everything. I can't wait for more of this marvelous story, but of course, I will wait. What other choice do I have? Have a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. See you next time!