Date: 20 Nov 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like how Edward and Bella called their bluff. Charlotte probably won't even be able to be found or be high on drugs when she is. Maggie and her dad sure are having their plans back fire. Bella and Edward getting married will stun poor Maggie to death. LOL
That Buckly guy is just an ass that will probably end up doing something to get thrown in jail and getting his own kid taken away. Sounds like Angela is going down too.
Date: 20 Nov 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to find out what Maggie and Charlotte are REALLY up to and what part this Buckley character plays in all of it. I think they are up to no good, have an ulterior motive of some kind, and don't really care about the girls at all. I think that Edward will find out what their deals from Jenks or maybe just by doing what the court wants. I think the court is on to that bunch and will deal fairly with everything. I love reading this story, love how Edward and Bella's relationship is going, how the twins and Alice are planning the wedding and everything. I can't wait for more of this marvelous story, but of course, I will wait. What other choice do I have? Have a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. See you next time!
Date: 20 Nov 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Way to go Edward! So glad he verbaly bitch slapped that bitch! I fear it may have some bad after effects before it actually pays off though. Hope not, but wouldn't be surprised.
Had to laugh at Alice being timid about the wedding and Jasper being a looser at all things kids cards. LOL
Hope you both have a good Thanksgiving. Spend time with your families. We will be here when you get it done.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
First, Edward needs to cool down and listen to his lawyers. Second, they have the law on their side. They legally adopted the girls. I think the wedding idea is cute, but I think Rose and Emmett should stand by Bella and Alice and Jasper should stand by Edward. They supported them when they were single parents and continue now. They are also old enough to sign legal documents. The girls are not.
Date: 15 Nov 2017 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG. Could Maggie be any stupider? Like Edward would touch her with a ten foot pole, let alone his dick after all the trouble she is causing.
I just knew that asshole was involved somehow.
I like the cabin idea. That should be fun.
Date: 31 Oct 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ugh! That was a terrible place to leave them.
One would like to hope she is the to help, but you know it won't be. She wants Edward so you can bet your ass she is there to cause more trouble. Can't wait till she finds out they are engauged.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was shocked at who it was for and the connections they have to the people around Bella and Edward. Now it makes perfect sense why Charlotte was commenting about Edward’s profession. They’re only after the money, of course. I’m looking forward to more. I love this story!
Date: 30 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Noooooo not another cliffy!! This was a great chapter and loving them getting so close. I hope the drama passes quickly and they can get back to some family times. Wonder what Maggie the pain wants. This was probably all her to get Edward for her own.
Date: 30 Oct 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is just crap. They can't take their babies away. I know they will win, but I hate that they have to go through this garbage. I am glad that they are engaged though. Have to look at he silver-lining in all this mess. The girls will be so excited.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
How awful to have someone served papers at a school in front of children and parents! Shows the true character of the individual behind it and the person who served it should be ashamed for acting like such a jerk with the grinning. Where I live the Constable is usually the person who serves papers and they’re in uniform. I think it’s Mr. Buckley who has served Bella. Guess we’ll find out. Emmett is so awesome in this story. I love the talk he had with Bella!
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mr. Buckley is an add. I can't believe that they served her at work. I worry that now that Bella has agreed to letting Edward pay part of the tuition that Mr. Buckley will still say that Bella is definitely now Edward's paid whore. Not sure that is a good idea to do right now. Especially since it is the schools policy that teachers can get free tuition for their kids. Bella is not getting special treatment.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Who is Maggie to everyone & why is she even around or touring Edwards office? Mr. Buckley? Why does he think he has any pull on who is hired or fired from a school his child attends & is clearly a bully?
Guess I need more background filler or patience.
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
As a teacher, unfortunately this whole scene is common. Kids don't learn how to be bigots, racists, sexists or assholes on their own. They always learn it from their home environment. It's all so sad......
I'm creeped out by Maggie as well. I wonder if she has anything to do with this drama.
Date: 03 Oct 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Today, 10/2, I got notificaton of chapter 12 posting. When I looked at my spreadsheet, I saw the last chapter I read was 10. STARS did not sent me a notification for chapter 11, so I have just read it now. This was a hell of a chapter to miss! So much happened! I guess STARS is still having email issues, but all the other stories I read there, it seems, are also on FFn so I get notifications there. This one is not, so if STARS doesn't notify me, I don't know there's a chapter. Ugh I wish they would get their email problem fixed! I really love this story and now things are getting serious between Edward and Bella. He completely messed that up with his jealousy. Someone must have doent a number on him in the past to make him react like that. I'm glad they worked things out...on to chapter 12, now.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Damn, that was pretty intense.
Nice sexy times. Scary Rose, and jelous Edward times! And what the hell is with Rose sending Mike in the first place? I think she needs a good ass chewing from Bella. Slimy Mike, ewww.
Glad they worked things out.
Date: 22 Sep 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the kid swap. They need to know their other parent as individuals. They are different kids and need to explore their strengths. I hope Edward wins this game, so they both can win in the long run. Bella is too competitive. She needs to learn that sometimes you win by loosing.