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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 105

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 105

they all need to stay strong

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 104

lot of fire going on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 103

she has to do some fast  talking to get her to help

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 102

WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2018 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 101

Bella will do what ever she can to save Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 100

OMG what a twist WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 99

That is so sad :(

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 98

Phillip needs to die!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 97

OMG that poor man is a puppet.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2018 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 100

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 100

Oh my, lots of interesting information in this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 99

I hope it is a good sign that James has no power in the sea. But does he have power on land now? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 98

Their Queen is a smart lady. She will figure put something. Can they enchant her before she leaves so no spells can be put on her from Phillip or his followers?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2018 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 97

Queen Isabella will go after her man, her King. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 96

OMG Bella will get him Back NOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 95

He will do everything he can to protect Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 94

He is going to make a baby

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 93

Bella is very smart and thinks of her kingdom.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 92

it better work

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 96

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 96

Glad the baby was healthy. So they took Edward.  What now?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 95

I hope Bella does not get upset with Edward for what he did.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 91

Glad they are going straight to Jane.  So there is not a chance of someo be stealing everything they got. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 90

Some how I've missed a couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 94

I'm surprised that they made love the same day/night that the spell was removed. I would ha e thought Bella's body needed some time to recover, especially after losing her baby. 



Author's Response:

It has been a month since she lost the baby and she was healed by Alice so she could go on the quest to begin with. Carlisle also saw to her before dinner so she is as healed as asshe can be. Love your reviews.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 93

Glad Carlisle could help them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 92

Hopefully Bella will be ok now. 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 91

They've made it home and I hope Jane was honest with them!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 89

I really like how well the get along!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 88

The King is quite brilliant.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 87

Bella is also very thoughtful and kind. I think she's going to be much loved by her people and a magnificent queen.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 86

Bella is very intelligent when working on all the complexities of obtaining the items to remove the curses.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 85

The plot thickens!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 84

A little bit scary for Bella!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 83

It seems they have their work cut out for them.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 82

Adorable!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 90

I loved it!!! Emmett always adds fun to the mix!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 91

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 91

No waiting for them get this done NOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 90

Emmett is a good man and will be happy to help?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 89

emmett is not going to let them go any more with out Rose

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 88

He is handy to have around lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 87

Now they have everything

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 89

Half Giant!!!!!!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 88

Edward and his magical powers. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 87

Bella was right. Edward has him a smart Queen. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 86

Bella is so smart ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 85

Love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 84

The siren wanted her an Edward.  Bella is a bad ass and will not let that happen

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 83

They will make there land great again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 82

she just wants to be close to him

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2018 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 86

:) :) 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 86

Interesting chapter and I love how intuitive Bell is!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 86

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 86

What item do they have left to find?



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The 4 leaf clover is the last item 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 85

Phillip is still reining terror 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 84

They found her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 83

Hope they find everything they need soon. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2018 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 82

Lol. Bella is a little minx.  

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 81

This story is quite fascinating and I'm enjoying this read immensely!!!! It's delightful!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Fascinating!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

AH! Poor Jasper's been caught by a stranger!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:35 AM Title: Prologue

Intriguing!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 81

Can't wait to find out more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 80

What is Edward thinking 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 78

Very interesting 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 77

Oh no, what has happened to her?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 81

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 81

They needed a break

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 80

Now he is freaking me out lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 79

She is taking his fear as anger poor girl.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 78

Edward is so smart :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 77

OMG NOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2018 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 76

Very  interesting  connection !   Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 76

It is always good to have many friends

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 75

One thing down and now they will help her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 74

OMG that was close

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 73

I hope it is one of the things they need.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 72

Alice is very wise.  Bella would be hurting for sertin is she did not cast that spell on her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 76

One item checked off their list. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 75

How does Isabella know how the lady is suppose to return?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 74

Will they be able to help Edward and Bella? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 73

Oh my, what is in the trap?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2018 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 76

:) :) Happy New Year to you 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 76

Awww

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 71

Keep on writing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 71

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 71

She is wacked in the head.  Edward and Bella are on a great quest I am glad Edward thinks it is possible to find the items.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 70

Almost make me feel sorry for Jane NOT

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 69

How can they trust her ?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 68

still so sad but so happy they are talking and he is showing his emotions

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 67

So sad :(

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 71

The journey begins. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 70

Glad Edward is going to let them talk. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 69

Interesting

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 68

I'm glad that they are talking. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 71

Well they find everything and will they find out who asked for the curse

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