Date: 16 Nov 2017 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 6: Tension - Edward POV
I hope there's not one of those horribly tropey things coming up where they get found out because one of them does something blatantly telling like Bella does something Edward has mever liked, or one of them gives the other some food they hate/are allergic to. That sort of thing is just poor planning and makes the characters seem like they actually didn't care as much as they say they do. I'm hoping youtake this a fresh direction!
Anyways, I really like this story. Looking forward to what's to come.
Rest assured that will NOT happen. I hate those stories...honestly if you're going to lie make it good and make it as close to the truth as possible. I hate stories where the characters are found out by their own mistakes or admissions so it defs will not happen here. Thanks for reviewing glad you are enjoying it!.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 5: So now it begins - EPOV
I am glad that Bella stood up for herself. I think they will stay. With all the sexual tension Bella is safer staying with his family then being alone with him. Lol.
Yeah I thought she needed to stand up for herself and start to come out of her shell a bit more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08 Nov 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5: So now it begins - EPOV
I checked with stars andd they don't support PM any more due to abuse. I'll try sending the banner through contact the author. zanath
Hey it came through! I did try to send a reply message back but not sure if it went through or not. thanks so much I will post it as soon as I have some time to load it up onto photobucket or something to get a code.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Unplanned - Edward POV
Bella being previously had is always no no but..... I'm intrigued so I'll give it a go.
Thank you for giving it a go hopefully you will stick with me! If you're worried about pregnancy or anything (as I know a number of readers have voiced the same concern) then do not worry, there will be no pregnancy or miscarriage or pregnancy scares or any other weird situations going on there. I hate pregnancy stories so definately do not write them. Thanks for reviewing, hope to see you again!
Date: 31 Oct 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: It's Crunch Time - Edward POV
Thank you for the update...well done...I love the Cullens...Bella will be alright soon...I think she will enjoy her time with Edward..She may be his girl after all!!! Let's hope
Fingers crossed that she will be! Thanks for reviewing, so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 31 Oct 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4: It's Crunch Time - Edward POV
I have make something but I don't know how to get it to you. Alex - Zanath
I will contact you through here with my email address for you to email me the image if that is okay? Thanks for reading!
Date: 31 Oct 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4: It's Crunch Time - Edward POV
I hate that Bella is so nervous. But it can all be chalked up to meeting Edward's fam old for the 1st time and that she is a very nervous and shy person.
Yes she is nervous...I fear that I may have gone a little over the top with it but then I remembered how nervous I was meeting my partners parents and then pack a lie ontop of that and I think it turned out okay, I hope it did anyway! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 Oct 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Getting to Know You - EPOV
Love this chapter. Poor Liz. She was just a talking and not paying attention. Lol.
Yes she did put her foot in it quite nicely lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 Oct 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Interview - Edward POV
Ok, some how I missed the chapter. I have already read and reviewed the 3rd chapter. So now I am off to read the 4th chapter. I am enjoying your writing and the story.
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it all!
Date: 27 Oct 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Getting to Know You - EPOV
She is afraid she will not be good at sex not like Rose anyway
Bingo! Haha someone finally mentioned that part of the chapter. It seems to have been neglected. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 3: Getting to Know You - EPOV
Thank you for the update....I think she should have waited for Edward, I know Jake is her friend , but I think she would have enjoyed so much more with Edward...I think they will hit it off fine
Yes it probably would have been better for her to wait for Edward but I felt that the fear of the unknown, the possibility of loosing it to some old bald guy with a beer gut, was a better motivation to loose it to a friend. After all there were no guareentees at the time that Bella would meet someone as good looking as Edward lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: Getting to Know You - EPOV
So she might not be as sassy and brazen as Rose. But I like her depth and still think she may need Daddy Edward to bring her out of her self. And Edward being the kind of man who can never walk away from a challenge I can see the Daddy part coming out more he already wants to keep her safe. Can't wait for the next chapter as always well done.
Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it so much! Yes she is definately not as brazen and crass as Rose but I think that should be part of the allure for Edward. Bella would be more of the 'girl next door' type that he would bring home to his parents...if he wasnt so lazy at dating lol. Thanks again for reviewing.
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:15 PM Title: Outtake One - Bella POV
The part with Jake made me shutter. I would have prefered a stranger than that experience and how dare he not use a condom. That dog!
Yeah it made me shutter a bit too but it's importat for the overall plot. Thanks for reading and reviewing. See you next update!
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:44 PM Title: Outtake One - Bella POV
I kind of feel sorry for Jake. I hope he doesn't get hurt.
I know I feel a bit guilty about doing that to him but it happened and we will just have to see what happens next. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Interview - Edward POV
new reader to your story..I think I'm going to like it..so fsr so good. I like Isabella. can't wait to meet the rest of the gang..until you post again
Thank you I'm glad you like it! See you next week!
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Unplanned - Edward POV
This sounds like it is really going to be good. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you! A new chapter will be posted tomorrow 11th October but I'm in australia, so I don't know what the time/date difference will be for most of you readers so make sure you've added this to your favourites to get a email alert when it's posted!