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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 1:26 AM Title: You & Me

hmm wonder how B worked all that out at the first meeting.  But I like the ending

 

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Author's Response:

Thanks,

Well, they always mention how observant she is, plus picking up all the negative vibes from Edward.

It was a definite change in attitude when Jasper arrived as well so she'd have to be blind not to notice xx

Alexis

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 5:42 PM Title: You & Me

Girl it’s fanfiction for a reason. You can make them do whatever you want. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 Well in that case ............! lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 3:46 AM Title: You & Me

Great point of view. A chapter on each POV revaluing themself would have been great and true closure.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm not saying I won't but not now, maybe one-day xx

Alexis

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2018 12:09 AM Title: You & Me

This was awesome, I hope you continue it, add more and seeing a truly bonding brother and sister with Jasper and Bella. It would be cool to see her out Edward and Rose in their place some more.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

that's the trouble with tweaking canon stuff, you can't change the core of it and I want to xx

Alexis

Reviewer: GeezerWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 5:21 PM Title: You & Me

I like it.

They treated Jasper like the red-headed step child. Until they needed him for Victoria's newborns.

 

Yeah. I follow you over here, too.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah I jump about reading things all over the shop too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 1:32 PM Title: You & Me

pas mal j'attend la suite



Author's Response:

Merci,

Je ne sais pas si il y aura, mais je ne dirai jamais jamais dans le cas xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 11:12 AM Title: You & Me

I still think your version is so much better than S.M.'s.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

You're a star xx

Alexis

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