Date: 30 Oct 2018 6:32 PM Title: Ten Years Later
This was a great, heart warming, fast reading fic! Kudos to you!!
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! So glad you continued....cant wait to read the rest!
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! So glad you continued....cant wait to read the rest!
Date: 21 Oct 2018 11:29 PM Title: Ten Years Later
Loved this story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 17 Oct 2018 2:30 PM Title: Ten Years Later
great story, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Date: 08 Oct 2018 9:43 PM Title: Ten Years Later
Aww, straight sugar.
Also I see how you slyly answered all my review questions, thank you. This story has been wonderful, I'm glad I read it. I don't think there is anything that I can say that I haven't already.
♡
Author's Response:
I appreciate that you take the time to review!
Date: 05 Oct 2018 3:22 AM Title: Ten Years Later
Love this chapter. Thanks to Bella Edward handled that very well.
Author's Response:
He really did need her guidance, lol.
Date: 04 Oct 2018 7:09 PM Title: Ten Years Later
Amazing! You know I loved every word of this. Thank you so much.
More on the other site. That’s where I get mushy. LOL!
Love you, my Lara! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Author's Response:
I'm happy to see you on here! I'm behind in my replies, but you know I'll get to you!
Date: 04 Oct 2018 1:44 PM Title: Ten Years Later
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you, Deb.
Date: 04 Oct 2018 5:52 AM Title: Ten Years Later
Not much of an older Bella and younger Edward, but this was tastefully done. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad it could draw you in.
Date: 04 Oct 2018 1:14 AM Title: Ten Years Later
Thank you for the fantastic read. I've enjoyed each chapter and had a hard time waiting for the next update to come through. I'm looking forward to reading your next endeavor.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm almost done with the fic for Halloween.
Date: 30 Sep 2018 3:46 PM Title: Outtake
Love this outtake
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 27 Sep 2018 2:26 PM Title: Outtake
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Sep 2018 11:11 PM Title: Future Take Part 2
nice update
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 20 Sep 2018 5:26 AM Title: Future Take Part 2
Yay more story! You're spoiling me and I love it. It's nice to know that everyone is happy and well, and to have a glimpse instead of imagining.
xo
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's good to spoil the readers, lol.
Date: 20 Sep 2018 2:07 AM Title: Future Take Part 2
I a. Sorry to see this wonderful story ending. You have done an amazing job with it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I found that I couldn't stop writing even when I thought I was done.
Date: 20 Sep 2018 12:28 AM Title: Future Take Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Sep 2018 5:17 AM Title: Future Take Part 1
Edward is soo sweet and caring! I need me one of him lol
Author's Response:
He's the best.
Date: 13 Sep 2018 3:28 AM Title: Future Take Part 1
Ooo twin girls. That's fun. I wonder if they'll both want the ranch life, or if one or both will want the urban dreamscape. It would be interesting if they both desired the latter, not because of the property (since once you own it, it's yours) moreso because of who would return to it be it to work or just to pass it along to the next of kin.
This story has a way of making me think up more than you've given which is a mark of true talent. Fanfiction is the birth of the desire readers have for more, for additional gratification. If you're able to do that with just one person through a fanfic... well who knows what you'd spark in your own stories.
I'm excited for more futuretakes. If you write it, I'll read it.
xo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I have definitely thought of more for them. I couldn't help it.
Date: 13 Sep 2018 1:30 AM Title: Future Take Part 1
I am so tickled with them having twin girls. I hope they will also have more children.
Author's Response:
Overrun with girls seems perfect for them!
Date: 13 Sep 2018 12:34 AM Title: Future Take Part 1
Two girls! That's pretty heady stuff for a teenage dad like Edward to take, I would imagine! Now he's got 3 females at home with him the king of the bunch. Not too bad, I think. This was a lovely lovely chapter and it went quickly, and contained so much information! Will part 2 be the last of the story? I really hope Carlisle comes around soon, or he may be left in the dust...thanks, this is still wonderful and I look forward to owning my own copy when it's done!
Author's Response:
I just heard the news, and I know you won't get to see this or the ending, which makes me cry. I'm going to miss you and your awesome reviews. Rest in Peace, Judy.
Date: 12 Sep 2018 11:36 PM Title: Future Take Part 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 12 Sep 2018 11:08 PM Title: Future Take Part 1
So adorable
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Sep 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Pretty pretty story. Pretty in that sparkly way that the sun gets over an empty expanse + the all-encompassing sparkly joy that kids mean when they enthusiastically say "pretty!"
I really enjoyed this story; it was touching and heartfelt. Your storytelling is nearly perfection (we can always improve though don't ask me where) the way you describe and paint pictures in my head make me feel like I'm there.
I wonder if the last futuretake will be in Edward's perspective looking back on everything. I'm a sucker for symbolism and coming full circle.
I hope you're having a great day/night. With a heart full,
Tea.
Author's Response:
Full hearts are my goal. I value your words as much as you do mine. Thank you very much.
Date: 07 Sep 2018 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love this chapter. Beautiful wedding.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 06 Sep 2018 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
great epi... looking forward to the future take and out take.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 06 Sep 2018 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
So beautiful! I'm so glad Carlisles chilly side is warming up to their relationship.
Author's Response:
He needed to thaw a little. Thanks.
Date: 05 Sep 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a beautiful wedding! I love that it was not ostentatious, but fit them perfectly. I love that Carlisle relented. I love what he whispered to her while they were dancing, about her dress being on or off when they made love later. Love that! So simple, yet so meaningful. Thanks so much. I'm really going to miss this when its gone.
Author's Response:
That was what I was aiming for; simple and meaningful. Thank you.
Date: 05 Sep 2018 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 03 Sep 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
nice update
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Sep 2018 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this chapter. Cant wait for them to have a little one.
Author's Response:
Soon! Thank you.
Date: 30 Aug 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awww, sweet. Also yay for wedding Bells. Get it? Bells' Wedding? No? :P
I really have enjoyed this story, and you've put together a story that flows so beautifully. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I get it. Lol. Thank you.
Date: 30 Aug 2018 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Such a beautiful chapter! I'm really enjoying the way you're ending this story. I love reading Bella's happiness and joy at having found Edward. I'm such a romantic and always will be. Many thanks for this and all your others.
Author's Response:
Thank you so, so much, Judy.
Date: 30 Aug 2018 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 30 Aug 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Beautiful. Her faith reminds be of the footprints in the sand poem
Author's Response:
That's a good comparison. :)
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love this chapter. Glad Carlisle spoke up about Esme.
Author's Response:
Yes! He does at least love Esme.
Date: 27 Aug 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Keep on writing
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Aug 2018 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
great update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Aug 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story keep writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 23 Aug 2018 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Truck lemons would make a great outtake.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've given myself plot bunnies.
Date: 23 Aug 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
(:
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Aug 2018 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Another utterly satisfying chapter! From the car salesman's mouthy loss of commission to the carrot comparison, to the celebratory naked romp afterward, this story just keeps on giving. When I was 35, a 19 y/o neighborhood, red-headed young man was interested in me. I didn't think enough of myself to go for it, but cherished every look and word from him...Vincent. I'm sorry to this day I couldn't give him what he wanted...thanks for giving me a story that reminded me of him...
Author's Response:
Oh, and now I wish you'd gone for it.
Date: 22 Aug 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Aug 2018 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
♡! Esme!
Carlisle can take it. If you know what I mean.
I love the dynamic of family and love these last few chapters have built.
Author's Response:
Thank you! They are making a great family.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
So glad Esme put Carlisle in his place.
Author's Response:
He deserved it!
Date: 16 Aug 2018 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, I'm not sure it's even reluctant acceptance. It might be one day, with Esme's help (prodding), but Carlisle is being stubborn and is stuck in his point of view. Kudos to Bella for standing up for herself. It's about time! Bigger kudos to Edward for saying what needed to be said. Thanks!
Author's Response:
He is being stubborn. I know about stubborn people, as I am one, lol. It takes a lot to give in when you think you're right.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love that Carlisles ass is gonna be sore, not sure from the fall but from the ass chewing esme delivered.
Author's Response:
Lol, that might hurt more.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 15 Aug 2018 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter. It’s so awesome to see Esme being open and in awe of the ranch and what all goes into it. I really loved when Bella stood up to Carlisle just as Esme did. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
This story is so heartwarming and awesome. Thank you so much for sharing your stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Esem is great, and she's going to have to work on Carlisle.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad Esme seems to be making the effort to get along with Bella. I hope Carlisle will realize that Edward really does love her.
Author's Response:
Esme is wonderful.
Date: 13 Aug 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter. I really like this story. I'm hoping that Carlisle comes around for more than just being impressed. But it's funny that he would say she doesn't know anything about Edward when I'd garner to bet he'd actually know less.
Author's Response:
At this point, Bella does know more about him, yeah.
Date: 09 Aug 2018 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Me!!! Oh definitely Me!! Get ‘um!! Lol love this story !
Author's Response:
Lol, it should be good!
Date: 09 Aug 2018 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Me me both hands way up Carlisle need some humbling karma on he’s stuck up ass I love esme by the way
Author's Response:
Lol, he is incrediby stuck up!
Date: 09 Aug 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Carlisle deserves to be sore, not just from the horse ride. But a bruised pride. He owes bella a big apology.
Author's Response:
Yes, he certainly does.
Date: 08 Aug 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Aug 2018 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
ME ME ME!!! I can't wait!!!
Author's Response:
;) LOL
Date: 08 Aug 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Carlisle comes around on his own because if he doen't, I fear, he will get help from a not so nice kind of lesson. Esme is lovely, although she may not have grasped the meaning of all she saw today, and means well, I believe. This is a lovely and meaningful chapter, as are most, and I'm very happy to have it. I'm also happy to be home...
Author's Response:
Esme does mean well, and that's a good start. I'm also glad that you're home.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
That must have been some taxi ride from the airport. The Cullens were being a bit snobbish, but I understand. I am a mother of a 2o year old boy and I would have a hard time understanding this relationship. I would have to see how they work together before I could understand. Bella might be older in age, but she has lived a sheltered life. Edward has many more life experiences than she has had.
Author's Response:
You're right, I feel that they need to see them together to understand.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Squee~
And lol I love how human Carlisle and Esme ALWAYS have these personas in stories as if their kindness in canon only stems from centuries of life. Hahaha.
This story is just so great, thank you!
Author's Response:
That's funny. Now I wonder if I always write them that way.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 03 Aug 2018 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
You have done very well painting the picture with words of the rural area where they live and the tiny town nearby. I love it. I love also that Edward has the maturity, at 19, to recognize what he found in Bella and risk alienating his parents because of his love for her. I would have given anything for someone to feel the way about me. Your story is heartwarming and lovely!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Judy, as always! I would agree about Edward. His parents pushed him as a child/teen, and it paid off for Bella.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah, I'm so happy for their engagement. I can't wait to hear how the city slickers do on their tour of the ranch.
Author's Response:
It's going to be qiute amusing, I do believe.
Date: 02 Aug 2018 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for never forgetting to review!
Date: 02 Aug 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for sharing your work! I love small town living. Great descriptions!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate it.
Date: 01 Aug 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope Bella finally gets the children she wants. She is still young enough. She and Edward deserve the whole family dream.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh, yes.
Date: 28 Jul 2018 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw (:
Also because of practical needs, I hope he buys at least one pickup truck, and maybe some other smaller equipment necessary. I don't think this Bella would argue, and it's not really a gift ya know? I'm so happy she has a lil business starting and that it's really taking off.
Author's Response:
They seriously need a vehicle.
Date: 26 Jul 2018 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 26 Jul 2018 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this chapter. I hope they experience everything, even a few little ones running around the farm.
Author's Response:
They deserve that and more.
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story and am glad it's not over quite yet. These two touch my heart. Thanks...
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that they do.
Date: 26 Jul 2018 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah, these two deserve all of this happiness and more.
Author's Response:
They really do!
Date: 26 Jul 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Jul 2018 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh it was great...her doubts...his reassurance...so a baby for bella?
Author's Response:
Lol, sooner or later.
Date: 21 Jul 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
So sweet (:
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Jul 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yay!!!!
Author's Response:
:) Thank you!
Date: 20 Jul 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
nice update
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
I’m so glad he’s home! Can’t wait for all the adventures that await them!!
Author's Response:
They have to have at least a few before the end!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes yes she did yay
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Such a beautiful reunion.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this!! So glad he is back with her!!! Are you going to continue further or is this close to conclusion now??
Author's Response:
I have more planned for them!
Date: 19 Jul 2018 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, the end of this story came more quickly than I was expecting! Not that I'm complaining, oh no! I haven't yet looked to see if you marked this story complete yet, but I hope you give them at least one chapter for the future/epilogue to happen. If not, well, that's ok too if it is what you envision. I LOVE this story and will keep it to my collection on a pdf, with your permission. Thanks for everything!
Author's Response:
Oh, no, not complete yet! I know it feels like it. They have a few things to sort out before I can mark it complete. I'll turn it into a PDF when it's complete and post it in the facebook group if that's easier for you.
Date: 15 Jul 2018 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
I feel so sorry for both of them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I do too.
Date: 14 Jul 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad everyone come to help Bella get her harvest in.
Author's Response:
She needs the inclusion of the community.
Date: 14 Jul 2018 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
nice story so fsr...
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 12 Jul 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wait. I just read the recipe. That makes much more sense than uh... actual frogs.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's a huge difference. Lol
Date: 12 Jul 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Frog jam sounds.. uh.. well... interesting.
Also heh, Bella, he is plowing a field; your field.
I'm so excited for the build up to the return AND the return. The promised futuretake too! Everything is great.
Author's Response:
:) Lol. Yeah, he is plowing her field, isn't he?
Date: 12 Jul 2018 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella...so selfless...i would have.dit bed those pills weeks ago
Author's Response:
I know, I think I might have too.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
your frog jam recipe makes my mouth water. i wish I could eat sugar...This chapter made me sad for them. What they have found together could be heavenly, should they allow themselves to go there. Reading this makes me sad, feeling sorry for myself that I never had anyone love me like this. Ever. Thanks for a glorious story.
Author's Response:
I'm positive there was a recipe that didn't use sugar. There were alternatives like maple syrup or even artificial sweetener.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
So sad
Author's Response:
I feel her pain.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wondered about FROG jam so much that I had Bing searching for it while I read the end of this story. I like fig jam and I love ginger, so I'd probably like it.
Poor Bella, poor Edward . . .thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response:
That's what I always do when I come across something I'm unfamiliar with in a story.
Date: 10 Jul 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
I know what the ending is, but will we get a futuretake as well? I just really hoped for one, or that the story would continue on to another natural ending.
Author's Response:
Yes, absolutely!
Date: 06 Jul 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. It always gives me a warm feeling to read it. Yes, I know what's going to happen, but still love hearing it from Bella's POV. Life on this farm could be, and will be, so wonderful for them. Did I say I love this story? Thanks aren't enough...
Author's Response:
I never get tired of hearing it. Thank you so much.
Date: 05 Jul 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
My heart aches for bella, loneliness is such a cruel thing.
Author's Response:
I agree with you. I've worked as a caretaker and seen the effects of loneliness.
Date: 05 Jul 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 28 Jun 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved this chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 28 Jun 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love hearing Bella's POV on this scene.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Jun 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love that Rose was honest with her and talked to her. I think they will be good friends.
Author's Response:
They really can be great friends.
Date: 28 Jun 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!