Date: 21 Nov 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
None of them would belive Edward was guilty .
Date: 21 Nov 2018 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good ol Emmett putting his foot in his mouth. Looking forward to the next chapter (:
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
Emmett is sticking his foot in it huh?
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella. The Chief is going to make sure those morons don't make the same mistake again. E is so good with her. LOL for the nickname reveal.
Date: 20 Nov 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really liked seeing Edward and Bella bonding more. Edward should trust the school gang enough to confide in them.
Sherry
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just started this yesterday and I'm sad that I'm all caught up already. I'm enjoying this story, I hope that updates are frequent! If I remember correctly a violation of parole isn't viewed hatshly if it's done to protect those at large. So while Edward won't get off easy he also won't be sent back to prison. Poor Bella, I hope that this doesn't shake her faith.
I'm liking the steady pace of this story it moves at a gentle pace rather than a 1x fast forward or more. Feels good.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think with Charlie there it will clear up quickly.
Date: 03 Nov 2018 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
That station is in deep deep shit OMG. Edward is so worried about Bella.
Date: 02 Nov 2018 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wonder how many cops are going to go down for this stupidly. Morons. Glad e got there in time to help B.
Date: 02 Nov 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hey!!! Holy moly....heads would DEFINITELY be rolling!!! Great chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2018 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
glad the chief showed up
Date: 02 Nov 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
There are enough criminals in the world. I hate when cops are bad too.
Date: 01 Nov 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
love this charlie
Date: 01 Nov 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Charlie makes the arresting officers pay for their cock up
Date: 01 Nov 2018 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
this was a really great chapter! i loved it so much! i love how protective bella is of edward and vice versa. I loved how Charlie acted when he arrived and that the DA arrived and is good with Charlie and Bella. Can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully Edward won't be sent back to jail.
Date: 28 Oct 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story. I am a recent reader of ‘Twilight’ character fanfics and glad I found this story. It really has a lot going for it in showing how the right support and caring can have a positive effect on the healing process for our protagonists. Thanks for the great story.
Date: 22 Oct 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Nice chapter. Glad he is happier and that they both are talking about some hard things
Date: 19 Oct 2018 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
He feels like he belongs so cool.
Date: 19 Oct 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward seems to be fitting in. AAAAWWWWW
Date: 18 Oct 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is gaining so much confidence. Bella is good for him.
Date: 13 Oct 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great progress!!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is so sweet. They need to clear his name.
Date: 10 Oct 2018 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
He is going to be the hardest working friend he will take care of her :)
Date: 09 Oct 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is so sweet. He is going full out with helping Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh Lauren and her mom are just to creepy. Glad he and Bella are friends Smartof him asking for advice about her medical condition and exercise
Date: 08 Oct 2018 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
i'm really liking this story so far. cant wait for more.
Date: 06 Oct 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loving the story so far!
But pleeease, when is Edward going to fall for Bella?
:)
Date: 03 Oct 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good story, keep writing
Date: 30 Sep 2018 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Date: 26 Sep 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
She will probably say there is no way you did that, which is true. Edward should be able to get tuition assisstance from the state.
Date: 26 Sep 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
DUM DA DUM!!!!!!
READ YOU SOON : o
Date: 26 Sep 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..Well done..I'm happy Edward feels goo d about tuneing the musical instruments. .I wonder what Ms.rs. Cope was thinki my about..maybe hiring Edward...although I'm not sure he can..hopefully his innocence will come out soon and Edward will get reparations. (A big settlement)..until you post again
Date: 25 Sep 2018 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Charlie is in his corner. I think something is going to happen with Cheney again and they'll try to blame it on E again.
Date: 25 Sep 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am so excited that he is so comfortable with her that he told her OMG she knows he is innocent.
Date: 25 Sep 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it can only be good that they are both opening up to each other.
Date: 24 Sep 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward needed to get his feelings out so he can heal. Ben Cheney needs to go down and Charlie will help Edward accomplish this task. Edward needs his name cleared.
Date: 24 Sep 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
I just want to give Edward a hug. I hope one day he will be exonerated.
Date: 22 Sep 2018 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well that def explains Charlie's involvement. Glad E has someone on his side.
Date: 20 Sep 2018 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Charlie is a good man and is a great friend to Edward and his mother now Edward just needs to let him be his friend. I love it but my heart broke for his mother again.
Date: 19 Sep 2018 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
WOW!!!! SO CHARLIE WILL BE THE KEY TO CLEARING HIS NAME AND BELLA WILL BE THE ONE TO FILL HIS HEART..... THAT'S WHAT I'LL HOPE FOR AND LOOK FORWARD TOO.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 19 Sep 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Edward, he probably feels more at peace and sadder at the same time. I wonder if Bella will be upset that Charlie told Edward so much of her story. Hmmm....
Date: 12 Sep 2018 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow what a bitch Jessica is. Glad they are getting to know each other better and E has an outlet for his aggression. Was ROTFL with tasering Em
Date: 11 Sep 2018 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella and Edward are so good for each other.
Sherry
Date: 11 Sep 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I APPRECIATE A LONGER MORE INFORMATIVE CHAPTER. THERE'S ALOT OF HURT AND PAI THAT THESE TWO SHARE. I NOW FEEL SAD BUT LOOK FORWARD TO MORE.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 10 Sep 2018 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
He thinks he does not want to belong to these people but his heart knows he already belongs to them as much as they belong to him.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
They make little steps of progress, but they are both just so dam sad. I'm sdad too now. :( Really good chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm wondering if Bella's accident caused her to fall behind in school.
Sherry
Date: 05 Sep 2018 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think they are helping each other little by little.
Date: 04 Sep 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Charlie is a pretty standup guy
Date: 04 Sep 2018 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Asshole!!!!! He's such a guy. So Bella is 19 and legal has been hurt...hmmm! something in common... kinda.
READ YOU SOON
Date: 04 Sep 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
He just cant get pasted the idea that they may like having him around.
Date: 31 Aug 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Looks like bella will be key to keeping Edward's anger & anxiety away.
Date: 29 Aug 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think Edward and Bella have a little more in common than they think.
Sherry
Date: 28 Aug 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward needs human contact and a friend whether he wants it or not.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think that was a great start to a wonderful friendship. I think that Bella's mom was murdered and Bella seen it all and was hurt buy who ever killed her mom.???
Date: 27 Aug 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Those 2 talking together but not discussing either of their own lives is a good starting point for them.
Date: 27 Aug 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad they are getting along. Wow Charlie didn't have an issue with him going to her meadow. That surprises me a bit. I do like the bullying stance. Too bad many other places dont
Date: 22 Aug 2018 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
He broke her heart OMG .
Date: 22 Aug 2018 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward can not understand why anyone wants to be around him why does he think he is so bad besides prison. What happened to Bella?
Date: 21 Aug 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
He has no clue how to act as a free man.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
My heart is breaking for Edward but he is in a good place now
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is so socially awkward as is Bella. They do fine when they are alone. Edward needs to invite her to the meadow to talk.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward's past is horrible enough, but I worry that Bella's may be worse or eqyally as bad. And it may be ongoing.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well Bella can take a hint.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Those two both hava a lot of issues. Too bad Charlie hasn't taught her to defend herself.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor fool he's gonna have to make things right or the guilt is gonna keep eating at him.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
good. feel bad for b. really wonder what her back story is
Date: 21 Aug 2018 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor edward nothing like burning that bridge.
Date: 17 Aug 2018 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
He is very very slowly getting more more acclimated.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
How old it Bella? I hope Edward goes to Emmett's house for the game. It is a big step.
Date: 16 Aug 2018 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just feel so bad for him. He has to relax and open up or he will explode.
Date: 14 Aug 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. I say that alot reading twlight fanfiction. This time Edward is not a billionaire ready to help her out. Thank you
Date: 14 Aug 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
It seems like so many of your characters need a hug. :)
Date: 14 Aug 2018 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
I didn't expect Bella to be a student, but that could be a sticky situation if he does train her. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
Date: 13 Aug 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sadly there are too many Lauren's in the world.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very intrigued...... Ready for more!
Date: 11 Aug 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love the progress. I can feel his sadness and hopelessness.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think we just met bella! Hopefully the anxiety meds will help him.