Date: 22 Aug 2021 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 31
a little dissappointed with the epi but a great story
Date: 18 Aug 2021 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think I read this but we will see
Date: 04 Nov 2019 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
was there a sequel
Date: 02 Aug 2019 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
great story
Date: 30 Apr 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 31
I have spent the last hours reading this...I have laughed so hard I snorted. BRAVA!
Date: 27 Apr 2019 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love it. I would love slob on this story
Date: 22 Apr 2019 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it. I hope they have many children.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
These two crazy kids will be missed! Thanks for all the laughs!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to the new story!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh my goodness i can't believe it's almost over. :(
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
You better start begging edward!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great advice alice!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
She is such a loon!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward is so in tune to her!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward you have got to be honest!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really hope he still has someone following her.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for a wonderful story.,I loved it..Well done.,I'm happy for Bella and Edward
Date: 21 Apr 2019 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't like her being that far from the apartment.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope her hand isn't broken.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 31
:) loved this story
Date: 21 Apr 2019 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved this story! Thank you for writing it.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
What have u done Edward!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm even a little nervous!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
She forgot to click her heels.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
It could be worse bella he could keep u locked in his apartment during business hours.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward can buy a new apartment building for them all to live in.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
I knew it!! He is just too smart & has cameras everywhere!!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Her plans always backfire!! Edward knows what she did already that could be why emmett is now dating rose.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Fireworks are going to go off when they finally kiss.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
He knows how to make her accept gifts!
Date: 21 Apr 2019 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
That would be a yes please!!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
She makes me laugh more and more every chapter!!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Or just tell edward the truth
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is smitten with her!!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really hope they do the deed!! And why does he need bullet proof glass?
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am so addicted to these two already!!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Laugh out loud line.....does jessica drink the soulds of children for lunch!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see how they met before!
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
This bella is hilarious!!
Date: 18 Apr 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update..what does Bella have planned. I can't believe Gianna got Baby Ben out of the office. I love you stolry..Edward loves Bella ..I h ope she is able to tell him this before the story is over...well done..BRAVO!!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2019 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh geez a cliffhanger! LOL. I love this story a bit more now..
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 16 Apr 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
I guess I see things differently. I would be flattered that someone loved me so much. He went to all this just to keep me save and eventually get me in his life. I'm glad she came to the conclusion that there might also be lies on the drive and trusted Edward more than people trying to take him down. Edward might be sneaky, but he tries for the greater good.
Date: 16 Apr 2019 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow! A great chapter! Edward is crushed, Bella is deeply hurt and confused and Esme is wonderful: warm, brilliant, motherly and full of love. I'm in awe of Bella: she decides to trust Edward to tell her all about the things he did and not to take a look at what Marcus Rose has presented her with. Bella makes a decision: she wants to put her trust into Edward, she wants to give him and their relationship a chance. We get another foreshadowing that Marcus Rose won't stop. So there is still much suspense.
Date: 15 Apr 2019 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think we know the whole story. I still trust Edward more than these goons and how did he get into this private house party.
Date: 11 Apr 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you! I appreciate the way you describe the interactions between Bella and Edward. He deep ply cares for her, he gets her to talk and open up. She is still too scared to fall in love with someone bt her actions show how deeply she is moved by him.
Yet there is another hint about Edward and his net of lies and deception. I hope it won't tear them apart when it all gets into the open. And I don't know how he manages ut: he loves her, is able to cope with all her tantrums and issues, he trusts her and wants to gain her trust. Yet he keeps important secrets from her and lies to her. I'm very curious how it will all turn out!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 10 Apr 2019 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
I have to say that this is one of my favorite Ballad O have ever read. She is insanely koky, and I can't get enough of her and Edward! Thank you!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Bella has a big problem with honesty.
Date: 07 Apr 2019 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for your update! I hope that Bella will be able to believe in Edward's love for her soon just as I hope he is sincere. But I guess there will be some more challenges to pass until then.
Date: 31 Mar 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 31 Mar 2019 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love the way Edward asks Bella for her trust and asks her to fight with him instead of running away. But I'm curious: What is he hiding? There must be more. Will she run for the hills then or will she stay with him? And:why is Edward do afraid to share his secrets with her? I know he does not want to lose her and she is easily scared away and is one to easily jump to conclusions... yet it makes their relationship very complicated.
I'm absolutely intrigued by this story and can't wait how everything will turn out. Thank you for this fascinating plot!
Date: 26 Mar 2019 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella is truthful with Edward and not hide behind pop culture.
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can't be enough from these two
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love, love these two
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for sharing
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving every chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving this story so much
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another great chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for sharing
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love Bella and Edwards characters
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love both characters
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Such great story
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
On to the next chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for sharing your story
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can't seem to stop reading
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for writing such a great story
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't seem to stop reading
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love Bella's character
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Love this story.
Date: 23 Mar 2019 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 20 Mar 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella needs help
Date: 20 Mar 2019 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can’t wait for more