Date: 15 Jun 2020 2:19 AM Title: An Imprint
Okay, you know I am going straight on to the next book. (even though I should be working!!) How is this going to play out with the pack? With the coven?
I really want to see Bella put some of those arrogant wolves into their places, using her combined wolf-witch power!
Date: 15 Jun 2020 2:02 AM Title: A Visit to The Den
Wow, sexy Riley! (the pic, rather than the character!)
Date: 15 Jun 2020 2:02 AM Title: A Girls' Night Out
So... once Leah turns 21 and sees Paul, are there going to be fireworks?
Date: 15 Jun 2020 1:58 AM Title: An Enemy or an Ally?
Hey, your pics don't show up on my mobile devices - I just remembered I meant to come back and look at them - I like your Aro pic.
do you know if there's a reason they don't work on my phone or ipad? is there something I need to do?
(I don't even know if you can reply to reviews on this site... so much to learn, LOL)
Date: 15 Jun 2020 1:54 AM Title: A Council Meeting
Well, I hope that Edward was lying to Carlilse, when he said he would make her leave. what will happen now? Aside from more excruiating pain for both of them, that is!
Date: 14 Jun 2020 11:05 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
You sure do a good job creating tension!!
Date: 14 Jun 2020 12:24 PM Title: A Girls' Night Out
What Rose - and Edward - have failed to realise, is that having a smaller wolf doesn't make her week. Not when she's combining witch and wolf!
What I wan to know is, how did Charlie's wolf feel about Renée. And did they leave before they were 21?
Date: 14 Jun 2020 11:00 AM Title: A New Job
Hmm, what's going on with Edward then?
Date: 14 Jun 2020 10:23 AM Title: A Time to Grieve
You made me cry!
Date: 14 Jun 2020 10:06 AM Title: An Unexplainable Moment
Grr, and here it seemed like Bella would be the one to fight the bond! Stupid Edward!
Date: 14 Jun 2020 8:44 AM Title: An Enemy or an Ally?
I like disobedient Edward, and his wolf!
Date: 14 Jun 2020 7:22 AM Title: A Bonfire
Well, I certainly hope it was Edward, being what he should be for once!
Date: 28 May 2020 5:35 AM Title: A New Home
Oh, nice that this is all finished and I get to read with out waiting! I have only just discovered (properly) this site. Hoping there's lots on here that I haven't found before on FF.net. Looking forward to reading more of this. very interesting beginning.
Date: 28 May 2020 5:34 AM Title: A New Home
Oh, nice that this is all finished and I get to read with out waiting! I have only just discovered (properly) this site. Hoping there's lots on here that I haven't found before on FF.net. Looking forward to reading more of this. very interesting beginning.
Date: 19 May 2020 5:47 PM Title: A Disappearance
This story is interesting...but i have mixed feelings about it.
Obviously edward is being a total ass and continues to flaunt jessicas affection for him. Bella, supposedly this stubborn independent free thinker allows edward to basically treat her like crap...but bc of the sexual pull, she's allowing him to be close to her even though he's being an ass to her.
Im disappointed that she's not strong enough to put him in his place...i wish she would stay away from him or at least show him how it feels if she had interest in someone else.
They may be imprints but unlike her who doesnt understand it all, he should be ashamed of his behavior to his imprint. Just think he's getting away w/having a side piece and making his imprint suffer for no reason than him being a jerk.
Date: 19 May 2020 5:46 PM Title: A Disappearance
This story is interesting...but i have mixed feelings about it.
Obviously edward is being a total ass and continues to flaunt jessicas affection for him. Bella, supposedly this stubborn independent free thinker allows edward to basically treat her like crap...but bc of the sexual pull, she's allowing him to be close to her even though he's being an ass to her.
Im disappointed that she's not strong enough to put him in his place...i wish she would stay away from him or at least show him how it feels if she had interest in someone else.
They may be imprints but unlike her who doesnt understand it all, he should be ashamed of his behavior to his imprint. Just think he's getting away w/having a side piece and making his imprint suffer for no reason than him being a jerk.
Date: 19 May 2020 5:46 PM Title: A Disappearance
This story is interesting...but i have mixed feelings about it.
Obviously edward is being a total ass and continues to flaunt jessicas affection for him. Bella, supposedly this stubborn independent free thinker allows edward to basically treat her like crap...but bc of the sexual pull, she's allowing him to be close to her even though he's being an ass to her.
Im disappointed that she's not strong enough to put him in his place...i wish she would stay away from him or at least show him how it feels if she had interest in someone else.
They may be imprints but unlike her who doesnt understand it all, he should be ashamed of his behavior to his imprint. Just think he's getting away w/having a side piece and making his imprint suffer for no reason than him being a jerk.
Date: 18 Mar 2020 1:07 PM Title: An Unexplainable Moment
Oh my
Date: 25 Feb 2020 7:27 AM Title: An Imprint
I'm very excited for book two!! Aro ended up being much more caring than i expected.
Author's Response:
I have loved reading all of your reviews! I've been experiencing the book through your comments :-). So glad that you enjoy it!
Date: 25 Feb 2020 6:58 AM Title: A Council Meeting
I don't think you are getting very far.....
Date: 25 Feb 2020 6:32 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
They just can't catch a break!!
Date: 25 Feb 2020 6:11 AM Title: A Close Call
Yes YES YEEESSSS!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2020 5:48 AM Title: A Visit to The Den
This was very intense!!
Date: 25 Feb 2020 4:57 AM Title: A Girls' Night Out
Yummy paul!!
Date: 25 Feb 2020 2:15 AM Title: A Place to Belong
Will she get to see edwards bedroom?
Date: 25 Feb 2020 1:44 AM Title: A Bond
They need that sexual healing!!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 12:14 PM Title: A Training Session
I can't even fathom how you imagined this! It's brilliant!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 11:47 AM Title: A Connection
I don't even want her to go see riley.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 11:24 AM Title: A Disappearance
I really hope this is an awkward morning in the forest with edward.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 11:02 AM Title: A New Job
He's needing to sleep with her too!!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 11:01 AM Title: A New Job
He's needing to sleep with her too!!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 10:39 AM Title: A Time to Dance?
Edward had been ansy all day....seems he has been missing bella.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 7:18 AM Title: A Time to Grieve
I'm not sure i trust him.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 6:56 AM Title: An Unexplainable Moment
I was expecting her to fight the imprint not him.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 6:32 AM Title: An Enemy or an Ally?
How is it i love edward's wolf more than human Edward?
Date: 24 Feb 2020 6:00 AM Title: A Witch and a Wolf
I do think carlisle would have killed charlie.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 5:37 AM Title: A Conversation
There will be no escaping him.
Date: 24 Feb 2020 5:13 AM Title: A Bonfire
I really hope it's edward!!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 4:49 AM Title: A Family Dinner
I'm a little scared for her!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 4:27 AM Title: A Family Tree
Love her cottage!!
Date: 24 Feb 2020 4:04 AM Title: A New Home
I don't normally like these alternate universes but i'm already hooked!! This is so well written!
Date: 15 Feb 2020 9:21 PM Title: An Imprint
Wow good story and yup can't wait to read Book 2. :) Keep up the good work. :)
Date: 11 Feb 2020 6:33 AM Title: An Imprint
I can't wait to see what happens next. Are any of the wolfs going to be a problem? I can't wait to find out.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 9:11 PM Title: A Council Meeting
I love the story. Its really well written⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. But I feal a bit cheated. The story isn't over. It's not completed. I know some when the publish(this is publish quality ❤️❤️) then they put the story in more then one book. Often because the story is to long, to get more money or because it has some good natural endings. This is definitely not that. I really feel cheated because it doesn't feel like a good place to end the book. I hope you don't take this as a bad thing it isn't. I just try to tell that if I had payed for it I would need a little bit more before I would not feel annoyed... And it's not a oh I better buy the other book kind of annoyed. But more a... They are trying to cheat me kind of way. This is really a good story. Hope you will get published one day if that what you wish for🤞 thank you for letting me read your story for free. I loved it. Best of luck to you.
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thank you for leaving a review! I've been trying to prepare my readers through the authors notes, but I do get what you are saying. If I do publish (something that isn't really a priority right now), I will definately think about it. For me I felt like the book needed a shift. Hope you enjoy book 2!
Date: 29 Jan 2020 1:15 AM Title: An Imprint
Can't wait for book 2! So excited to see what happens next! 😆
Date: 27 Jan 2020 6:06 PM Title: A Family Dinner
awesome
Date: 27 Jan 2020 3:07 PM Title: A New Home
love it so far
Date: 26 Jan 2020 10:17 PM Title: An Imprint
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 19 Jan 2020 10:56 AM Title: An Imprint
I’m so glad there’s a Book 2 🙂
Date: 18 Jan 2020 2:14 PM Title: An Imprint
Wow is all I can say. just wow! Great chapter and the way you brought them together! I cannot wait for more
Date: 18 Jan 2020 7:31 AM Title: An Imprint
I would love to see Bella be accepted by her Coven at large and see her meet more witches. I feel like there's the possibility for Edward to see how the Coven treats Bella and draw comparisons within the pack, but more importantly see first hand the strength within Bella. What exactly she's capable of. It seemed hinted at, so I'll throw this out as well -- Bella using her powers in wolf form. Rosalie will probably challenge Bella, so seeing Bella whip her butt would be great too. Not much else I'd look forward to or specifically that the hints and foreshadowing hasn't lent to me believe that I'll get to see it.
This was great and I'm looking forward to book 2. I'm torn, I'm happy that I'll be here at the beginning, but I also prefer reading with a buffer. Though, as long as it updates consistently I'm happy.
Cheers to your inspiration hitting you like a truck and to the completion of a wonderful story. 20/10 would buy the series and fall in love with new characters and your style of world building if ever published.
With roses in full bloom,
Tea
Author's Response:
I seriously had to take a picture of this review and share it with some friends! Your words really mean a lot to me, thank you!
Date: 17 Jan 2020 9:43 PM Title: An Imprint
Love it! Can't wait till Book 2!!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2020 4:01 PM Title: An Imprint
Wow is all I can say. just wow! Great chapter and the way you brought them together! I cannot wait for more
Date: 17 Jan 2020 7:50 AM Title: A New Home
That's another thing I would like to know how did they imprint if she isn't 21.
Date: 17 Jan 2020 7:47 AM Title: An Imprint
Loved it! I just love everything u did with this story! I would like to see more of the witch side and there elements explained and how the pack handles that. But I loved everything u did with this story and I know the next one is going to be just has good.
Date: 17 Jan 2020 4:19 AM Title: A New Home
I'd like to know everyoneev reaction to their mating. I would like to see Rose get her comeuppance. I would also like for her to remember that only her family stood by her and defended her. Alice sat on the sidelines and Carlisle was going to abuse his powers by forcing her to leave and the hateful things the senior Cullen said.
Date: 17 Jan 2020 12:13 AM Title: An Imprint
Love how Aro got out of the way in a hurry. Loved book 1, cant wait for book two!!
Date: 16 Jan 2020 11:37 PM Title: An Imprint
Loved it! For now, I'm just glad Edward and Bella completed the imprint! Later, I'll want to know what the heck Rosalie meant when she used the line from Twilight saying their 'entire family will be implicated' if the two of them start something.
Edward totally redeemed himself here, I think....
Date: 16 Jan 2020 10:22 PM Title: An Imprint
Oh my goodness that was intense I loved it
Date: 16 Jan 2020 10:19 PM Title: An Imprint
:) Loved this. Looking forward to reading Book 2
Date: 16 Jan 2020 9:29 PM Title: An Imprint
Holy sh t! Worth the wait but I want to know what happens next! Loved this story
Date: 16 Jan 2020 8:37 PM Title: An Imprint
She's the stubborn one?!?! Sadly I don't trust Edward, or Rose or Carlisle or Aro at this point. I hope now that the imprint is done (can you say forced marriage) she'll leave just to spite them all. Esp cause you know that Rose and Carlisle are going to go ballistic.
Thanks for writing and sharing
Date: 16 Jan 2020 8:09 PM Title: An Imprint
Amazing, can't wait for book 2
Date: 14 Jan 2020 5:24 AM Title: A New Home
I’m thinking Bella is significantly more powerful than she realizes and so is Edward and that is why they could imprint both as wolves and finally as themselves. Maybe there is something to her being able to not submit to Carlisle? Really love this story.
Date: 13 Jan 2020 10:59 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 13 Jan 2020 9:04 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Oh no
Author's Response:
Sorry?
Date: 12 Jan 2020 10:26 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Ahhhh omg that's where u stop!!! This story too good
Date: 12 Jan 2020 10:26 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Ahhhh omg that's where u stop!!! This story too good
Author's Response:
Sorry! Thank you!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 8:06 PM Title: A Council Meeting
So sad for them both
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 7:58 PM Title: A Council Meeting
This was a great chapter!! I hope Bella and Edward can get it together so that Balls does not have to leave her family! Ready for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 4:24 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Wow! My heart is pumping and can't wait for all to get their just desserts for their prenudices. Whew really know how to build emotions. I am on tender hooks waiting for what's to come.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Sorry I have to leave you on the edge of your seat, but final chapter is being posted on Friday.
Date: 12 Jan 2020 2:16 PM Title: A Council Meeting
:-)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 12 Jan 2020 2:16 PM Title: A Council Meeting
OMG. Men are such bastards and cowards. Don't blame Bella for leaving. Hell all the Swans should leave in solidarity to the Cullen BS.
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 12 Jan 2020 1:52 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Please please update soon
Author's Response:
Update on Friday!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 1:37 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Wow! I’m addicted to this story.
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear that!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 12:05 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Edward can definitely go pound sand. I hope he suffers way more than Bella while she's in Italy. Poor Charlie though. How can he stay with the Pack after this betrayal? Good chapter, even though it stung.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 9:21 AM Title: A Council Meeting
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT OMG
I read too fast because it's so good and now I have to wait. I feel like I've been punched in the gut.
Author's Response:
I will update on Friday!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 8:40 AM Title: A Council Meeting
Holy snap what will happen next will Edward follow her will she hide what will happen to the pack
Author's Response:
I will update on Friday!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 8:25 AM Title: A New Home
WOW can't wait for more!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2020 7:29 AM Title: A Council Meeting
OMG!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I KNOW!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 7:36 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
We're almost at the prologue. Is she going to hear things from him that make her walk away because she feels less than or because they are awful to her. Rose and the rest of the cullens are full of crap and Edward better choose her or else. I'm tired of her taking everyone's crap. She is more powerful then the wolves or the witches combined. It's called hybrid vigour. When you combine two thing that are usually fairly homogeneous within themselves, the new thing usually is much heartier because it takes on the strengths of the two. Bella has already floored the witches with her power and I think the fact that she is mating with Edward before her 21st should tell the wolves her power.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a fantastic review and I LOVE your thoughts! Thank you!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 6:46 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
Love this story hope u update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 3:11 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
What is going to happen? I am sitting on the edge of my seat reading this! Poor Bella this is all so hard on her. Seems she is alway left in the dark about alot of things. Thank goodness for Leah. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I hope you forgive me for putting you guys through the emotional wringer! Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 12:24 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
Love it can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 12:11 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
:)
Author's Response:
;-)
Date: 10 Jan 2020 11:30 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
I suddenly can't stand Rosalie. What a turncoat she turned out to be. I'm also a bit miffed at Edward. He seems to want it both ways.
Leah is a rock star. Love her! The main thing I'm hoping for now is for Bella to find her backbone, showing a bit of strength and power to the doubters around her.
Author's Response:
:-) Thank you so much for leaving a review!
Date: 10 Jan 2020 11:20 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
Ugg! Cockbockers! Here comes the drama! Love this story but your killing me!
Author's Response:
I hope you forgive me for keeping you guys on the edge of your seat!
Date: 10 Jan 2020 9:20 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
Oh shit, I have a bad feeling about this meeting. Great update.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10 Jan 2020 7:58 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
Yea.... I'd be pissed about everyone keeping me in the dark too. Rose is Def not a friend.
Author's Response:
Agreed!
Date: 10 Jan 2020 7:13 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
Omg! Love love this story! Every chapter gets better! I can't wait too find out what happens
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 08 Jan 2020 2:39 PM Title: A Close Call
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
We are getting close!
Date: 08 Jan 2020 1:08 AM Title: A Close Call
Gah, another fantastic chapter that leaves me wanting for more, y'all are doing a great job with this story! I hope y'all had a grrrreat(as Tony the Tiger would say) holiday!
Author's Response:
We are getting closer!
Date: 07 Jan 2020 3:02 PM Title: A Close Call
Oh yes Edward, it's go time! I'm all caught up and have added your story to my favorites so I don't miss your next update. Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Almost the weekend!
Date: 06 Jan 2020 3:12 AM Title: A Connection
I'm so excited to find a good wolf story!
I've been switching back and forth all afternoon between reading on fanfiction, then coming here to check out the pictures. Fabulous job so far. The relationship between Edward and Bella is compelling and is sure to have some frustration ahead. I'm looking forward to all of it! Just don't torture us too much. lol.
Date: 05 Jan 2020 10:13 PM Title: A Close Call
what a cliffhanger!! how old is Bella here? can't remember if it's been said. can't wait for next update :)
Author's Response:
Bella is about 1 month away from her 21st birthday!
Date: 05 Jan 2020 9:59 PM Title: A Close Call
Yes!
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 05 Jan 2020 9:06 PM Title: A Close Call
Glad Leah was there to help her.
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 05 Jan 2020 5:53 PM Title: A Close Call
:)
Author's Response:
Weekend is coming up!