Date: 15 Dec 2022 3:14 AM Title: Epilogue
Great epilogue!
Date: 14 Dec 2022 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
Date: 27 Sep 2022 1:48 PM Title: Epilogue
I was not expecting Renee and charlie...they never loved their daughter. I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 05 Dec 2021 6:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow, what a roller coaster ride of emotions! I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 18 Nov 2021 5:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Love your story. Can't wait for more crime stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:49 AM Title: Epilogue
Nice ending. Looking forward to the next installment
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 17 Nov 2021 1:40 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this. Looking forward to the next instalment
Author's Response:
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 16 Nov 2021 5:09 PM Title: Epilogue
I can't believe it's over! I have read both stories and they were amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 16 Nov 2021 3:41 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. So glad Bella and Edward are still together better than ever.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 10 Nov 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 09 Nov 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
Definitely don't get on Bella's bad side.
Author's Response:
Lol, definitely not!
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 29
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Nov 2021 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for explaining how things came about. I loved Jasper and Emmett's reactions.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2021 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
:) I'm happy to hear that there is to be a third instalment
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 26 Oct 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my!!!!!! Renee!!!!!!!! Wow. She was crazy, going to kill her own grandson. How did she live all those years helping take care of the children she claimed to hate?
Author's Response:
Playing the long game, same as Esme in Fallen Angel.
Date: 22 Oct 2021 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
YAY!!!! She's alive. You had me scared. It could be Quinn. A pissed off kid could do pretty much anything
Author's Response:
We just don't know!
Date: 20 Oct 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 20 Oct 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great story can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 19 Oct 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
I trusted you and was hoping it was just a trick. Is Quinn the mole or has he been taken hostage? Can't wait for answers.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that!
Date: 14 Oct 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ugh where is the hidden sniper deadly and not dead
Author's Response:
Deadly for sure
Date: 13 Oct 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is there really a support group for this story? wow!! I mean you did say in the beginning that nothing is as it seems...so how is it that people are freaking out:( this reminds me of games of thrones freakout support group:)
Author's Response:
There is, it's the Angst Freak Out Room. Not just because of the stress, but because they love to talk about who the mole is and what they think truly happened to Bella, whether she's dead or alive...
Date: 13 Oct 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
OK I wannt to know, is Bella still alive.?
Author's Response:
That's what everyone wants to know!
Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 12 Oct 2021 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok, I'm kind of confused. Who is Zion....a terrorists group, right??? Who is in charge of Zion???? Is Charlie working for Zion???
Author's Response:
They are a terrorist group with roots in the mafia, yes. Holden explains a bunch of it in chapter 9. Ivan is the man in charge, but they've just learned Charlie was involved.
Date: 10 Oct 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sick
Author's Response:
Then I don't think you'll like the next chapter either.
Date: 09 Oct 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
I need LOTS of WINE and a few cookies. You are stressing me out. WHY is Quinn not attacking Edward??? What has happened to Bella???? Are they just going to leave her body there?????? Is she really dead????? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!!! 😘😘😘
Author's Response:
Quinn might need time to process what happened, but he definitely goes after Edward a few times.
Date: 06 Oct 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Edward hasn't killed her
Author's Response:
We'll have to see!
Date: 06 Oct 2021 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie? Please fix this. She can't be dead
Author's Response:
It could be!
Date: 05 Oct 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
Unbrlievable..... Don't know if I will continue this story. This is a HARD LIMIT
Author's Response:
It's a matter of trust.
Date: 05 Oct 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
What is going on?????????? This is a little different than the beginning of the story. There is more here than in the 1st chapter. I went back and read it last week. What the hell has Edward done? How and why did he bring Quinn to watch his dad shot and kill his mother. That is just wrong.
Author's Response:
It's a little different because I expanded on it, but the dialogue was copied.
Date: 30 Sep 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
So stubborn. So hard headed.
Author's Response:
Maybe!
Date: 28 Sep 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 28 Sep 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm beginning to not like this story. I read to decompress. This is pissing me off. And if Edward actually shoots Bella in the chest I might be done with this. I love u as an author . But the anxiety I'm feeling from the anger at putting a wedge between those 2 is getting to be too much.
Author's Response:
I won't be upset if you need to take a break.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
My heart breaks for both of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Sep 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.
Author's Response:
Well, he's never going to spank her for actual punishment ...