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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 49

Love that her friends throw her a surprise party.  I hope they catch Jane and Alec. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

I'm thrilled for rose and em

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 48

I am happy for Rose and Emmett.  I hope Bella can do some true healing  now that everything is in the open. Wait.......I just thought about this......Liam is Riley's father.  Liam is also Edward's uncle. Sooooo, Edward and Riley are related.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 47

I don't feel like Ben will be a threat.  Glad Bella found something to do with Riley.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2022 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 46

I hope aro follows through with his promises.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

I'm glad that went way better than they or I expected! 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 46

I'm glad that went way better than they or I expected! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2022 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 46

Wow, Aro surprised me.  He did not really defend  his children.  I think it was because he already had his suspicions.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2022 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh my!!!! Are we finally going to find out what exactly happened to both of them????? You know they could let Riley stay with Jacob while they meet with Aro.  

Reviewer: kareng Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

I love your fictions.

Had to laugh at this chapater.  Usually, I ignore spelling errors.  But this one, put a different picture to the scene.  Canning vs. caning.  Picturing Edward being "beat" by a can of beets.  (:o )

 

looking forward to the next chapter. 

 

Thank you for all you do.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 44

I still do not understand why Edward stayed in his contract with Jane. Did he even have a contract? I would have just left. No one would have blamed him for leaving.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2022 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 43

Things will be interesting with Riley living with them.  Lol. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2022 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Thank you for the update..Riley is finally with his MOM.  I hope things go well for them..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 42

Thank you for the updae..well done..Bella got to let Jane know she means business.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2022 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 42

So proud of Edward for finally putting Jane in her place ‘ 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm confused with end of the chapter and them talking about Jess. If it's her husband what would he be investigating??  I'm glad Edward called Bella on her bullshit. If she wants him to fight for justice then she needs to fight for justice.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 41

I just don't understand why Edward just didn't leave Jane. Why did he stay? I understand he let his apartment go but dang he could have stayed with a friend or I think a homeless shelter would have been better than what he went through.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 40

I hope Bella can get justice!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2022 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

I feel for Edward and the tension he is experiencing 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

I think Laim is behind the drink. Why is Edward's age all of a sudden bothering him?  Aren't Bella and Edward around the same age??? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 38

Some how I missed this chapter.  I love a cheeky Edward.  Aro seemed fairly nice in this chapter.  Who was the vodka from?????? Laim?????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2022 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thank you for the update..well done..I wonder will bella except.  Who brought Bella a drink?  until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 37

Cock blocked by her dad. Lol!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2022 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2022 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 37

Thank you for the update..well done

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2022 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2022 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 36

Good job Jake. Great chapter getting Bella back to her Dom self

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2022 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am glad that Jacob could help her. I can't wait for her and Edward to scene and also to talk. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad Edward is standing up Bella and making her see that she needs some type of help. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh Bella take a moment to recover and savor the fact that you and Edward are OK. Being so pushy is just a scare tactic to cope. Time for a trip to therapy first. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 34

So loving this story right now, can't wait for the next chapter x

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella is kind of a bitch when she sent Edward to his room. She said she had to remind him of his place and that he had denied her. They were NOT  in a scene.  They were boyfriend and girlfriend.  Rules are different.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh wow.  Jane and Alec definitely need to be stopped.  Glad Charlie was more understanding than I thought he would be.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 33

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

I hope that Bella and Charlie can resolve the Riley situation amicably  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

Can't wait for Bella and Charlie to talk. Love that Edward is being more forward. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2022 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

Thank you for the updates ..well done..wow Bella got hurt really bad. I'm happy she is on the mend. Grateful  Jake showed up..until you post again

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31

Whew, that was a wicked scary situation.  It's definitely going to take some time to heal.

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 31

This chapter was definitely worth the wait. Edward has certainly been through alot but he is hanging in there. I hope that we get to see more of the Drs. Cullen. ;-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh my. Bella and Edward are both so emotional.  I think they need some down time and just be with each other. Holding each other.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my goodness. I wasn't expecting that cliffhanger! 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 30

Whyyyy?!!! The cliffhanger 'til Thurday!!! I can not wait. Poor Edward having to see Bella like that and poor Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my gosh,  somehow I missed this chapter.  I am glad I realized it. Another great chapter.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

Poor Bella.  I hope she is alright 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

NO!!!!!!!!!!  Please don't leave us hanging!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

I like that Bella is giving Edward more control over their non playtime. Love how Edward can make Bella lose herself. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) Happy New Year 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2021 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update..well done..Rose & Emment are funny..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 27

Love Edward's cheeky mess. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) Happy Christmas to you 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

Glad Edward is getting along with Riley. Small world about Sue and Seth. Can't wait to find out more about that. 

Reviewer: Sanecrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2021 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25

Every chapter makes Bella less redeemable. She wants to waltz in, complain about every thing Charle has done for her and whine that Riley doesn't wear and eat what she finds acceptable? Every time Edward makes a true statement she can't handle, she calls him a brat and threatens to spank him. How's that going to work for Riley? You can't throw a small town kid that's enjoyed the bachelor lifestyle into a big city with a psycho loveless mother. If Bella wanted to help, she'd write a monthly check, fly in every other month, NOT uproot him and force him to live in the playhouse.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2021 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well, I'm surprised that she introduced Riley as her sone but at least its some progress.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Why didn't Bella give him up for adoption? 

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love your story can't wait for more !  poor Riley to hear that .

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

That erupted quickly. Really hoping to seeing more of Riley and Edward and I hope Bella deals with her feelings toward Riley and grews more close to him. Great story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2021 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

I can see why Riley was upset with what Bella said. She kind of walked right into that one. Charlie could have found a better way to bring up that subject. Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Why is Edward being such a brat???? What has gotten into him. So Bella did say RED but it had nothing to do with their relationship . You were so sneaky with your teaser. Lol. 

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love it wow so very much

thank you

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm excited to see how things unfold with their relationship 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

I hope Laim gets what he deserves for killing Edward's parents and for raping Bella.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ph my. I did NOT see that coming.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no!!!!!!!! Bella has not told Edward about Laim so Edward doesn't know to keep Laim away from Bella. Does Aro know what happened  between Bella and Laim???? If he does he is a sick fucker. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

She definitely  needs to tell Edward.  A Dom/Domme and sub should not keep secrets.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh my goodness! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2021 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: phenx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

Not Liam! I hope Edward is a misbehaving sub again if Liam gets anywhere near Bella.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2021 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh shit what just happened 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2021 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love it wow that has to be so hard for her mentally 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hope Bella comes clean to Edward sooner than later 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

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Date: 25 Nov 2021 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

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