Date: 26 Apr 2024 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Lots of changes. Sasha seems happyy with the arrangements so far. But when they all get settled in Washington, will she feel differently. Maggie will be there but not iving with her, unless Edward and Bella decide otherwise. She may feel differently with the new surroundings and situations.
Date: 20 Apr 2024 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
That went smoothly. Hopefully, Sasha will never know the heartache her mother caused her father and she'll accept Edward whole-heartedly.
Sherry
Date: 25 Mar 2024 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Very interesting twist you gave us. Kind of makes sense though
Date: 23 Mar 2024 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oooohhhhh!!! I considered the baby was still alive somewhere, but then dismissed it. You trickster, you; I love it. I can't wait for more.
Sherry
Date: 22 Mar 2024 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, Edward may have a daughter. I wonder how old she is. This will changes Edward's and Bella's plans. But they will take it in stride just like they have everything else. Bella is a good influence on Edward.
Bella really knows her pasta business, shhe got all those dishes done in quick time, no sweat.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2024 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
That is a shocking possibility to have all of a sudden. What amount of therapy is that poor girl going to need? Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Feb 2024 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Lot of information to take in.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2024 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
A lot of the heavy. Thankful for some of the sweetness at the end. Great chapter. However, I can't help to think Kate isn't going to pop up alive at some point.
Sherry
Date: 30 Jan 2024 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Youn are amazing
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2024 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well all of Bella's crew got the information they wanted. It seems like they are going to have a full house soon. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Jan 2024 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Things have caught up to Diego and the others. The building was blown up to hide evidence. It's not safe to him to come to Bella and Edward. They don't need to be involved.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2024 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow. A lot to process. Expanding ES is a great idea. We knew the FBI was honing in on Tanya and that gang. IDK if Diego is completely innocent. But I have a feeling he'll be living above the new expansion now, and maybe working at Etched Swan. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
:) Happy New Year to you too
Date: 05 Jan 2024 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holly cow that is a lot to take in WOW
Date: 05 Jan 2024 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love your words
Date: 05 Jan 2024 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
I want to find Kate and beat her to death lol to aggresive
Date: 05 Jan 2024 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Very nice guy and got to love Jane lol
Date: 05 Jan 2024 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor guy he is in the right place now.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2023 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Why would Leah leave them alone to go out to eat if she's suppose to be their bodyguard? Everything seems to be a little too smooth at the moment. So is that the quite before the storm?
Sherry
Date: 23 Dec 2023 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Fred seemed interesting. Very quiet. Maybe that bugs some people. Hope everyone has a safe and fun night.
Date: 03 Dec 2023 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow. So many twists and turns. So many people involved. Edward fit in seamlessly with the shop. But now his past relationship and friendship could put the Swan kids in danger. It's good knowing there are people watching out for them. But to know they have been in danger makes Bella uneasy.
Date: 30 Nov 2023 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now that wasn't the type of drama I was expecting.
Sherry
Date: 30 Nov 2023 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
A lot of information to sort through in that chapter.
Date: 29 Nov 2023 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
This went into a totally different direction then I was expecting. I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2023 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another fantastic chapter. Love the dymanic of group and how well they all work and play together. Jane is a riot. I cracked up at Diago's "tip" for her.
Sherry
Date: 14 Nov 2023 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Diego is a hit with everyone and Edward really enjoys hanging with his friend. He's amazed at the talent that Edward is surrounded with.
Date: 29 Oct 2023 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh, oh. He let that slip, "...they will love you, just like the rest of us do." Meaning him. Nice the nurse let Bella stay in the other bed. Somebody, Carlisle maybe, has some pull in that hospital.
Date: 24 Oct 2023 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nothing better than reading E/B falling for each other without even realizing it.I wonder if Alice or anyone else has noticed how close E/B have gotten. It's going to be interesting to see Diago interacting with Esme and Carlisle. Surely, Diago won't bring his sister with him or tell her where he's going.
Sherry
Date: 24 Oct 2023 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
good chap
FYI - didn't receive an email alert update from ffn
Date: 23 Oct 2023 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
I like this story a lot.
Date: 18 Oct 2023 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
Que história facinanr msis. Xoxo
Date: 08 Oct 2023 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
That woman was crazy. Did she really think she was sexy masturbating on his chair. Bella took good care of that situation. It's bad that the tattoo Edward wants removed was so deep. Sounds like it caused an infection. Hopefully he'll be okay and he will beback to work soon. This may cause complications for his next treatment though, whether the doctor even wants to try removing any more of it.
Date: 06 Oct 2023 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, wow. Things couldn't go smoothly for Edward, could they? I'm glad to see Bella and Edward getting so close.
Sherry
Date: 24 Sep 2023 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward seems to be settling right in with the group. Jane is great, love her snark.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2023 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
I get a kick out of Alice and Emmett being such big eaters; especially when I imagine a tiny Alice eating like a big guy like Emmett. Love that you wrote in Dave Navarro. Gonna check out Duel Diagnosis' website. The relationship that is forming between Edward and Bella is so sweet. Seems like they could be best friends before anything more deep blooms between them. Can hardly wait to read more.
Sherry
Date: 06 Sep 2023 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! What an evil witch Tanya was. To drug Edward and tell Kate he fucked her. Whether it was true or not Kate should have talked to Edward. And then to abort his baby and put that tattoo on him as a permanent reminder of what she did. She can't have loved him if she believed her sister.
Date: 06 Sep 2023 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait until they get together, but I realize it will take time.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Kate and Tanya are horrible individuals. I'm surprised Edward hasn't had that tattoo removed before now. What a tragic reminder. Seems Bella and Edward are getting close enough to comfront in such an intimate manner.
Sherry
Date: 28 Aug 2023 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
He is a perfect fit
Date: 26 Aug 2023 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, there's a backstory there with Irina, Kate and Tanya from Chicago. An unpleasant one. His co-workers are already promoting Edward's Japanese style. That's good. He shouldn't be lacking for work.
Date: 26 Aug 2023 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Each chatper I get pulled in a little deeper. It cracks me up that Alice eats as much as Emmett.
Sherry
Date: 25 Aug 2023 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this story and anxiously await the next chapters.
Date: 17 Aug 2023 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Edward is fitting right into this crazy bunch. Emmett and Alice trying to out eat each other. I can't believe they ordered food in the drive thru and he went inside to get some more. And the snicker salad, did you make that up or is that a real thing? Seems Alice and Jasper have some kinky sex life.
Author's Response:
Snicker Salad is a for real thing adn I personally love it. When I make it I do not really measure anything, so I am horrible at sharing the receipe. I peel and dice cut a bunch of apples, I typically use granny smith becasue the tartness helps cut the sweetness. I mix together a whole package of cream cheese and half a bag of powdered sugar after it is mixed well I add a full container of cool whip extra creamy, then fold in all the apples and set it aside and then I take snickers candy bars which i put into the freezer long enough to make them easier to cut but do not let them get fully frozen. i generally cut mine long ways and then dice them as best as I can. I usually also add some extra caramel. Once you have the candy cut mix it and the extra caramel into the apple mixture. let it chill in the fridge for a bit and enjoy. I like sweets, and they are not for everyone, but this is a very popular dish when going to pot lucks for sure, but pricey to make a big batch. You can find varying receipes online, but I personally do not like the ones that have marshmellow fluff in them.
Glad you are enjoying the story. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2023 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Perfect chapter... good times before the drama llama hits. I think the wolf pack is going to trash Etched Swan when they find out Edward is working there.
Sherry
Date: 13 Aug 2023 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just found this story today (busy couple of months), but I love it. I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Maybe a pin up of his girl who left him once he had his leg injury?
Date: 09 Aug 2023 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wonder what the story about the ink is. Too bad the apartment above the shop is used for storage and special clients. It would be ideal since it's complete. But the basement apartment should work. Edward and Bella would just have to share the kitchen.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2023 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved your momma's come back.
Emmett does have a way with words, right? Sounds like this is going to be a great merger for them all. I'm guessing the tat he wants removed is something involving an ex. Maybe the ex will show up and cause some drama. Edwaard has divulged a lot of his personal info about being an artist and some about his military career, but he's not touched base much on his personal life. Nor, has the gang told him much about themselves. I need the next chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2023 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward will definitely say, "Yes, to the chair." Sounds like Moonshade Quest has some type of vendetta against Bella. No doubt there will be more troubles brew with Edward joining the ranks of Etched Swan since he declined their offer. Can't wait to read more.
Sherry
Date: 01 Aug 2023 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Everyone is pretty excited about his art. Seems like he would be a real asset to the shop and he could do what he loves there.
Date: 29 Jul 2023 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is perfect JUST PERFECT lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2023 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read more !
Date: 11 Jul 2023 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more. My first guess is to say it is probably Jake entering the house. My second guess would be Rose and/or Alice. I'm ready to read the next chapter. This story has me hook, line, and sinker.
Sherry
Date: 11 Jul 2023 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice info on tats. He is a perfect fit
Date: 10 Jul 2023 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward has an amazing body of work. I googled watercolor tatoos and they are beautiful.
Date: 05 Jul 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm all in for this one. Great start. I have to say I like this Jane very much.
Sherry
Date: 02 Jul 2023 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Promising start...I'm loooking forward to seeing how this turns out.
Date: 02 Jul 2023 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Promising start...I'm loooking forward to seeing how this turns out.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2023 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this. Can't wait for more!
Date: 29 Jun 2023 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is a good guy. Hee has some issues but he's still a gentleman.
Date: 28 Jun 2023 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Enjoyed very much
Date: 28 Jun 2023 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it so far!