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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2024 8:00 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

Hmm is Maggie Charlie's mate? 

Glad Rose is realizing her mistakes. 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 7:14 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

I really like Charlie, he's going to make an interesting vampire.

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 6:58 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

I am enjoying this story.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2024 4:17 PM Title: The Future Looks…! Different

So Bella and Charlie are about to wake up.

Emmett and Jasper are getting more annoyed by Esme.   And she is just being a lump.   I love seeing Rose's growth though.

Maggie's POV was interesting.   So she knows Alice is full of crap, feels trapped in Ireland and has some wander lust.   Lots up in the air there....

I wonder if Peter and Charlie will buddy around or hard core train or a mix.   Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2024 6:43 PM Title: How Wrong Can One person Be

Glad Peter is looking out for Charlie and Bella.  At least Carlisle and Esme realize what morons they were. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2024 3:21 PM Title: How Wrong Can One person Be

Esme and Carlisle seem to have come to the same realizations at different times.   There might be hope for them as a vamp couple yet.

I'm not sure about Rose and Emmett yet, but hopefully Rose has learned and accepted she isn't all that.

Here's to Peter distracting Charlie so that Bella doesn't kill him.   gah....    I'm glad that he is planning on feeding Peter and Charlotte's way.   Maybe Bella will too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2024 6:16 AM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Esme is being just too wishy washy to me.   Is she REALLY siding with Emmett, Jasper and Bella?    Or is she just spying on them and their actions or something?   hmmm.....

I love that Jasper and Bella are looking out for each other already, despite not being together or knowing much about each other.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 10:44 PM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Can't wait to see Bella and the Chief team up on Malice and Fuckward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2024 10:44 PM Title: Revenge Comes Cold, Forgiveness Frozen

Can't wait to see Bella and the Chief team up on Malice and Fuckward. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 3:57 PM Title: Edward Two, Swans Nil

Loved seeing B's POV of all going on.   Such a smart woman. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2024 2:15 PM Title: Edward Two, Swans Nil

Bella has some pretty spot on thoughts about events and people while she is changing.    I love how she is already trying to protect Jasper.    She is going to be a force to be reckoned with.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2024 2:28 PM Title: Pick Your Hill, Live Or Die On It

Peter is da bomb.  Glad Rose is finally starting to see her mistakes.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2024 2:38 PM Title: Pick Your Hill, Live Or Die On It

Peter's knowledge spurts sure come in handy.   Just driving along with 2 dead bodies in your truck and not knowing why is crazy.   LOL   I'm excited about his "visions" of Charlie chasing Edward down and making him pay.

Rose and Carlisle have finally faced their mistakes, but Edward is still blaming everyone else.   Rose's plan to restore Bella's truck is kind.   Knowing the good hearted nature of Emmett, Bella and Charlie...she'll be forgiven.  :)

Alice is a walking dead woman.   I just wonder who is gonna get her first.   mwahahaha....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2024 4:47 AM Title: His Sister, Her Father

More please. I am loving this story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2024 10:48 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Love Em.  He was always the big teddy bear we all need.   Go Peter and Charlotte.   Glad Bella will have Charlie in her life. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2024 10:48 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Love Em.  He was always the big teddy bear we all need.   Go Peter and Charlotte.   Glad Bella will have Charlie in her life. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 6:59 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

I'm sad that Emmett has to feel the pull as he leaves his bitch of a mate.     I guess they really are unfortunately mates.

Charlie figured out a whole lot about the who and what of happenings even while he was dieing and or changing.   He sure is observant.    Peter and Charlotte had to come fix more of the shit heads mistakes.   I see they've learned nothing.

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2024 12:22 PM Title: His Sister, Her Father

Loved it!

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2024 6:16 PM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

More please. Liking this story a lot.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2024 6:30 AM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Well at least Carlisle realizes how screwed he is.  I wonder how long it will take for Rose.  Malice and Fuckward are just lost causes. 

I love Peter and Char. 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2024 3:53 AM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Umm a big truck for a transitioning Charlie in the back maybe... looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2024 6:19 PM Title: Out Of Sight, Not Of Mind

Carlisle is reaping what he allowed to be sowed.   mwahahaha....   The remaining Cullens emotions are going to wreak havoc.    And I'm down for watching it unfold.   ;)

Charlotte has a great read on the "non-personalities" of the Cullens and has figured out a lot about Bella just with some subtle clues in her room and closet.    She is really intuitive.

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2024 8:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

new reader to your story.  very interesting.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

Reviewer: MajorSoldier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2024 12:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

I love this and hope to see more.

Reviewer: MajorSoldier Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2024 12:19 PM Title: Not Quite Right

I love this and hope to see more.

Reviewer: Angelsoultaker Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2024 4:08 AM Title: Not Quite Right

More please. I am liking this so far.

Reviewer: EMHW_Bear Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2024 2:05 PM Title: Not Quite Right

This is very good. It sucked me right in and I'm eager for more. 

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2024 12:22 AM Title: Not Quite Right

Great start to, I'm sure, another wonderful story. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 9:42 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Ooooh can't wait to see where you take it. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 8:42 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Jasper will have put the fear of god into at least Carlisle with that official letter.       I'm wondering if hateful Rose is even really kind Emmett's mate.   They are just too different.    Thanks for gifting us a new wonderful story. 

Reviewer: TheWhitlocksGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2024 4:27 PM Title: Not Quite Right

Yay!

I am so very excited for this one!  My favorites are on the side of right and Esme while a little nieve isn't willing to shove her head in the sand.

 

I hope you had an amazing holiday season and look forward to what you have in store for us!  You are the best 🤩

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