Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:02 AM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
How sweet are Esme and Carlisle? That was an awkward conversation, but comparatively, it could have been a whole lot worse! I mean...they could have given the birds and bees talk...
I am very nervous every time Edward and Bella get intimate in a non-private place. I just feel their luck is wearing thin...
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:55 PM Title: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.
This was a much happier chapter than the last...i'm sure it won't stay that way for long though...
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:05 PM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
Good girl Bella. I would have done the same thing.
I can't believe the first thing Charlie demands when he gets home is dinner. He does treat Bella like a maid and is so unappreciative of her. Can't wait to hear Charlie's reaction!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:15 PM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
Could tell that was going to happen! I wonder how Edward and Bella and Charlie will react in this situation, especially considering Bella told Charlie she was going to see Edward. I am nervous that Charlie will book Edward for some misdemenour and send him to jail! I wonder if Charlie was purposely following Bella and Edward?
I was totally expecting Charlie to come bursting in during Edward and Bella's bedroom moment. I don't know how much longer they will be able to get away with the overnight stays. I think Charlie is acting completely irrationally, and as a result, Bella is acting like an immature teenager in response. It is a really unhealthy relationship they are developing. But i have to say, if i was Bella, and my dad treated me like that, i would already be out the door with a bag!
I think Edward is right about Jacob, and hopefully Bella will start listening to him, because Jacob will probably play a bigger factor later on!
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 9:49 PM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
love it :) im so glad its a series and not just this one story because i dont think i'm going to be able to stop reading it. Also your authors notes re so funny, i normally just skim them, but i actully spend time to read yours, your such a good writer although youre making me spend hours reading at a time when i should probably be working but oh well haha.
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
I fell in love with the Cullens all over again in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
About fucking time. I've been reading like a fiend trying to get to this part!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:48 PM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
wow :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:00 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
Wow! I can't wait to read the rest of this! If I read everything right there's actually another part to this?!? I love having something to read and thank you for taking the time to write.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
i love you story you have a real talent. Dont let anyone tell you different
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
OMG! I love it! It's the perfect plan!?!?!?!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.
I'm so happy she woke up!!!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:36 AM Title: Ch14 - That's why I need you.
ARE YOU F-ING KIDDING ME?????? I can't believe Charlie is still trying to make trouble! What a jerk! I can't believe you left us on a cliff!?!?!?!?!??!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:15 AM Title: Ch13 - For the love of God!
I don't know if that's legal...17 year old moving in with 21 year old... and going to High School...? I thought the legal age was 18...everywhere?
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:58 AM Title: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?
LOL! Your ANs are funny! Love it!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:42 AM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
OMG! Love it!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
Holy HELL!!!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:46 AM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
Her dad is such an ASS!!! I hate him! Jake had better be on her side soon!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
Love it! I can't wait to continue reading this later! I have to work or I'd be here all day!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:15 PM Title: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!
You have no idea how funny i found this chapter!!! Love this!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:59 PM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
OMG! I totally love your story!!! Just the second chapter and I'm yours!!! Edward is soooooo sweet and i love him!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
a fab story with loads of moments that were great, bellas plan sounds great i'll move on to the sequel to find out more thanks tracy
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:36 AM Title: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.
well she woke up eventually, thankgod and charlie and edward have patched up their differences this is so much better for bella, great chapter with only one more to go
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:12 AM Title: Ch14 - That's why I need you.
what a way to lose her virginity, edward was veryy attentive to her, but what was she thinking, she cant have wanted icecream that much, i hope bella is fine
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:26 AM Title: Ch13 - For the love of God!
moving in together wow but they are so good together, i bet charlie is regretting his crap now
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?
life is good for bella right now aside from dickhead jake
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
i think esme & carlisle are sensible parents realising how teenagers are and working with it, and in the garden what a risk ha ha
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.
i think it's about time bella got some peace and happiness in her life, let her savour and enjoy
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
charlie brought that on himself i dont blame bella, charlies stunt with the speeding ticket proves that and the severity of the grounding was ott, point is wil he be a stubbon man and refuse to admit he was wrong?
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
so, what now charlie is stalking them? charlie is heading for a daughter less life, oh and bella the rebel running off to the cullen house cant say i blame her, more please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:54 PM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
jesus charlie is an idiot can he not see what he is doing, does he not think how awkard this is for jake to be constantly turned down, he is a bit dense also, now on to bath time yummy
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
was that a near marriage proposal i read by edward? a great chapter please charlie is playing with fire pushing bella towards jacob and being openly hostile to edward, bella and edward had such a greatr day (minus the looking at alices bobs thing) but out and about, more please
Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:47 PM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
charlie might not be happy but he should put more trust into his daughters choice and trust her to make good choices for herself, and i think it's safe to say both bella & edwards both enjoyed the afternoons activities, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:05 PM Title: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!
charlie obviously has a major blow out at bella & edward, i can see it now and charlie banning boyfriends never works, cant wait to see feisty bella standing up for her man, more please
Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:56 AM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
glad it's not over there's lots more to explore, bella got her man now she needs to face her father, edward got his girl now he need to learn not to mess up, fab stuff
Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:56 AM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
glad it's not over there's lots more to explore, bella got her man now she needs to face her father, edward got his girl now he need to learn not to mess up, fab stuff
Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
oh this is so cool, this story is fun with quite long chapters the ff ones must be massive if all 3 are one over there, anyway the family are having a great day out, but what will occur in the alcove? this plan of edward i suspect is not going to work he'll never want to say goodbye
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
intresting story, i saw the sequel on the recommended and thought it sounded cool, liking it so far, still trying to work out edwards motivation, reading on to find out more
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
loved it....loved the story it was epicly awesome
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:12 AM Title: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.
OME awesome loved it
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:29 AM Title: Ch14 - That's why I need you.
OME EPIC
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:12 AM Title: Ch13 - For the love of God!
loved it fukin awesome
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:27 AM Title: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?
loved it
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:36 AM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
loved it awesome
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.
awesome loved it
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
OME EPIC....serious...but go bella :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:33 AM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
awesome loved it
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:53 AM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
loved it awesome
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
loved it
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:07 PM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
loved it awesome
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:01 PM Title: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!
awesome
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:09 PM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
awwww...loved it...edward is such a sweetie
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:20 PM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
loved it awesome
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
loved it...loved edward fukin hot
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:03 PM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
holy moly, you cut us off just before it gets hot!!! can't wait for the next chappie, woo hoo!! gotta go find it!!!!!!!! thanks, lets keep going.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:48 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
loving this story. can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:49 PM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
Great chapter. That talk was awkward. Made me laugh. You're great and your story is amazing. I just hope Edward isn't going to do something stupid and leave because he thinks it's better for her. Cause that's just dumb. :LOL: Can't wait to read on :D
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:21 PM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
Amazing story.... seriously... you've gotten me addicted. Can't wait for the rest of it. But I love it so far, and I'm sure I'll keep loving it :D
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:28 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
Love it!!!! Badass Edward makes me drool.....
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:56 AM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
Oh awesome! I'm so glad she is moving out. Charlie is severely getting on my nerves. I want to go punch him. I can only imagine the intensity of the anger Edward and Bella are feeling.
Great story so far. Can't wait to read the rest of it!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:19 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
This first chapter was really good. But what's with bad ass Edward? He's better then the good one. Just sayin`.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:16 PM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
Loved this story! Can't wait to start reading the next one. Great job!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:05 PM Title: Ch14 - That's why I need you.
Yes, I enjoyed this chapter!
I think, that it will come to a happy end with Charlie.
The first sex is always a little bit ..... but it worked.
The car accident isn`t that big disaster and so i`ll see what`s going on!
Best greets
Bussy
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:10 AM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
Ok I am done. I like. I Like very much because 1-you actually had them talk and tell each other how they feel, two she isn't over the top I don't need anyone nor can I accept gifts because I am poor and money is evil LOL. And three I love making Phil creepy not many people use him in the plot he is just mentioned. I like making him a bad guy. Oh Edward should've punched Emmett for the virgin comment Emmett is actually somewhat of a dousche and Rose is the better half in this story. I will be starting part duex tomorrow but I see you haven't started part Thrice. I want the pitter patter of little Cullen feet. Until the next story adios.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:10 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
i can't believe this story is so good. and it's only the first chapter
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:29 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
i can't believe this story is so good. and it's only the first chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 6:13 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
Ok this had no lemons yet and it was hott. Good Job. I am just starting to read. I will update again tomorrow after I read a few more chapters.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:15 PM Title: Ch13 - For the love of God!
.... so Alice and Bella have some girltime and some girltalk!
Go on
Bussy
Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:03 PM Title: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?
... I enjoyed this chapter a lot, because Bella has become acquainted with a real family.
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:06 PM Title: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.
... this was a nice afternoon in the garden.
Go on.
Bussy
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:55 PM Title: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.
This isn`t the end - no this is the beginning of the new life for Bella with a real family at her side.
Bussy
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:41 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
soo many words ......
Date: 13 Feb 2010 4:36 PM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
Moving out is the best for Bella at this moment!
Go on...
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:16 PM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
So Charlie is the "Stasi" from Forks. So bad!
What will happen next?
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:29 PM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
Oh, oh what a Charlie! A father beeing over protective for his daughter is always a problem.
Will Bella & Edward have some fun in the lavender bath? Or does Charlie come in?
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:20 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
Oh, yes - Edward is a possessive boy - but isn`t it nice to have someone like that? And what`s about the Cullen`s intuition?
What will happen during the frist date?
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
Interesting set up!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:29 PM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
Hey, I`m just at the hairdresser - and I`m also red in the face.
What a story! So Charlie isn`t happy but he has to be in some way!
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:38 PM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
.... so Edward is a gentleman! What will Charlie say about this relation?
Go on!
Bussy
Date: 11 Feb 2010 9:35 PM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
What will happen at the alcove with Bella and Edward?
Are you going on with these cliffs?
Best wishes
Bussy
Date: 11 Feb 2010 6:36 PM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
I just started to read this first chapter and I´ll see what`s going on.
With best wishes
Bussy
Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:25 PM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
Wow, Charlie is so manipulative. It is great in that it is bringing alot of tension to the story.
I'm off to read your next drama-filled chapter!
Date: 11 Feb 2010 2:31 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
Things are heating up on all fronts - betweem Bella and Edward, with Charlie, with Jasper and Alice. It's all building up, and i am loving reading it.
I also really liked the parrallel at the alcove with Edward receiving a release this time. A nice moment.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 1:26 AM Title: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!
O-Oh...really looking forward to this confrontation with Charlie. I think it will be cringe worthy!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:33 PM Title: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?
Well, i have to say, that scene in the pond was HOT! Hoping we get to see more of that along the way. There is just something about the seclusion of alcoves, and water, and the need for silence that i find incredibly sexy...add Edward to the mix, and...well......
I am a little suprised that Edward and Bella have confessed their love for each other so early, but kind of understand with it being a continuation of a one-shot.
Can't wait to read more, and apprehensive about the conversation with Charlie.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:14 PM Title: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.
Wow - was not expecting Edward to admit he loves Bella ALREADY! And on top of that, was not expecting Bella to hear Edward's admission. Although, while Carlisle was speaking with Edward, i was thinking 'this convy is going on a long time!'.
I am still very intrigued about Edward's tattoos and hearing the stories behing them, and i hope Bella will ask him again soon.
I am really enjoying their little interactions - the whispered sweet-nothings, the stolen touches...it's adorable. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:12 AM Title: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...
Was looking for a new story to read and thought i would give this one a go. I really like the first chapter - i think you already have me hooked. Your writing flows well and is very easy to read. It creates a great picture in my head so it felt like i was watching a movie the whole time i read the chapter.
I am very intrigued by Edward's tattoos, and what is going to happen next.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2010 11:46 PM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
I liked it, it was so sweet.!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 3:20 PM Title: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.
This was a nice story and I'm very happy with how things worked out in the end. It's too bad about Renee, but I'm really happy about how things went with Charlie.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 2:15 PM Title: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.
Bella's injuries help a lot of crap with Charlie to get snapped into perspective and I'm glad for that. I wonder how much Renee knows of that situation. Also, I'm wondering what exactly Renee meant when she asked Edward if he knew why Bella left. Did she mean from the house that night or from Florida?
Date: 04 Feb 2010 11:36 AM Title: Ch14 - That's why I need you.
I hate how Charlie is spreading lies and being manipulative. I love that Jacob trusts the source and readily believes Bella and makes peace with Edward.
I sex was great. I'm glad you didn't have her orgasm in the act her first time and it was more realistic.
The cliffie was good, though I could kick Bella for being so impetuous. Edward is going to lose his mind!!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.
I'm really dissappointed in Charlie's weak-assed attempts at changing Bella's mind. Edward was so caring and loving with her, plus he had quite a bit of stamina the morning after. I enjoyed the vows E&B have made to one another about having sex and the exploration they want to take after. The Cullen family in general is great. I like that the extended family was there too, showing their support of Bella through and emotional time.
I hope in the chapters to come Charlie comes around a bit, though Bella clearly isn't moving back. After Cinderella gets Prince Charming, she doesn't go back to scrubbing floors!
Date: 03 Feb 2010 5:11 PM Title: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story
I'm glad Bella set aside her anger long enough to put a plan together. I think she would actually have to wait a few months until she's 18 to pull this off in reality, but that's irrelevant in fanfic, so it's all good.
Will Charlie see the error of his ways now or exacerbate the situation?
Date: 03 Feb 2010 4:32 PM Title: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?
The lemon was delicious! Edward getting out at the right time was great, especially because Charlie had a little freak out all on his own. Bella telling her father how she feels was good, but she needs to do more. She needs to calmly and despondently tell him that he's actively pushing her away with his actions.
Her rebellion has been coming. It's too bad they didn't get their date before getting caught, but let's see what how Charlie deals...
Date: 03 Feb 2010 3:19 PM Title: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.
Charlie is totally stupid for handling the situation in this matter. He is singlehandedly ruining his relationship with his daughter. If he hopes to have any contact with her after she turns 18 and graduates high school, he needs to stop throwing Jacob in Bella's face and stop punishing her for her feelings. It's completely unfair to punish Bella because Edward was a bad kid 4 years ago!
Date: 03 Feb 2010 1:31 PM Title: Ch6 - Lalalalalala
I can't wait to see how Jake deals in this situation. What has Charlie told him? Does he think he has a chance or does he see what's going on? Hmmm...
Date: 03 Feb 2010 2:38 AM Title: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.
OK, that lemon was so effing good! Fuckhot!!
Date: 03 Feb 2010 12:45 AM Title: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!
The lemonny bits are getting better. I was disappointed with the pond bit in the earlier chapter as it felt very rushed, but the way you've covered the later one/references were better.
I'm looking forward to Charlie going apeshit on Edward and then Bella turning it on Charlie.