Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:11 PM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
i'm glad james is out of the picture for now because im thinking that he will be back for the climax. he should have never been between edward and bella if you ask me, i believe that james and bella moved completely too fast. if i thought that someone hated me when we were younger and then confess that they liked me i would not just jump into a semi-relationship with them. i would still carry on some resentment
Author's Response:
You were not alone in this. Everyone who's read has voiced this, because everyone was ready (including myself) to get E & B together.
Looking forward to seeing you next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:56 AM Title: Prologue
I really like this chapter. Good job!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it. Hope you will read and review again as you feel moved.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:30 AM Title: You and Me
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 2:13 PM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
I loved it. Bella & James' lunch was all that! James didn't go psycho but he was pissed and hurt as he should have been. I loved this whole chapter especially the Tony part. I can't wait for the concert something tells me Tanya is going to show up or something bad maybe before or after the concert I thinking after. I can feel something a brewing and I like it. Until next time.
Author's Response:
luv4jake:
I am so happy that you're pleased with the story and reading and reviewing it. James was hurt, this is why he reacted the way he did and Bella knows this, but expected him to bow out gracefully. Sometimes our hearts won't allow us to.
Looking forward to seeing your review next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:24 PM Title: Crisis Aftermath
I loved it as usual. I had to kill a bee so I'm not in the best mood right now but I do agree with Bella I'm grouchy when I'm hungry or sleepy and I'm not a morning person. Until next time I love what's happening with the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for faithfully reading and reviewing each chapter.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:27 AM Title: Conquering The Demons
Aw you go Edward saving your momma. James is all in and I love what he said about love not having brakes that was so cute and true. There were a lot things I wanted to copy and paster into my review but I held back this time. I loved the operation going down this chapter. Bella is a lucky girl having two decent men trying to capture her heart. I loved it. Oh yeah I'm recommending your story on my blog at http://luv4jake.blogspot.com/ I'm hoping it brings you more readers but who knows! I love this story so I want others to read it too. Until next time. I should be caught by the end of the day. see ya.
Author's Response:
I absolutely adore you for recommending TLC on your blog! Makes me want to do a fangirl squeal. I'll definitely check it out and post it on my profile. :)
E had to save his mom despite their history, because he really loves to old broad. There was a lot of action this chapter and I enjoyed writing it.
I have had more traffic on the site for several days, so I believe some of the people from your blog have been checking it out. Thanks so very much.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2010 5:20 AM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
Loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reeading, reviewing and loving the story.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
Great story! It is much more than I expected and I look forward to reading every chapter. :)
Author's Response:
76Anita:
Thanks so much for reading, revieiwng and enjoying TLC. I am always pleased when I get another reader and reviewer on board here at TWCS.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:26 AM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
B
xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Can't Be Without You, Baby
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks for reading
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:27 PM Title: Crisis Aftermath
Loved it absolutely loved Edward soooo sweet & cute can't wait for the nxt chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. See you next chapter! :)
Bev
xoxo
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: Crisis Aftermath
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:27 PM Title: Crisis Aftermath
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:16 PM Title: Conquering The Demons
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 30 May 2010 5:17 PM Title: Prologue
Is James a little too good to be true, hmmm....
Great story!
Author's Response:
Glad he's got you thinking. :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 28 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
the more i read the story the more i am hooked to it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 27 May 2010 9:26 PM Title: Conquering The Demons
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thx
Bev
xoxo
Date: 27 May 2010 5:58 PM Title: Conquering The Demons
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 27 May 2010 3:30 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow
Loved Edward he is sooo sweet loved the chapter can't wAit for the nxt one
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, he is so gone now ;)
See you next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 27 May 2010 2:53 PM Title: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid
Loved it love Edward
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thanks for reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow
Hey I just put something together James is Fin aka the to Edward's McDreamy. That is what I was thinking when I read this it screamed S2 Grey's to me or maybe its because my hubby has me watching S1 again since we finished S5 via dvd last week and can't watch S6 because its not available. Anyway I loved the chapter. Its getting interesting and I love Ang she's the bestest. Yep that's what I said. Until next time.
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right. I must have been channeling Fin and McDreamy when I wrote this ;) Yeah, Angela is like a sister to Bella.
See you next chapter.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 25 May 2010 8:43 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow
:)
Author's Response:
:)
See you next chapter!
Bev
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 7:46 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow
I totally think Edward is the guy for Bella. James is really sweet in this story but life without passion is boring...
Author's Response:
I agree! Bella will find out soon :)
Bev
xoxo
Date: 25 May 2010 5:00 PM Title: Ain't Understanding Mellow
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, lady!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 25 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: A Time For Everything
Lived it awesome
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
See you next Chapter.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 10:10 PM Title: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid
Grey's fan here. I have all 5 seasons on dvd waiting for the sixth. S3 was the best ever! I liked Edward/James show down it was cool and hot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh James threatening Edward on the low was awesome. Edward met his match. James would jack him up. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Ooh, I love you, already. Anybody who loves Grey's is my friend. And Season Three is my all time fave, too!
Oh, yeah, Edward and James would be a brawl for the century. See you next Chapter.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 9:10 PM Title: A Time For Everything
I want James to be good but a little bitter for awhile then back to his normal self. A mixture of the two.
Author's Response:
I think I read your mind on this in advance. This is exactly the James you will have :)
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 8:00 PM Title: In The Face of The Unexpected
Liked it yay Elizabeth and Edward for both getting help.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the dysfunctional family gets help. Love those two.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 7:37 PM Title: The Music Never Ends
I liked it. Its starting to go there and I like it.
Author's Response:
Yay!
I'm so glad it's getting there for you. Hope to post a couple more chapters soon.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: My Cup Overflows
I liked it James and Edward drama and such. I loved the references to Cam and his movie roles cracked me up for real.
Author's Response:
I just had to throw the Cam references in there. I'm such a movie buff!
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: In Keeping With Repentance
I liked James' story plus this chapter was great it was a quick read.
Author's Response:
I didn't know that people had such strong feelings about James until I wrote him in as a sympathetic/maybe character. People believe his is intrinsically evil because he was in Twilight.
Glad you liked it.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 6:34 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
I'm always on the verge of copying and pasting what I love about this fic but I don't want to scare you so I'm holding back. I love it. This story rocks my tube socks. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Feel free to copy and paste what you love. I love that! Nothing about love for TLC will scare me, believe that.
I'm glad this story is resonating with you!
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 5:56 PM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise
I laughed so much I love that Jake was a drum major and can get his dance on. I love how this story is shaping up it keeps getting better each chapter. I'm loving Edward and Bella usually Bella gets on my nerves but I can actually understand her a little bit more. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Yes, this story is a slow burn and builds and builds into a crescendo!
Most of the character traits are really OOC. I think Edward has more canon traits than any of the characters.
So glad you're enjoying it.
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:20 PM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me
I love it. I can relate to the story and I love it all but my Jakey being gay but at least he isn't the drug dealer having the kids sell for him I would have stopped reading then that's a hard limit just kidding! Not really but anyway I love this story we need more of them. Until next time.
Author's Response:
I should have known from your penname that Jake is your fave! I promise, I do not disparage Jake in this story at all. I just kinda made him gay, but a nice gay guy and one of Bella's friends from childhood.
Thank you for loving the story and especially your reading and reviews!
Bev
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 6:04 AM Title: Prologue
I'm interested and can't wait to catch up on this story tomorrow. You peeked my interest! I love all the issues they are going to have to deal with it makes it more real. Until tomorrow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving TLC a shot!
Can't wait to hear what you think about the rest of the story.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 23 May 2010 11:24 PM Title: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 23 May 2010 11:14 PM Title: A Time For Everything
Great job! I see this James being bad and to be viciously dumped.
Author's Response:
Thanks! James is history, but not in a vicious way. ;)
Bev
xoxo
Date: 23 May 2010 8:24 PM Title: A Time For Everything
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks for reading and reviewing
Bev
xoxo
Date: 14 May 2010 4:26 AM Title: In The Face of The Unexpected
Great job! I love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Glad you're sitll enjoying.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 08 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: In The Face of The Unexpected
Loved it
Author's Response:
Glad you're still loving the story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 May 2010 1:31 PM Title: The Music Never Ends
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Bev
xoxo
Date: 07 May 2010 10:49 AM Title: My Cup Overflows
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:27 AM Title: In Keeping With Repentance
Lived it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
B.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:14 AM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
Loved it love copward
Author's Response:
Copward is a fave of many. Glad you're liking TLC.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:12 PM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:25 PM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me
Loved it awesome
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:17 PM Title: Prologue
Loved it
Author's Response:
Love you for loving it!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:29 AM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
So far I am enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
I am so honored that you're enjoying the story.
Can't wait to hear your comments about chapters to come.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
xoxo
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:29 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
FInally I am reading your story. SO far I like it. Bella seems so kind yet does not have any dullness. I like 3rd person. You managed to write it and making it personal as well.
Author's Response:
Chloe:
Thanks so much or reading. I have been having some RL issues and not able to connect with my fanfic friends much. Please don't give up on me. :)
Love
Bev
xoxo
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:59 PM Title: In The Face of The Unexpected
:)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:30 PM Title: The Music Never Ends
:)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:35 PM Title: In Keeping With Repentance
:)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:04 PM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:41 AM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks!
Bev
xoxo
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:12 AM Title: Love Yet Eludes Me
;)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:21 AM Title: Prologue
:)
Author's Response:
thx! ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:31 AM Title: Crazy On An Ordinary Day
Just a quick review to say I really like the story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest of it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Hope you enjoy the next installments.
Bev
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:23 AM Title: The Music Never Ends
Your doing a good job for this to be your first
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! And thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bev
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:47 AM Title: A Commitment Is A Promise
I am enjoying reading your fic. In general I am a lousy reviewer, but everyone needs a little love and I couldn't stand seeing that people were reading and leaving nothing in return. On to the next chapter:)
Author's Response:
I am so happy that you are enjoying TLC. Hopefully the story will catch on with people and they will begin to review.
Bev