Date: 26 May 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
*hums* 'i'm in love with a man nearly twice my age'
well this one looks like it is gonna be an interesting ride!
Date: 26 May 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I loved it. Im on to the nect chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you enjoyed the rest of the chapters :) I look forward to hearing what you think of Chapter 11 it will be out hopefully by Wednesday!
Date: 26 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
what do I think? HOLY FUCK to quote Edward. lol that was hott. wow I was right there with Bella when he bought out that camcorder. holy hell. wow, they sure are kinky you freaky girl. lol you make me proud. (wipes away a tear) thanks so much. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response: Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
Steamy
Author's Response:
Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
So Good!!!
Author's Response:
Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
So Good!!!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
:)
Author's Response:
Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
That was so hawt!!! I have to say, I'm guilty too. I thought for sure he was going to mess up and cheat on her. I'm so glad he didn't, but what did he do for 6 hours. I'm sure Gianna was lurking somewhere and will have some type of evidence to try to use against him per her warning. I just hope he is able to prove it wrong. Thanks for the awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Yay! Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
I'm so happy they made up but I'm thinking the camera is a bad idea. Nothing ever good comes from people especially famous people filming themselves having sex. That tape is going to find itself in the wrong hands. Now Emmett I think is giving Ms. Thang a piece of her own medicine. Serves her right because she has done it to hm for so long. I'm happy that Bella still doesn't trust her because I don't trust her ass either. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hey is his sister married to Collin? That would be some shit
Author's Response:
Right? That is just asking for trouble...what are they thinking?! lol No, Lizzy is married to Alec. That would have been horrible! Yes, Rosalie is a bitch but so is Emmett...he is just easier to like, they deserve each other. ;) Lets see how our Bella fares meeting the rest of the family...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
Should not have read this at work!
Author's Response:
haha! I'm glad you liked it...it was hot right? but what are they thinking...I tried to tell them ;) Lets see how our Bella fares meeting the parents, it will be interesting to say the least.
Date: 25 May 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
That was intense...poor Edward in the beginning feeling so rejected. I am glad that got it worked out. They have such emotional intensity! I loved it!
Colin was a jerk!! I loved Edward's reaction to Bella's telling him of Colin. I would love to see Edward and Colin and Edward in a dark alley.
Author's Response:
You know...with Edward going to Seattle with B, meeting up with Collin seems inevitable. mmmm... mean, out of control badass Edward is hot....
Anyway, Bella was a jerk too! I mean, I get why but still how could anyone reject Edward?
Thank you for always taking the time to let me know what you think! I always look forward to your reviews...Lets see how B fares meeting the parents, it should be interesting to say the least lol
Date: 25 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
A) I'm so happy he rejected the model. B) I'm so glad he rejected the beach fans. C) I'm so glad their tiff didn't last long. D) I'm very very glad they're back to their kinky, PDA ways. ;) Great chapter, I always look forward to reading your updates. Please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Edward is nothing if not loyal...he didn't wait 17 years to fuck it up by cheating...at least thats what he told me, lol. Lets see how B fares with the parents...it ought to be interesting to say the least. ;)
Thank you for always taking the time to review, I look forward to see what you have to say!
Laila
Date: 25 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Oh holy shit this story is hot. Funny thing is I can totally see the characters in these roles. You make them come alive and seem very real. Please keep up the awesome work and update soon.
Maeguerite
Author's Response:
I have thouroughly enjoyed each of your reviews, it makes me so happy that this story is being enjoyed...I have never written before this so it is nice to hear that my efforts are appreciated. If you would like to see the costumes, you can get to the links on my ff.net account or on my blog: lailab-faithfully.blogspot.com.
Again thank you for reading and for your kind words...it makes it so much easier to keep going!
I look forward to hearing what you think of the next one!
Laila
Date: 25 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Oh damn what a first meeting. WOW!! Now why can't I find a coffee house like that?? PLease update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 25 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
I'm so happy they made up. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response:
Me too...I'm such a baby when they fight. lol. Let's see how she fares meeting the rest of the family, it ought to be interesting to say the least.
Date: 25 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
amaaaaaaaazing! what a chapter! Love that they're back together. When are they heading back to Forks?
Author's Response:
Me too...I'm such a baby when they fight. lol. Let's see how she fares meeting the rest of the family, it ought to be interesting to say the least. As far as Forks...we still have a few weeks left on tour, but soon enough Edward will have to meet Charlie and who knows maybe he will randomly run into Collin...mmmm pissed off mean out of control Edward....whew! what were we talking about again? ;)
Date: 25 May 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
I'm so glad they made up and that Edward didn't do anything stupid with the blonde at the bar that night. It was kind of refreshing to see Rose actually talk to Bella little without being mean.
Author's Response:
Me too...I'm such a baby when they fight. lol. Let's see how she fares meeting the rest of the family, it ought to be interesting to say the least.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
DAMN... I need to invest in a mini tripod.
Author's Response:
right? I told them not to, as hot as it is...but they don't listen haha. Hope it doesnt come back to bite them in the ass... Lets see how B fares meeting the rest of his family, it ought to be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
That video camera is gonna bite them in the ass later..I can feel it!
Author's Response:
right? I told them...but they don't listen haha. Lets see how B fares meeting the rest of his family, it ought to be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I'm glad they made up and are all hot and heavy again, but that video is a REALLY bad idea! REALLY REALLY bad! Damn, don't they know that celebrities should NEVER make sex tapes? Geez, find another way to get your kink on! At the very least I hope they *immediately* erase after watching it. That video is going to end up in the wrong hands and cause all kinds of trouble.
Author's Response:
right? I told them...but they don't listen haha. Lets see how B fares meeting the rest of his family, it ought to be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
and all is right with the world.......
Author's Response:
I know i am such a baby when they fight! Lets see how meeting the parents goes, it ought to be interesting to say the least!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
i really hope that video doesn't fall into the wrong hands......
Author's Response:
right? I told them...but they don't listen haha. Lets see how B fares meeting the rest of his family, it ought to be interesting to say the least!
Date: 21 May 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! :)
Date: 18 May 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Eddie is over reacting...just a tad!
Date: 18 May 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Is Bella pregnant?? I think it'd be a good twist if she was. Loving the drama, keep it up!
Date: 18 May 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
I'm worried making home video's of themselves having sex isn't the smartest idea. Hope no one finds them. As for Edwards reaction at the end ... I know he knows this but, he totally over reacted. Hope he doesn't do anything stupid while he's out. He needs to go back and finish talking to Bella. Hope they work this out. :0)
Date: 17 May 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Temper, temper, never does anyone any good. I hope Edward comes to his senses soon.
Date: 17 May 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Communication people, it's key to healthy relationship. Sheesh. LOL
Date: 17 May 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Pierced and tattooed Sexward....All I can say is...thank you. It doesn't get better than that. And ballsy Bella? Bonus.
Date: 16 May 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
arrggh! damn him and his childish temper! go back and TALK to her you moron (if she's even there when you get back)
Date: 16 May 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Ooohhhh nooo! Please don't let him sleep with the blonde. I can't believe he blew up on her like that; he didn't even give her a chance to explain what she meant. God i hope he doesn't fuck her. Great chapter, I loved Possessive Edward at the beginning with Demitri.
Date: 16 May 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
I think they need to have a long talk.
Date: 16 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
:)
Date: 16 May 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
That didn't go the way I thought it would!
Please update soon. I am curious to see
how much of a schmuckward he really is! :)
Date: 16 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
oh edward don't fuck it up
Date: 16 May 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Oh no! Please let him walk away from the tall leggy blonde before anything happens. I can almost see Gianna in the background taking pics or something to get back at him. Thanks for the awesome chapter. Please update soon.
Date: 16 May 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
well hes a dumb ass !! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 16 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Um seriously?!?! You're leaving it here? You are killing me!!!! Update soon I can't have MY FAVORITE Edward/Bella couple at odds...
Thank you so much for your story... I love it, even though I hate were you left it today..... Wendy
Date: 16 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
:-( he screwed up
Date: 16 May 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Well that was kind of... intense? Please tell me he doesn't sleep with Slutty McSlutSlut @ the bar. He promised he was gonna be faithful. Update soon woman!
Date: 16 May 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
Kind of scared! I hope Edward does not hook up with the blonde!!!!!
Date: 16 May 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
OUCH Edward is PISSED! he should really watch his temper. lol I can't wait to find out what Bella thinks in all this or what is exactly happening in her mind. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 16 May 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
How bad we've fucked this up, I don't think so there was no we in that. It was all him, she loves him but she doesn't want to ask him to give up what he has going on for her. She probably thinks it's selfish of her to ask and also she said we'll see. She wanted to talk about it at a later time so that she can have more time to ponder the situation and come up with a solution having fully thought everything out. As always can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 15 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Wonderful!
Date: 13 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
Love this story!
Date: 13 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
I love that she speaks Italian. Cleary Edward likes it too.
Date: 12 May 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Awww, how sweet.
Date: 12 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Good chapter.
Date: 12 May 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Of course he wants her, he is a man.
Date: 12 May 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Put Tanya and Rose in the places, too funny.
Date: 12 May 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I am glad that they didnt have intercourse yet.
Date: 12 May 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I liked her putting Rose in her place.
Date: 12 May 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Good so far.
Date: 09 May 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Renee can ruin any good time...
Date: 08 May 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Renee is such a horrible mother. It takes her 3 months to call. I don't blame Bella for putting her off. She really doesn't need to know about Bella's life. I think the costume was funny.
Date: 08 May 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
ok, fantastic chapter sexy as fuck. i mean edward in a collar and leash, sure to make naughty dreams. the lemons were unbeliveable. i love how they are getting more dominating who doesn't love domward
Date: 08 May 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I have never heard of so many piercings.
Date: 08 May 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Rose has got to be a misserable misserable person to be so bitter all the time. What exactly does Emmett love about her? I do love that Bella doesn't let Rose put her down but, I wish Rose would get over it already. Loved the idea of them all dressing as song names. That was really neat. :0)
Date: 08 May 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Whew, what a start to a chapter! Again, I have to say I love the major PDA they have going on, please don't stop that haha. Edward's costume sounds hottt, especially with the leash, and I love his agressiveness towards the creepy interviewer. Oh and the whole daddy fetish thing they both have is hot too ;) Glad he could get over his problems with taking her from behind. Great chapter overall, I loved it. This is my favourite story at the moment, update soon :) x
Date: 08 May 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
:)
Date: 08 May 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
I love the srory. Then add in the
freakishly hot lemons, just makes
it perfect! :)
Date: 08 May 2010 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Cant wait to read more.
Date: 08 May 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Great costumes :) I love how Bella is making new friends. Gianna is a hater poor kidd, when will these girls ever learn Edward doesnt want them. UGH! Great chapter. I'm super excited for more :)
Date: 08 May 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
I love the Freak on the Leash costume and Edward with a Mohawk. I would love to see pictures of that.
Date: 08 May 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
i predict some dress destruction or something from rose or tanya
Date: 08 May 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
aww thanks for the translations. you're awesome! I can't wait for more. I loved the whole possessive thing Bella was showing Gianna. that was hot and so was Edward sticking up for Rosalie. I loved the PDA hot hot stuff. :D keep up the amazing work and more jealous Edward or Bella would be awesome. I can't wait. thanks again bye
Date: 08 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Another great chapter.
Date: 08 May 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Jeez, it seems Rosalie is just getting worse and worse. can't wait till these two have an all out war
Date: 07 May 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
I love how you really get inside Edward's head and show us how he feels. I can really imagine the scenes you describe, and I love the different experiences they have together.
I actually hate Twilight and think Stephenie Meyer's writing is awful, and I have only been reading Twilight fanfiction for the past couple years. It is authors like you who astound and amaze me... I guess something good did come out of the Twilight series after all! :)
Also, thanks for taking the time to personally respond to my last review! And please update again soon! :D
Date: 06 May 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
i just wanted to let let you know that i love LOVE your story. i love that bella is snarky and has style (designer no less) hell the way you describe bella i wanna fuck her myself and i don't swing that way. and holy fuck how can you not love a sexy as sin tatted and pierced edward, stuff of my dreams.
Date: 04 May 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Love his caveman thoughts about the bracelet, love that they want to have little redheaded babies and I love basically everything else about this story. :) I checked everyday for this update haha, I was so happy when I saw it. Wanna read some kinky lemons ;)
Date: 04 May 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
loved this chapter! so cute! Did Rosalie tamper with her dress? Or did she just gain weight because she's so happy with Edward lol. Or is she pregnant?
Date: 04 May 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
I wish I could be more creative in my review, but I guess there is no better way of saying this: I effin LOVE your story.
:)
Date: 04 May 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Oh wow, can't wait to see who the first one is to see Edward's infinity pendant. I hope its Rose. He He He!!! I can't wait for Bella to do something to crush all these women so bad they finally leave her alone. I know the biggest thing she could do is be with Edward, but so far that hasn't worked. I hope the necklace and braclet make that breakthrough. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 04 May 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
I wanna be a rock star!
Date: 04 May 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
fan-fucking-tastic story!!
i really love bella and edward's relationship. and i hope that emmett either leaves rose soon or she comes to her senses and lavishes all her attention on the man that does love her and married her!!! i'm so thinking that gianna and rose teamed together and messed bella's dress up somehow and can't wait until they find out who actually did it!
please update really really soon
Date: 04 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
:)
Date: 04 May 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Great chapter...as always!!
Date: 04 May 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
YEAHH! they are cute together. They make me soo happy. I hope whatcha call it gets fired. Shes soo unprofessional. Damn haters. If Bella goes away Edward is not going to like you! UGH! Some girls are soo slow.
Date: 04 May 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
That was a great chap!
Date: 04 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Great chapter a little angst, some lemons and some fun. Keep up the great work can't wait to read more!
Date: 04 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Emmet needs to check his wife. I mean shit she's trying to get with another guy right in front of him. She clearly doesn't care what he thinks or how he feels. I really hate her cuz he's so sweet, he deserves better. Edward is doing his best I understand but he needs to find out who messed up her dress and fix that asap. I think Bella is going to get fed up and leave, not Edward in general but the tour and who could blame her. Really there's only so much a person can take and they are going to push her too far
Date: 04 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Wonder who tampered with the dress??? There are so many women who are jealous of her it could have been anyone. Love the gifts they gave each other at the end. :0)
Date: 04 May 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
wow this story is one of the major ones I have on my favorites that I just die waiting for an update. its soo good and hot as hell. I loved the last chapter where Bella was kissing and biting on his neck in front of Rosalie staking her claim. LOVED THAT!! this chapter had some hot scenes too especially the metaphorical handcuff and infinity necklace. great job. thanks again bye
Date: 04 May 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
omg..love the chapter. hate gianna..lol!!
Date: 04 May 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
hmmm, either Rose or Gianna messed with the dress. jealous bitches!
Date: 03 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
soo is Emmett stupid or sloww??? Because those excuses were WEAK...Anywhoo Lovely chapter Bella+Edward=HOTTTTTT. and i love it :) you rock my socks. and i wanted to let you know.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! That's all I can say!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review, it means alot to me!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Hello from a fellow mother of two, stay at home, foul mouthed, tattooed momma. ;) I saw your story rec'd on the High Anxiety thread on Twilighted and had to run over to read your older Edward. I'm loving this so far!
"Tell me Rosalie, is Emmett aware that he is your *consolation prize*?"
I read this and started humming Depeche Mode's Sea of Sin...Dave Gahan in his long haired heroin phase...pure sex, right there. I loved your In Your Room mention, and then you've got Sea of Sin going on repeat, but I'll never complain because there can never be too much DM. *swoons* I usually balance my love for DM out with my obsession of all the floor stomping Industrial I usually listen to, but DM really was one of my first loves, back in grade school. And they did get better with age. ;)
And lastly, all I have to say is why the fuck are they entrusting that cunt with Bella's dress?! Has Alice completely lost any good judgment she might have had?! I guess I'll find out in future chapters but I am at a loss as to why they would let that bitch NEAR that dress, let along give it to her to send!
Love this story so far, and I look forward to more!
GT
Author's Response:
yay! there are more of us in the world lol! I'm really glad you like the story...cannon Bella is just to weak for me and who doesn't love a badass Edward? Thanks for taking the time to review, the next chapter should be up this weekend, i fucking hope so anyway. talk to you soon :)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Love your story. Edward is such a badass. Update soon.
:)
Author's Response:
Yay! Thank you very much, I am working on next one as we speak...soon, i promise
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
Loving the story so far. I must admit I was hoping Bella was a raging slut in highschool, and that was why she was vacationing in another country...trying to escape her past...sorta like Edwards double in female form!
Author's Response:
lol that would have been interesting :) Thank you for taking the time to review! next one out soon
Date: 27 Apr 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Those boys are right! That was hot as hell! :)
Author's Response:
Nasty Edward and Bella lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
I LOVE IT. please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for sending me a review! I so look forward to reading them...it really helps to keep me motivated :)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
:-P
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! i appreciate them
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
again, i say poor Emmett....he freaking knows....ugh, she's gonna push him to a point where he's just gonna tell her to take a hike
Author's Response:
I know, Rosalie is such a bitch...selfish, self-centered and rude lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
That was a nice, hot, steamy chappie. LOVE IT! Of course I always love possesive Edward.
Author's Response:
Me too, lol. I sometimes worry that their PDA is out of control! Thanks as always for the review
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
It is just wonderful, I had been running out of good stories to read over on FF.net, so I found this and it is one of the sexiest stories out there. Edward is just about perfect ( for me ) Tats, attitude, piercings, smartass, and that is just all too damn sexy! Your Bella, God she is perfect, I cannot stand meek Bella's, I love it when she is sassy and sweet, that she stands up for herself and does not let anyone walk all over her!!! Alice, is better then most I have read, I am so not a fan of her pushing and demanding, that always rubs me the wrong way, but she is not as close to some others I have read, I have read some that I have had to stop reading and be done cuz it was just so much! Thank you for taking your time to write this! It is a very good story and I am looking forward to where you take Edward and Bella. I just hope Rose gets what is coming to her!
Author's Response:
Yay! thank you so much for your kind encouragement! it really helps keep me going, new chapter up this weekend...teaser on blog :)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Yaaay, they had sex! And I find their whole PDA thing really hot, too. I love that they can't keep their hands off each other, I hope that doesn't change. Is there going to be any angst in this story? I really just like it how it is now; lemons, more lemons, a bit of Rosalie-drama...it's just great, I love it! :)
Author's Response:
I dont think it will ever get very angsty, some drama yes but nothing too bad...i hope. thanks for the encouragement, it really is appreciated
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
I love it!!! This chapter was so hawt!!! I would love to have heard what Rose thought of their little porno in front of everyone. LOL I hope there is more PDA in future chapters. Especially with Rose or Tanya around. LOL Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you...they really do have a pda problem dont they, maybe they need a video camera...hmmm. anyhoo, thanks for the review :)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!