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Reviewer: mygrlzo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:34 AM Title: Prologue

i'm already laughing out loud at Bella's thoughts on her mothers new found faith.

Reviewer: onlyforlove Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven

So far I only read until chapter 18, but I'm loving it. I love how you write AU/AH Twilight stories, you always develop great plots. (:

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:07 PM Title: Outtake 2 Home

I loved this story!  I couldn't stop reading it.  i was a little uncomfortable about the religious aspect at first.  I guess I thought that maybe you would make a mockery of it.  You didn't.  You had some great lessons and told a wonderful story that is very true to life.  We all struggle with our faith at times.  Thanks for writing this.  I will continue to follow you to your other stories.  I think you have a gift.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:46 AM Title: Outtake 2 Home

i remember those days! when baby would not stop crying and i had no idea what to do. having hubbie as backup was a definate god send!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:42 AM Title: Outtake: Live Like Your Dying

awesome song! i have had people at work comment that it is so sweet that i always end call with my family with 'i love you' i told the girls one day not too long ago that it is a rule i have.

- say 'i love you' in every conversation

- never go to bed mad

- never leave shit to fester

- never leave the important things unsaid

the reason? i never want to have the regret of something happening and knowing i was too busy, too embarassed, too whatever to have said/done one of those things and now will never have that chance to say/do it again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian

well happy everyone has there little family and b and e had a girl. i am dreading my kids making the same mistake i did. i love my babies and my hubbie but i would dfinately not promote being a teen mom who got 'knocked up' and i dread the thought of being made a grandma in my 30s! oh God help me!!! only 7 years till i hit 40, please not till i at LEAST hit 40!

 

loved the story and the ups and downs that we all call life. parts of this really hit home, bella is so much like me at that age (but hubbie is only 2 years older) and so much like my daughter now.

thank you for writing and sharing with us :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart

faith is easy when things are good, it gets hard when things are darkest. but He always caries us though.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 38 Never Gonna Be Alone

i was wondering with all of the faith that eddie and the rest have why no one has laid hands on bella and the baby and accepted their healing and strength? that was the first thing my mother in law did when my daughter ended up in the NICU. and start a prayer chain. even a non believer feels the power of prayer when you know there are people all over the world, that have never met you or probably ever will meet you but they are joining you in the prayer that everything will be ok and God will bless the outcome. seriously it is amazing and powerful!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 37 We Live

dum, dum, da, dum, dum, dum, da, dum...

here comes the bride! can they even get married? most places you have to be 18 at least. well i guess this answers the question of living arrangements after the baby is born.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 36 Mighty To Save

but wasn't eddie having issues with the blurred lines? but now he is ok with them? just don't want him to feel bad and pull away again.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 Whatever it Takes

congrats you two a baby is a wonderful blessing and a joy in your life. it's the teenage years that suck ass! lol.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 34 By Your Side

well it will definately be an uphill battle for this little family in the making.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son

don't worry bella it will all work out! robicorn started the sequel already. lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag

Doesn't look like bella is ready to just let him off the hook. Boy has some work to do.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 31 Grace

So eddie is coming home there is still more shit yet to hit the fan.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain

Well I hate to say I was right but this is just the reality check they both needed. God and beliefs are not the only reason to wait for sex.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon

Edward you fucking pansy as mother fucker! I am so mad at you right now! Jasper and em better knock some sence into you!
And what about the fact that the sex happened so fast there was no mention of a condom.........?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah

But he can't leave for 6 months! Poor eddie! Poor bella! :(

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie

Ok who else saw the kate thing coming a mile away? Being on the phone with b was the only shoker. Can't wait for eddie to come home!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 25 Iris

well good byes suck ass. good for you edward that you stuck to your guns and stopped.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 Angels

this is a huge step for b and the coming separation is gonna suck for both of them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town

time for alice to bitch slap jasper and knock some sence into him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement

well bella got to see a bit of the everybody loves edward groupies. but he only haseyes for her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 Halo

jasper why would you let them do that to her?!?! and edward, man you gotta learn to contrrol yourself.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 Have We Lost

oh boy eddie is not gonna be happy....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave

i agree with bella this is a pretty shity christmas. but eddie stood up for her. jasper may be hurt and confused but that was a shit move.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven

wonder what charlie is gonna think?

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Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around

woohoo go eddie! gettin all up in bella's ....well you know. heehee! and don't worry sweety you'll be makin her scream a lot more i am sure and once you get the hang of it you 2 can do it at the same time! then we move on to the oral assignment!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 16 Lifesong

what time of year is it now? how long do they have till the tour? what about their birthdays? they will miss both. eddie - june bella - sept.

oh yeah and jane is a bitch!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 Slow Fade

Well it seems that the important people are being allowed in on the 'secret'. I remember when my mom brought up birth control and I had to tell her I already had it covered. She did it at the food court at the mall at a table full of our friends and my then boyfriend, now hubbie. I could have died! And hubbie about ran away! To funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough

You never know what you have until it's gone. But I agree with b I don't think jasper is in love with her, he is feeling left behind and like he has been replaced. He will find his happy again, I know it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13 Broken Wing

Poor eddie! The guy can't lie or keep a secret very well. He is just to much of a nice guy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 Is This Love

Sneaking around is hard on the friendship because youy can not really meet everyone for a movie or dinner and hang out together with friends and boyfriend.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes

poor jasper i wonder what happened with alice to make him drop e? or was it just his dad?

and edward? wow the boy is starting to let loose!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign

wow she really brings the bad boy out in him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment

they are to cute! and they are gonna snuggle.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 Live For Today

this should be a good little talk.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 Anyway

looks like someone is in over his head....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 The Blessing

now there is an interesting prayer request. i am not so sure how the church ladies would respond....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith

it is amazing the feeling of being someplace where you can just feel the faith of others and you want to feel that too even if you don't really believe. and like bella mentioned you can tell the true believers and the ones who are there going through the motions for other reasons.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 I Still Believe

poor eddie he is so torn... will he get the answer to his prayers? has he already?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 Opposite Way

Bella and jasper have a really cool relationship. Love how they look out for eachother. I guess I got my answer on how old b and e are.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 Beautiful One

Ok so how old is our eddie here? He is done collegeso that would make him 22-ish? And bella 17-18? Not too big of a gap in the big picture but huge to outsiders now...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker

Ok how bad is it that in order to make googly eyes at edward she has to go down on jasper?! And maybe more. I wonder what eddie would think of that! Lol to funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:56 PM Title: Prologue

Man I remember those days! Totally describes my mother in law!

Reviewer: shepeppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian

This was a great story!  I loved the character's relationships and the development of the story.  It is a great example of dealing with the consequences of your actions and how it not only affects the 2 people involved but those around you. 

I've started reading the sequel and I love it!!

Reviewer: A Cullen Wannabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith

This is an awesome story. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: jaijaimays Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart

I've been reading your story nonstop and I just had to stop and tell u i was in tears over here. I am so happy she woke up!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 1:30 PM Title: Outtake 3 - Owned By Edward

Wow, the Jasper/Alice divorce bomb was a huge surprise.  Definitely didn't see that one coming.  The claiming sex was awesome.  I love that they are married with kids that are pre-teen and teens and can still be animalistic like that.  Gabe hearing them was greatness :)

The closeness between Evie and Bella is wonderful.  Evie seems to really need a strong mother figure in her life.

Yes, Edward, learn your lesson.  It's better to be open about safe sex and let your child know they can talk to you rather than ignoring it.

LOL, I can't tell you how many times my hubby and I will say that's YOUR son not mine, so I can totally relate to that last little exchange.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian

Good chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart

Shes awake.

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Date: 16 May 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 38 Never Gonna Be Alone

Sooo sad.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 37 We Live

How sweet.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 36 Mighty To Save

No worries now, just keep doing it,lol.

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Date: 15 May 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 35 Whatever it Takes

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 34 By Your Side

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son

well he is home now, lets see what happens.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag

The cat is out of the bag now.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 31 Grace

She need to tell him, he is no good for just leaving like that.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain

I guess it is going to hit the fan now.

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Date: 15 May 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon

How can he just run, I think he needs slapped.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon

How can he just run, I think he needs slapped.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah

I cant believe he is leaving. They had sex with no condom!!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie

Good chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 25 Iris

I cant believe he stopped.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 24 Angels

Look how helpful Robby is.

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Date: 15 May 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement

Good chapter.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 Halo

He was asking for trouble telling her to go.

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Date: 15 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 Have We Lost

I see trouble coming.

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Date: 15 May 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave

Holidays are fun, lol.

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Date: 15 May 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around

Breaking his rules already.

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Date: 15 May 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16 Lifesong

Alot of churches are really  bad for gossip.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 15 Slow Fade

Renee really is dense.

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Date: 15 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough

Jasper is late with his confessions.

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Date: 15 May 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 Broken Wing

Ooo how the mighty fall, lol, secrets never stay that way for long.

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Date: 15 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 Is This Love

Now Jasper is getting jealous.

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Date: 15 May 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes

Maybe Edward will help Jasper and Bella.

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Date: 15 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign

Boy she works fast, he. is already changing, and now she feels bad about it.

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Date: 15 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 Live For Today

Wonder how forgiving and non judgmental he will be after she tells him of Jasper.

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Date: 15 May 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 Anyway

Of course Tanya will want to sing.

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Date: 15 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 The Blessing

Now she wants her mother to pray for her.

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Date: 15 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 I Still Believe

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 Opposite Way

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 Beautiful One

I find this story funny and interesting.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker

LOL, giving head as a bribe to go to church. Too funny.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds like she went all  holy roller alright.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Outtake 3 - Owned By Edward

Thanks for the chapter and the B&E look in!

Reviewer: belle123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian

Loved your story.

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Outtake 2 Home

OH MY GOD !!! I LOVE this story soooooooooooooo much :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son

yeah forgive him but kick his arse first...

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Date: 11 May 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag

oh god....... I am saying that alot huh?

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Date: 11 May 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Grace

oh goodie.. please ring him...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain

omg... omg....

thank god for the sequel....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon

okay I am going to kick his arse...

And I am supposed to be asleep... you know it is good when you can't put a book down..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah

oh god.............

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Date: 11 May 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie

LOL that was cute..

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