Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh man now he is making it harder on all of them and he is after Bella. I just hope that the girls stay out of their apartment until they all get back.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Way to tell him off
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well I guess that everyone didn't take the news well did they.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the recviews. I hope you are enjoying this story:)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
And now I wonder what her sisters are thinking because she hasn't talked to them for a day at least.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Um..... WOW! I really think that is the only word that describes that.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
What do they really think that she is hiding from? I think that she was a really strong person to say all of that to them because they needed to hear it.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow I hope that Carlisle doesn't do anything stupid because there is alot more to this than what we know right now.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well at least the dreams about James stopped! LOL....
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well at least she is trying because she really needs her sisters to be there for her.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad that Bella is standing up for herself but I really don't know if her living by herself with James running around is a safe thing for her to do.
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
*raises both hands*
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Cool Beans
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Thank you for all the reviews so far:)
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well Edward doesnt seem to like a woman partner huh.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 41
I really liked this story read it start to finish tonight, I think Flightless Bird is the only one I have yet to read and I am on my way to start that first thing tomorrow afternoon. As always between here and FF I love your writing and I am so happy to read the stuff you share with us all. Thanks so much for the entertainment and oppritunity to read your talented writing's.
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 29 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 41
that was really good!! i will read the sequel as soon as i can...
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 41
wow the ending was just that, an ending. lol I loved it and I can't wait for the sequel and more LEMONS WITH EDWARD. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh I am sad to see this one go but a sequel YAHOOOOOO!!! i cant wait .
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
Soo.... Assuming this is the end of this story? If so, thanks for the ride - it's been thrilling!,
Author's Response:
Yep, this is the end. Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 41
i have been waiting for this chapter since she first took emmett down i cant wait to see what you come up with for the sequel so please post soon
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 41
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 41
well im happy they are getting along ! great ending to this part of the story !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 41
I believe that these chapters are being repeated. I'm not sure but maybe it is just me forgetting that I have already read these brilliant chapters. Well done on such a briliant fanfiction.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I checked them and they weren't repeats. Anywway, Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 40
yeah sequel! :) I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 40
great chapter.... can not wait for the sequel
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
Thank goodness for the sequel. I was going to have severe withdrawals! Love Izzie; she's a little firecracker!
Author's Response:
lol, thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 40
Gotta love Izzy, she's the baby! Four going on forty! Don't want to be on her bad side, at all!
Author's Response:
lol, trust me you don't! I have a seven year old that I based Izzy on, she scared the crap out of me sometimes:)
Date: 23 May 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 39
first steps are always the hardest. :) i'm glad that's out of the way. Now lets work on getting bella back in the sack with Edward. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you get them talking, I think you have their character well.
I'm goin to tell you, some personal stuff, I wasn't pleased the way you paint Bella, because I grow up similar to her, (exempt for skiping grades) butat age 18 a friends mother told me to act like a normal teen, to be stupid, because no man was going to look at me a second time just because I was (am) to intelligent, and to be honest, event after a had married (now happy single) and decades a way I intimadate men a women arround,
I never act stupid, but was a shok still, people also treat you bad just because they feel threatened, fear, but you learn to show them that you are a respectfull intelligent human been, and after some time, their treat you with the same respect as you tratethem, they do not need to know your sins, take time
I never in my life ask in words for respect, I ask with action, that includes the way a behave in front of my coworker, so when Bella became angry and hurt the way their treater her i become mad, come on she know human behavior, and her act in front of them, mmmm......she bad
and now to the last chapter, well done, at least she dont took decades to tell them wath she thought of them
Great job
Author's Response:
I see what you are saying but you have to see it from Bella's POV too. All she asked was the people who she had to trust with her life, respect her. As soon as they heard about this past relationship she had with Carlisle, they started treating her like she was a whore. I don't think it's unreasonable for her to be hurt by that. Not only that but her own sisters, who she should be able to trust, betrayed her trust with men they had just met. That is wrong, period.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 39
I think that was to much too soon in my opinion. That first conversation with the parents was just, to much too soon.
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 23 May 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 39
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 23 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
I enjoy your stories, you always make me laugh. There's a word for writing the wrong word in a sentence, even when the word you write almost fits. Can't remember what that word is now. You had me falling out of my chair laughing at the attacked brace to the leg. I do have the best time reading your chapters!
She is much more forgiving with her parents that I would be had I been in her situation. Everything boils down to listening instead of just hearing. Communication, we do it every day just now as well as we should.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I completely overlooked that typo ;) They still have a long ways to go, but it's a start. Really, none of them, Bella included, listened to each other.
Date: 22 May 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 38
All I can say is Bella is way more forgiving than I am. I hope it all goes well. Please keep up the great work and update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
It's not going to be instant forgiveness, I can assure you.
Date: 22 May 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 38
Gotta love Izzy, she's the baby! Frankly typing, I'd give up on the parents! They were willing to let her die rather than revel a secret. Don't forget they knew about the cabin, knew he was killing girls, and didn't say a word. Really is there anything to reconnect to. Think about it, would one want to associate with people like that if they weren't related? Heck would one even want to associate with a relative like that if they weren't a very close relations? So, why even put in the effort? Why allow them to do it again? Actually they can't, the scum bag is dead, but what else would/could they do? Not worth the effort.
Author's Response:
You make several excellant points. The reason Bella needs to sit down with her parents is because she needs closure. She needs to make them understand really what they did.
Date: 22 May 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 38
*new reader*
i really really love this story!
it's sounds like you are wrapping everything up to end it, please tell me that it's not ending anytime soon? :(
Author's Response:
Unfortunily there are only three more chapters of this story but there is a sequel already:)
Date: 22 May 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 38
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 May 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 38
Phase one complete, Phase two? talk to charlie and Renee. lol good luck. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 37
Perfect as always and right on target! Good Job!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
ohh you cockblocker. :( No I understand bella needs time, poor thing. If I had something looking like that......well you get the picture. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I know, I'm so mean ;)
Date: 21 May 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 37
great chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 37
i cant wait to see what happens next this story has been great i hope that charlie and renee show up while her ant and uncle are still in town i would love to see what they say to them so please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 21 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Great chapter againi!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 37
Don't think they'd let 'em in the building, never mind the lobby.
Author's Response: Probably not;)
Date: 20 May 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 36
god those people suck for parents. lol I can't wait for more keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 20 May 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 36
great chapter.... i bet it is her parents
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 20 May 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 35
great chapter
Date: 20 May 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
great chapter.... glad the boys are not giving her such a hard time now
Date: 20 May 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
wow great just leaving us with a cliffie....meanie!!lol
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 19 May 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
god her parents are evil in this story and accesories to an almost rape and murder and they get off scott free? what a load of bullhooey. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 May 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
Bella is awesome. she is definately my girl. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 34
ohh thats not good !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
Excellent chapter. You could feel how happy Izzy was to see Bella. Please keep up the great work and update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
Sorry, but I still hate Bella, what Ed tells is true paternity does not come with a guide
Bella is a very smart person, but very little receptive or observer, her actions are viewed by people who don't know and does not have to know her past, therefore, her attitude against others by judge it is inappropriate, after all everyone in the team love Esme,and wants to protect her
Her demand that all respected her, is necessary only because she is a woman, but not because she has suffered for being intelligent, or because their parents have sought to protect her, just because she is de baby.
The anger with her sisters because they have spoken with their partners about a man who left for her. is inappropriate, on her sisters eyes he is an asshole , also as they repeated it Carlisle does not have to comment his past and others do not have to know that something there is more.
Any family would be equally disgusted of the babygirl to continue any kind of relationship with a man at the required time do not supported her.
Now all they see it as a heroine, but do they do not see neither her note what she is doing place her on a pedestal she loathe been the victim. Demanding that all treated her with respect and consideration, something she doesn't do it for her self or for others.
Unless Izzy is a genius and also seen Bella more than 5 times in her life, which she professes love and permanent understanding and never forget it completely unrealistic for a 4 years child
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Any thought, any action and any word has consequences
but still love you, keep writing
Author's Response:
Ok, I can give you part of that. I'll agree that Charlie was right in not telling Bella about James obession with her when she was just a kid, but when he realized that James was not only the man who assaulted her in New York but is after her again, he should have told her EVERYTHING. Not just because he is her father either. As a law man, he knew that every detail was importnant.
As for Rose and Alice, they are wrong for talking about Bella's personal life to Emmett and Jasper, Period. I don't care if they don't like Carlisle. They violated Bella's trust in them. Bella, Rose, and Alice's relationship was already strained before Bella moved to Seallte. Bella has always felt like the black sheep of the family becasue, at least in her eyes, she didn't belong there. Now, I'm not saying that they meant to make her feel that way but they did.
I don't think it's wrong that she wants people to respect her. We all do. It's common courtsey not to call a person a whore or make comments about their personal life, especialy at work.
I don't think Rose and Alice, or Charlie, are wrong for not liking Carlisle. They are right. He left her and mistreated her when she needed him the most but it's between Bella and Carlisle, and they should at least trust Bella enough to let her be in charge of her own life since.
Izzy is too smart for her own good. She lives in a world of adults. She's been told about the monsters and she has seen Bella many times over her short life.
I hope you don't mind me arguing with you. I find it refreshing to be able to debate this with you. Thank you for reading, reviewing, and bantering with me:)
Date: 17 May 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 33
Sweet!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
I liked their reunion but I liked Edward and Bella's more. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
I was cheering as well. I was hoping you'd go that route and you did. Must be careful who you threaten...it may come back and bite you in the ass and it did! YAY!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks :)
Date: 16 May 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
They need to be brought up on charges not just arrested and let go when Bella cools off. I know, I know, I do hold grudges for a while. But, it is nothing more than what they deserve. After all what they didn't say caused Bella to be kidnapped and injured. Your Charlie and Renee will never have my forgiveness. That means you have done an excellent job in drawing me into your story. Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh yes I did a happy dance too when Charlie and Renee were arrested. Fuckers deserved it. I do think though that Bella needs to do some apologizing to her sisters fro not understanding what they went through in school. It works both ways. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 32
aww I loved that ending between the two of them. that was sweet. and yes it does serve Charlie and Renee right for doing what they did. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanky you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
WhAT??? Charlie is crazy pressing charges is not going to help win his daughters forgiveness...pure crazyiness. I like it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 May 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think the prick is pressing assault charges on Bella because ogf the restraining order and because she won't see. him I hope he rots in hell along with Renne. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
Assault charges?? Seriously?? On what grounds I'd like to know?? How about she file charges on interfering with an investigation, witholding information and/or just plain bad parenting or child abuse?? What nerve!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 May 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
wow great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 May 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
poor, poor, poor victim bella, what an asshat
evrething must go around her,
i really don't like her, she just think about her self, selfcentered
Any thought, any action and any word has consequences specialy bella's, she has never stop to think about their own
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks
Date: 15 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 May 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
i would make it even better and just beat his ass and make it worth getting thrown in jail ! i cant believe charlie is pressingcharges ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
lol, if you are going to do at least do it right, :) I promise you will like how Bella handles this.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
You made the correct choice. It's none of their business! You should have let Esme tear them new ones. Charlie is pressing charges against Bella, so what the hell is he and Renee doing at the hospital? Get the biggest, meanest looking hospital security guards to assist (kick his ass out of the hospital, literally) his expeditious exit from the hospital. They are in a Seattle hospital, correct? Charlie is the chief at Forks, correct? If I got that right, have the Seattle police department pick them up for violating the restraining order.
Author's Response:
Thank you. They are not in a Seattle Hospital. They are still in Forks. I promise that you are going to LOVE what I do to Charlie and Renee in the next chapter!!!
Date: 15 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
Charlie - what a jerk!
Author's Response:
Yeppers:)
Date: 15 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow, charlie is the bad guy but he totally deserved being punched. First I don't like how close Carlisle and Bella are. that's strange when she should be with Edward with that closeness. Second how she's treating her parents is weird too but I'll get over all that. this story is amazing and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 May 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Shame on Rose and Alice.
Author's Response: I know, right:)
Date: 14 May 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow a lot of emotion in this chapter. I fully understand why she doesn't want to see Charlie or Renee. Her sisters are another story. I hope she recovers and finally gets some happieness. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 14 May 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 May 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
i would want to kick my parents out from keepign that from me for almost all my life ! cant wait till the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
!!
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Thanks:)
Date: 14 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
aww Edward and Bella are too cute. i can't wait for more. thanks again bye
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Date: 14 May 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow great update post again soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
Excellent as always. Thanks for the little insight of Lora... and for not making Jessica a bitch.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
im happy she is awake! cant wait till the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
yeah she's awake! I for one am ecstatic. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
Esme is awesome! I love her. keep up the good work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
Gotta love Esme! Mental image of her punching Renee is priceless!
Author's Response:
lol, I do love her:) Thanks for the review:)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
Fantastic! Yay Esme!!! Thanks for giving us her story...it would be hard to see the man you love care so much for another and also for Bella to see the man she loved, marry another.
Renee and Charlie need to get out of Dodge and never come back. They lost the right to call themselves Bella's parents.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
I agree with you 100%. Esme is my hero. That nasty bitch Renee got what she deserved. I can feel a bit sorry fro her sisters because they seem to feel bad fro how they have treated her but her parents can rot in hell. Please update soon and keep up the great work. Awesome story. One of the best.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
I fucking love Esme!!! Way to go!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
lol, I do too! Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
GO ESME!!!! I love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 12 May 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter... love esmes pov glad she got a punch in and put rose and alice in there place
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
Go Esme! Mama Bear extrordinaire.
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hooray for Esme!
Author's Response:
lol, I cheered:)
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
What the heck is wrong with Charlie?!?! Does he have problem knowing his daughter is a better cop than he will ever be? Why did he abandon his son and for goodness sakes, why in the world was he not 100% honest and open about the tunnel, paternity and the cabin right up front? Does he realize the amount of danger he put his family in?
Anyway, no need for thanks for reviewing. The thanks should go to you for sharing this story with us!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying this one. It's one of my favorites:)
Date: 11 May 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yeah. They saved her. I would have punched Charlie in the face for being such a worthless dickhead. Awesome story. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
I wouldn't just be talking about bringing them up on charges, I'd escort them to his own jail. What jackasses! Keeping information to themselves knowing James is the one doing the killing. If your purpose was to get us bothered by the events over the last couple of chapters you've succeeded with this reader.
Author's Response:
Patients:) I'm not done with Charlie and Renee yet:)
Date: 11 May 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
aww poor Carlisle and even though Charlie sort of sucks, poor guy. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow twists at every turn. Can't believe how this story is turning out. Hope that James goes to jail.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)