Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOVED IT!!! Bring it on!! I really wanna see what's on his mind!!!
xx
Marianne
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think they are forgetting a very important person who is extremely pissed about all this! Mommy Renee!!!! She could have been bitching to a friend in a cafe or something and someone overheard her or as vindictive and bitchy as she seems could be trying to break Edward and Bella up so taht Bella is soo upset taht she decides to have an abortion because she doesnt want to have any reminders of Edward. Then Renee wouldn't have to deal with the fact her teenage daughter is living with a much older man and having a baby. Just my thoughts. hope RL settles down for you soon. Keep up the good work
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hope RL's getting better for ya:) Thnx for the update, and I can't wait to see who's behind all this 'backstabbing'??? I'll take a wild guess and think it may be her mom or one of her three friends; I hope it isn't Rose though coz' it'll def. break Em's heart... Anywho, til' next chappie...Take care!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
So glad your back!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
I have missed you a lot not only with this story. I am glad to see you posting again. I really love this story a lot and I am really happy to see you intend to finish it. Thank you so much for sharing with us all your wonderful writing. Hope that RL calms for you some. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so glad you are back I have missed this story! I wonder who slipped I can't wait to see how they crack the mystery!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
i love this story i wonder who is starting this
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so glad you posted again. I hope the find the idiot and quick.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am glad you updated. Great chapter!!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
loved the update can't wait for the next chapted to find out who spilled the beens
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter. Glad to see you back now please update soon.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so happy you are back I missed you. What is the reason for this kid to say that he was the father who is paying him???? I am thinking it is Renee.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad you're back!! Missed ya!!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hello
I'm french and i want you to know that i love your story. I hope my english is not so bad.
Edward is perfect and Emmett is the big brother i wish i had.
thank you and i can't wait for another chapter!!!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
lol horny, great chapter.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
well i hope its not who she thinks is breaking her trust! i cant wait to see who it was! i think it was alice since she likes to run her mouth!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
loved it very much update when you can thanks....
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Will either of them stop and consider her mother? She seems like the most obvious suspect. Anways good chapter, hope you update again soon.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter- please continue
Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
hi
hope everything is ok ... seems like ages since u last updated this fic
xoxo ety
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well I'm gonna say that I am not sure who would put Damon up to this. Who has an interest in breaking B&E except for tanya? If I go back and reread can will I find a clue? Great work by the way!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Nice!!!!!! I love your Charlie fucking telling Renee to shut the fuck up. I love it. I never have liked Renee. Something about her character just doesn't sit well with me. Cool beans how Eddie stood by her and took everything they dished.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
THat's funny I haven't done all the reviews but I just can't stop reading> I'm sorry. God you write some good stuff. Caveward wants that baby to hold Bella to him permanently. Aaawww- he's so cut.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, looks like dickward isn't so in love as he says. I wonder what our little Bella will get into with Damon. I feel bad for angela though. I hope she doesn't get caught in the crossfire.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think the investigation into Seth's drug use is a bit much-after all he didn't cause the accident. I agree with the community service, though.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh.My.God. I can't believe your readers are whining about updates and the length of the chapters. Fuck me- you need to tell them to stop cryin' like bitches and be thankful you update regularly at all. There are stories I have been PATIENTLY waiting ffor updates for almost a year now. I haven't said a peep to those writers because you know real life can be a bull sometimes. And sometimes you just need to tread softly. Jeez- what fucking prigs. I'm sorry that pisses me off. I am sorry that you had to even condone that with a response. And Edward is perfect the way he is-do not change him!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Edward he's such a bad boy. He needs to be spanked...hard. Please don't change him, but don't make him psychotic. =)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, he's super hot that way, but he's just gonna be possessive not crazy and violent, right? So I can't wait to see how he reacts to guys coming on to Bella in front of him. Ha, Ha! It's gonna be good. I really like this story.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
The lemon was great. Umm, but is Edward a little bit on the possesive side.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
omg love the story please update soon!!! i want to know what damons motive or whos putting him up to it!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter again.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
good first chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
I just read this entire story, and I love it! I think Edward should also consider the possibility that maybe Renee isthe one "manipulating" Damon just to split them up....just a thought. But anyways- love this story cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
great story!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
lol yeah I guessed it too but it still was interesting to read.. and it makes the whole story more fun..
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
hmmmm... yeah she better not be pregnant.. LOL skankya Love it..
Date: 10 Aug 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOL I love how you had to put in your notes what an STD means.. oh hell.. if they don't know they def. should not be reading this fic..
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
LOL Facebook!! ha ha ah ah
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOL loved the whole they should of been living in the 1800's LOL great line
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
god parents suck sometimes!! wonder what i will end up doing to my daughters lol
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
omg!!! chapters are fine in length and updates once a week are brilliant!!!!!
well done honey!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
and the scary thing is you can actually see that happening in real life..
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
umm hell that is hot..
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
surely he isnt going to tell emmett?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL this is great!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh yeah edward is hot
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
lol oh hell .... great story!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
holy hell.... possessive huh?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh interesting 1st chapter.....
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait to find out what hapens next..I love it when Edward gets all possessive!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another, great chapter....
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh god I can only imagine what Edward and Emmett will do to find out the truth. Not that I feel sorry for Damon one bit he has this coming to him. I love this Edward and cant get enough. Great job and cant wait for your next update.
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[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome chapter! I can't wait 'till the next one!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am glad that Edward had faith in Bella and believed her. I knew thatwhen Damon was introduced he was going to trouble. No Edward should not have hit him, but when you are protecting your love you don't think straight. As far as who is behind his outburst, I think it is Renee. I would say Tanya, but that would be to obvious. She is always the bad guy. I am excited to read the next chapter.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is a little creepy and possessive. I'll see where you take this.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
He he. Didn't see that coming.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok. Great lemon. Bordering on rape....and he's already claiming her as his. Very interesting!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey! I suck at reviewing a story already written, but I'll give it a try. I'm liking this so far
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Boy is he , ie. Edward in for a rude awakening.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, Edward was pissed. Good chapter.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
Dude, I love when those men get pissed off and take care of business. Can't wait to see what they do to that stupid piece of crap and his source of info!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
That kid need punched in the face for sure I wonder what Edward and Emmett are going to do to him. Is Tanya behind it???? I am glad he did not get pissed at Bella.
I am a foster parent also we have adopted 4 boys and we are in the prossess of adopting our little girl. I am doing respite this week for a 2 1/2 year old little boy that doesnt talk just grunts what fun.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I am so happy Edward believed Bella and defended both her and him. I wonder what they will do to Damon? Also, who leaked the info? Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh my god soo good write more:)))
Date: 22 Jul 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh yes I reall yloved this chapter. He deserved the punch. Now for her self rightous prick of a father to get one. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
Now my mind has been going back to who works at that hospital. LOL
This is so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it and can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
Congrats on the new (albeit temporary) addition to the family. Best of luck!
Excellent chapter! I can't believe Edward hit him! As much as he deserved it, Edward needs to watch his ass before he lands it in jail. Damon is probably a minor and Edward is most definately not. I hope he and Emmett come up with an evil way to get back at the little ass munch!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
OK i know it always seems like i am complaining but come on .. does Edward not know how old he is??? I mean first he sleeps with a underage girl, gets her pregnant lucky doesn't have to go to jail just has to marry her.. but now he goes to a high school and pushes a teenager.. u can't do that shit.. he should be in jail.. I don't want him in jail but come on u can not hit a 'child' when u are a adult he is what 25?? Damon is a lying sick piece of shit.. but u need to walk away and ignore that annoying piece of shit.. If he keeps this up he will miss the birth of his baby cuz he will be locked up.
Now on the bright side i am so glad that Edward didn't believe a word that came out of Damon's mouth....
I can't imagine who would have told Damon from the hospital unless
OMG Tanya listened at the door...... and Damon is her brother........
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Shotgun Charlie! Haha!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm glad that Edward believed Bella when she said that nothing was going on between her and Damon. I'm with Edward, though. Somebody had to put him up to claiming the baby was his and I'm wondering if he is in cahoots with someone from the hospital. All I gotta say is you gotta be stupid to go against Edward. I almost feel sorry for this Damon guy - NOT!!!! I wouldn't want to be on Edward's bad side.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think that's Renee behind the Damon lies...no?;-)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
I can't wait for a Damon beat down!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank goodness Edward is so smart! Of course it's an inside job...maybe Renee?? Nah, probably a nurse who has the hots for Edward or maybe an old friend who wants to swoop in and comfort Bella when Edward leaves and is paying Damon moola.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm thinking either her mom or Tanya put him up to it.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
awesome chappy and perfect drama level... can't wait. Oh yes back in highschool one of our teachers was a foster mom luckily she taught home ech and parenting so both classes it was fight over baby holiding rights time.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
*squeak* yay!! update ;))
who could it be?? Was it her aunt?? fuuuck this story is wonderful
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter can't wait to find out who is behind all this, keep up the good work!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
awesome as usual
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ten bucks says it is Renee that put Damon up to it.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wtf is Damon's problem!? Edward should've beat the shit out of him lol. He's crazy if he thinks Bella will ever be with him... poor guy. I loved it.
Update soon! :)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hey, I'm going to try my best to leave a review each chapter from now on, to help your noble cause! I love it when Edward gets all hotheaded... sigh. He is so hot the way you write him, completely believable though, which is a testament to your writing becuase he really does give Bella shit!
Can't wait until next chapter and good luck with the new foster child!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Im glad Edward knew he was lying...you know how men are!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well I will add to the total here! Love the story as always adn look forward to seeing where this is going to go from here.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow...Damon's not the brightest crayon in the box. Why would someone from the hospital leak that Bella's pregnant? I mean, I know that Bella's known as a good girl but why would that be such a big deal? Small town thing, I guess. Good chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hmmm, maybe it was Tanya? Hmmm.....
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
really thought Ed was going to freak out on her
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
wicked awesome yo
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
oops Edward shouldn't have punched him. he's still a minor so that's not good. i love the work you're doing. keep it up. thanks again bye. p.s. great thing you're doing at being a foster parent. :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
loved it very much and I so can't wait to see what will happen. I have a very strange feeling that Edward will be in jail for murder by the end of this story update when you can thanks.....
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Who is the idiot that is messing with Edward and Bella? I can't wait to find out. I am glad that Edward never thought twice about calling this guy out. He didn't fall for the lie once. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Could it be her partents trying to run him off? update soon