Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is Tanya behind it? This just gets better and better.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
HOLY SHIT u gotta give me more!!! im jonesin!!! lol
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Funny :-) But if Edward thinks that this could be true he really is an ass.
Nice chapter, thanks for writing.
Thanks also for your reading recommendations, "TUOEM" is really great, i read it since a while, but I will also check out the others when I have time.
What do you think of "Emancipation Proclamation" by Karizzmatik, I am so addicted to this story I can´t believe it myself.
And from your own interpretation of Edward you must also like "master of the universe" by snowqueens icedragon, don´t you?
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
First of all: Good to hear that your father is on his way to get better (or is completely healthy by now, I don´t know)
Second: I really liked this chapter, I am not even shocked about the marrying thing, I expected it since you let her be become pregnant, so stay on your way, I will follow you :-)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter, although it was a little bit tragic, there were some really funny parts in it, and I have to admit, that I understand her mother. What she says is not very nice, but I can understand her completely. And if I would be B father, I would also want to kill Edward, I mean he is 25 and B´s parents did not even know that they are together. They got the hole story in about what - 3 Minutes?
If they come over their shock and do the right thing, who can blame them for their first reaction?
Do you have first hand experience in this case? The hole chapter seemed so realistic?
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Just wanted to say, of course it´s your choice, do whatever you want with your characters. Let dem die, let them get pregnant..... but you also have to understand that some of us don´t like the idea.
I like your story though I am not happy with this pregnancy part.
And I will continue reading.
I am still impressed how you do it, your RL seems quite stressy.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
No sorry, I had no idea, maybe I am quite naive about teenager pregnancy and all this stuff. but I don´t like the idea at all, I never liked this reneesme idea.
Sorry just my opinion
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Real or not, abuse isn't my thing. I'm all for D/s-esque stories and relationships, but not when one of the parties have no say - which Bella clearly doesn't. Whether she's "willing" or not, Edward's taking, he's not asking and that's where the problem is.
Author's Response:
I have one question, you clearly have problems with my story, you must not like it so why read it if it bothers you so much?
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really? This Edward seems like a creep. Any 25 year old man knowingly wanting to pop a 17 year olds cherry is dirty, and "demanding" more from her when she said no is called coercing - AKA sexual harrasment. And even IF he didn't scare her into doing more, dirty talk for her first time? Real classy. It'd be different if before everything, he thought she was 21, and found out later - and maybe had some redeming qualities. But this has no appeal to me, sorry.
Author's Response:
You are entitled to your opinion as I am mine. One thing to remember is this is Fiction...not real. just saying.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just wanted to say that for me it´s absolutely not OK to criticize the speed you write your story. I do not want to offend anybody but in my opinion the story you give us is a present. You have noobligation, thank you for it. Sometimes I have my problems with your characters, but although I don´t like all characters personally I really like your story and I am quite attached to it.
Thanks for writing
( I hope I got this right although as you notice I am not native)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward and Emmett are overprotective assholes, also the fact that you put the girls into an accident cannot change this fact.
Sorry just my opinion
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really think, this guy is creepy!!! I start to wonder if this could be something you personally want and expect in arelationship.
But although I am not the biggest fan of fucktard I cant stop reading
Author's Response:
This story has nothing to do with my personal expectations in a relationship.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Fuck u Damon. LOL
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
ohhhhh hell no!! Damon jumped the cazy train
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
whoa!! hot... guess there's gonna be a wedding!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
even tho im late and u have already reached way past ur goal, im still gunna review!!! anyways, first if all: OMFG! And I mean, I can forget about how Damon was a lieng asshole becuz all i noticed was Edward and his possesive ways. my my my, he his amzing when he is defending bella
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Woooooooow...and yes, you are EVIL!!! Yeah i like it, that was great!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
WTF is Damon's problem. How the hell does he know about the baby? Edward is going to go ape-shit on him! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon :)
And btw I LOVE the banner for this story. I know it's kinda random...but I really like it
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yay! Bella actually wants to marry Edward! I can't wait for the wedding! I wonder if Emmett heard them over the music...
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
I never really understood why Bella didn't want to marry Edward in New Moon and Eclipse. I would've screamed HELL YES before Edward could even finish proposing!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. All I have to say is I'm so glad I didn't get pregnant young. I can't believe Charlie tried to strangle Edward! I hope Bella's okay.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope Bella's dad doesn't hurt Edward too badly.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I... I don't know what to type. I didn't see THAT coming. Emmett is going to go ape-shit. It's nice to know that Edward isn't upset. My boyfriend would go crazy if I was accidentally pregnant. He loves me and all... but we both wanna finish school and get married before we even THINK about having kids.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe Tanya tried to "taste" Bella! That's fucking disgusting! Tanya's a fucking cooter-licker!
Author's Response:
Well my dear I'm knee deep in Explosive Encounters new chapter but I just had to respond to this review. I laughed. A much needed laugh this evening. Cooter-licker, indeed! Thanks for that and thanks for being so excellent in reviewing. Thank you :)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe Edward is Tanya's "friend"! Ugh, I hate her. I couldn't have been Bella because I would've jumped some guy's bones just to make Edward feel the hurt I felt.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG I hope Tanya isn't pregnant! That would fuck everything up!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
I can tell that Damon is bad news. He better watch out or Edward will wind up kicking his ass lol
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
I hope he hits him....
~Tiffany
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is a genius! Rose and Em are going to have sooooo much fun! I feel bad about Alice not being able to join the party :(
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
If I was grounded, I would've snuck out and did whatever I wanted to do anyway lol. But, old habits die hard.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
My mom has slapped me before. I kinda deserved it though... I called her a bitch. And I've disappointed my parents... many times. I would love to be Bella right now, to have my daddy yell at me for doing something completely stupid. He died a couple years ago... in my eyes she's sooooo lucky.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hah! You gotta love Emmett and Edward :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yeah can't believe that just happened. What an ass wipe, if Edward even questions her I'll kill him. He should know her better then that. Also where is all this coming from? I mean I thought D had a little crush on her but to just out right be an ass? Wow, can't wait ti see what happens next
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
drama drama drama i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no, what is that fool up too? I hope Edward keeps his cool!!! Another Great chapter, thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent… I look forward to it every weekend….. Wendy
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG I can't believe Emmett figured it out! Lmfao... I don't blame him for taking a swing at Edward. If my grown-ass-man best friend were dating MY little sister behind my back, I would've beat the shit out of him.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit! I didn't see that coming at all!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awwwwww the ending of this chapter was so sweet! Loved it!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
My boyfriend is out of town for a whole week and this is sooooooo not helping! Ugh!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder what Emmett and Rose will do now that they're all alone?. Oooo la la
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder what Edward wants to talk to Emmett about? Not him and Bella, right? He's not completely stupid!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my sweet baby Jesus! I loved EPOV! The way he thinks of Bella as "my woman". Did I mention that I LOVE my men to dominate me? If I was Bella I would've been screaming that I was his lol.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuck. I have to admit that I was kind of like Bella when I was a teen. But, when I "let lose", I was 17 and my guy was 23. He lived about two blocks away from me, and I always used to sneak and go over his house. Let's just say that didn't work out. When my parents found out about him, they went ape-shit.
And I do LOVE a guy who can put ME in my place! I love dominate, possessive Edward!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett is Bella's older brother... yay!!!!!!! I always wanted an older brother like Emmett. But what do I get? An annoying ass little sister. *sigh* As for Edward being Emmett's business partner... oh shit!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved how Bella thought he wasn't going to fit lmao! And as for the lemon... I'm hot now! I wonder how the other girls' night went.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooooo, this story sounds good! I can't believe Roalie is a virgin! Usually she never is lol
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
He cant be telling the truth, but why would he lie?? I guess its about to hit the fan.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good chapter, bur what the hell is Damon problem? Is he mental??
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
AAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well that would just be idiotic to believe... I mean it happened while she was on the medication after her accident. If I remeber correctly Edward and Bella were together almost every single moment during her recovery. Edward would have to be an asshat to give into Damon's creepy childish behavior.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
WTF!!!!! Why is he saying that shit!!! OMG
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's all from fucking Tamya itsn't it???!?!?...Damon is her cousin or something and he was sent there to fuck things up....or she paid him to act like that!!!...sluts I tell you!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
What a creap Damon turned out to be! I wonder what his deal is. Can't wait for an update!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
You've got to be fucking kidding me!!!! What a bloody jerk!!! I really wanna kill him!!! Two words: Sharks hungry!!! Who the fuck did he know???
I do love you though you evil one! ;) You know me....!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
Aww hell! Its going down now Huh?!! Damn I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope to read it soon :)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow! great chapter. i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
Sprry to hear about your Dad-hope everythings ok. I don't think we ever stop being Daddy's girl no matter the age. I think the introducation of the pregnancy in this story is great-it's sadly realistic and intense. I hope there's no abortion though.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
omg i hope edward doesnt believe him
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
GOD he is soo annoying. Please tell me Edward doesn't believe that CRAP? that's all it was was crap. I can't believe him and how does he know she's pregnant? God all these questions and we might have to get maury Povich involved. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
Is this guy crazy? I think Edward and Emmett need to have a heart to heart with him.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
WTF, seriously what the hell is going on with Damon, where the hell did that come from!!!!
This doesn't look good Edward is either going to go off on Damon or Bella, and with damn good reason
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
Did I miss something, when did Bella have sex with Damon?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG! Why is Damon saying all these things? Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Bella!! Now as possesive as Edward is, she is in for hell! Cant wait till the next one!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
dude!!!! u r so fraking eveil 4 tht. y!?!?! but it was awesome nuntheless
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay so how many of you think that Tanya somehow has gotten to Damon and put him up to this.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
holly shit what kind of shit is D trying to pull.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Damn nice twist!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow just wow, I just started reading this story, and I am loving it so for......Love me some demanding sexy Edward ...Yum
B
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG! Damon is such a BASTARD! Can I please kick him in the nuts with my heels? Please? Amazing job! I cannot wait to see what Bella and Edward are having, a boy or girl :) Amazing, simply amazing!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wait I don't remember did she have sex with Damon? I need to go back and read! Good chapter!!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
That`s a mean chapter. Why does Damon think he`s the father of the baby?
Please do not let us wait too much!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great job!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
hope you update soon, i love your story, Damon is suck a *****
Date: 10 Jul 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
excelent cliffie and chappy
Date: 10 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Damon's fucking nuts... but let's see if Edward takes the bait and blames Bella somehow. He is quick to pull the trigger after all.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Alright, Edward needs to do what he does best and wipe the floor with this Damon guy. Personally, I'm surprised Edward put up with him for this long. It is so obvious that he is lying, and if he ever thought he might have had any kind of chance with Bella, he sure blew that!!!! I really don't understand what he's trying to accomplish by all this.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow that was totally out of no where. great update though...drama drama as ever. can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
Did not see that coming!!!!! Update soon please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
WTF?!?! Who the hell is this Damon? I gotta go back & reread!
How the hell does Damon know Bella is pregnant & where does he get spewing this shit? Someone must have been at the hospital or been talking about them for Damon to do this. Hope it wasn't Renee. Who has the hots for Edward that wants to break them up?
You gotta update soon.... This is killing me & you don't want to make my child an orphan do you? ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy shit!!! Please tell me that Damon is totally lying about everything?!? And how the hell does he know about the baby? Ugh! The chapter started out so happy and light...now I just want to beat the hell out of Damon on Bella's behalf.
Oh, I have started posting a story of my own on here. It is called "Use Somebody". I would love for you to check it out and tell me what you think. :)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really? Hm, you learn something new every day. Thanks for the info! I'll discuss it with my OB.
Author's Response:
Yes, let me know! Hopefully the information I found online was not incorrect...are you expecting?
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh wow that is quite the story that Dammon has come up with!! I just hope that her firends and her and Edward can move on from this and start planning for their wedding and the baby.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love your story so far. But I have to point out that at only 11 weeks pregnant, there is no way to tell the gender of the baby via ultrasound.
Author's Response:
Normally, I would have had to agree with you but I did some research and it is possible. :) Not in every case can they tell but I decided in this case they can ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome chapter! i cant believe Damon did all that and lied to Edward!
cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Your were right to tell us to pull up our jaws. Awsome, can't get any better. OMG, drama. The guy is a class A nut case. E should go back and whip his A*S. Hurry with next chapter, PLEASE.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
well that man is a devil dressed as a BOY, he is born for making trouble- poor Bella- edward was sorta on edge before now what will happen
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh My God!!!!!! Update soon, PLEASE!?!?!?!?!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
dum, dum dum, poor bella she's just getting screwed everywhere! I love this story, Can't wait for your next update!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
FML right there! this was a great chapter and i love this story. Continue on please!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Can i kill him please? a86; pretty please...
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG, that was a great chapter. Please update soon.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
OH... I just don't understand! You are incredible! I no way saw that coming. So is he just a chronic liar or something more serious in his head? Hmm... Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
i can't believe damon, edward better not believe it...
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow speachless
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
Where the hell did this boy come from and who put him up to saying all this crap? We all know that Edward is Bella's first and only which leads me to believe that someone has told Damon to do what he is doing to sabotage their relationship...maybe, idk.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Why would he lie like that update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
WOW! I really didn't see that coming but I love it. You just never fail to impress me with your obvious gift for writing.