Date: 05 Jul 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
Okay first let me say i love your story, but i feel that bella needs to take some resposibilty for her actions. She keeps blaming her prgnancy on her mother. Now dont get me wrong she should have been told about the antibiotics but at the same time she should have not been screwing birth control is 99% effective so you still have a small chance of getting pregnant, it rare but it happens. I just got sick of hearing "if it wasnt for my mother" This is just my opinion though. Cant wait for an update.:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love the complications it keeps things so interesting! I still absolutely adore caveward Edward but Damon sounds like a really hot complication!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
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Date: 02 Jul 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whats the name of your other story? I'm fairly new to this site and keep having problems with what should be simple things like adding a story or author to a favorites list. Of course I've tried to add this story to my favorites list but don't know if it made it or not! I'm really embarressed to be so challenged when it comes to technology! My e-mail is dugan_r@yahoo.com.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I've yet to read a chapter that disappoints me. Your sense of drama is great.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
I guess I'm lucky since I found this story late therefore I'm catching up on the story and not having to wait for updates at this time but even if I was waiting it would be worth the wait. Your a really talented writer and I being a mother myself and working full-time can't imagine how you find the time to bring a story to life like this but however you do it I'm just grateful that you do!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Liked it? I loved it! I'm so grateful your maintaining the initial characterization of Edward as dominant and controlling! I swear this story has everything-romance, intrigue, and hot sex.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm not sure you got my last review-my computer keeps screwing-up. I officially crowned you the queen of lemons after I could form a complete thought that is. I loved this chpater to. The drama is great. You really are an excellent writer.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Uh it took me a few minutes to gather my decent thoughts before I could review. WOW! I officially crown you the queen of all lemons.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
I so love that your not planning on turning Edward into a wus. So many stories start out with a badass Edward who turns into choirboy after a few chapters!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love you! It seems that everyone turns a dominant Edward into acomplete wus after a few chapters and I hate that! I love this chapter from Edwards POV.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG! He is my absolute fantasy man. Oh and as good as the first lemon was the second was even better!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is great and a love a controlling dominant Edward! The age factor makes it even better.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved that. You really know how to write a lemon-that was totally hot and erotic. Some so called lemons come across as just unrealistic and stupid but yours certainly was not. I 'm loving the premise of this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Shotgun wedding here they come. lol What about Edwards parents? Good chapter.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Im kinda surprised with this Charlie and Renee...Renee I wanna smack...Charlie i just am not sure what hes thinking sometimes...I wouldnt have thought he would have pushed so hard for them to get married...
~Tiffany
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't believe they're getting married!! Can't wait to read more please update soon! ;) -xoxo!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
Shot gun wedding lol. I think he is going to be caveward tripple I can see Bella needing to put him in his place.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am so glad to see you back! I have missed your writing. I loved this chapter.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, so they are going to get married. It will be hard, but I am sure these two can make it. I didn't really think Charlie would be happy, but I didn't see him playing the card he did either. Great job....thanks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Damn that was hot! Love your story...and I hope all is well!!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved it!! It was great and I think sth is in order to put Charlie back in order... Rape?! is he fucking kidding me?!!
The Lemon was HOT!
xoxo
MArianne
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow...love this dominant Edward! He knows what he wants & isn't afraid to say what he means. It's a very sexy trait!
Hope it's not too angsty...I know the age difference may be an issue but I think the should be happy...for now!
Great job.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
great...i cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE LOVE LOVE the chapter ^^
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well I think that things are about to get very interesting.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was incredible! I love it so much! I cannot believe Charlie and Renee! I mean I am a Christian too, but just because someone gets pregnant out of wedlock does NOT mean they should marry their baby's father. Anyway, amazing job, once again! I hope your hubby relaxes so you can write more :)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
loved the chappy did the happy dance when i saw it in my inbox :) a little over a week till eclipse....gotta wait till sunday after opening to see it though I work nights ugggghhhhhh and fiance' wants to see it with me. (i think he's a secret Rob fan girl all the "i love his music" and "he's a great actor" with out the girly "he's sooooo cutee" that i do lol)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
aww lovely make up sex. lol I loved it. and as long as you update within the year, lol I don't care how long you take. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella and Edward will be better off without her mom. Charlie will come around.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
As always the story is wonderful. I think Edward is very protective and it seems that there is something on the horizon!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
As usual love the chapter....hope everything gets better for you real soon....
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Brilliant chapter!! Bella is a bold girl!! Love them!!
Good story choices I am reading two of those!! Like a moth to a flame and university of Edward masen. Love them!!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
i pity anyone that trys to get in edwards way of trying to be with bella
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
I understand RL gets in the way. It was worth the wait though. Wow, Charlie was so demanding. I am not sure how I feel though about getting married after just a few months. But, what a way to do it! I mean, it is Edward after all.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved the update! Very HOT!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
So I guess since Edward said it...the angst is coming. Wonder what it will be? Great chapter and thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
that update just made my day :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
hay right there with you on the mobward thing he is my crack and can't get enough of that story and your is right up there also something about edward + dirty mouth = fuckhot story update when you can so can't wait.....
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
I don't know.........this story sure took turns i wasn't expecting.... i truly loved this story when it first started... now it's just almost tragic.. she gets pregnant with a baby she didn't want and now she is being forced to be married at the age of 17 with a guy who she has only been with for 3 months.....
I am not trying to be mean it's just how can i be excited for her at all her life isn't her own anymore..... and her parents are controlling idiots and it's a bunch of bull. Like she said shot gun wedding or Edward goes to prison...this is turning out to be a sad story and i feel very bad for Bella..... teen pregnancy is hard and now forcing her to marry before or right after graduation..... gee wonderful life .... So sad,
I loved when there was no baby and Edward was jealous and she wasn't sure what she wanted .... and there was that other boy who was interested in her (Damon) and Edward was controlling and sex was wild and crazy ...
Author's Response:
Thank you for your honest opinion. I understand that stories are not always for everyone. The baby was a definite surprise to Bella and now the marriage but she wants to marry him, even though it is before she would have considered it.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
So, little Bella is getting married? I hope she comes up with some seriously extravagant plans because Charlie so deserves to get hit in the bank account for pulling that stunt. If I were Bella, I would make them pay for it and then ban them from the wedding. I know, I am evil like that. ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
i am so happy he will not b changing and that is what will make ur story great!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
i lllloooovvvveeee this edward just found this story and i am hooked
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
Talking about shotgun, LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
First of all I love your chapters. Second I feel good for you that your readers are beating you up for more. Third my hats off to you with your busy scheduled. Fourth I like the chapters sizes as they are (not that my opinion counts) and lastly when you release another chapter is ok by me. LOL!! That being said when are you going to release another chapters, this story is awesome.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
lol!! poor bella all these life changes.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
forced in to a shotgun wedding!!!! Ha,ha,ha........ :)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
yayyy, an update! i am so happy u r back and that everything is ok with your father.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
And another decision made by other for her : a wedding. First Irina rectified the situation by asking Bella what SHE wants. Than her father took anotherthing out of her decision. She is young but not incompetent : she knows how to take a decision and what she wants to do with her life ! Hello she is going to be a mother : it's time they let her act as a grown-up... as they allways have before !
You really know how to make us feel her emotional state. It's a great skill. I can't wait to read more about this last ultimatum! Please write fast! LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow! Go Charlie! Let's see how that pans out. I am glad Irina told her sister off Bella needs all the support she can get and Renee does need to grow up and start acting like a parent instead of a carefree young woman which she is not .
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the chapter! I can imagine Bella's face when Emmet tells them that the should marry and it's actually scary!!
I am very glad that your dad is going better! I wish everything ends well
xoxo
marianne
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love love love it :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
That she is alot of drama.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
:0 lol this is good.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love your story! GREAT chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow, I wonder what Bella will say to that? Amazing job, once again! I am glad Bella is keeping the baby and is staying with Emmett and Edward. Staying with them is MUCH better than staying with Renee, who is a selfish brat (even though she is a mother, she doesn't act like it now). Cannot wait for more. So glad to hear that your dad is doing better, will continue to pray for him :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella may just lose it now she is not ready for marriage and I think Edward only wants that for possesive reasons loved it update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope your father is getting better. Will pray. Thank you for writing.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm right there with Bella. that poor couple. just got through with saying how they can make their own decisions and then Charlie goes and does that. :) poor things. I can't wait till Bella's pregnancy hormones kick in. the lemons will be back! lol love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
OH no...Its a good thing she didnt hear that while in the hospital...she'd have really flipped out!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh please, edward would marry immediately even if she weren't pregnant. Bella is the stubborn one.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hmm figured it was just stress.. figured nothing was wrong with baby.. nice force her to keep baby now force her to marry a guy she has been with for what 5 months if that.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ok so They might as well get married I mean they love eachother so whats the problem. It's not like they are being forced to love eachother they already do. I guess I would be mad if it was a requirment given to me but I figured they would be thinking that way any how. Anyways great chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Marriages born out of an unexpected pregnancy always work out so well. So, when's the shotgun wedding going to take place?
Lovin' Irina.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful as always. I love these characters. I am glad that your father is doing better but will def keep him in my thoughts.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well, it looked like Edward got knocked down a few pegs from Aunt Irina. He really does need to lighten up a little bit, especially now that Bella is pregnant. The stress isn't good for her or the baby.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Will continue to pray for your father. RL happene. take care and keep the faith. :)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
oooooooooooo so dramatic i likey but me no likey the cliff hanger :(
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
My opinion is to disregard the negativity. It's great that people are seriously interested in your story and are chomping at the bit to get more, but RL sometimes...sucks ass and it's better to wait for a quality chapter than hurry through to appease someone else. A short chapter isn't a bad chapter. If quality was measured by length, there would be no such thing as poetry. Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad to hear your father is doing better... Thanks again for another great chapter, I love this story can't wait for more....
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oo can't wait for more. Great job!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Okay, I defintely was not expecting that last part, lol!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward probably wants to marry Bella. He doesn't need anyone to force him.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love Aunt Irina. She really took all the bulls by the horns in this situation. Thank God someone has Bella's back.
Why am I not surprised that Charlie pulled the marriage card? Actually, I am a little surprised that Edward didn't pull it first. LOL. ;)
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
Uh oh, do I see a shotgun wedding in the near future? LOL Thanks for the great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lord I would not be complaining to marry that sexy ass man!!! Bring him on!!! Anyway, loved it.. cant wait till the next one!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Amazing! Loved it!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow! She has a lot on her plate!! Go Aunt Irina!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
I was wondering if it was going to be a shotgun wedding LOL. Renee is very selfish isnt she I love Irina. Edward what a way to talk to his mother in law to be should be fun around the holidays LOL.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lol at the last line.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wonder if Bella wants to get married!?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
First off, I'm glad your Dad is recovering. I'm in my mid 40's and lost my Dad 4 years ago. Up until his last breath, I was still "Daddy's Girl" so I get it.
I loved this chapter! It is funny how many people make the age difference such a big deal. I could understand if this was child slavery, non consensual, kidnapping or something like that but it's not. They met and fell in love. In 5-10 years from now, the 8 year age difference will not mean a thing. Sure, it may have been better if she had graduated from high school first, but she didn't, they met and if their feelings are to be believed, then it's fate.
Love Aunt Irina's comment about not having children since she was too busy raising Renee's and as for Charlie's edict??? Well, all I can say is I would marry Edward in a heartbeat; child or no child!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
YAY your back! Glad your Dad is doing better. Gosh I missed this story so much I re-read the whoel thing thus far the other night. I am excited to see where this is going from here. :) I <3 Ripple Effect.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
ha thats great !!! wouldnt of thought to make her marry edward ! that made me laugh ! jsut another thing to make renee mad about ! cant wait till the next chatper