wow i love aunt irina that was awesome loved it

Caveward is always sexy! :)

E's pov is hot as hell! :)

WOW!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!

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Her mother is more concerned with herself instead of her daughter.

Good chapter.

Yeah, I think Tanya isup to no good.

Damon sounds like he could add some fun to the mix, yummy.

Good chapter.

Good chapter. Take as long as you need to update, we all have a RL that needs to come first. I also agree with you, if you dont like Edward this way then read a different story.  Edward doesnt always have to be so straight laced, I like my Edward many different ways. LOL

Now he wants to worry.

Glad to see Edward can take a little bossing around himself.

Of course Em is going to take Rose on and help her.

Good tohear Edwards thoughts.

LOL, that funny, Edward is Emmetts friend.

Seems interesting.

WOW!!! Great chapter.

Of course telling the parents was not going to be easy.  Renee was very selfish.  Charlie did start to comfort Bella.  He at least was listening to Bella and letting her talk. 

My favorite quote was from Emmett...Edward, you’re sure you don’t want to go back and get a helmet?”...I couldn't help but laugh!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

I am sorry to hear about your Dad!  I hope he is doing better.  You are in my thoughts and prayers.

I hate f*ing Renee!

So sorry to hear about your dad plz take are of you father first which is more important. 

Great chapter as always - so hope everything is ok with your dad x 

Sorry to hear about your dad! It's never easy to worry about your parents, I know first hand..... Loved the chapter. Renee is a nut job!!! Update when you can but family is more important than any story no matter how good it is!!! :)

well at least that's done........but i will say i have a BIG problem with this.......yes Bella may only be 17 years old but i am so sick of everyone telling her she CAN NOT have a aboration......it's up to her ......it should be her decison and she and Edward should be able to talk about it.....i am so sick of all of them including Edward telling her no............she is only 17 she has got her  whole life ahead  of her and they have already all decided she will keep the baby and raise it and that 's bullshit what if not a aboration but adoptation.........nope they won't even let her discuss that i bet.....why (except for Edward)it's her life her baby and her future.......now what the hell is Renee's damage why is she like that with her daughter don't understand that and i can kind of see her point with the antibotic...i mean she was only trying to help i'm  sure if she has any knowledge at all Bella was having sex she wouldn't  have done that........Now as far as the dizzy and fainting sure it's nothing so i am not even worried  ... Pregnant chicks faint.. due to stress or just being pregnant........(although it would be better if she wasn't pregnant but not my story.)......

So sorry about your dad, been  there done that......it's scary and horrible...

Excellent chapter!!!   Renee, though, has got to be the stupidest mother on the planet.   I loved Bella laying into her about slipping her the pills.   And her defense of Edward - perfect.  

Her mother is an amazing bitch soooo selfish it's unbeliviable ! Her father's reaction is a little more understable... So much action that she fainted !!LOL

I hope your father recovers well and soon... Take care.

I loved it!! Even though this time I can't choose a fav quote I found hilarious the jock thing!!

xoxo

Marianne

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Well hopefully the baby survives all of this! I am glad that Emmett stepped in and supported both Edward and Bella in this.

Your family must always come first over a story, so i do hope your dad gets well soon.  Yeh i know the feeling being in the 30's and still a daddy's girl.  I lost my dad when i was 32(result of a my dad being 48 when i was born) and the pain was unbearable, i see cry when i look at his photo, i recently lost my mum so now both my parents are together as they always should be. 

Back to your story, i really want punch Renee myself, Charlies reaction makes me laugh, as does Edward wearing a jock.  Loved it though.

Excellent chapter!  I was surprised that Edward stayed hidden for as long as he did with Charlie and Renee having the reaction to the news.

Honestly, my favorite line was a pretty simple one, but I could totally hear it in my mind and that was when Charlie said, “EDWARD CULLEN, GET THE FUCK IN HERE RIGHT NOW!” .  Classic dad line and it left it wide open for whatever he decided to do next.

I also loved the house sitting story. LOL.  I need to tell that to my hubby.

PS.  I hope your dad gets better.  It is never easy to be in that situation, so I wish you and your family all the best.

Great job!

I am a forty something women with 5 kids and I am still a daddys gill also.  My favorite line is you can beat me threaten me or hate me.  That pretty much covers it.  OMG what is going on please not the baby.

Thoughts are with you, be safe while traveling and see you next chapter

~Tiffany

MY favortie line would be "my brother, my hero" that says it all loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks...and my prayes are with you and your father  Family first always

god I've always hated Renee is this story just proves I was right. poor thing. I was freaking out when Edward was being choked but was sooo glad that Emmett saved him. keep up the great work and give my get well wishes to our dad. I hope he gets better soon. thanks again bye

Love the chapter and Charlie and Reene's reactions were priceless.  I hope your dad gets better take all the time off you need because family and real life is more important than anything else!!

Love the story. Favquote: Now tell me who the hell the father is or I'm going door to fucking door."

Do worry about your time line. From one daddy's girl to another, go do what you gotta do. I know I did. We'll be here when you get back. I'll have you and your dad in my prayers.

Great story! I can't wait for more!

So I just finished reading your story it was sooooo good I could not stop to wright review ( that's my story;-) I LOVE IT !!!!!! Don't change Edward I love him all cavemanish ......  Keep up the great work and thank you ..... Wendy

PS I promise to review all new chapters from now on!!!

It makes sense for the story. Don't let people bother you with their opinions. We just have to state them. Did they ever exaplain to Emmett why it was their mother's fault or is it going to be in the next chapter?

Are you against abortion or is it just to place the domineering Men make this decision to have a baby? I love your story and will continue as long as you don't stop writing some lemons ! LOL

DUN DUN DUN!! :)

UH-OH, BAD NEWS?

Love it!  Can't wait to see what's next!

SNEAKY TEENAGERS, I REMEMBER IT, BUT DREAD MY DAUGHTER GETTING THERE.

I thought this was a grreat chapter!  The reactions were priceless and so true to life like what would really happen. 

Glad to see they're going to tell Renee and Charlie.  I think they should start off with, "Renee, was there anything "extra" in the smoothies you insisted I drink for the past 2 weeks", or " Renee, is there something you'd like to tell me about the food you've been preparing for me?"

Honesly, this is Renee's fault.  If she had been honest about the antibiotics, the unwanted pregnancy may bave been avoided.

Sorry this story may be delayed but I hope you can get back to it soon...I can't wait to see the parental reactions!!

i love it that was the reaction i was expecting from emmett

I hope that Edward doesnt get into too much more trouble...it was more Renee's fault anyway....lol

~Tiffany

dward is gonna have to straighten up a bit to keep bella from running  away and into accidents

wow- i dig that b got control for a bit