Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:48 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
I'm glad Angela is leaving town! I think Phil can't really get that much time unless daughters of women he was in previous relationships with step forward and a pattern of abuse or attempted abuse is established.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:22 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
I can't believe Angela would just show up at the party like that and then would assert herself so much. Take the hint, woman! I'm looking forward to the fallout.
Bella passing out during sex was classic! Edward did want her drunk and that's what happens sometimes...
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:17 AM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
there's going to be some sort of massive fight, i bet but will bellas mum make it to the wedding day?
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:14 AM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy
blimy jasper seriously a very bad move
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:51 AM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
poor alice she just wants to get married, edward and bella getting married in a few short weeks
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
that was cool for two people experimenting, liked it
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:54 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy
oh my god what a present i dont think he was expecting that, what will he do?
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
love the putdown the party was a complete sucess yipee, bella on wine not like her ummmm
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything
So much going on in this chapter! I like how you brought in Angela and the idea that Edward was in love once before Bella. Angela seems she has something to explain to Edward about how they left things and that's got me thinking all kinds of possibilities.
Bella getting over the alcohol ban is good, especially because it was so excessive. Of course, there will still be issues, possibly where she mishandles her consumption or a third party adds something to the mix. College parties can be dangerous places and if Bella takes a drink from the wrong person, well, that could be very bad.
The anal sex conversation was awesome. I loved how Bella explained why she would like to do Edward and that he's actually considering it. Of course they both could start slowly as this sort of thing takes some practice. Maybe Bella could add a finger during a blow job. That could be explosive head and just the kind of convincing Edward needs.
Rose and Em are having a baby. Totally saw this coming but it was still sweet. I really liked Esme's protectiveness over Bella after Mrs. Hale left.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality
It's gotta be Jane, right?
Love the sex and looking forward to anal talk over dinner. I'm also looking forward to how Alice and Jasper hide their marriage from Esme.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:28 PM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
Oh come on, they didn't miss that much of the reception! They danced with everyone, ate and did the speeches. The other stuff should have been done earlier, that's all. The sex was great, obviously, as was the various teasing moments.
I like what happened with Alice and Jasper. Esme is going to flip out!!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:12 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
charlie and sue are cool i love how playful bella and edward are together great stuff
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
something tells me this isnt the last we have seen of jane, other than that life is good and lovin the lemons
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:14 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
great start to the sequel, edward drinking nothing good ever comes of too much alcohol, but they seem so happy now,
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:12 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Ok, so you say chapter 25 is not drama filled; then I am totally hoping that it will be Bella & Edward finding out that she is PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't want to have to wait all the way until she graduates from college, jeesh....she just started college, that will be too long of a wait!!
I totally want them to get pregnant right away...and I want their first child to be a boy...a little Edward junior!!!! Ok....pretty please with cherries on top!!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:29 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
WTF....are you kidding me..."until I leave you with a bitch of a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 25"....that is just plain CRUEL!!!!!!!
You are seriously killing me here with that author note...I think I would have preferred that you didn't even warn us...so now I am stuck worrying about your bitch of a cliffhanger...and all I have to say is that if you are going to be mean like that then you at least better post the first chapter of the next installment very damn close to that cliffhanger and not make us wait for ever in fricking suspense!!!!!!! Mean, Mean, Mean....Big Meanie!!! *pouts....
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
This chapter was great but what made me laugh out loud was your end notes about the upcoming chapters. Since we dont know what 25 holds I dont know if us readers can offer any suggestions but I am sure you will come up with something. That chap 24 note was LOL funny:D. Until Chap22!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:07 PM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day
The wedding was great. I especially liked Edward's breakfast and note to Bella, her note back and Edward's conversation with Emmett.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:07 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
I'm happy about how things worked out with Renee. The idea that Phil would have to be charged in Florida for the attempted rape in Forks is completely absurd, but I'm sure you've already received that feedback. It makes sense that Phil would press charges against Edward, but none of that will stick, of course.
I like how they are trying to stick to traditions. It's fun and I'm sure we'll get all the details on the wedding night into the next day(s).
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:39 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth
I love how Edward brought her back to herself immediately and everyone supoorted her. I wonder what's going on at the police station...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:39 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
I like the proposition and look forward to its results.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:05 PM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
The fact that Phil openly admitted to Edward that he likes scaring Bella, plus his blatant efforts to interupt them (in Port Angeles and leaving Renee's wallet) really shows that he is stepping this game up a lot. It's like he knows he'll never get this close again and he's trying to wreak maximum havok. I can't see how this can continue without something happening with Edward, especially given the escalation. I only hope that other family members are there, especially Charlie. That could help a lot in Edward not going to jail...
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
Phil and Renee are a pain. Thankfully, the have the whole Cullen clan and others to run interference. Will it be enough?
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:06 AM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
ooooooo closer to the drama. can't wait to see what you come up with. really loving this story. you're awesome!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
Drama, for sure! I'm sure the Cullen men can provide enough distraction for Phil to keep him out the way.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
I bet there will still be a little drama, she is after all dressing as a school girl. Edward is very jealous. LOL Great chapter. Bring on the halloween party.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:26 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
loved it very much so excited about the party can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:07 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Great update! Loved it
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:15 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Love it can't wait for the nxt 1
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:15 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Love it can't wait for the nxt 1
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:00 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
YAY! I reached this chapter!!! I can't wait for the next one!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:47 AM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
YAY! I'm glad she's leaving!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
Mrs. Tyson! LOL! Priceless!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:14 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything
Love it! Fab chapter!!! Mrs Hale is a pain in the ass!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:43 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
I love the way you wrote this!?!?!?!!? OMG This whole thing went so perfectly!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was abso-fucking-lutely PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:00 AM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
This was a great chapter!!! I wonder what 'the mothers' had to talk about????
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Ch13 - The Truth
Phil needs more of a beating!!! The rest is great though!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
Love it! But I'm scared for Bella!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
I want to help Edward beat the ever loving SHIT out of Phil!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:46 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Can't wait for Halloween. And great chapter. Phil is a douche and got what he deserved.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
Love the Biker Bella!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Amazing job, once again! Cannot wait for Halloween :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
I don't like Phil at all!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 9:30 PM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
It was a good D/s scene between vanilla's. I liked it alot!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:38 PM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy
I really like what you did with Alice, from the scare to her reaction to hear lash out to her lack of immediately forgiveness of Jasper. It really speaks to his issues that he would assume deception from her than give her the benefit of the doubt. Also, I love how Edward, Bella and the family are dealing with it.
The beans thing was classic!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:25 PM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
whoa.....very nice!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:47 PM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
The parents' reaction - good job writing that as it gave me a strong negative reaction to them. I've seen that type of mental job from people who expect someone else's special day to follow their rules, instead - screw them. Didn't expect to see that from Esme and Carlisle, but interesting twist to the story line.
Alice & Jasper - nice story line twist there, too.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 10:56 AM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
Oh dear, could Alice be preggers? That ought to snap Jasper out of his funk and clear things up for him right quick!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
Loving this story! Can't wait to get to the next chapter! I have to sleep now so i can work in the morning!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:02 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
I've lost track of the amount of stories that hook Charlie up with Sue! I think it works!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:47 AM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
I have a feeling that Jane's going to be a problem...
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
LOVE it!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:42 AM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
ha! i loved bella's reaction to the bitches! classic!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
bella is such a kinky little thing!!! too funny
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:41 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
loved TVSATCI and can wait to dig into this one!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
There is so much more they could have done in the D/s scene, but seeing as how neither of them have done anything like that before, I thought it worked. Edward even fumbled a bit with the ropes and Bella's positioning. All the more reason to play it out again, maybe after putting more thought into it.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy
Oh well yes! Happy fucking birthday, indeed! But what will Edward do with such a gift? I hope he's already planned for something like this in his fantasies...
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:50 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
love these stories!!
you rock!!
i'm tapping my fingers on my desk waiting in anticipation for the next chapter!
thanks!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:26 PM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
Edward's protectiveness is sweet on both counts, with Alice and with his friends. I like how Bella stood up for herself and Edward's pep talk to get her in the right frame of mind.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Loved it can't wait for the nxt 1...the story has been amazing so far...can't wait
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:10 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
It's all good, but I just have to see that innocent Bella/experienced Edward fantasy play out. I loved where it was going...
Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:59 PM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
Loved it
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:57 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything
Loved it
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:47 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality
ome awesome
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
awesome
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day
loved it...it was super sweet
Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
Loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:57 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth
the chapter was really well written...but it literally sent shivers down my spin...phil is a fukin creep i had the urge to punch him...so thats something...all i can say is go thee boys....GO EDWARD & CHARLIE....loved charlie :)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:22 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
epicly awesome
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:29 PM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
Loved it can't wait for the drama
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:36 AM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
Loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:59 AM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
Loved it awesome
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:21 AM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy
Loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
loved it...:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:03 AM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy
shes good loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
awesome loved it
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
I like that you've thrown in a bit of Edward's past and Jane is an interesting touch. I especially like that Bella was so level headed about it and Edward was so forthcoming. It boades very well for their future.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
OMG! I LLLOOOVEEE IT.
U P D A T E SOON PLEASE? :D
Anyway ; How old is Edward?
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
Loved it
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:34 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
Loved it
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:25 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
loved it awesome
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:53 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Let's see he has harrassed her since she was I think you said 12 and she is now 18 so he should get 5-6years. Pedophelia is a serious crime so double it and add three so 15years and a day, he cant be paroled unless he does the full 15yrs. MUWAHAHAHA. Rat Bastard. As for Angela yeah glad she is leaving and very impressed that Bella wouldnt accept her apology. I also feel she should never had felt bad about punching her because she hit 1st. If she didn't ok feel bad but if someone hits you what you are supposed to just walk away I don't think so. I know we are going back to Phil but are we having a chapter about Alice & Jasper and does their marriage get spilled before the wedding now that would be funny. LOL. Until next chapter:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Great chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:13 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Love it. Can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:07 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
This story continues to amaze me. You actually keep things extremely realistic with regards to the emotions in marriages esp. when one member has a "sorrid" past and the character development is amazing.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:11 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Amazing job! I am so sad that Edward is sick but should be getting better soon :) I think that Phil should get about 20 years? Why not? Wonder what will happen next?
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:05 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
life because he has done this before and he should have to give bella money update when you can loved it like always thanks....
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:09 AM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
I can't tell you how much I am enjoying your story. I really look forward to reading the rest of the chapters!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:25 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
I hope the next chapter title isn't because of Bella because Angela trespassed and hit 1st so Bella was in her right to defend herself. I wish you let her get in another before Edward grabbed her. I can't stand women who go after someone else's man I want to hit them. Excellent exciting lemony chapter it had everything:) Until next chapter.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:58 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
Still cant see it, only author's notes and chapter end notes :(
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
I can't get chapter 19 either. I will try again tomorrow. I can't wait. And thanks for clearing up Edward's view or lack of feelings towards Angela which only means if a woman knows and still keeps wanting to get him alone she is hitting on him and that wont sit very well with Bella. Oh cat fight. LOL Hurry Hurry Hurry fix please:)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
I still can´t see the new chapter :(
Author's Response:
I'm sorry... it's got something to do with server move they did. There are a lot of fics that are having this problem. If you want, I've got it posted over on fanfiction.net. It's under the penname Kriskahn. I'm not sure when TWCS is going to get fixed. It shouldn't be much longer if you want to wait. :) Sorry for the problems. :(
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:34 PM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
So yeah, Where is chapater 19? I got author's notes and then chapater end notes. No chapter! I looked over a couple of other reviews and it seems some people have gotten the chapater and some others have not. Unfortunately I fall in the latter.
Author's Response:
It's been fixed. The only thing I can think is the server change today messed up the chapter. :( Sorry for the inconvenience! :)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:29 PM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
Hey! Great story so far but I am unable to read the chapter called The Boxer Cullen. How come? I really don't want to miss anything. Is there something wrong with the site?
Author's Response:
It's been fixed. The only thing I can think is the server change today messed up the chapter. :( Sorry for the inconvenience! :)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:55 PM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
Is there something wrong with the site? No chapter? I am really enjoying your story though!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:09 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
hahahahahaha.....Angella got knocked the fuck out!!! lol
How dare come his WIFE's party and start that crap!!! Go Mrs. Tyson...lol
Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:00 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
If I did that to my husband I'd be sleeping on the couch for a month, drunk or not!