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Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:17 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Loved it. Way to go Bella. Ang deserved it. I Loved the Tattoo

Reviewer: mrsMcCarthy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

hahaha the ending was classic

Reviewer: mebk03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Still loving this story.  I look forward to you updates.  Thanks for letting her take out Ang., that was great!

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Great chapter...Please Please tell me that Angela is not wanting to tell Edward that she was pregnant and that they have a baby somewhere!!  I just don't think  I could take that kind of Heart Failure!!!!

AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:26 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Loved it very much update when you can I  think Bella did the right thing for herself thanks for sharing...

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:20 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News

So Charlie and Sue are together - a cute idea!

I´m looking forward for the next chapter.

Bussy

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:15 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

Yes, Jane is a strange girl and I guess she will cause some problems in the future.

Go on

Bussy

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:52 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

Hey,

I´d like this "new" Edward! He is more "normal".

The wedding was great!

Best wishes

Bussy

Reviewer: mikkirose Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:19 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Ok loved the chapter but one thing kind of freaked me out. Bella wanting to f**k her husband up the A$$ with a plastic weeny. If this was a BDSM story ok I could wrap my mind around it but it isnt and doing that to your heterosexual husband is just YUCK. Gay or Bi ok I can see that but he isn't. Nor is her character conceived as a sexy freak it doesn't correspond. I am sorry but it doesnt fit this story so it just feels gross and wrong not sexy or intimate at all. That's just my feelings on that conversation. As for Angela WOW. I also think Edward is kidding himself if he doesnt think he still has feelings for Angela because he should've told her by now, he is married which I didnt see you write he actually told her, and he should've told her flat out no meeting for coffee is absolutely not going to happen which he still hasn't done. The crap is about to hit he fan! Onward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

soo Angella Webber??? i don't think she's gonna be a threat.  if she is, Bella should cut her!!! rofl

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:24 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Awesome chapter. Wow didn't expect Angela to be Edwards' past. Loved it.

Reviewer: azrealsangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:43 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

AMAZING as always. Please keep up the great writing. I love this story..very much reminds me of a few of my friends

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:16 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Awesome job!  I was not expecting that at all!  Glad that Edward is not letting anything happen between him and Angela! :)  Cannot wait to see what Edward decides about anal!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:17 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Loved it very much and i am glad james did what he did Edward can't do that or it will cause problems later I just hope the drama at the party is not cheating because that shit sucks touching is one thing update when you can very good chapter can't wait to see what happens next....

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:30 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Really good,allways..)

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:03 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Loved it!!!  I am glad that Bella got to hear everything and they could talk it out.  Sometimes, I think that Bella acts more mature than Edward does.   Also, I hope that there is not too much drama for these two.  I know some is necessary, but hopefully no third parties and cheating....PLEASE!!!

Again, great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: mikkirose Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:03 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

It's Jane. Didnt they have enough drama with Phil. OMG. I know everyone thinks it's Tanya but Jane is who you introduced as they psycho Bitch from hell so I am going with her.  We already ran into Carmen & Heidi.  Frankly I think Alice should get some shit she gave Bella lots of shit she deserves it. I also agree with Edward & Bella's parents that was a shitty thing they did especially since everyone went along with their speedy freelove wedding they could've waited an hour and at least completed the ceremony.  Sex was not more important than making your family happy for a little longer. Awaiting the next update.

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:08 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

I hope we find out next chapter who it is update when you can thanks...

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:21 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

well i hope it works can't wait to see.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 11:05 AM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

Wow that was tense I hope phil watches his back update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy

That was great loved so much LOL My husband would die if i did that for him....

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 10:07 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News

loved it very much can't wait to read more  

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:37 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

That jane giirl is going to be touble can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Such a grat chapter. Alice and Jasper are idiots this is going to come back and bite them in the ass. I am dying to know who it is. Loved it.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:39 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Amazing job!  Love it, once again!  I think it is Tanya, but cannot be sure ;) 

Reviewer: Biena Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:29 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

Love your story.Also love it because it´s so nice fluffy after all the HF in my other FF at the moment...guess it´s the girl he "deflowered" (sorry I´m no native speaker, first word that came into my mind)

I fucking hate him if he lets her cause problems with Bella...

 

Update soon please!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:04 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

No way you left it there!!!!  I don't know who that can be, maybe Tanya? Please, please update soon!!

Reviewer: twilightobsessedmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:04 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Who is it?! Who is it?!!! I can't wait to find out!!!!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:27 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Its got to be fucking slut Tanya....Uggghhhhh!

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:01 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition

I am so happy i found your

Story here.The removed a lot

of good story so i was looking

here what i get to read.Fantasic

u write your Story i can tell u

not anough i am so happy and

glad i found u here.:)

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:16 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

heidi, carmen, tanya?? oh some whorebag trying to ruin his marriage??? lol

Reviewer: lovinjim Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:34 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Loved it!!!  Great Job.  And my guess, is the girl he lost his V card to.

Reviewer: InWakingDreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:10 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

Oh no! Who is it? Mean cliffy!

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:03 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality

That doesn't sound good...........ah well, there are always speedbumps on the road to a happy marriage

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 2:53 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 7:19 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

I LOVE this Edward and want one for Valentines Day. Man, doesn't Esme need to chillax a bit, its their freakin day - parents and weddings do not mix!

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 3:12 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After

Talk about bitter ex hookup lol

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 2:27 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

I'm hoping Edward still persues being a doctor. I also figured he would have a hard time with being away from Bella so much from going 24/7 to 2days a week is pretty drastic of a change

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 3:29 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day

Loved it such a great chapter. Made me smile big time the whole time I was reading it

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 6:35 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day

WOW!!! I LOVVEEDD...LOVVEEDDD THE WEDDING!!!! PERFECT!!!

Reviewer: Sumfun Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 4:49 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding

Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:50 AM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

Great chapter loved it.



Author's Response:

Awesome, glad you liked it!!!  Thank you for the review!!!!!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 12:09 AM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness

I'm glad of the happy ending with Renee she still is an idiot but what Bella told Alice makes sense.  On with the wedding!

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH  MIA MYA



Author's Response:

You should know that I love me some happy endings.  LOL!  So when something really bad happens... know it'll all work out the way someone (usually E or B) wants it in the end.  :D

Thanks for reading and leaving the reviews!!!! :D :D :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:09 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth

I so totally love this story.  I just started reading it last night and just finished through 13 just now.  I am sorry I have reviewed sooner I just couldn't wait and need to read each and every chapter first.  I am so glad that they got that sick Pig Phil.  ARGH!!!  And that mother of hers best feel pretty low for not believing her in the first place.  I just shudder at the thought of something happening to me or one of my nieces it would be just horrible.  I can't say daughter because alas I only have one son.  But he is awesome so its all good.

Anyway can't wait till the next chapter.

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA

Reviewer: BookLover299 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 1:09 AM Title: Ch13 - The Truth

This is officially one of my favorite fanfics! I love how you write about their relationships ,both the ups and the downs. You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter!! I'm definitely recommending you on my Fanfiction.net profile page =)



Author's Response:

Yay!!!  Thank you so very, very much!!!  I'm glad you're enjoying the life and times of Edward and Bella.  LOL!  It's really fun to write them.  They're two really great people.  :D 

Thanks for reviewing!! :D :D :D

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 7:54 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth

I found your stories yesterday and I am in love with them. This is something really great you have here. Keep up the fantastic work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!!  I'm really glad you found them and like them!!! :D :D  Thanks for the review!!!

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