[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 11:25 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Great chapter. It was so sweet that the only person Izzy was asking for was Edward. I'm glad Alice made her see that Edward wasn't the man she thought he was. Also that Charlie saw that he was worthy to be with her. And I love how Edward told Aro off and refused to leave Izzy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 11:13 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I thought it was wonderful how Edward and Charlie were getting along. I loved the fact that he stayed all night and refused to go to the race just yet. I was happy with Charlies advice for Bella regarding Edward. I am really love this story and cant wait for updates, lol.
Date: 08 May 2010 8:43 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
How sweet tell Aro were to go Edward it is because of him she had the wreck??? I cant wait till she relizes that she loves him to but she doesnt no he loves her yet does he??????
Date: 08 May 2010 7:35 PM Title: Attacking Walls
So Charlie heard him say that he loved her??? She is going to be just fine right??? Edward is going to rip Aro's face of for not letting them change the trhtal control????
Date: 08 May 2010 6:23 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
awww. How sweet. I want a Edward Shaped Heart ***sigh*** love your story and Happy Mothers Day.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Excellent chapter. Glad to see Izzy is ok and will be able to race. Loved the interactions between Edward and Charlie. Charlie may be a quiet man, but what he says always counts.
The end was excellent. I loved it when Izzy heard Edward refusing to leave her to get to the next race. Very sweet.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 5:46 PM Title: Attacking Walls
I knew he loved her. I wonder what the press will make of this. Cant wait for a new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
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Love the story thus far but all of your stories are great.
Still not recieving the notice when you update here but when FF does I read it here.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 4:42 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
awe- she's going to take the risk worth taking? Edward certainly proved himself to her friends and Charlie- cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08 May 2010 4:23 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Aw - fluffiness!! A-.
Date: 08 May 2010 4:09 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Yeah! The walls are coming down! So happy you updated today cause now I get to watch Dale Jr tonight after reading about Driverward. So totally did a happy dance at just reading how Dale Jr. won the race where Izzy wrecked, that was great!
Rhonda
Date: 08 May 2010 3:39 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
love it and can't wait for more
Date: 08 May 2010 3:30 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I like how edward is standing by her and Im glad she is going to try and let him in! And I really hope most of the rumors about him were untrue, eww... no manwhore edward please! LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 2:41 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
That boy is so gone over her! I'm really happy with the way this is shaping up. Glad to see that Charlie is so supportive of her decisions and choices.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 2:18 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I love Charlie! That was some good advice he gave her. And I'm glad he's just as sten with Edward
Date: 08 May 2010 2:07 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
aww that was so friggin cute! i knew she was going to get into an accident. i'm glad Edward is staying with her and I love Charlie! lol. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!
Kristi
Date: 08 May 2010 1:42 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
I really like the direction you have things heading, as everything is working them towards it a little more at a time! :)
Date: 08 May 2010 12:55 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Am so loving this story!!! Great job and keep up the super work!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08 May 2010 12:50 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
As I told you when I betad this...Edward shaped holes are my favorite! I'm really excited to see them open up to each other!
Date: 08 May 2010 12:47 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
aww Edward is too sweet. that boy is soo in love its not even funny. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 May 2010 1:04 PM Title: Attacking Walls
OOOOOOOhhhhhh. Can't wait for the update!
Date: 06 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Not much to say, other than as I said before, and TOTALLY loving this story (gad I guessed right about the Kiss and media catching on!!)
You are doing a great job w/ this story, glad they are waking up and glad Charlie caught on so quick! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 10:37 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Ahhh, he loves her!!! I think Charlie's call to Edward from the hospital was great.
Date: 06 May 2010 7:09 PM Title: Attacking Walls
O.....M........G i LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 8:35 AM Title: Attacking Walls
Okay, it has taken me a few minutes to calm down after that ! The worst part of racing is the accidents and you really brought that horror out in spades.
Great job! Oh that Jake is still a jackass!
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 5:45 AM Title: Attacking Walls
Great chapter. I could see Edward and Bella fighting so hard against the rumors that they didn't see the truth that they had feelings for each other. Why does it take the thought of losing someone for a person to admit their feelings? Oh well, at least he figured it out. Now its her turn. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06 May 2010 5:04 AM Title: Attacking Walls
Holy Crow! One down one to go. lOl
Date: 06 May 2010 3:42 AM Title: Attacking Walls
YES go get her Edward. About dang time. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 06 May 2010 1:12 AM Title: Attacking Walls
great so far ! im happy that they are realizing that they are made for eachother!
Date: 06 May 2010 1:10 AM Title: Attacking Walls
i just read the teaser for chapter 4. i'm worried because bella is worried about edward's reputation. these two really need to sit down and have a talk about their feelings for each other. and maybe even their dating history. they have to if they plan to go anywhere. i hope edward won't shy away and keep his feelings locked up and not let her know of them. please let him man up and just confess his feelings for her
and phew. i'm glad that bella's okay. i was a little worried there. and she seems so cheerful too!!! i thought we might have a case of ptsd.. we still might... i hope bella will be able to continue racing without any problems but it's completely understandable if she gets scared while behind the wheel
Date: 06 May 2010 12:55 AM Title: Attacking Walls
i'm really impressed by your knowledge of race cars in here. like what bella should and shouldn't do in a bad situation.. like not stepping on the breaks or putting it into neutral or flipping the shut off... i wouldn't have known at all. so good job! you sure did your homework.
Author's Response:
LOL...well in all fairness...I knew some of that already and discussed the possibilities with my hubby to find the most realistic reason for the crash. I was actually researching this on the drive back from Chicago a couple of weekends ago. That was when i learned my new Droid can be set up and used as a mobile modem for my laptop. LOL. It was cool and made it much easier to find what I needed.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 12:17 AM Title: Attacking Walls
you tell him Charlie! i melted when he said "But, I love her" I hope she'll be ok, no major injuries right????
Date: 05 May 2010 11:58 PM Title: Attacking Walls
love this story. hopefully they will be convinced of their feelings now....love all ur stories!!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2010 11:24 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Oh that's horrible! I know that sounds totally tacky coming from a person who loves to watch NASCAR crashes...but that's horrible. I can't believe the owners wouldn't allow them to change the throttle. Ah, I guess that's just another reason to hate Aro. LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 05 May 2010 10:47 PM Title: Attacking Walls
URK!! Izzy could be in trouble here.... :-( Hope she's O.K... A-.
Date: 05 May 2010 10:43 PM Title: Attacking Walls
What a thing to cause you to admit your feelings... definitely looking forward to more!
Date: 05 May 2010 10:39 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Aghhh great chapter, sneaky pap shots that get taken out of context, cause more issues for our racing couple- funny how its one of those, everyone sees it but the two that should- cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 May 2010 10:22 PM Title: Attacking Walls
I could actually hear the panic in his voice when he told her to hit the shut off as I read it! That and the "But I love her..." broke my heart! You can tell it is about to get good because I started crying at that point and the tears are always a sign of sometihng important down the road! I love that Charlie saw how important Edward was to his daughter...or was his com still on when he said that he loved here??? Is it a wireless thing or does it only work in the car? Just wondering~
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie! I know I heard it in my head...so I'm glad it translated. Thanks for all of your hard work.
Date: 05 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: New Connections
I love how you work in all the raing references and still managed to crank up a little romance! I'm looking forward to some growth between them in the coming chapters~
Date: 05 May 2010 10:17 PM Title: Breakaway
Okay, so you know I love you and this story, but at the moment I'm re reading it as you posted chapter 3 and I just got through betaing 4 this morning. Love the setup and I'm so excited to see what you have planned!
Date: 05 May 2010 9:18 AM Title: New Connections
Your story is really good I can'r wait until the next chapter so UPDATE SOON!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 8:26 PM Title: New Connections
I really like this story, and cant wait for the next update.
Date: 04 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Breakaway
Seems good so far.
Date: 04 May 2010 3:08 PM Title: New Connections
Ahhh, Jake is back, but hopefully gone again for good. LOL Great play between Edward & Izzy this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 4:29 AM Title: New Connections
They do make a great team. Jacob didn't need to be so damn rude. Edward sure as hell wasn't to him; he was just confused at first. No, Jake just had to go spouted off at the mouth. It's weird to see Edward call her Iz or Izzy. lol I know all the needed reasons, but its something I have to get used to. It is understandable at first glance the reasons why Jake would have given her the ultimatum, However, he can't suddenly walk back 2 years later, and expect her to talk right then and there on the track no less. Jake was jerk, and a coward. He didn't deserve Bella. He may have known her as Bella, but that doesn't mean he has the right to call her that. Bella is a wet dream that most are intimidated by on the track. Sweet. Everything that Edward said was true about her, and I hope she has the sense to remember it.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Breakaway
I am all about the female power. I gotta say it was funny as hell to read about the rap song part. He may be an ass but it was creative. haha I think it is perfect to have the ladies on the crew; especially Rose. It just wouldn't be complete without her. Maybe Cullen should find out the facts before goes accusing innocent people. Looks can be deceiving and Bella should know better than to judge. I am not really a fan on 3rd Pov, but I will give this one a chance. Maybe it's because I live in a state where they have this race called the Indy500. lol
Date: 03 May 2010 10:41 AM Title: New Connections
Cant wait to read more, really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:22 AM Title: New Connections
Fantastic.
Love Edward becoming so protective. And of course, him listening and letting her cry.
Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 03 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: New Connections
So loved that you had Bella win a race in this chapter! I can't wait for the first female to win a Sprint Cup race. Heck, I can't wait for the first female Sprint Cup driver! (so rooting for Danica) anyhoo, then this chapter delt with Bristol Motor Speedway and I have awesome pics from this years race. It just made me so happy!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:09 AM Title: Breakaway
Great start.
Love the descriptions of Alice and Rosalie. Edward cornering her in the bathroom was sort of hot. I can't wait to see their relationship progress.
Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: New Connections
How sweet is Edward now? Instead of being hurt, Bella should be pissed at Jake. What would he have said if she chose him instead of racing when he gave her the ultimatum? Kick his ass Izzy don't shed tears for the ass.
Date: 03 May 2010 2:56 AM Title: New Connections
I love imagining this Bella and how you've started their friendship!
Date: 03 May 2010 12:55 AM Title: Breakaway
Another winner for A Cullen Wannabe!
Date: 02 May 2010 3:30 PM Title: Breakaway
wHAT the hell is snark?!
Author's Response:
hmmm...american slang at it again....sort of like smart mouth, sarcastic banter. I guess that's the best way to describe it.
Date: 02 May 2010 3:02 PM Title: New Connections
Aw - looks like assWard ain't so cocky now!! Loving this so far. B+.
Author's Response:
Hey Noble! Good to see you :D This one's going to be a lot of fluff with some snark mixed in. Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 2:03 PM Title: New Connections
Great chapter- so loving the story. Also glad to know Jake the Jackass isnt going to be around. Cant wait for the next update.
Date: 02 May 2010 1:32 PM Title: New Connections
a great chapter, jacob is a total dickhead using bella just so he could be with another girl, edward and bella seem to be getting on well despite interference from the press, loveing this thanks tracy
Date: 02 May 2010 8:12 AM Title: New Connections
I've got to say, I didn't think it was possible but this chapter made me hate Jacob even more. can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon
Date: 02 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: New Connections
aww Edward you're so sweet! i love that the press is making it seem like they're together, which they should be soon hahaha... that's sad about Jacob, but maybe Edward will punch him in the face or something. the press will love that! lol. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!
Kristi
Date: 02 May 2010 3:48 AM Title: New Connections
I am loving this story so far.
Date: 02 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: New Connections
again i am in love with your story. keep up the good work
Date: 02 May 2010 3:44 AM Title: New Connections
I love the whole lying to the press thing, very Rob and Kristen. lol I also love that Edward is slowly changing and Jake is a douche. I don't love that Jake is a douche just that in general he is. lol. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 02 May 2010 3:41 AM Title: New Connections
Jake is a creep all the time he let her feel bad about making the chose of racing when he was screwing around. Edward and Bella are warming up to each other nicely.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: New Connections
AmAzInG!!!! Can't wait for more, please update soon!! :)
Date: 02 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: New Connections
good so far love the nascar aspect of the story ! cant wait to read what happens next wtih these 2!
Date: 02 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: New Connections
Great chapter. Love how Edward was there for her and that he feels protective already. Already got me waiting for the juicy stuff, LOL.....sister_liz
Date: 02 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: New Connections
very intersting....it's nice to see his soft side come out...can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: New Connections
awww sweet protectiveward! as much as he's got these budding feelingd for her, he can't lose focus, if your mind slips a little while that car is goin 200+ mph, you'll end up in the marbles and against a wall or into the car next to you
Date: 02 May 2010 2:51 AM Title: New Connections
Once again---great chapter! I just can't tell you how excited I am about this story. I keep saying this, and even though it might sound repetative, I do mean it---I really enjoy your style of writing. I am wondering if there was a paparazzi around to "catch" the kiss???? hmmmmmmm :-)
Date: 01 May 2010 1:11 PM Title: Breakaway
a cullen wannabe what ever you decide to write about whether it is doctors and swat, photographers and novelists, or english kings and queens to name a few and now race car drivers you never dissapoint, even with out a definate posting schedule you still post quicker than some other authors i'm reading and i thank you for that, this story is off to a flying start how wrong they are about eachother, i love that bella well issy is breaking down barriers employing a semigirl pit crew love this and wait patiently for more thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 5:07 AM Title: Breakaway
I will wait patiently for updates...That was a fantastic start! I now have a new love of NASCAR. Edward in something fast....;0)
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Breakaway
lovin it so far,like it when bella puts them in there place.your writng has made me a fan fic junkie,always dying for more,lol.keep it coming... can't wait.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:17 PM Title: Breakaway
Really good start! I love the concept of girls with "balls" and our favorite trio has them here! I don't think it will take long for Izzy to retrain Edward...at least I'm hoping!
I grew up with a Dad who loved racing and drove push trucks for the midget auto races. Went to a lot of races and loved the whole feel, smell and excitement. He raced go karts for awhile but even tho' I was "old enough" he didn't think it was the right thing for a girl to do. Thank heaven the world has evolved since then! I prefer Indy car racing but NASCAR will certainly do.
I'm looking forward to future updates but also doing a happy dance because you plan on concentrating on The Soverign story first.
Smiling, dancing, smiling!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 11:29 AM Title: Breakaway
Loved it!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:59 AM Title: Breakaway
i love it already, although i have to admit i don't think i've disliked any of your stories. can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:42 AM Title: Breakaway
That is a great start so is Edward going to start playing fair now????
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:22 AM Title: Breakaway
I like it. I cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 5:44 AM Title: Breakaway
This is going to be good. I like Bella's personality...strong, confident and not afraid to stand up for herself in the male dominated world that she's a part of. Keep it up. Can't wait to see what's next.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:39 AM Title: Breakaway
Very promising start. I can tell you from personal expierience, there is nothing hotter than a man who can handle that much horse power. Edward in a jumpsuit behind the wheel of a stock car...fucking yummy!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:05 AM Title: Breakaway
i love this i love nascar
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:59 AM Title: Breakaway
I like it!!!! I am a NASCAR fan and I myself worked on my uncles pit crew for 5 years......So LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response:
awesome! You can keep me honest if I blow something on an epic scale! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: Breakaway
wow! Génial!
Fleur,
Montréal, Québec
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:36 AM Title: Breakaway
Damn, your good! What is your secret? Birthday's and Life in general doesn't stop you from writing or posting! Way to go and thanks for feeding my twilight fanfiction addiction!
Author's Response:
LOL...Um...I'm a stay at home mom with no life outside of my five year old and not quite two year old. This is what keeps me sane! :D Naptime and bedtime are my writing's best friends. My kids are light sleepers, I can't get much done as far as housework, so I write instead!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:33 AM Title: Breakaway
I love it so far!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:26 AM Title: Breakaway
Pretty good! I'm excited to see what you come up with next. I like that Bella is tough but still girly.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:35 AM Title: Breakaway
omg, i'm so excited about this, great begining. wonderful job on describing the race. i can't wait till the next chapter.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:27 AM Title: Breakaway
wow this is really good! i'm glad they called a truce lol. can't wait to see what happens next!
Kristi
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:07 AM Title: Breakaway
Love it!! You got a nice steady flow of excitment and energy flowing here. Nice to see Bella isn't a wallflower type of girl. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Breakaway
I really like it so far. Look for to the next update.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: Breakaway
I think this story is going to be Great!! and I hope Bella & Edward work things out and become an unstoppable force on the track :)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:38 PM Title: Breakaway
This was an awesome first chapter, I am so excited to read the rest of this story! I love how Isabella is such a strong character without losing her femininity. She can play it with the big boys that's for sure!
And thank you for putting Edward in # 69 - classic! Made me laugh so hard....then sit and think about that for a bit too long while at work! Still blushing right now!
Loved it!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:37 PM Title: Breakaway
I love that Bella has Alice and Rose on her team. she needs some girls to back up her tail especially when all the guys suck. lol i'm sad that this is going to be a short one but I have read many a short stories that were fabulous so I can only hope this one is too. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Breakaway
Ooooh, great start! I love it. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:48 PM Title: Breakaway
Glad to be along for the ride on this one.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:40 PM Title: Breakaway
I like this so far, it sounds like it could be very intersting...can't wait to see more of it