Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 55
Its been a great ride hun. Can't believe its over. Thank you for taking the time to write.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
xoxoxooxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 55
I FUCKING LOVED THIS STORY!
since i started reading this story i started to like Bella & Jasper stories and let me tell you those are some of the best stories i've ever read!!
FUCKING LOVED IT! and i really hope to see some outtakes! :D
LOVED IT! and i'm really sad that it ended but everything comes to an end even the greates things!!
Author's Response:
*giggles* I'm so glad you LOVED IT! Thank you for the wonderful review and if i can change someone over to Team Jasper *blows on nails and shines them on my shirt* my work here is done. But yep keep me on author alert and something may come up :)
Thanks for the review!
xoxooxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 54
lol for the bubble.
Author's Response:
*giggles* gotta love the black bubble of doom!
Thanks BB!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 54
Hmmm, that was incredibly yummy! I liked how everybody took turns playing with the black bubble.
Author's Response: You mean took turns making fun of Eddie? *giggles* I'm glad you liked it Darlin' Thanks! xoxoxoxo M & J
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 53
holy crap i finally caught up :) awesome story i am team Edward but i will put up with him being a dumbass for a good story and so far this is not just good but awesome.... can't wait for next chappy ...gonna go fave now
Author's Response:
GREAT! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! I love that an Eddie lover can still enjoy my story. Thank you! Next chapter was just posted. So I hope you enjoy.
xoxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh shit! They pushed Bella too far. She is going to crush Edward into teeny tiny pieces isn't she?
Funniest scene...Peter chasing Edward around the yeard. That had me giggling.
Author's Response:
Oh l loved Peter chasing Eddie...even better was him screaming for help from Jasper LMAO. Glad you enjoyed it Darlin' next chapter nwo up :)
xoxoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 52
Well it is about damn time that Esme came to her senses. I wonder how long it will take Carlisle? I have no hopes for Edward. He is a lost cause.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 51
With this whole dysfunctional family under one roof it reminds me of a soap opera. It is 'Days of our Lives' vampire style. LOL.
I don't see Bella giving a death sentence for Edward. She would have every right to, but I just don't see it. Like Jasper said, it almost seems anticlimatic. I would rather see him have to stand on the side lines and watch Bella and Jasper be happy together.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
For being over 100 years old, Edward is not the brightest bulb in the box. Ohhhh, is Jasper going to tear and burn next chapter?!? I think it is the least that Edward deserves. And I loved that Bella threw her shield up at him. I was so proud when she said what she did. That must have been so cathartic for her.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 53
Sorry THe 'rents deserve the tonguelashing if you ask me. Go Bad Ass Bella.
Author's Response:
Don't aplogize! I'm glad that liked that ma and pa got their comeuppance :)
Thanks for the review Darlin'
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 49
Esme is dillusional if she thinks that Bella is just going to run back to Edward after all this. WTF is she thinking.
I love how Bella played with Edward. That was classic!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 53
I did think she was hard on Esme, but I can see it as lashing out. Edward on the other hand is really going to get it.
Author's Response:
Yeah he kinda gotta get out the hamster ball first *giggles* I'm glad you liked it darlin'
Thanks!
xoxoxoxoo
M & J
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
I think Bella's reaction to Esme is understandable. Esme has always told Bella she is a daughter to her. Parents aren't suppose to choose one child over the other and definitely not leave one alone and in danger. When you abdandon your child like that you shouldn't expect to step back into their life like it never happened.
Love this story!!
Author's Response:
EXACTLY!!! What you said *giggles* Yes, they did choose one child over the other and abdandoned Bella...*wags finger* Bad Cullens very very bad Cullens. I'm so glad you understand Bella's side and thank you for that!
Also thank you for the review and I'm happy you are loving the story!
xoxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 48
Shit! is right. WTF was he thinking?!? I love this Jasper, but his timing sucks monkey ass.
I loved his talk with Charlie and how he promised he would never break her heart and how their love would be epic. Very sweet.
Author's Response:
To be honest I even teared up writing the scene with Charlie so I'm glad you loved it! Thanks!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
OMG! I love the visual of the guys and their target shooting game...too funny! I wonder if Edward is going to survive his trip back to Forks? I can't imagine he is going to take the news well that Bella is with Jasper now.
Author's Response:
Aww I'm glad you love the visual...I thought it was something different and fun. :)
I think Eddie will be about like you'd expect. Let me know what you think.
Thanks for the reviews! I love them!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 52
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! :D
really can't wait for next chapp!! :D
Author's Response:
It might be cheesey if I say...I love love love love that you loved it :) But it's true. Next chapter coming soon at the end of the week :)
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
HOLY SHIIIIIIITTTT!!!!
Author's Response:
*giggles* I'll take it you liked this chapter :) it's one of my faves.
Thanks for the review!
xoxooxox
Mynxi & Japser
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 52
i want more now
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for all the reviews! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I hope to have the next chapter posted in the next day or two. It's done, just being sent off for beta'ing :)
xoxooxoxxo
M & J
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 49
go bella for getting some balls
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 46
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
xoxooxox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
I love how Charlie is so accepting of all of them. It is kinda funny, but very, very sweet.
Author's Response:
I'm loving Charlie in this too even if he doesn't have a real big part. I'm glad you are still liking the story and will hopefully be caught up soon.
Thank you for all the reviews!
xoxooxox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 45
That has got to be Peter in the door. OMG!!! That was kinky and dirty and hot as fuck!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 44
I love it!!! The boys in drag...too funny.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 43
Holy crap! Bella has some kick ass power there! I can't imagine what it will be like when she is changed.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 52
well I'm guessing its either Eddie or Carlisle. Could be Jake I suppose but I doubt it.
Eddie is such an idiot
Author's Response:
Wow thanks for all the wonderful reviews. I'm glad you are enjoying the story! Of course I'm not going to tell you who is at the door but I'll try to update more regularly from now on.
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 51
nah he's gotta live. As she said, just so he can be the loser for eternity
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 50
Woo Hoo. Tell em off Bella Bear
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 49
Carlisle and Esme just have no clue do they. Wait till Eddie gets a brainfull of sexy b and J times.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 48
evil daydream. That SOOOOOO wont happen. He'll be lucky if he's not put into a bubble by her permanently (ie eddie).
Hawt Hawt
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 52
I hope that Jasper will set him on fire if he has been inside the house!
Thank you for doing and letting us read this amazing story, even if you make so many cliff hangers ;)
I can't help it, I don't like them, but at the same time they make me check my e-mail every day hoping for a new update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I suppose that's why some have called me the queen of cliffies. But really it's just the easiest way for me to find a spot to stop. LOL
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 47
oh dear now Fuckward is going to get it.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 46
hmm was thinking Vikki might Bond with charlie. Ah well
Date: 09 Nov 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yumminess. Major is Hawt Hawt Hawt.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 44
Congrats on the degree BTW.
Love cowboy cassinova
Date: 09 Nov 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 43
Great chapter. I so love Jazz and peter
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
ooooh doin the jasper happy dance =D
Author's Response:
*giggles* I'm glad you picked up the happy dance :) Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
why the hell did Peter punched Jasper? and what the hell is happening?! FUCK! i wanna knoww!!! :D
GREAT chap.... LOVED IT!
Author's Response:
*smiles* I'm glad you loved it and I hope all will be answered in future chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 42
i wonder if jasper got a power from bella somehow. but i loved it
Author's Response:
*smiles* I'm glad you loved it. I'm sure your questions will be answered soon.
xoxoxo
M & J
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love ya. End of story. Hopefully, your story will last longer, because Jasper is... yummy. :)
Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
*blushes* Thanks so much Darlin' now run over to ff.net and read the latest update *giggles*
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
It was moody, but still very hot. I loved that she asked him to bite her. Hell, that's what I would say. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think. LOL I'm glad you liked it and you know me by now. I'm moody ;) Hope it was well worth the wait though.
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 42
hmmm yumminess
Author's Response:
Thank you! *giggles*
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 42
lol I love this story it so awesome! update soon I like how is new word is huh? lmao
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Just updated today so it'll be a week or so before another chapter goes up.
xoxoxoxox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 42
I like that his power got stronger. She made him whole and not he can have more power. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so surprised you read that so quickly but thank you for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 41
I loved Em running from the house.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 40
What a stupid thing for her to do.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
I cant believe they did that with the house full of vampires.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 38
All I can say is WTF??? Victoria is on their side????
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 37
Why is Peter standing outside the door??
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 36
Well he is her dad, that how dads are.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
Should have known he was not going to get a warm reception from them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
I guess that when they come back with Alice they will have it out and possibly make amends.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
Guess the blood is not good.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow that was a fast pace she set.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 30
What a perfect poem to use.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Progress! Glad to see that.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 28
I am glad she is getting better and she kissed Jazz.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
I really want to know what wenton in therapy.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am so ready for Bella to get her big girl pants on.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
She needs to just tell people things.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter. The must beno threat if the puppy likes them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
I guess she feels guilty for having feeling for Jasper that why Alices name upset her.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Good chapter. I am glad to see Rose want to honestly be her friend.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
I cant wait to hear what happens with Em there.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
That would drive me crazy. The no talking thing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like that he got her a Iphone.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Did Alice break up with Jasper because she thought Bella was his true mate?
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Maybe she should be there.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I cant believe Em would take a swipe at her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved then part at the end where he said then we'll shower.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
He should be mad at Edward what he did was crap.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew she thought it was funny Mike pissed himself.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Jasper jealous is cute.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
You know Charlie was happy that Jasper made Mike wet himself.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved that they made himso scared.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved that he has to shop for sporting goods.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
I cant believe that Rose ran into her singer. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow now Em sees just how bad she is.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
I thought it was Rose and Em, never thought it would be Sam and Jake.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am curious what he is going to do with the morons. I thought they way he left them was funny. Why doesnt Alice come back and help also? She is not getting visions because she texted Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love Jasper's nickname for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah Jasper really does want to give him a whoppin. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Well imagine my surprise when I opened my email and had 41 new reviews! LOL Thank you so so much I loved them! I was just shocked and happy that someone read straight through which I know takes patience and then to review each on I'm honestly honored.
Thank you so much and since you were kind enough to review, I'll be kind enough to post the next chapter. :)
xoxoxoxoxo
M
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 41
DAMN girl!
i was hoping that you would update soon!
i fucking loved it! and can't wait for next chap! maybe they don't have sex! that was why Peter told him to trust him! MAYBE! i wish she could get a little better!!
Author's Response:
LOL... I am sorry it's taken me so long to say Thanks for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I just updated so I hope you'll like the newest chapter ;)
And don't worry she's getting better :)
thanks again!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ugh! You are trying to kill us with sexual tension, aren't you?
Author's Response:
*giggles* Should I say yes? Don't worry you won't have to wait long! Thanks for reading and reviewing and all of your other reviews!!! I don't know that I got the chance to thank you properly.
*hugs*
xoxoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 41
Good with cliffhangers? That you are! Passionate chapter this one. I loved it. I just hope Bella finds a way to open up to Jasper completely. I'm looking forward to the next chapter....as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you felt the passion in the chapter and I'll try to update again this comign weekend or so :)
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 41
noooooo!!!! :) can't wait too see what happens next!
Author's Response:
*giggles* Stay tuned. I'll try to remember to get the next chapter up by the weekend :)
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 41
no,no,no,no,no,nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo,you are pure evil woman,bring it back,not fair!pppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzz don't leave us too long,it will be unbearable(?),must.have.jasper.LOL
great cliffy,REALLY,looking forward to what comes next.
bye.c.
Author's Response:
*giggles*I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 04 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Author's Response:
*giggles* was that you just have nothing more to say? LOL....thanks for reading!
xoxoxo
M & J
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 41
ack more moremore pleassseeee
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review...:) sorry for the cliffy (well not really) but glad you liked it!
xoxoxox
M & J
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 41
yes you are but i love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry I'm slow but thanks for sticking with me and for your review!
xoxoxo
M & J
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
Love it so far can't wait for more x x x
Author's Response:
Thank you sorry it's taken me so long for me to reply to your review but I do appreciate them!
Hope you'll continue to love the story!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 20 Aug 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Hmmm, is it just a happy coincidence, or you showed us Jasper's Dom-side intentionally? ... :)))) Interesting!
I hope, you 'll update soon!
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for the chapter, and a huge hug for JxB stories you mention!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 36
Comment? I want his shirt penetrated with his scent!
Question?: I just wonder when and how will Edward appear, and I hope, he'll find a really strong Bella giving him a really badass k.o.! See, not a question, sorry. :))))
I love this story!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
Hi, I just followed you from "you-know-from-where!". I think I might just send my support to your story here too!
Author's Response:
*giggles* I know where you followed me from and thank you for leaving me love here too! I'm honored that you love the story enough to review here also. Thanks!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it! Jasper is so sweet!!! can't wait to read more.. I love the fact that you write long chapters!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for leaving me love. I hope you'll continue to love the story. I apologize for taking so long to respond but know that I already read my reviews even if I suck on updating and responding :)
Thanks again!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
I can not believe she cut herself after all that! WTF! Seriously, sho cuts themselves after an orgasm with the vampire you love? And with non vegetarian vamps in the house. Is she still trying to kill herself? I would really like to hear her talk about this in therapy. I am glad that Jasper is standing his ground and leaving her alone for the night, but I can't imagine who it will be harder on.