[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story....great ending...makes me wish there was more to read....
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
i like the ending!!! This was such good story
Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
how sweet
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
love it great job
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
that was great i loved the letter
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
X) Hawt.
and i could't help but imagine that they yelled out "EXCLAMATION POINT!"
gropes,
SNARKY
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sooooo lemony good!! Loved it all!! Cute ending!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
AWW that was a mean ending but in some weird way I liked it. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story, I enjoyed it, like all stories it is sad to see it end, but I liked the story while it lasted.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. This was pretty intense.
That's so cute to see them experience their first time together this way.
[Sorry if I made some mistakes, I'm french.]
Can't wait for the next chapter! =P
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a way to loss your inosence for sure not going to forget. So glad they know there name.
Date: 10 Jun 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
it was good. edward is so sweet.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hot damn...that's sexy as hell!!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW!! That was HOT!! I need a cig and a shower.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh god, I can't believe you ended the chapter there. You evil little vixen. Next chapter please?
Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
well we know they're going to go through with it so don't leave us hanging. lol that bit by bit play was hotter than hell though. I love that they eased slowly into the names. too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks so much again bye
Date: 04 Jun 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow that was fuck hot. When are they going to find out that they are both just 16????
Date: 03 Jun 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
awesome chappy i got so lost in it that the spotter scared the crap outta me honking next to my window....forgott where i was for a moment.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait 4 mre
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. I look forward to the next.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oo la la!!! Steamy!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
omg... funny... awesome story.
plz update soon
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
WOW!!! that was HOT HOT HOT! sorry for the caps but it was. I'm so glad you updated. those two are too cute together with just learning and all. too sweet. i love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow!! cant wait till the next one
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds good so far
Date: 30 May 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good!! Really good!!
Date: 30 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
cant wait till the next one
Date: 30 May 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Danceing is impowering but I think she has taken the next step to soon. LOL
Date: 30 May 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow that girl just reeks of confidence. Go Bella! lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh god, great story so far, I really look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 29 May 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far and am interested to see where it could lead. Update soon please.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the idea, Really looking forward to the next chapters!..
Great job and thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 27 May 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am positive this is going to be a great story. Rose and Alice tricked poor Bella but maybe it is a good thing.
Date: 27 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
This should be interesting - look forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting I look forwawrd to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hehe can't wait to see how this will all play out. ;)
Date: 27 May 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love it. Hilarious.