Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
You are amazing! I look forward to every monday!! :)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow intense chapter. Loved it
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
well in the end im glad that edward isnt just sitting on his ass and doing nothing and hopefuly they will figure out whos behind all of this! keep the chapters comming
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward is really angry and I am afraid he may lose it. Bet it was James or his people who turned in Bella. I am so glad that Jake's truck was found in Trenton. The killers should have left it in Phily. Their mistake. Hope things will be getting better, but you promised that they would.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
I want to point out that Bella's screwups far out weigh Edward's.
She stayed with an abusive husband till she nearly lost Vanessa. Then proceeded to fuck things up by leading Jake on because she didn't want to man up and work on her own. And like a wrecking ball she didn't have the decency to close things off with Jake untill he nearly proposed.
And now? She leaves Edward without much thought giving him the impression she can't make it on her own. And has proceeded in his belief by telling Alice so.
I get it. She is going through a hard time and needs to get things in order. But she should have been Vanessa's mom first before acting the way she was. And then to give Edward the impression like it's all his fault? Was a low blow.
Like I was saying, Edward hasn't really screwed up towards any one person like Bella has.
He was in a loveless relationship for a long time. That was just as much Tanya's fault as it was his. If she has always felt the way she does now. Then she is just as much to blame for that whole situation as him.
As for the other stuff Edward supposivly did. He had cancer and a bad childhood. That pretty much trumps anything he has actually done.
Now, as for this chapter. Glad Edward is doing things besides wallowing in self-doubt and guilt. If only he could get a P.I on who rat Bella out, Although, judging from this chapter it's not hard to figure out.
Author's Response:
I don't know, Unicorn Bliss... I suppose it's a matter of opinion. I ham loathe to blame the victim in an abusive relationship... physical and psychological undermines your self confidence and make it very hard to leave. I blame James, not Bella. It was Ness that made Bella snap out of it. She was wrong when it came to Jake. But, she wasn't trying to give Edward an impression when she broke up with him. She was in the midst of the grieving process. She should have acted like Vanessa's mom first (I agree she was wrong there too) ... she never should have been with Edward in the first place.
Now, Edward... He had an abusive childhood and cancer... but you don't blame him for this, like you blame Bella for her abusive relationship. He pushed his entire family away for close to 25 years. He was in a relationship with Tanya out of convenience and strung her along for fifteen years. Just because Tanya's a bitch it doesn't make Edward's actions right. Edward's one person he screwed up towards is Tanya. And he was also wrong for entering into a relationship with Bella. Completely unethical.
Thanks for taking the time to write all that out, though. I'm always open to differing opinions. M
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved this chapter! EPOV is always my favorite.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was really hard. No Bella hating; sadly, she did what she had to do. I almost don't want to read EPOV. I might have to let this rest for a while before I read it.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
God that sucks that she ended it like that but I'm sooooo glad she didn't say yes. She's gotten stronger as your story goes. Seven chapters ago she would have said yes even if she didn't mean it.
And, am I the only one who thought it was both hot and heartbreaking when E said "Let me go"?...Yes? Sigh, thought so.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
oh my god! How sweet is Edward! I really really really hope Charlie watched bella as she opened everything and realises it is from Edward. Although i do understand why she did what she did because of everything, maybe he can talk a bit of sense into her whether it is about seeing Edward or her views on things like not having to face everything on her own and 'cough' marrage 'cough'. :)Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. oh p.s. I love the way ness talks and the way she says 'Ewoord'. SO cute!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm not gonna hate on Bella. I've broken up with someone before out of fear of bad timing. It didn't mean I felt any less for him; it just meant we weren't supposed to be together at that time. Edward seems to be coping well. I hope he manages to hold it all together because Bella's gonna need him. Good chapter!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow! I knew whoever was at the door had something to do with Jake. Actually, I thought it would be Jake. I can't believe Jake's dead. This will really suck for everybody.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love Edward and so does Bella she is only doing what everyone else thinks it is the right thing she needs to stop worrying so much about the others and go with her heart. No judge in ther right mind would give a baby to James.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow. You made me shed a tear at the end of this chapter. It was so sad yet touching at the same time. It's heartbreaking to know that Bella had to break up with Edward but it was all for a good cause. Hope things get better for them soon. And as for Edward, what he did towards the end was just so damn sweet!!!
This did it. "But please, Bella, I know it might be too late, but please don’t let go of me."--AAAAAWWWWW <3
Can't wait for your next update. :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
This just breaks my heart. Edward and Ness are so broken over this. And even after everything Bella did to Edward he is still so sweet with his messages. My advice for Bella be sure you know who the new babysitter really is. Hmmmmm
Date: 09 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
much luv. sad, but so glad to see hope at the end...and so glad E didn't go all broody head-case, but instead did something sweet to lift her spirits and let her know she is loved
cheers!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
yea she's a stupid bitch, i don't care if she is mourning she had no reason to treat edward like that
Date: 08 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so proud of Edward for not giving up.
As for Bella she is only trying to do what is right for her family she will come around
Date: 08 Nov 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm just majorly pissed off... that is all.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well.... I wanted to throw eggs at her in the beginning, but that was just the illogicalness in me.... As a mother... logically she did what she had to... and I´m hoping that this sickness is not just grief related... what makes me feel optomistic is Edward´s little care package at the end... if he´s not giving up, neither am I...I found this chapter alot more emotional than the last... where I did feel sorry about what happened to Jacob... the pain of their separation and the hurt in Lil Bell´s heart touched me way more... but I´ve trusted you this long... I refuse to change that now... sorry about the Award, but this was and amazing chapter and you are one hell of a writer... I´ll be doing shots of Stoli until next Monday!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
thats just wow!!! i hope in the end that she gets what she from going back to forks! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hey,
I doubt that you'll get any hating, bit def none from me, i think that everything has just smugded together at the wrong time, and their lives havn't been easy and it's continued to be hard, but maybe this break will be good for them.
Space to think, and heal.
I am still loving Ness sooo cute! update soon
FinS x
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
I barely made it through this chapter without crying! I really hope that edward can be in her life!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
I dont hate her. She has a daughter to think of FIRST. But again this is BULLSHIT.
THey split doctor/patient.. attorney/client to keep this from happening. SOO>>> DEAL WITH IT MS>>WRITER.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
Boo fucking hoo! You nearly had my ass in tears by the time we got to the end of that one. As a physician, you should know that there's not enough Xanax being produced to keep me calm through all of this turmoil. Shame on you for putting me through this and double-shame on you for making me love it. (I think you're a secret sadist and you're making me unwillingly come to terms with my masochistic tendencies because I can't stay away from you.)
Let's see...you've got us dealing with professional misconduct allegations for both Edward and Bella, Jake's dead (that took some serious cojones, girl - good for you!), custody issues with James and an attorney telling Bella that she has to break up with Edward. Plus some asshole detectives (I know they're probably good at their jobs, but I don't like anyone implying anything inappropriate between my B & E, even if I happen to know they've been a little inappropriate).
Heads up: If there's much more angst I'm gonna start sending you my pharmacy bills.
Will be requiring (XXX) make-up sex really soon if you really expect our relationship to last!
Just sayin'...
P.S. I still think you're the most awesome writer TWCS has ever had, so the threat over the make-up sex is an idle one, but can't you give me a little just because you love me?
Date: 08 Nov 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Although I don't hate Bella, I do hate that she pushed Edward away after all they have been thru, but I get it in a weird way...she has to take care of this unfinished business with Jake and her baby before she can go forward with Edward.
PS - I loved that he is still fighting for her by using her own prescription against her...I just hope the separation isn't drawn out too long, cause I love this couple.
Thanks - can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella will get a message to Edward that once all the crap has settled she'd be waiting for him too.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
I don't hate Bella. She and Edward made a huge mess of things all by themselves, and now she has to be a responsible parent. As for the po po...well, well they will get theirs!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jeez, can this week get any worse for them - Edward gets fired, Bella gets that letter regarding her medical license, Jake is dead, no longer MIA, and now he has to meet Charlie...needless to say, I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the good work, love your story!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
My review on FFFW pretty much said it all!! :-P
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Amazing chapter. Thank you!
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 10, Pt. II
I really loved this chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
First of all... I think I have never reviewed before but I absolutely adore the story and am thrilled about every update! Thanks for updating so frequently.
Especially in chapters like these it becomes obvious how much effort you put into creating your characters and let them come to life.
I am amazed by Edwards behaviour in this chapter and how he comforts Nessie and just steps in and takes charge. Without realizing it, he just does the right thing and pushes his own sh*** aside. I hope Bella will come to terms with her guilt and that Edward is patient enough to stick it out.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. II
Great chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7, Pt. I
Great chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying your story!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Well I guess that explains why he didnt call now I feel bad I thought he was just being a prick. I hope Bella can get past feeling it is her fault. James did it didnt he.????
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I love your story!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Gotta love Ness' lack of tact. Lol
Date: 01 Nov 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Whoaaaa!!! Jake´s dead...didn´t see that one coming..I would have bet money it was him at the door....That was kinda sad... I wanted him gone.. not necessarily dead, but such is life... I just can´t wait to find out what happened... I was really proud of Edward he was really good with lil Bell.. she is so freaking funny.... I understand that Bella is hurting and I´m glad that Edward didn´t take to heart what she said, and knows that she´s just lashing out, and he just happen to be there... we all know how she is, of course she´s gonna blame herself, but she can´t control everything... great chapter.. haha... we meet Charlie at the cliffie...lol..
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Nov 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Okay now. She is not going to take this out on Edward. She is a professional. She is not a dumb struck kid. She knows that what ever happened to him was not her fault. Suicide well if that is the case then she may feel really bad. But marrying someone you don't love would be even worse.
Love is MESSY.
I think this is a murder looked to James & Vicky.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh i do not see the first meeting with charlie going well at all.
please post soon
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ohhhhh! charlies in town! great x
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope that meeting charlie will be good for edward! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
See my review on FFN, hon!! :-P
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
crazy! Loved it! Can't wait to see what charlie thinks of little bells comment!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
So is it Jake at the door???? So how turned Bella into the medical board was it Tanya or was it Angela?????
Date: 26 Oct 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Marie, the stress is killing me here. You need to warn me when I need to take a Xanax before reading a chapter. The bad news? That cliffie ran me right over the edge. The good news? Prescription being refilled today.
(Seriously, girl, you can fuck with my head anytime. You're awesome!)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG!! How much more can they take???
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my God... Jacob.. I bet LOL
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
it's so Jake isn't it
can't wait to see how this plays out.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
no hatred for the cliffie but...damn that was evil of you ;) anyway, loving the fic. can't wait for more.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
My guess is that it is Jacob at the door!!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
that was freaking awesome... can somebody please neuter Tanya... she is seriously driving me to drink... God... get over it already... can you give her a man so she can move on already... I think Lil Bell is the freaking best.. that kid is hilarious.. the things she says.. ´can she get naked too´ I nearly peed my pants... Why do I get the eerie feeling that it´s Jake at the front door... great chapter... can´t wait until Monday!!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
great birthday even though shes stuck with whats going on! when will they ever get some happiness! i hate the cliffee the only person i can think it is is jacob. cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
R&R'ed on FFN, hon!! Is it Jake @ the door?! Ooops - facepalm time for Bella!?! :-D
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
GASP! OMG Update x
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
If Tanya had done that to Bella. Then I have no words. Well, not really. I think now she needs some jail time because it's looking on the stalker side, my friend. Not to mention if she knew about Bella having a kid. That will make her look ten times worse. Because she is now trying to get a single mom out on the job.
This isn't just revenge against Edward anymore. This is boardline phsychaotic.
That is of course if it is Tanya who done it.
James could have very well done it. He'll get little Bell if Bella can't support her. I'm hoping to god that,that isn't the case.
But if it is Tanya. I really hope she gets what's coming to her. She deserves a hell of a lot more then a slap on the wrist and a 'will forgaive' shit. A restainer oder perhaps? Something that's going to scare her off from persuing this little revenge game any longer.
Of course, I want more then that though. I just think it would be best if she was scared off in the porcess.
Her sister has to know that it's not healthy for Tanya to be this obsessed. To the point of ruining a family,literaly. Tanya may not know Bella's circumstances but she does know she has a little girl. Taking a job from a mother should make her ashamed. I hope her mother finds out what all her daughter (whom she is so proud of) has been doing and is trying to do. And cuts her off until she full on apologizes and compensates for what she has done.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
“I fucking know that, pony.”
I had to admit, I was relieved not to talk to the fucking pony anymore
OMG I read this chapter at work and was trying so hard to keep my laughter quite... it was great
Date: 25 Oct 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
i started this story yesterday and now I'm dying for the update. I so so am in love with this edward and bella
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. When I got to the "agin' grocer" I literally had to stop reading so I could laugh my ass off. Twice. That was absolutely hilarious! Love seeing Edward caught up in the chaos of a child's brain. Am loving Little Bell, too - you've done a terrific job of nailing her and her mindset. She's just adorable (and I'm not usually one for little kids littering up my lemons).
Am now wondering if the car from Washington has something to do with where Jake's been all this time. (Just sayin' - you've got my brain working overtime trying to figure out where we're going.)
Please give us a heads-up if you decide we need to go on the lam with them - I'll need to pack a couple of things first. Ladies - remember to bring lots of clean underwear for upcoming visits to Lemonland. (Marie never disappoints when it comes to making fresh, juicy lemonade.)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Shit who is this women and what does she want with Bella??? I am so happy he did not keep getting caned from Bella that would of been bad.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
haha!!! a day with Lil Bell... I just love her... the kid believes in speaking her mind.... she is too cute... I´m glad Edward didn´t get so overwhelmed that he considers leaving them... I still hate Tanya... but nothing new there... poor Felix... but Edward will have to pay the ticket.!!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
yey action! so love ness! x
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG, you have us so much in suspense. It was bad enough that Edward lost his job and that Tania is a bitch, but now James is trying to get joint custody. Guess that means that James is having someone spy on Bella's house to see that Edward is staying there. Poor Edward and Bella. I think this is going to blow up in their face.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
well i hope that james dosent get to see ness becuse it will break bella! i cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it amazing as always!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
The only way to get an ID on this women is to let her exit the car then get her to the door and then start questioning her.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder if Feliz is a hitman and if he'll consider killing James and that fucker he is chasing.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh i hate and love how you always leave us hanging! Oh i love Lil Bell she is so dang cute and i love how Edward is with her!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Shit I knew they were going to cause him shit but I didnt think it would be like this. He needs to start his own practic anyway and cut ties compleatle with Tanya and anyone related to the Bitch. Who was the women in the car???? I know wait and find out LOL
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh sh*t! I knew Tanya would flip out when whe learned about Bella, but I didn;t expect her to try and ruin him. Or, at least, I hope she won't.
It's going to be a long week for me :/
I really have become so hooked on your story!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
That is terrible he lost his job. I think the girl outside Bella's house may have been a spy on behalf of Jake. Wonderful chapter as always!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Why do I have the feeling Jake's going to pop in at the wrong time? Ugh! I feel for the kid, but he really is a dark cloud off in the distance.
Waiting with all the other storms just off in the distance. Stupid James and Victoria. When I really want is for it to rain kisses and more for Edward and Bella!
But I love the tension. Just the right amount so far...and it's haelped them bond so well!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Big smiles! :D
“Edward, no one knows how stuff like this is going to end. It’s all about deciding if it’s worth the risk.”
I knew reading them that Alice's words were golden, but having Edward turn around and recognize it too was perfection!
And Nessie is just as good at seeing the real picture!
Really love this story!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Kids are soooo perceptive. It's crazy how quickly they just get it sometimes.
But, I think Edward and Bella are finally starting to get it too! The impatience at the lunch date was just too precious and fluttery! The good stuff!
Well, the kissing and rubbing were good stuff, too. You totally convey that confidence that is achieved when you trust your partner.
And I love that Edward can carry a conversation and think protective thoughts about Bella when he's arroused now. His feelings for Bella are spreading into other categories. And I love it!
And again, thanks for your response. But, honestly, sharing this story just really is the right thing to do :D
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
that BIOTCH!!!!!!!! I HATE TANYA DENALI!!!!!!!!!!!! IRINA.... KATE...SASHA.....AND LAURANT, BUT THAT´S OKAY....I THINK ESMOM WILL HAVE A FEW CHOICE WORDS FOR THEM....PERSONALLY NOT TOO INTERESTED IN WHAT JAKEY POO´S DOIN AS LONG AS HE´S DOIN IT WITH SOMEONE ELSE, BESIDES THAT WAS FOUL HOW HE JUST BAILED ON LITTLE BELL...IT MEANS HE WAS ONLY THERE TO GET IN BELLA´S PANTIES...HE´S A FREAKIN DOUCHEBAG...I LOVE THAT LIL´BELL MENTIONED THE DADDY ISSUE TO EDWARD, SHE´S GONNA BE THE ONE TO SEAL THE DEAL FOR THOSE TWO...AND I´M WITH HER JAKES A POOPEY HEAD!!! GREAT UPDATE AS USUAL.....YOU MAKE MONDAYS SOOOOO MUCH BETTER!!! SEE YA NEXT WEEK
KRAZI
XOXO
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
hmm well I think that Tanya gift keeps on giving.
He is better off leaving that law office. If he is that good he will be better on his own or out of their influence.
Next thing he needs to do is tell his mother what Rose is doing to Bella. So she doesnt play into that.
Jake is hurt he went home to the Res to sulk. Probably. You write it!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
I didn't think I could hate Tanya more...and yet I do. sigh...Another great job though! I love Edward's interactions with Little Bell...they are so cute!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Whaaaaaa? O_o
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that ending is messed up. Edward should start his own practice. Great chapter!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
well didnt see that one comming! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed on FFN, hon!! :-P
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
What a chapter! I loved that once they let go, theiy snapped together like really charged magnets. (I know, tried to find a way to word that so that it didn't have a double meaning, and either it's really early, or it's impossible.)
But there's a whole lot of loose ends because of thier breakups. I was wary of tanya before, but knowing that she showed up at the office to put the urse in her place instead of confronting Edward speaks volumes about her! Not to mention all of the sabotaging she did with the event... Something tells me wh haven't seen the last of her, yet.
And there's got to be some sort of fall out with Jake, too. It's almmost sweet the way he thinks Bella's distance is because of James. But, somewhere along the line he's going to see that her change started right around the time she sought legal council.
Again, want to praise you on your thoroughness. All of the questions, comments, passing thoughts are always waiting for me in the next chapters. Really, great job!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thinl i'm at chapter 11- my internet window saves all the tabs i have open when i close it and the page is on 11 so i must be there - can only read a bit at a time.
I think i assumed that they would be single and things would go from there. I have nothing against them being with Tanya and Jake, does that last part make any sense?
what i ment in the last review is like when your watching a scary movie and you know something is gonna happen and you can see the scary thing creeping round and your just waiting for it to attack and you have to scrunch up your eyes closed and turn away from the screen.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my. that was so hard to read. I really feel for jake, but he's just not the one for her.
And poor Edward having to hear that Jake was thinking about marrying Bella. How much did Jake really tell him? Ugh.
It's a tough situation. For everyone.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok so, the first and second chapters just didn't sit right with me Bella being with Jake & Edward being with Tanya - not that its who they were with. MAybe i was just assuming about the story and it threw me off a little.
But it still didn't sit well with me and I had a really hard time trying to read this chapter, I was trying to decide if I should close the page or keep reading. So I'm at the stage where I couldn't really care less whats happening with Edward or James really for that matter but have to keep reading to see what does happen. Does that make any sense?
Author's Response:
LOL. To answer your question, No? Maybe? It's not supposed to sit right that they are with Jake and Tanya. But not caring about Edward... well, maybe you should step away. I'd be interested to hear if you kept reading.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving every update! Keep 'em, uh, coming!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so happy they have got to spend the time together. Is the treatment that Edward had make him 100% sterale or are there some live swimmers ;). I hope Rose pulls her head out of her ass before long. Where is Jake did he go back to fork or is he with Leah ya thats it he is with Leah?????
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok so i really hope you are heading down the surprise pregnancy route because i always love that turn of events. I mean we have now established bella isn't on birth control, we know they have had unprotected sex and well i know for a fact that men don't always stay infertile after cancer treatments overtime they can become fertile again.
can't wait to see what is to come
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another great chapter...I am really enjoying them as a couple now that they have declared their love for each other...Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love these two! Great chapter!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
This story is what make me happy about mondays.. nothing else... lol You are amazing and this story is amazing i love reading it and thank you for sharing! :) You are AWESOME! I am so curious about what Jacob has been doing and i am so scared any minute he will walk through the door and Edward and Bella will be together??!!! Cant wait till next monday!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Freaking awsome....Gosh I love these two....thanks for leaving that opening for Bella to get pregnant for Edward....because we don't know for sure if he's completely sterile...I love reading between the lines....I really hope that Ewoord will join Lil Bell's first day of school...and Jake doesn't show up being a jackass....just saying...thanks for be the cure to the 'Monday Blues'....great chappie...see ya next week!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
well it will be good when jake finally shows up and their pants are down on their ankles! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! Rose sure is full of herself. Emmet needs to tell her the real story with Edward, but it would awesome to see Esme go off on Rose.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rose thinks alot about herself and not so much about others yes she is protective but at what cost.