Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
This story is all over the place it's hard to keep up. Who wants to kill Bella besides Royce and where is Blake? Why is she not telling everything to Edward? What the hell has gotten into Emmet?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
why can't edward just change her and then she will be safe with him forever and maybe being a vampire she could get her sight too then i await your next chapter and you need to have emmett stay in love with rose for good no more wierdness
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
She's definitely a stubborn ass. I'm going through all the posible killers but I'm coming up blank. Cant wait to see who it is and what happens at the dance.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
poor b. got to be so confusing
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Now I am curious to see what they are going to tell Charlie!!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
WTF????
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
alice is a force to be reckoned with! ;)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Not good at all... That's it with the Volturi?? i don't think so... We'll see
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Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
Bloody bastard.... Royce is unfuckingstable....
I am curious about the volturi now... Let's see!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aahhh sweet revenge....! I can't wait to read Bella's plan!
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Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
:)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
What to do next indeed... we'll see!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
Lovely!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
LOL I can just imagine her brother whacking Edward!!
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Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
WTF?? Bloody bastard... Now I am pissed!
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Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
That Jake agreed so calmly was a bit weird but cool....
Liked it even though I still hate Royce...
xoxo
M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a bloody bastard... Gave her her sight only to take it back again....
I can imagine what he had done to poor rose... I am shivering just at the thought and that coming from me says a lot...!
One q now.... Where is Charlie?
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
:)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
:)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have this idea that she is Victoria before she was turned but it's rather stupid... Anyway... We;ll see!
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MArianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lovely!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
:-)
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Nice one!! It's very intersting to see this story evolve!! It's fast paced and full of action!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Liked it!!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Will we get to see the journals? I wonder... Anyway I like it!!
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M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a bastard.... I like Bella's power even more now!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW again...!! You are upredictable!! I can safely say that if I was left with this cliffie my sanity would have been destroyed....
xoxo
MArianne
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... That's a first chapter to remember.... So on with the next...!
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
omg what are you doing here if this is going to end with bella and emmett tell me now and i won't read anymore because i only like to read edward and bella stories so let me know vze13yama@verizon.net
Date: 20 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh wow. Poor Rose
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh my god is he for real so good please update soon
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow... I didn't expect that. Is he having feeling for Bella now? Wonder why he's considering getting a divorce from Rosalie?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Edward, next chapter?
Date: 17 Jul 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
it's a little fast lmao but i still like it all in all no problems here. very original
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
i love this sorry i didn't review earlier it's just that i couldn't stop reading lmao
Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hmm so Didyme told Bella her secret to help protect her from aro, wonder if she'll tell Edward or keep it to herself. Yay we finally got to know how it is that Bella can bring back the dead, a least now they can keep her from there so royce can't be alive again.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
hmm is that all the volturi interaxtion?
Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
Aro is going to want to change her but is she going to tell him and the guard about Royce. Maybe there's something they can do
Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
my only problem is all the grammatical errors. It makes it very difficult to read but the story line is good though
Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
ugh. Maybe Aro has a way to get rid of Royce.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
so good love it cant wait for the next chap so please update soo
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Haha brothers always getting in the way.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Isabella and Edward, bad Blake
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
poor B. Cockblocked by everyone
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
K so this story just took on a whole new kind of strange. Where the heck is all this going?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like that you update so frequently but I really wish that your chapters were longer. Just as I start to get back into the story the chapter is over. I'd happily wait a few extra days for more story.
Thanks for the wonderful storyline. Kat
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
Intriguing chapter
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can they bring Royce back and then kill him again OR Will Royce still be able to have such a drastic effect on Bella if they changed her?
Good Chapter. Kat
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
What's going on with Bella?
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Things are heating up between Bella and Edward. Loved it. Kat
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
This is new that Bella has a ghost in her house. Can he help her out and get rid of Royce?
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
lol for big brother blake
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
please tell me they will save her from royce i don't think i could take it if he harmed her she so needs edward and him her so please also if he could change her would that give her her sight then to be with him
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
ok let me tell you that you have a great mind not only does edward have to deal with emmettt but now he has to deal with blake bellas dead brother this story just got a lot moor intresting why do i have a feeling that blake is going to help get rid of royce some how and it is going to come down to bella having to be changed i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start to a story!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Omg that would be hilarious to have a brother like blake
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is getting way strange. How can she bring Royce back and how is it that he is able to mess with her? It's been so many years and now he wants to come back
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good idea, but you're grammer is horrible. You get a failing grade.
There instead of they're. Your instead of you're. And my all time favorite :Defiantly instead of definitely. Also, poor capitalization.
These things detract from your story and mean many will not follow it.
Clean up your editing. You have a great idea, but have produced a very sloppy piece.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward should just stay with Bella and watch over her. She can't be alone anymore.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
Interesting story. Royce plot line intriguing
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
omg please don't let her give in let her tell edward about what royce is doing to her she needs their help and this would be so sad because i think this would destroy rose i like the way thing are maybe if edward changes bella to a vmapire like him she will get her site then hopefully thru i await the next chapter
Date: 02 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
So I gather she has some power that can bring the dead back.. Can't wait to see if she chooses right.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Interesting kind of story.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
You have me really puzzled. I am dying to know where this is going. :) Kat
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
omg i am so excited you are a great writer please keep it coming i want to find out who it is and if her and edward will be together forever if he changes her will she get her site with him
Date: 27 Jun 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
As always a great update! :)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great update for a brilliant story! :)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great Chapter.
Kat
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
I just found this and I have to saw that this is pretty awesome! I hope that you continue to update as frequently as you have been. I'm ready to find out more!
Great job.
PP
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love the mystery that you are weaving with the story. It keeps me wanting to read more to find out what happens next.
Kat
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't think the Volturi would come all the way to Forks to kill people. Maybe someone wanting it to look like the Volturi. Can wait to see what happens next
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
So interesting! How does she do this & remain so calm!