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Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

I can see Carlisle feeling really bad for the type of person Bella has become.  I'm sure I'm gonna be saying "poor Carlisle" a lot before this is over.



Author's Response:

Carlisle is so compassionate you just know he's going to feel responsible in the end. "Poor Carlisle" is right for now. But I wonder if the human version of him will be different? Thanks, Mizzdee. :)

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

I'm finally getting to this.  I'm liking evil Bella. Can't wait to see what you do to poor Carlisle.



Author's Response:

It's not me honest, It's evil Isabella. :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

Love it, you made my day by posting this today! Nothing like abusing a Cullen while taking a break from studying. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Jill...I like abusing the Cullen's. In real life I think I might want to kiss at least two of them. Thanks I love coffee, Diane.

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 7 Carlisle Submits

wholly..uh... bph...da..baa.. im speechless.   wow daddy likes it rough huh? lol   ooooo i cant wait for some southern lovin jasper style  even though she might have to crack out a whip or something to reign him in  maybe hog tie him as well. 



Author's Response:

D**n Daddy, is freaking hot naked, and.....I'll stop there. Aw, yes ma'am, Jasper, southern style. Can I get an Amen? I love that Jasper is southern, I am as well. I have cruel but kind plans for Jasper. Isabella needs to play some head games. I hope you don't hate me for what she does to him. It's not my fault, really... :) Thanks for reading and reviewing for me....keeps me inspired....Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

oh $hit  she shot Edward!!  Not surprised though lol.  ooooo are we gonna have another taking..? lol.  knowing Bella I bet she'll prop up both Carlisle and Jasper and have them watch eachothers taking haha......muahahaha



Author's Response:

Lol...that would have been a good idea-but I already have the next couple of chapters outlined- I bet Bella would have loved an audience. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.  :)  Diane

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

please update soon. love this story



Author's Response:

I will update Monday or Tuesday of next week. If the story picks up along the way I will try and update more than once a week. Thanks for sending a review megEb. :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

I loved this chapter with evil Bella seeing Edward & Alice again! And she should have fun with feisty Jasper! Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Well, that certainly made me smile. :)  I was nervous about writing the other ones in and how she might re-act to them. I think she chose a good one with Jasper. She'll have to break him down mentally before she can win him over. Thanks Kitkatr...Diane

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

Bella is a horrible bitch .... but I love the story!



Author's Response:

Hey as long as you love it I'm happy....Diane :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

Wow is she evil!!



Author's Response:

My 'evil muse' is working overtime. :) Thanks for those coffee cups girl! Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

uhh..  now that.. I didnt enjoy..  ouch.  she shuda just taken him again im down with that lol.



Author's Response:

Don't worry he'll be fine and she'll do her thing again...lol...she had to teach him respect, Bella demands it in fact. :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

wow, I think Daddy C needs some help. Bella is evil and its great and so entertaining!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement because I am loving evil Bella...she's fun to write. Thanks for the coffee !!!!   Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

oh crap..  is it wrong to be totally turned on by that?  It feels like I should be disgusted or pissed but damn i think i was channeling evil Bella and getting a kick out of it. lol



Author's Response:

I'm glad I'm not the only one feeling this way....lol. We will just blame evil Bella :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

muahaha hes gonna be "taken"  *giggle*  man-rape! man-rape! lol



Author's Response:

I know it sounds so freakin' sexy-but I had trouble making it happen. grrrrrrrrrrr

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

ooh cant wait to see what she does.



Author's Response:

Well, we know it will involve fire.....hope she remembers to bring a hose. She's such an evil little thing and I don't think she enjoyed Carlisle's sense-of-humor... but I did......Thanks for reviewing Meg....Diane

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

"isabella, remove your hands from my private area."

i laugh so hard, that was funny



Author's Response:

LOL...yeah like the Daddy thing is going to stop her, right.....Diane :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

All I can say is wow this story rocks!! Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jilli, I was really surprised at the response I have recieved from this story. I guess everyone likes a Bella that takes no crap.

Thanks for the coffee cups, I always love those and for taking the time to read and review Bella's evil ways....Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

Wow, this is crazy and I love it!! Don't piss Bella's character off, she's gone mental and taking it out on Papa C!! Rape of a male vampire if you will call it that... there are just no words for that. This is great, Im now addicted and have to add this to my alerts.



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you love this story...Yep Bella's gonna get her some.....Glad you added me to your alerts. Hope to hear from you next chapter. Thanks, for the coffee.....Diane

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

dang! i seriously cant wait to see what happens next! i really love it so far!!



Author's Response:

Well Bella always gets what she wants...or should I say takes. Thanks for reviewing, I love it. :)

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

wow I'm even scared of bella.. I mean Isabella. 



Author's Response:

LOL....that was a cute response...love it....Diane :)

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

oh snap! Bella is a badass! lol 



Author's Response:

Bella is long past due her revenge...lol.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Local News

Oh no she didn't! She wants to do the vertical tango with Carlisle? Bella is one evil, badass woman! I love this story - can't get enough!



Author's Response:

I would be upset if I were cheated out of some vampire sex...hehe. Hope to hear from you soon, Diane

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

OOops! This is my first BAD Bella story. Usually I read BAD Carlisle stories. :o)

Nice that Bella isn´t crying the whole time! Will wait for update. KR



Author's Response:

Oh I Love it when Carlisle is Bad, in a good way...lol. I know this sounds stupid because they 're not real-but I would love to hear them growl and purr. I think that is so freakin' sexy. Thanks for taking the time to review....Diane

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

Om my gosh ---- Bella has gone off the deep end of evil! I cannot wait to see what horrible things she has planned (poor Carlisle though; I really like him, but someone has to pay)!



Author's Response:

I love Carlisle to but the plot was just to perfect. Bella is going to be a real bitter, evil "b". Hope to hear from you next chapter.....Diane

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

wow, a mean bella. its good to see that someone has written her this way. it gets tiring reading about her when she is written the same in almost every story. i also find it funny that the upstanding carlisle is finding it hard to believe that underneath it all that he really is to blame. cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

lol....yep, no more boohoo Bella.....I think given the situation in a lot of ways Carlisle is at fault. Don't get me wrong, I love my Carlisle. However, you have made a very good point here. Thanks for the Coffee, I love it....hope to hear from you next chapter as well....Diane. :)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

Wow nasty Bella - I love it.



Author's Response:

She's got to get bitter at some point, huh...thanks for the coffee..... Please stay in touch so I know what your thinking, Diane

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

Wow Bella is one bitter and twisted bad ass.  Makes a change from whim and moaner.



Author's Response:

She won't be doing acting that way in this story. Thanks again, Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Room

trully evil actions and words but I dont think its really what she is...its more of a result from pain and rejection. 



Author's Response:

Well, she's had a long time to become bitter and evil.....lot's of effort spent on revenge. She will do evil things to Carlisle so be prepared. It will be a good while before anything nice shows through....even then it might not last long, given what I have planned for her. Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know what your thinking. Please stay in touch, Diane

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

this was an interesting begining to this story. i cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I can't wait to get more of it out there either. Thanks for the Coffee....Diane

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

muahaha   Evil  Bella.. 



Author's Response:

I know  muahaha

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

Oh yes.....I love an evil vindictive Bella! I can't wait to see the things she does to Carlisie! Looking so forward to more of your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm really excited about it....Diane

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