Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this!!
Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this!!
Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:11 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this!!
Date: 28 Aug 2019 2:11 AM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this!!
Date: 14 Sep 2016 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Its it Sam the cook?
Date: 14 Sep 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah she was taking that need some space thing too far. Not so much angst as annoying. Now on to the good ;-)
Date: 14 Sep 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love gay bestie Jacob. He shouldn't be written any other way. Prudish Bella really needs fuckawesome Edward. I love the "fucking" Cullen's. And who the heck is following Bella?
Date: 05 Sep 2016 5:28 PM Title: Epilogue
I would love a new story to see what everyone has been up to. Loved the story!!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:22 AM Title: Epilogue
cool little story ;)thanks for posting it ;D
Date: 13 Oct 2013 10:32 PM Title: Epilogue
Enjoyed!! Cockyward rocks!!!
:)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 7:54 AM Title: Epilogue
Great ending just so sad it's over thanks
Date: 11 Aug 2013 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue
I going to miss this story. Thank you for putting it up on mobi, this way I can re-read this story anytime, anywhere.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 1:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this story, sad it's over. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 1:05 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for sticking through to the end of this story.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 5:03 AM Title: Epilogue
That was amazing :)
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:58 AM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for the great ending, love to see Bella & Seth with a HEA.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 3:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Yay! I'm so glad you were able to finish this story. I've enjoyed it from when I first read it a long time ago.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 3:07 AM Title: Epilogue
great ending !
Date: 10 Aug 2013 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it Sam aka Lonnie w was a scary guy so happy Alice was watching . Bella was so cute when she told him she loved him. So sad it is almost over.
Date: 10 Aug 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it! I cannot wait to see who her attacker was and to see if there will be a lemon in the next chapter, or the epi!
Date: 06 Aug 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
welcome back "jumping and claping"
there are few stories that havent been update in a long time that I wish the authors would have the time, the writers mind and their RL letd them finish their stories.
This is one of them
Thank you thank you and will be waiting for the next update, doesnt matter if is in
5 days or 5 months I'll wait
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
What was she thinking that they would let her or Seth go anywhere but none with them. Faith is so cute.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loo moreking forward to
Date: 04 Mar 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
someone is going to die when they get ahold of him
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it and cannot wait to learn more about what happened!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more
Date: 03 Mar 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Omg, great to have you back!!! Who attacked Bella ? Hope we don't have to wait long for the next update.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMFG What happened to her all the good stuff going on something had to go wrong I cant wait for more and I loved your teaser :) keep it coming
Date: 16 Jan 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update! can't wait to see what happens!!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jan 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
OH WOW, that was amazing :D I really loved it SO much! My parents still tell us Santa comes (and my brother and I are 18 and 22, respectively). My dad claims that Santa visited his house until he moved out and married my mother when he was 24! Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, how could you leave us hanging like that? Smh lol
Date: 15 Nov 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love this story :)
Date: 14 Nov 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
She is so proud of Seth what a great kid. I love Edward and his dirty mouth. I hope Bella and Faith work it out soon.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
SO amazing :) I really cannot wait for more!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
I have forgotten about this story, I ahd to go back and re read over it/ Glad to see your going to finish it. IDC how long it takes. Keep up the good work, doll.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Please continue ... I forgot how much I loved this story until I reread it..... Thank you
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love this new chapter. Glad this story is back missed it alot. Cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hey. Welcome back.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
YOUR BACK!!! Can't wait for the next update...
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was so excited to hear that you where still here Thanks so much for completing this I have miss you I enjoy your storys very much. Faith has to warm up to Bella
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
SO amazing :D I really loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
It would be great if you could post a reminder paragraph if t is going to be along time between updates for those of us with sieves for memories.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
im glad there is another chapter, cant wait to read more
Date: 31 May 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
awesome chapter. cant wait for more. any idea when u will update this?
Date: 07 Sep 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter.. I loved the whole getting ready for the date with jake and bella too funny. And the Edward and diaper woo's jus tlove reading about him 'being all foul mouth daddy duty stuff. Sooo glad they went out and talked everything out put that behind them and can focus on each other now. Ugh Jake should have taken Seth to his apartment so Bella & Edward could have came back to a empty apartment. oh well I guess I can't have sexy Cullen in every chapter. lol.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please update soon!!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fanfuckingtastic chapter
Date: 08 Jun 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
best date ever! yay! the rose and tanya thing - awesome!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
you will wear the dress jake got you for the dinner at the compound! silly girl. so glad they are back on. seth is a smart kid. i think he will be having a great christmas this year....
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
uhoh momma e wants to do tea1 what does that mean? is eddie a big emo crying baby waiting for his bella to call and momma e needs bella to do something? or is she there to talk bella through all of this?
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
tanya is fucked! and her family needs tolet her know that kinda shit ain't cool!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
aha! i was right faith is baby cullen! heehee. and eddie said bella was his girlfriend and shit, how sweet is that?
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh my goodness! em at a nudist cult gathering!!! too fucking funny!
ok i still say faith is eddie's kid it was mentioned she was the only person he would stay away for....
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
so is faith eddie's long lost baby girl? one eddie didn't know about until after she got sick? and what is wrong with momma e?
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
well they just couldn't help themselves, yummy! sleepover time for the swans this should be fun! and bella take the chance and join eddie you know you wanna!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
so rose and em and the rest of the family know a little something about loseing parents and raising siblings. i wonder if the cullens knew charlie and sue? dinner is gona be fun
Date: 08 Jun 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
aww eddie is too cute and something tells me the racing ho's don't get all of this. love seth and all of his holy shit hero worship that is going on.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow sounds like bella is ready for someone to take care of her for a little while, any ideas of who might be up for the job eddie?
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh seth is gonna be stoked! what happened to charlie and sue? obviously they have past but what happened?
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
:D Loved this :) the part with the dress made me burst out in laughter so funny :D can't wait for the next chapter when you can get it to us :)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Twilight wins all!!!! Great show MTV awards. So happy to get update and hope your fingers are better. Your story is great and just cause you didnt win doesnt mean other storys are better I think it was because of updates I voted for you and I lie in wait for update but some do not. I think once you got this story done and then reposted it you would win any contest there is because this story has it all.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
well im glad that he cleared it all up!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love this fic...keep it coming...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
LMAO!!! The idea of Bella doing the Carlton makes me very happy. :-)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Just imagining tough guy motocross star Edward changing a poopie diaper just makes me LMAO! Glad these two talked and things seem to be back on track again.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I loved that date! I wish I could have one like that ;) Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Update Soon!!! Love this story!
Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well thank god Bella finally gave in & spoke to him. I am so glad for that. Seth who'd have thought he'd be the voice of reason Good for him to listen to what she said and brought up some really good points. Like the whole thing with Jake.. I didn't even think about that. Okay I'm behind so onto the next chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh! so cute!!
Great beginning. I can't wait to read next chapter. Hey, I don't have to wait. You've got this up to 11 chapters! Yeah, me happy!
Thank you.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Make up sex rules hawt chapter and the girl bonding was awesome too
Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you thank you I didnt think you were coming back and I am so glad you did I have been dying for them to make up. Got to love Seth he is one smart boy and it is a good thing he knows his sister and it helped alot that Esme and Alice showed up. I hope Edward knows how much people want him to get it right.???
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved this chapter. Please update soon!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Very funny stuff !
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Edward is SEXY !!!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I Love Jatina!! I LOL
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love it! More please!!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been enjoying your story thank you ...
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love love love this story :D I love your Edward and Bella and how they interact :D Can't wait for the next chapter and for Homecoming :D x
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I laughed so hard , i cried!
It is simply perfect. I wish
we had Em's pov. I would
make a great out-take! :)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love the term "batshit crazy"...I just LMAO everytime I hear it and that alone explained Tanya perfectly. I loved how Esme and Alice were able to "inform" Bella without making it seem like a lecture or a "talk". And how adorable is Seth? I want my son to grow up to be just like him! ;) Having Edward show up at Bella's rather than call was perfect-to some the "exchange;)" may have seemed wrong (like they should've talked), but for these two kids it was just right.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. So happy theyre back together.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
YAY! Go Bella and Edward ;) I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Okay yes I agree he should have told her but come on this is silly how long does she need? The thing with Tanya should be long since forgetten..that wasnt' really anything the baby yes he should have told her but maybe he wanted to make sure they were going to last and work out before he introduced her to his daughter. I know if i as a simple parent i wouldn't just blurt out my life story right away or show my child to someone i may or may not be with in a couple of weeks. Anyways hopefully Esme can talk some sense into Bella and she starts talking to Edward again.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) The seperation won't be long it's over in the next chapter though there is more reason to it than what she is claiming, yea he fucked up but your right it could have been much worse and they haven't been together long. Here is your chapter 11 teaser...
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
LOVES THIS STORY
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) Glad you are loving the story, here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
OK!! This has to be one of the best chapters I have ever read!! I love this story to!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter not enough edward
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) I promise next chapter has a lot more Edward, I miss his cocky ass to much to keep him away for long. For now here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Please update soon. You're killing me with these long waits. But I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what Esme has to say. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) Sorry about the waits, it's just real life drama and writer's block that cause them. I wish I was able to update everyday like some writers sadly I can't. To tide you over here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! I love Jatina!!!!!! ;D Update soon please?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) It always warms my heart when people give Jatina love. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
Go Esme get them back on track. Bella is just being stuborn yes Seth is her priority but she needs to take care of herself also. i cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) I agree Bella is stubborn, but I think Edward might have her beat in that department lol. Here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for the update. Missed this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) Sorry the wait was so long, here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, if Momma Esme is getting involved that must mean that Edward still wants to be with Bella. Can't wait to read about the "tea."Ü
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) LOL yep Momma Esme is stepping in. And here is your chapter 11 teaser!!
"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.
"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"
"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.
"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.