Date: 26 Sep 2010 4:08 PM Title: Unbelievable
Wow! I knew Riley was connected with James but never would have guessed these jerks were father and son. Okay so that leaves Aro. What is up with him and when are you gonna tell us? Also what was going on with the Cullens in the kitchen? I thought for sure that Emmett and Edward got into a fight. But you cleared that up because I don't think that Emmett and Bella would keep that from each other. DAMN!!!! A few questions answered and SOOOOOOO many more raised. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
well, aro is creepy for now. the agents are looking into his background and will let us know when they find out more. nope, emmett and edward weren't fighting. the cullen's are hiding something, but we'll find out soon. thanks so much for the awesome review!!! ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:13 PM Title: Unbelievable
lmao! i loved it. i am so glad that bella is moving forward and becoming happier even if there is impending danger. I can't wait to find out edward's secret. is it epilepsy...no....emmet just said he passsed out......Is a medical..or memory induced? now im at the edge of my seat i want to know! this was a great chapter and i can not wait for more!! You're going to have to tell the peanut to let you relax so we can get more updates lmao. If it's a girl. I vote you name it after me lmao.j/k
Author's Response:
hahaha!! we will find out more about edward's "condition" in the near future. just like bella's not ready to share everything, neither is edward. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:46 AM Title: Escaped
ahhhhh!!!!! update soon!
Author's Response:
update should be very soon!! thanks for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Escaped
I think Aro is a dirty cop? and he might be behind ALL of this, maybe including the James situation? Thanks for the update and cant wait for more
Author's Response:
i think answers will be coming soon. you have some very good assumptions. thanks for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Escaped
What is up with Aro? I don't trust him, and i think he may have ulterior motives with all of this.
I hope that Jake is okay and that they find out what happened to Riley and the driver. Was the driver, James?
Great story.
Author's Response:
ah, yes. aro is starting to be a creepster, too. the driver and fate of jake will be revealed next chapter. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! ;)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:52 AM Title: Unexpected
Is Riley w/ James? Are Edward, Jacob, Emmett or Jasper going to get to Bella before she is forced to leave? I hope you have the chance to update again soon.
Author's Response:
james always seems to be connected, doesn't he? we'll find out what happened to bella next chapter. i plan to update friday or saturday. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 9:32 PM Title: Unexpected
where the hell is edward and the agents? cant wait for more
Author's Response:
ah yes, we shall find out more next chapter! thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:48 PM Title: Unexpected
OH SHIT!!! NOOO!!!
Author's Response:
exactly my sentiments. we'll find out next chapter if all's well in Forks. thanks for the review! ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:57 AM Title: Premonitions
HAHA! Good for Edward!
Author's Response:
i love the end to that chapter! i had to make him say it. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:06 PM Title: Unexpected
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it! and you're my 100th reviewer on this site!! thanks so much for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:50 AM Title: Unexpected
Riley has always given me the creeps. With all of those agents around, how could they not see what was going on. I figured Edward would be right there watching Bella and Riley like a hawk so he could kick Riley's ass if he saw anything he deemed inappropriate. I do hope that Bella will be smart enough to scream. I know that the music would probably be loud, but it was a slow song. I want to know more about Riley. Really, what is up with the creep?
Thank you for update and I really am excited to find out where your story is going to take us.
Author's Response:
i agree. riley is just a creepoid. EPOV next chapter will clear up some of the confusion of how Riley gets away without them noticing. we will learn more about who Riley really is later in the story. but for now, he's just a sleazy high school teenager. thanks so much for the review!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:30 AM Title: Unexpected
i laughed through this entire chapter. i loved it lmao esp the part where edward stepped on Alice lmao hilarious. riley is in for a world of hurt. jake is totally going to light the fire under his ass if he fucks with bella.
totally love this story! you made me choke on my doritos wheni saw u rec'd me . omfg! i didn't think you'd like it enough to rec it! i can't stop smilling!!! your one of my fav authors, you don't know how happy i am to see that you dig my story. you've made my day! * tear* lmao i can't wait until your next update!! i hope it's soon!!
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it, babes! i wanted to throw in some humor. and i'm super happy to rec you. your story is great and i had to help you out. sorry i made you choke on your doritos, though. i should post a warning so readers don't eat/drink while reading. apparently this story can hazardous to your health. all i ask is that you pay it forward. if you're reading a story that you really like, then rec it. and if it's one of your reader's you rec, they'll love it. thanks for the review, sweets and i hope to post in a week. ;) <3
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:04 AM Title: Darkness
loving this story! how often do you post? do you have a schedule? im checking all the time and disappointed there's nothing more.
Author's Response:
oh, i'm sorry that you're disappointed, but i guess that's good in a way, too. it must mean you really like it! so thank you very much! i don't have a posting schedule b/c my life is super chaotic, but i try to post every 2-3 weeks. if you favorite me or the story, an email will automatically be sent to you when i update. i plan on updating within the next couple of days, so favorite me before then and you'll be sure to stay posted! thanks so much for enjoying and reviewing! ;)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Hiding
yay jasper's coming, jasper's coming! and bella has asked for help and told eddie it;s not his fault. things seem good... for now.
Author's Response:
yep, good old jasper. ah, don't get too comfortable. there's drama on the horizon. thanks for all your lovely review, babes!!! ;)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:05 AM Title: Help
poor bella. was the creek she heard em coming in to save her? who will the doctor be? jasper's mom or dad? when will we see rose?
Author's Response:
you are very astute! rose will come into the story soon! ;)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Triggers
what is going on in miss bella's head?
Author's Response:
some not so fun things, i'm afraid :(
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:04 AM Title: Agent J
well no jasper, pooo but iguess with alice being 16 that would be an issue
Author's Response:
yeah, no jasper yet. but rest assured, i won't leave alice hanging. ;)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: Victims
is the agent jasper? alice can finally have her honey she's been waiting for.
Author's Response:
alice will get jasper soon. thanks for the reviews, babes!!! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: Intruder
well this is just turning into a royal cluster fuck ain't it? and eddie and bella need to have some alone time.
Author's Response:
it definitely is... and we haven't even gotten to the good stuff yet. ExB will get their alone time soon! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Protector
Well what the Fuck?!
Author's Response:
hahaha!!! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:20 PM Title: Premonitions
Heehee bella's boobies!
Wonder who is at the hotel with them? And will alice's key end up in the wrong hands...?
Author's Response:
i loved that line! i had to make him say it. it's a typical teenage boy word. thanks for reviewing! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:48 PM Title: Unstable
Well they had a moment and a kinda kiss, damned emmy!
Author's Response:
yep... emmett seems to get in the way a lot. ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:17 PM Title: Misunderstanding
don't ya just wanna hug bella? and em?
Author's Response:
they need lots of hugs! thank you for all of your reviews! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:37 AM Title: Traitor
poor bella everyone deserves understanding, love and a feeling of belonging.
Author's Response:
i completely agree. and she is finally at a place where she will get those things. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:31 AM Title: Home
it is sad to see the insecurities that bella and em have about the new family. seeing is believing right?
Author's Response:
they've been through some rough times at their previous homes, so that's all they know to expect. it is sad. thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: Darkness
i love your bella! she is a shit i can tell!
Author's Response:
bella definitely has an attitude. thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:04 AM Title: Hiding
i happy that bella is getting help...and i am really happy that jasper is comeing in to the story but what about rose?
Author's Response:
rose will be introduced soon. school will start first. don't worry. i wouldn't leave emmett lonely!! thanks for the review!! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:27 AM Title: Hiding
i love it amazing i wonder if jasper and alice will get together and if emmett will meet rose soon......
Author's Response:
i'm glad you like it! i'm a cannon shipper so everyone will get together in the end! thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:16 PM Title: Hiding
You have done a very good job on your story so far and I'm excited to read what happens when Dr. Whitlock and his son come to town.
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you're enjoying my little story. thank you so much for your reviews, and all kinds of fun stuff will happen when our new additions come to Forks!! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:22 PM Title: Hiding
Really enjoying this story, cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you're liking it. thank you so much for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:28 AM Title: Hiding
great chapter i was so waiting on this. i'm a little scared to see what bella went through. but she has ppl to support her now so i'm happy
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it. bella went through some really tough stuff, but you're absolutely right. she has people that will support her and help her cope. thanks for the reviews!! ;) btw... you're story is rocking my world!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:51 AM Title: Hiding
his kid is jasper update soon please.
Author's Response:
yep, jasper is movin' to town! yay! chapter 14 is in the works. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:42 AM Title: Darkness
Very good chapter...I think Bella may find herself in some trouble when it comes to Edward. I love the relationship between Emmett and Bella.
Author's Response:
thank you very much! bella and edward will be getting into some trouble later on. thank you so much for the review!! ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:56 AM Title: Home
kinda makes me wish I had a cousin like Alice... she would be too much 24/7 as an adopted sister, but a cousin you see a few times a year... she would be amazingly fun!
Author's Response:
alice can be a little much at times, but i think she's one of my favorite characters to write. she would really be a fun person in real life!! thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:34 AM Title: Darkness
Loved the first chapter... the chainsaw imagery was intense!
Author's Response:
thank you! i'm glad you liked the intensity. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:39 PM Title: Help
wow that was really intense. i am guessing he sexually assaults her. update soon please
Author's Response:
you are correct in your assumption. i had written the dream in greater detail but had to tone it down in order to post the chapter. child abuse is a scary thing and we're seeing how that experience can affect someone. it is very intnse. thank you so much for the review, sweets!! ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:30 PM Title: Help
Wow, Great Story!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
thank you so much!! i'm glad you're enjoying it!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 1:04 PM Title: Help
loved it can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thank you! i also saw your update and it's getting very interesting ::wink:: can't wait to see where the next installment goes. thanks for the review, sweets! ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 1:33 AM Title: Help
I'm glad Bella realizes she needs help and that she actually spoke to Carlisle about it. I hope she's able to heal. As for the nightmare I think Emmett's about to show up with the chain saw. The noise she heard was probably him.
Author's Response:
bella has a long road to recovery, but she'll get there. and i'm glad you picked up on the noise. it is very important in the progression of the nightmares. ;) thanks so much for the reivew, babes!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: Help
amazing!!!! i love it!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying it! ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:32 AM Title: Triggers
loved this can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
i'm so glad! i had to put that story in there for some comic relief since it gets heavy again at the end. thank you soooo much for all of you beautiful reviews, babes! i loved reading all of them. chapter 12 is almost complete, so hang in there! ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 6:11 AM Title: Agent J
i knew it! but i hope she isn't attracted to him! how old is he technically?
Author's Response:
he won't cause too much grief for ExB. i think i said he's 21, which is too old for anything to happen between these two. and i'm a canon shipper to the end, so that should give you another clue as to where this will go. thanks for the reviews! ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:56 AM Title: Victims
i bet it's jake lmao
Author's Response:
you are on the right track! thanks for the review! ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: Intruder
i really loved this chapter. and i realized that she had a natural reaction. i want to know what truly happened but i know i'd be really disturbed
Author's Response:
yeah, unfortunately the body has a mind of its own sometimes. we'll find out why she reacted the way she did in later chapters. thanks for the reviews!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2010 8:17 PM Title: Premonitions
too fucking funny who says boobies anymore besides bobby bouche' lmao
Author's Response:
i know! i had to make him do it, though. it just seemed like an appropriate thing for a horndog teenage boy to say. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:38 AM Title: Unstable
loved this. emmet is the biggest cockblocker next to newborn babies lmao
Author's Response:
hahahaha!! that is soooo true! but i love emmett. he's just watching out for his sister. thanks again for the reviews!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:04 AM Title: Misunderstanding
aww this was so freakin sweet!
Author's Response:
thanks babes! i'm glad you liked it! thanks for the review! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Triggers
I'm glad that you are getting a bunch of reviews on the other sites. I tried to up the count here and when there are more chapters I'll be able to review them too. :0) Hope the number keeps you ispired to keep writing this story. To bad Bella had to freak out at the end, but now I'm wondering did James call her "my Bella?" Guess I could go back and read the parts with him and see if it was mentioned but I'm too lazy to go look. ha ha Great story and I'm really looking forward to reading more. :0)
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i'm floored by the response this is getting. any reviews are appreciated. i have some of the best readers in the fandom!!! i will definitely keep writing. all of your questions will be answered in time. thank you soooo much for all of your reviews, babes!!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:52 AM Title: Agent J
I knew it would be Jake. lol
Author's Response:
i had to bring him into the story somehow! thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:25 AM Title: Victims
I'm so happy that Carlisle and Esme want to keep Bella and Emmett. They deserve to have a family who will love them and take care of them. Pretty scary news about the killings though. I would think the cops would be wondering if they had a leak or something because it seems James is killing people in the areas where the B & E are. How is he finding them? Also why didn't they change their names? :0) I also have a funny feeling that the detective assigned to protect them is going to be Jacob. I could be totally wrong but I guess I'll see in the next chapter. ha ha Great story!
Author's Response:
wow, what an awesome review!!! the cullen's are awesome. i love them so much. james is one crafty guy. he slips right through the cracks, but we'll figure out why eventually. thanks for R&R!! ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:42 AM Title: Intruder
I can't believe it wasn't James. But when the server guy acted scared I figured he was the wrong guy. James is crazy like Bella said Emmett wouldn't have been able to just hold him down like that. Wonder why the detective wants to talk to them? Loving the story :0)
Author's Response:
nope, not james... but caius is important ::wink:: thanks for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:42 PM Title: Triggers
Sorry i didn't review the chapters before! But I just wanted to say this is real good keep it up please!!
Oh and the banner I know you didn't do it! But are you sure the "Edward and Bella" (her in yellow) is them something looks off for both people!
Author's Response:
i love any reviews i get, so thanks bunches! i'm glad you like it! the pic in the banner is from the Eclipse movie. it's the end scene where they are in the meadow. thanks again for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:32 PM Title: Protector
I love the time they are speniding and having fun together. Truth or dare ha ha Can't wait to see who's at the door that made Bella react the way she did.
Author's Response:
i loved playing truth or dare, so i wanted them to have some fun. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:53 PM Title: Premonitions
Edward felt like someone was watching them??? The guys competition in the gym was funny. :0)
Author's Response:
they all kinda felt on edge. and i thought some macho time for the boys would be a good bonding experience. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Unstable
Poor Poor Bella. I'm surprised she seems so well adjusted (except for the nightmares) considering all she and Emmett went through. Wonder what will happen on this trip. Does Alice know something is going to happen??? Really liking the story. :0)
Author's Response:
yeah those nightmares will get worse, unfortunately. she's bottling too much stuff up. thanks for the reviews!!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: Triggers
oh edward! lol that must haven been a scene!
Author's Response:
it definitely was! thanks for all of your wonderful reviews!!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:02 PM Title: Misunderstanding
So glad Bella has calmed down and let Edward explain everything. Looking forward to seeing where things go from here. :0)
Author's Response:
thank you, babes!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 6:01 PM Title: Agent J
i new it was jake i love it lol edward!
Author's Response:
edward cracks me up, too!! thanks for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:53 PM Title: Victims
awwwww o love it!!! Aro was mad! I think the bodyguard is Jake...
Author's Response:
wow, thank you! aro is a very dramatic kinda guy. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 5:14 PM Title: Traitor
Still loving the story. You may have heard this already but I think Bella's totally over reacting. :0) Of course the foster family would get to see files on the kids they are bringing in to their homes. Surely she'd know that and just because they read them doesn't mean they believe everything. I mean they still opened their home to them didn't they??? Oh well, hopefully she'll give Edward a chance to explain. :0)
Author's Response:
i completely agree. bella is totally over reacting. we just have to remember she is a teenager and drama reigns during those years. she is also very overwhelmed b/c she's never had such a wonderful family. thanks so much for the reviews!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:34 PM Title: Intruder
oh................i love it!
Author's Response:
YAY! i'm glad you like it! thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:26 PM Title: Home
Only the second chapter and I already really like this story. I really want to see Bella and Emmett find a loving home with the Cullen's. It about broke my heart when Emmett was worried about meeting Carlisle because he just wanted him to like him. Love the instant connection that Edward and Bella seem to have. :0) I also think Alice and Esme will be good for Bella. Great story!
Author's Response:
wow, thanks! emmett is a big teddy bear and i wanted to show that side of him, too. ExB do have a fast connection, maybe too fast, but what's written is written. but i'm a canon shipper so that should tell you where this story will end up. thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:24 PM Title: Darkness
Very interesting so far. I like how close Bella and Emmett seem to be. They've really been through a lot of terrible stuff. Emmetts threat to Edward at the end mad me laugh a little. :0) Am I right in guessing that James is still out there?
Author's Response:
yes, james is still lurking. i wanted to make bella and emmett close b/c i love emmett and if i would want him to be my brother. thanks for the review!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Protector
omg thats funny! i think its james! alice is having a vison?
Author's Response:
alice is sensing something. you are correct! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:25 AM Title: Premonitions
lol! omg i love it!
Author's Response:
thanks sweets! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:09 AM Title: Unstable
omg i love it!! i love the last line lol!
Author's Response:
i'm glad you like it! the last line was fun to write! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:38 PM Title: Misunderstanding
i love it! aw bella loves edward wonder who it is
Author's Response:
thanks, sweets! glad you liked it! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:20 PM Title: Darkness
I loved this chapter
Author's Response:
thanks so much! i'm glad you liked it! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:52 PM Title: Triggers
That story was very funny. I wonder if James touched Bella and now those memories are coming back to her.
Author's Response:
glad you liked the story! i think you are on the right track with your assumptions... that's all i'm gonna say. ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:09 PM Title: Traitor
i love it i would want all the clothes! i wonder what edward will say.
Author's Response:
i want all the clothes, too! the cullen's are my dream family! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:49 PM Title: Home
lol alice is so hyper! i love it!
Author's Response:
alice is very hyper... i think everyone needs a friend like her! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:51 PM Title: Agent J
Poor Edward but I guess where would the fun be if there was no compatition for Bella.
Author's Response:
jacob won't cause too much trouble for ExB. thanks for reviewing, babes!! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:34 PM Title: Victims
Well if I have to guess I am thinking that this is where Jasper is going to make his apperance in this story. I really hope that they are seeing that Carlisle and Esme really do want Edward and Bella to be at their house and that they want to care for them.
Author's Response:
carlisle and esme are the most loving and caring people in the history of the universe... there's no way they'll ever let bella and emmett leave! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:10 PM Title: Intruder
So it wasn't James! I hope that they don't get into trouble for this and then are forced to move away from the Cullens.
Author's Response:
nope, not james... this time. but caius is important. ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:49 PM Title: Protector
Oh this could be the person that is watching them. I really hope that it isn't James.
Author's Response:
there is someone watching them... keep that in mind... it's important ::wink:: ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:36 PM Title: Triggers
i think she might of been having flashbacks from james cant wait till the next one
Author's Response:
i think you're on the right track, bb! thanks for the review, babes! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:43 AM Title: Premonitions
They feel like someone is watching them because he is watching them isn't he? That was funny when Edward walked in on Bella I thought he was going to faint or something right there.
Author's Response:
omg! i should have made him faint! that would have been hilarious! thanks for the reviews! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:23 AM Title: Unstable
Poor Emmett I think that he is feeling that Bella has someone new to protect her from her dreams . I just hope that Bella can tell him how she feels about him before he does something stupid.
Author's Response:
emmett gets over stuff pretty easily, so he'll forgive edward. and bella will get around to sharing her feelings soon enough. she just has to clear up her other issues first. but lemons are on the way! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:05 AM Title: Misunderstanding
Well at least he didn't have to go chasing her through the woods.
Author's Response:
i don't think bella would have been able to run into the woods. but edward would have gone after her in a heartbeat. ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:47 AM Title: Traitor
I really hope that Edward doesn't think that Emmett is that way. It is really sad that they have been treated like a paycheck for the last 5 years.
Author's Response:
edward's a really laidback kinda guy, except when it comes to bella, so he'll get along just fine with emmett. ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:30 AM Title: Home
I am cracking up at Alice! She really is a force to be reconed with isn't she?
Author's Response:
i love alice!! i think she's my favorite! thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:04 AM Title: Darkness
Oh why do I feel like this story is going to be a trip? The first chapter was sad and funny all together.
Author's Response:
i hope this story is a trip! i want it to be equally happy/sad/angsty. i hope i do it justice. thanks so much for the review, babes! ;)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:28 AM Title: Home
loved it i can't wait to see how school is for them.
Author's Response:
so glad you liked it! school will be a whole nother beast! i can't wait either. ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:02 AM Title: Darkness
i love it!!! i got off th ephone just to read this! lmao
Author's Response:
wow! thank you so much! i'm glad you like it, babes!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:27 AM Title: Darkness
i wonder what james wants what emmett said to edward lol!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for the review, babes! ;)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:29 PM Title: Agent J
Really enjoying this story, looking forward to whats going to happen with Jacob, I really thought it was going to be Jasper :D
Author's Response:
glad you're enjoying it! jasper will be introduced eventually. i can't leave alice hanging :) thanks so much for the review, sweets!!! ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:43 PM Title: Agent J
I had a feeling it was going to be Jacob not sure how that is going to effect Bella and Edward's starting relationship. I can't wait to see Bella's POV of Jacob. Poor Edward!!!
Author's Response:
jacob is there to be a protector. he won't be too much trouble for ExB. thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:49 AM Title: Agent J
cant wait to hear bellas pov of jacob cant wait till the next one
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the review, babes! BPOV will give us a little more insight into her thoughts of our new secret agent man. ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:17 AM Title: Agent J
OMG im on the edge of my seat............... you definatly have my attention
Author's Response:
so glad you're enjoying!! thank you so much for the review, babes!! ;)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Agent J
I dunno know why but I ws so sure the fed was supposed to be Jasper. LOL
Author's Response:
the majority of readers thought the same thing. i think the margin was like 3 to 1 that Jasper was the bodyguard. jasper will be introduced in the future, so alice won't be lonely... i promise! thank you for the review, babes! ;)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 10:30 PM Title: Agent J
Yep - saw it coming, I like it:)
Author's Response:
good job!!! glad you like it. thank you for the review, sweets! ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Victims
:D :D :D
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:D :D :D
Please please please..*
:D :D :D
Alice R..*
Author's Response:
chapter 10 is with the beta, babes! it should be up soon! thanks so much for the review!!! ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:48 PM Title: Victims
I think the bodygard is Jasper!!!
I like your FF!!
Author's Response:
you are with the majority... most people are leaning that way. answers will come next chapter! thanks for reading and reviewing, sweets!!! ;)
Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:56 AM Title: Victims
Can't wait till you update!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks! i hope to update some time next week. ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:25 PM Title: Victims
I bet its Jasper!!
Author's Response:
our mystery bodyguard will be revealed next chapter!!! thank you so much for the review, sweets!! ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 8:37 PM Title: Victims
is it jake or jasper??? who???
Author's Response:
answers will be coming with the next chapter! thanks for the review!!! ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 7:05 PM Title: Victims
i have a feeling the bodyguard is going to be jacob and edward is going to get jeliousabout that cant wait till the next one
Author's Response:
we shall see! answers next chapter! stay tuned! thanks so much for the review!!! ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Victims
Hmm I'm thinking the body guard is Jacob. Wow James is a sick fuck isn't he?? It is scary how close he has been to the kids and how much he knows about where they are and their age.
Author's Response:
yeah, James is a nasty mofo. the bodyguard will be introduced next chapter! thanks so much for the review!!! ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:26 AM Title: Intruder
cant wait till the next one
Author's Response:
it will be up in the next day or so... just sprucin' it up a bit!!! ;) thanks for the review!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:36 PM Title: Intruder
poor bella and emmett
Author's Response:
they've definitely had a rough life. thanks for the review, girlie!!! ;)