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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

GRETE :)

Reviewer: firebugthree Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is a really great one shot. well done :)

Reviewer: Nessa_Yanara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey!!

that was awesom!! i lovet it

you have written his name as Edward Cullen, in the first Bpov, so you can correct it!

keep writing!

hugs

Nessa



Author's Response:

i thought i had fixed all those haha.  i havent edited this in ages. i wrote it last year!! thanks for pointing it out i really appreciate it!

 

J

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is by far one of the best one shots that I've ever read.  Excellent!!!  Thank you!

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