[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh boy, Dimitri is scary. I love the scene with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Powerful stuff. I wonder if she will ever tell Edward about James?
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh no Edward jumps to conclusions again. Talk about star crossed........
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
JAKE? Where the hell did he come from. Yet another complication?
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad that Seth finally pulled his head out of his bottom.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Seth deserves to be hit. What a horrible mess.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
Seth is being a real pig, a good kick up the bottom would do him no harm at all.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Seth is really scared of it all blowing up.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Very enjoyable chapter, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
She won't be able to walk by the time he is finished with her. lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Maybe this time its a new start? I get a feeling the road will still be rocky. Brilliant stuff.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Will Bella run? Perhaps not, this is Edward afterall. I keep waiting for the horrid James to turn up.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
What a mess. Brilliantly done though.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella but I wonder if Emmett is setting out to deliberately get Edward jealous, just a thought.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh boy, will she stay or will she go? I canot wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ooooh jealsous Edward is a right hand full.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
A human Edward is nice to see. :D
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella looks like she is coming down with something. Another very enjoyable chapter, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy. Brilliant stuff.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
It looks like Bella should look for another job. lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is obviously after her himself. Awesome.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am surprised she was not fired on the spot but good for her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story so far.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
excellent story ;) but you still left a few questions ie what does bella and edward do now? i think claire was pregnant though ;) i'll have to read the extra you pointed out in your an at the top ;D
Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic start! I love how Bella treats Seth :) She is amazing!!! And despite him being a major ass, I believe Edward is just tainted from life and is fiercly protective of his son!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Absolutely amazing! I loved it all. I would love a family like that.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm really surprised that the reviews for this story are so low, it's a wonderful story! I cried several times but I'm glad it had a HEA! Will definitely recommend to others. I guess the low reviews could be because of ppl like myself...I read the whole thing in one sitting and then commented, sorry should've left you a message after every chapter! lol Really enjoyed your work!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh im loving this story
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hmm.. Clair hunting.. good for him. :]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 29
What a sad, strange, creepy old man!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
I really liked how you didn't drag the ending out. I'm even interested to see what happened w Claire.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
B is her own worst enemy! She's driving me insane. I can't even begin to imagine how exasperated E is.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
And speaking of immature...
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
I understand where Seth is coming from but I sure hope B calls him out on his childish and selfish behaviour; making his father choose out of petty insecurity.
When I was 11 my mother met someone. I hated him as it had always been me and my mom. But even at 11 yrs old I was able to understand when someone explained to me that someday I would grow up and live my own life. Should my mother be alone until I determined it was time?
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
fabulos story it is sooooo pulling me in the idea is bloody brilliant if i may say so myself myself pill keep readin if you keep writein lol
Date: 26 Aug 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Big cheesy grin.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh new love. And having sex multiple times in a 24 hour stint;)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow. Seriously, I'm slack jawed w my mouth dry and open. My heart hurts for her.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really enjoying this story. But more so, I love your writing. I continue to read some stories so I can find out what happens. While I'm interested to find out where you take the story i'm more interested in your characters and I find that to be rare.
Author's Response:
I enjoy reading your reviews! :) Seriously, what could anyone ask for to use as an initiative to write?
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
She just continues to be unfailingly professional! Personally, I think she should just claw his beautiful eyes out- prick.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Clearly he has no concernes for sexual harrassment in the workplace.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Happy to see these two back together!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
edward is such an ass... he already messed it up. i hope bella quits.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
awesome chapter. i hope edward finally heard her... and believed her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think Edward should have jumped on a plane right then and there! Love this story!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
That breaks my heart!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
I want to slap Seth and not sure if i want to scream or cry about what he's causing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to their dinner!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful Chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope these two will get their act together from here on out.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wowww, yes, I definitely love you for writing this story. Another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
I get way too excited when you update. And I don't know why I pointed out your typos, I make a crapload myself. I'm not a nazi, I swear. Loved this one, and I love that you update multiple chapters at once. You're feeding my addiction.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh... I can find words!! Many of them but they are not appropriate for a review...! lol ***winks***
You are spoiling us with the quick updates but I am not complaining!! ***grins***
xoxo
MArianne
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
So amazingly HOT!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella! I think the guys were doing all the kissing to get a reaction out of Edward!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!! I like Rose! Emmet is safe for now...
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
WOW that was intense. Edward is an ass! Loved it!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward is a bit fucked up I dare say... Emotianlly that is which is worse that a Darkward situation...
Liked it on the whole!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 23 Jul 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella... If it's a bet I am soo gonna kill Emmet...!
xoxo
marianne
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
UGH. I'm glad they finally got it on, but it only ended in depression for me. I still love the crap out of this story, and I really think I might love you for writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, oh and my dumb mistakes, 'this' to 'these' or vice versa...duly noted. Thank you for telling me. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh jeeeez. It's getting steamy!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
:) Thank you for leaving smiley faces...I'm assuming that's a good review, yes?
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Sexy stupid ass..... gosh, he crossed the line in this chapter.
"Now that I've gotten you out of my system, I can leave you alone." Not his biggest fan right now. LOL
Author's Response:
hahahha I know right? What an a**hole. He'll get his comeuppance soon enough.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Your Edward is sexy when he is a jerk, an ass. when Jealous, when pissed, anytime. LOL.
"I need to know if I'm going to have a problem hiring your Captain, Isabella." Sexy jealous, mmmm
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bipolarward is frustrating to say at the least!! I still like him though... Bella is right... he doesn't know what he is missing!
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
Omg. Bipolarward! I love it!! He's usually called Daddyward but I love Bipolarward better! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
This chapter was very emotional, the confrontation and the pain between Seth and Edw was well written. Great job.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bloody hell!! I just thankfull for the two chapters in a row!!
Loved it!
xx
Marianne