Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:09 PM Title: A Chat With Edward
HaHa! Had to chuckle about Infantilism because I actually did see that on HBO's Real Sex! Love that show! Just wish they did a more updated version of it.
peach
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:48 AM Title: Aro's Recollections
Thank your for this insight to Bella and Aro's friendship and into his mind. He is a good man. His preferences might not be shared by many, but for him, they are what's best. He has good sight and sees the potential between Edward and Bella, a little push is doing a lot for him
Author's Response:
My Aro actually is a good man...thanks for the comment..lml
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
Ok i totally love your story but ther is just one thing buggin the absolute crap out of me. I don't know wether your story is beta'd or not but you have a lot of inappropriate word use in you story. The biggest one which has happened in hearly every chapter is the use of left instead of let. I have put the definitions below for you.
left
the past tense and past participle of leave.
let down
To fail to meet the expectations of; disappoint
I just hate the fact that I’ve left him down, that through my senseless and thoughtless actions
If you don't have anybody to read your stories i would be more than willing to give them a read i am not good at punctuation but i am very good at picking up wrongly used/spelled words.
Also Project Team Beta offer an excellent beat service.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments and your suggestion. I have a beta, MommyLovesEdward, this is her first story also. She is learning the same as I am. Thanks for the definitions, as I have said before. I write the way I talk, and maybe it is a geographic thing, but we say' he left me go', where left becomes the verb. So I'm sorry if that irratates you (I'm not being a smart ass...I really am sorry) My beta tried to fix that many chapters ago and I wouldn't allow her to change it. Now she is just use to it, as I guess all the other readers are too. Around chapter 10, someone else had offered to beta, but she kept trying to change so much of my wording, I became frustrated and it didn't work out. There are other little things in the way I talk, that are probably showing up in my story, that is just me, my personality and my eastern PA way of talking coming through loud and clear. So thank you for the offer, but for now all is well...lml
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:12 AM Title: photos
I would love to see the dress Alice designed for bella. also the rope bondage if you have any pictures
Author's Response:
I dont have a picture of that exact dress I made it up in my head,Bella will be wearingit to the club eventully, when they stay longer or go for a special reason... I do however have examples of hobble dresses I can post and I will...just for you... :)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:41 PM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
WOW!!!!!! That was DEEP!!!!! Bella really really feels bad for what she did.
Author's Response:
She does feel bad, and it is her nature to take the blame all on herself...
Date: 29 Sep 2010 8:07 PM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
Very well said!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks ...
Date: 26 Sep 2010 5:34 AM Title: The Contract
Cool. I was curious about the contract.
Keye
Author's Response:
Now you know...lol
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:54 AM Title: photos
thanks for the pics.
Author's Response:
Your welcome, I'll post more as we go along ...
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:01 AM Title: photos
nice thanks
Author's Response:
welcome...I'll post more as the story goes along ....
Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: photos
nice pics
Author's Response:
I will post more as the story goes along...Thanks for the comment...
Author's Response:
I will post more as the story goes along...Thanks for the comment...
Author's Response:
I will post more as the story goes along...Thanks for the comment...
Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:48 PM Title: photos
love the house!
Author's Response:
That's a nice house I know. I have more of the house if you would like to see them. Let me know I can e-mail you the rest...lml
Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:04 PM Title: photos
Is it possible to create Edward's playroom?
Author's Response:
ummm..I have it drawn out on paper, no actual pictures unless I work on piecing it together...Let me think about it...lml
Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: photos
great pics - it helps to make things clearer in the mind, you know...
Author's Response:
Yes that is what I thought, pictures always help and I thought anyone who was interested could see them...
Date: 23 Sep 2010 6:42 PM Title: photos
THANKS FOR THE PHOTOS
Date: 23 Sep 2010 6:36 PM Title: photos
love pic and would love more
Author's Response:
I'll post them as the chapters call for them...lml
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
This is all so Bella. I guess this just helps her to do what is expected of her. We all learn from our mistakes. Great job...thanks!
Date: 12 Sep 2010 8:51 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
thanks good outtake
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:20 PM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
I think Bella is harder on herself than Edward would ever be.
Author's Response:
She is harder on herself, part of that has to do with her past...thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:57 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
very interesting to read Bella's perspective of what she did and how E reacted to her mess up
thanks for posting - these out takes are great!
Author's Response:
I figured that since I took the time to write them, so that I had the background for the story, I might as well post them for anyone who is interested in reading. Thanks for the comment..lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:35 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
It is sad that she did one thing wrong and now believe she ruined there time together.
Author's Response:
Edward felt the same way, that's why he had that little talk with her. Thanks for the comment...lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:26 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I think he liked to read it to see how intelagent Bella truly is unlike me that cant even spell intelagent lol.
Author's Response:
That's whaty spell check is for...lol
But your right, reading her journal gives him an insight into the workings of her mind...lml
Thanks for the comment
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:38 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
AWWWWW
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for reading, like I said in the AN the journal entries are just background, that helped me with the story line, but I figured I would post them..Thanks for the comment...lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
I like that you put these little tidbits here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
ok. I wasn't sure who would want to see everything that went into the story. Personally when I am involved in a story I want as much information as I can get..That was my reasoning for posting the journal...thanks for the comment...lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 12:16 AM Title: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
Bella will try harder next time as disappointing her Master stings worse than the physical punishment.
Author's Response:
Yeah...it sure does. Thanks for leaving a comment ...lml
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:45 PM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I think he would have been really pleased with what she wrote. I think that he expected her writing to show what an exceptional woman she is - she didn't let him down
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:09 PM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
Yes, I think Edward liked what he read. He knows Bella is very intellegent, proud woman. It is what he liked about her. She can stand on her own, but she chooses to submit to him and only him.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:23 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I think he was pleasently surprised. I believe she gave more then he expected.
Author's Response:
I think your right....lml
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:21 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
probably thought she'd write some self depricating stuff
Author's Response:
It wasn't what he expected that's for sure...thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 07 Sep 2010 1:05 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I am sure Edward did like what he read. You can tell that Bella has thought about what she is doing and gone into this with her eyes wide open. I am sure he is surprised. He said she is always surprising him. I love knowing how she views things...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I debated about putting the journal up, thought maybe it would start to be TMI, but I thought, whoever wants to read it can. Her journal helps with the story...Thanks again for the comment, they really do help me to know if I'm going in the right direction...lml
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I am submissive, hear me roar can of vibe going on here, as long as its in a respectful quiet manor and when allowed to speak. I am sure Edward was delighted.
Author's Response:
I think he was ...thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:45 AM Title: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
good out take thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:19 PM Title: The Contract
Does this mean what I think it means? "To achieve this, He may have unfettered use of my body any time, any place, in front of anyone; to keep or to give away, as He will determine." If it does, this means he is likely to share?
Author's Response:
Bella questions that herself and makes her opinion known, and Edward explains why that is in there, this all happens at their coffee date in chapter 7.... check it out...thanks for the question ,,,lml
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:54 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
lol funny reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had fun writing it...lml
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:47 AM Title: The Contract
Yes, it does. I was reading another story that was supposed to be exclusive also but Edward lets another woman kiss him on the mouth, flirts a lot, and gives another woman Bella's place at his feet. All this does is damage the trust between the sub and Dom. I just wanted to be sure this was not headed the same way. I actually stopped reading that story because I feel so strong about it. Thanks for your reply and am looking forward to the next update. :~)
Author's Response:
yes that would upset me too. I'm a Bella/Edward all the way.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:00 PM Title: A Chat With Edward
Very interestng chapter. I enjoyed the questions. I really can not wait for you to update the story. Please SOON!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww...I'm sorry ...I update Monday and Thursdays ....i feel your pain, I hate when I really enjoy a story and have to wait for updates...lml
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: Aro's Recollections
I like your Aro. He seems loving and caring. Your Jane even seems nice. Thanks for letting us get a glimpes into his mind.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:14 PM Title: The Contract
WOW!! Great job!!!! Very impressed!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:02 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
I loved it that was fun and if your husband knows a really good shrink my husband would like his name because he thinks I am nut sitting here LMAO reading your story.
Author's Response:
Been there done that many times ...lol
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
thank you for doing this. I'm sorry i didn't make a list of the things i didn't know about. i have don't some things with my boyfriend but some of it i never heard of, i've read quite a few bsdm stories and had never read about some of the things on you list. but some of the stories don't really get into the stuff their scenes are usually really quick and don't do a whole lot of different things. thanks again for trying to clear up some of the details on the list.
Author's Response:
No big deal, thanks for the sugestion....lml
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:50 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
thanks good interview
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:15 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
I noticed Edward said he wouldn't share Bella but didn't say anything about him doing something with another sub. I really hope he stays faithful to Bella. Even though he is the Dom, being exclusive works both ways.
Author's Response:
This is from Chapter 7, when edward was explaining the rules
1. No other sexual partners -
I looked at her “Any questions?” She thought then asked “Just me, or does this apply for you too?”
“No this applies to both of us. I don’t share Isabella, and I wouldn’t do that to you.” She seemed pleased with that.
Hope tat should answer your question... thanks for the comment ...lml
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:00 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
Tell your husband there's nothing wrong with the voices in your head or coming out of your mouth unless you lose the argument.
Very well done! Please feed the juices and give us more story and more outtakes!
Author's Response:
Thanks,, I try and tell him tat but he's a man and well they just don't understand,,,lol
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:43 AM Title: A Chat With Edward
I love it! Thank Edward for me!!! ;-) Great job...
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:39 PM Title: Aro's Recollections
I loved this back story. Thanks. Aro is actually good in this story.
Author's Response:
He is good, strong, powerful but good...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:37 PM Title: Aro's Recollections
Wow I reallly like Aro in your story.....now caius has me worried.
Author's Response:
hmmm...I always thought Caius was the evil one, In the series Aro wanted to aquire Caous wanted to destroy. That was my feeling anyway. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml
Date: 17 Aug 2010 3:17 AM Title: Aro's Recollections
I absolutely loved this chapter; to see Aro's friendship with Bella and how much he obviously loves his wife/slave.
Author's Response:
Thanks, i wanted to paint him in a good light for once. Your right he does love her, and even Jane in my story is not a cold hearted bitch. Which you will see in later chapters...lml
Date: 14 Aug 2010 6:02 AM Title: Aro's Recollections
thanks good outtake
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it...lml
Date: 14 Aug 2010 6:00 AM Title: Aro's Recollections
thank you this the first time I have liked Aro in any of the story you must love your uncle.
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you liked it...lml
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:18 PM Title: Aro's Recollections
LOVED Aro's POV in all of this. written very well
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you liked it...lml
Date: 13 Aug 2010 2:56 PM Title: Aro's Recollections
I loved this perspective. In stories, you always kind of wonder if Aro is being honest.. (Could have somethingn to do with the stories I write.. hahaha.) but this helped with that. I am glad she had him during her hard times, and this helps us see why he is so fond of her.
Very nicely done. and Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks. I wanted to give credence to the fact that Aro seemed to know so much about Bella's life. And yes Aro does get a bad wrap most of the time, as in your story (which I love by the way). I'm glad you liked it...lml
Date: 06 Aug 2010 9:34 AM Title: The Contract
So, since Tanya signed such a contract, can she still assume that she can be Edward's lover too? Just wondering.
Author's Response:
Should either of U/us find that our aspirations are not being well served by this agreement, find this commitment too burdensome, or for any other reason wish to cancel, E/either may do so by verbal notification to the O/other, in keeping with the consensual nature of this agreement. W/we both understand that cancellation means a cessation of the control stated and implied within this agreement...
not a termination of O/our relationship as friends and lovers. Upon cancellation, each of U/us agrees to offer to the other H/his or her reasons and to assess our new needs and situation openly and lovingly.
She could assume that, however Edward completely dismissed her, as a lover and a friend. You will find out why and just what Tanya thinks in later chapters.
Thanks for the questioon and the review
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:16 AM Title: The Contract
thanks
Author's Response:
your welcome...lml
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:33 PM Title: The Contract
WOW thats is a mouth full almost like a marrige
Author's Response:
yes, it is like a marriage...lml