Date: 16 Mar 2018 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
I’m so, sooooooo, so very thrilled that you are giving us a new chapter! This chapter was amazingly written, and just thrilling to read! I’m worried sick for everyone now...most of all Bella and Edward! Thank you so much for not giving up on this story, it really would have been a great tragedy to never see it completed! This story is truly is one of my all time favorites, and I’m loving the new chapter and thought of more to come!
Date: 16 Mar 2018 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Just wanted to tell you how much I freaking love this story. As soon as I got the notification for the update I started from the beginning and enjoyed every single word written in them. Can’t wait for the rest. Can’t believe the luck of these two though. They can’t catch a freaking break at all!!!! Love love love it!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh I’m back and forth with this Bella. I hate how she’s so whiney because he yelled at her but keeps putting herself in danger. HE WOULDNT YELL IF YOU WOULD HAVE LEFT THE FIRST TIME INSTEAD OF CONVINCING HIM TO LEAVE WITH YOU
Date: 09 Mar 2018 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Maybe it is not the reaction I should have had, but I laughed so hard at the ending of this. That shit was a comedy of errors. Like the saying, years or even days from now we look back and laugh about this, only I did it now. Love it! Especially when Charlie showed up in riot gear. HA!
Date: 07 Mar 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh wow, so glad you've provided us all with an update to this story, can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry especially as you've left this chapter with a cliffi.
I sure hope all of them are ok and Edward will be able to leave this hell hole along with the rest of them after the 48 hours are up x
Thanks so much for reading! The next chapter is almost completed. Xox Jells
Date: 07 Mar 2018 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
I have to say how much I love this world and story...i have thought of it often since your last post, and very excited that it is back on the cards.
Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing your talent with us all.
Thank you so much! I'm almost finished with the next chapter. Thank you for reading Xox Jells
Date: 07 Mar 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Why did you have to leave it at a cliffie???? I need the next chapter ASAP!! I need to know what happened!! Love the story and so glad that you updated! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Thanks so much! I'm almost finished with the next chapter. =)
Date: 06 Mar 2018 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG I was so excited to see you post and thanks for the summery of what happened it was great. I cant wait to find out what happened. Edward just wants to love his women and them other fuckers just wont leave them alone.
Thanks so much! Im halfway through the next chapter. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 06 Mar 2018 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
If you need a beta I’m always available. It has been forever. I’d love to catch up. So much has happened here... lol
Love you bunches Ms Jellybean â¤ï¸ð
I'd love for you too. I miss our chats â¤ï¸ð. I sent you a message on Facebook messenger. Love you lots ðâ¤ï¸ð
Date: 05 Jul 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love this story so much!!! You write in such an amazing way that you get totally sucked into the story and you just want to keep reading and reading. (Did you like the pun ;P)
I know life gets busy and distracting but when is the next chapter coming???? I love this story and really want to know whats going to happen next.
Please update this soon.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hi! I'm sorry that you lost your grandmother, my sincerest condolences to you and your family.
I'm glad you are finishing this story, which I've enjoyed tremendously, I can't wait until it's finished so I can read it all in one go, lol.
Thank you for the brief recap on chapter 22 because it did help a lot in order to get back into the flow of the story.
I think Bella and Edward are dealing with that unjust ruling surprisingly well, although it's clear they are struggling with what's happening. I'm really curious to read the next chapter, to see how Edward really is doing down in that cave.
Oh! And that Lauren has to be lying about the pregnancy, because that would be just too much for Angela and Ben to face.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
I've been reading this story since you posted it on the ORIGINAL Twilight Saga website! But then you stopped posting on there for ages and everyone kinda drifted off the site. So when I found it on here, you don't understand the joy I felt lol. This is probably the best story I have ever read with these characters (besides the actual twilight stories) and in some ways I prefer it over the actual books 🙈. I FINALLY caught up with all the chapters (I wanted to re-read the whole story again when rediscovered it) and it was just as good as I remembered it was. Now I'm all up to date and I NEED more!!! Please don't wait to long to update again. I compeletly understand that this is something you probably do for fun and as a creative outlet ( I don't expect you to just drop your whole life to write a chapter lol), but I do hope it's soon 😊. I've been here with you since the first chapter and I'll be here until the very last d84;a039;.
Date: 19 Dec 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great story and chapter please update soon!!
Date: 15 Nov 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have been spellbound since I read the first word of this story. I can't even begin to tell you how much I love it. I really hope you update again soon and that you get Edward out of that hellhole as fast as possible. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope there are no really bad repercussions from Bella telling Charlie about Tanya's threats. It was good that Edward and his family heard what the jealous bitch said to Bella. The drive to the Cullen house revealed how Edward really felt about Bella and allowed her to tell him she felt the same!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
From the description, itsounds like Bella has just met James. He is usually that awful around her so it must be him. This first half day is going better than she feared, except for Tanya, Victoria, James and Mike! Emmett, Jasper and Alice seem pretty nice, for vampires!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can just imagine how frightened Bella must have been when she cut herself and bled all over, in front of two thirsty vampires. The thing she failed to note was they told her they were controlled, and they were! The doctor visit was really fast and relativly painless. Now she has to face a school where she'll be the only human.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting premise, that vampires pretty much rule the earth. It was bound to happen some day I suppose, since they are the apex predators. I kind oflike Carlie's attitude, though, so maybe Bella won't be so miserable with him and Renee.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
Man I just can't get over Edward in prison now! He's got to get out and they definitely need their HEA! They have had enough problems so far. I can see more trouble brewing in the not so distant future with James or Riley I really hope that they find something soon to get Edward out so Bella can be protected again
Date: 13 Oct 2015 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad you are continuing with this story. It has always been one of my favorites. I just had to go back and reread all the other chapters first so I could familiarize myself with everything. Please don't leave us with the guilty verdict too long. Edward doesn't belong in prison. Thanks again for continuing.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ack the angst! So glad you are back and healing somewhat after your loss. That stinks, but I hope you find good memories to give you comfort. Thanks for updating....
I think the one growly judge is having a greased Palm or something. Poor E and B. Hope you fix the suffering for them quick like.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Welcome back! I was so excited when i was notified of an update. I re-read your story from the beginning to refresh my memory. Thanks for coming back. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Hope RL is treating you better. GOD Bless!