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Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

OHMY so a vamps peen is like a cats....ewwww and owwww! But it was still hot.  So the bestie is in town, somehow I think it would have been a better idea for the happy couple to visit Angela elsewhere.  Now two blood bags running around town is gonna be bad. lol  Your updates are awesome! xod



Author's Response:

OMG!!! Srsly? Cat...peen??? OMGGG! Yeah...the "barb thingie" was one of the sexually twisted parts I was referring to. lol But how the barb thing actually came about was a chat with my friend about peen peircings a while ago. She mentioned something similiar about barbs...I don't know if it's true if some guys have that done. But I figured I'll incorporate it in here. lol Glad you still thought it was hot tho. Although, I'm a little weirded out now. =/ lol 

Yeah the bestie's in town. But I think that it will be more a fun experience if Ang is in vamp town....can you imagine the conflict I can create? lol =) Yeah you're right, two blood bags in vampville may not be a such a good idea. lol

Thank you =)

And thanks for reading and commenting! 

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

glad angela is going to meet ben soon. have a bad feeling bella's going to get into a ton of trouble with that death wish of her's, she needs to learn to listen to the voice in her head telling her not to do stupid things :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Angela and Ben will meet soon. I'm guessing chapter 12, but I may speed it up and add it in ch. 11, I'm not sure. I guess it depends how long the chapter will be.

LOL. Yes, Bella should listen to her little voice. She can be quite crazy and daring for the things she does. She will get into more trouble...*shivers* lol

Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it =)

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yea yea...happy dance, happy dance. He claimed her! And might I say, it's fuck hot!

Thanks for such an awesome update!



Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you enjoyed it! I'm definitely doing a happy dance cuz the chapter is finished, crazy monster of a chapter. Very exhausting. LOL

Thanks for reading and commenting!!! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

good god!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was spectacular!!!!!!!!

incredible,i'm blown out of my mind!!!!!!!!!!

thnx a lot

please update soon,i've waited long 4 this one!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you!!! =D I'm totally happy that you enjoyed this chapter!!!

IKR? It was a long time since the last update, but I'm really going to try to update much sooner.

Thanks for reading and your awesome comment!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

FUCK HAWT CHAPTER BITCH. i love how feral edward is in this. i fucking love that fight it was so damn vicious.

facccceeeeeeeeeee lickkkkkkkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnng, u know that's my shit lmao.

the situation with garret blew my mother fucking mind chick. jells i am in awe of this chapter. this shit was a+ material my girl (no lezbo)

the sex was hawt and the barb thingie is totally genuis. just something else u added that make your vamps adn story different. I loved it. I can't wait to see the next chapter so get to writing like right now! GET WRITING NO SLEEP LOL



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOO!!!

Awww thanks! You know that this chapter was the BIGGEST pain in the ass!  Glad you like Edward all feral-like. You know that I wish I could make him more feral, but I don't know if that would be pushing it. Glad you liked the fight scene too. I love fights! lmao It's true, they're fun to write and I will have more of 'em....probably more vicious, gotta kick it up a notch, or at least try.

LMAO! Yeah, face licking is so you're shit! You're right!

Thanks for your advice/thoughts about the Garrett scene and the barb thing. Glad you liked it. The barb thingie is definitely...different. lol I do like it tho. It's kinky. 

Thanks Tyg! I don't know about writing right now. I totes feel sick. Hopefully, I'll be better by 2mrw.

Thankssssssssssss !!! You're awesome!!!!

Hahahha I'll only write and NO sleep if you do the same! Ha! lol

Catch ya later

Jells

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Damn.. This chapter was full of happy times for Edward and Bella (hehe) well except for the afton and what's his name part. Somehow the whole Edward possessive with Bella in front of Garrett still manage to pass as hot or maybe I'm just weird like that lol. I can't wait for Ben to meet Angela..

Author's Response:

LOL. Yes, lots of happy times for E&B.

No, you're not weird at all for thinking the Garrett scene was hot. I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if I should write it. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) so very awesome everything written & described very well also



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm glad you enjoyed this long chapter.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

yeah they are finally mated for reals.. a barb,, interesting. great chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Yeah, the barb thing was like a last minute edit to make it a little more interesting, I guess. lol

Thanks again for reading!!!

Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

It's nice to read something different once in a while. I like how you've created your own vampires too. Can't wait to read what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm working on ch. 10. I'll try to have it posted by tomorrow.

Thank you for reading and commenting. Hopefully, I can keep you interested.

Reviewer: TeqSun Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love it!  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you liked.

I'm working on ch 10 right now, I'm almost finished so....hopefully I can post 2mrw or by Saturday. *fingers crossed*

Thanks for your review =)

Reviewer: Anya Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this, so much different, but so interesting you are very talented.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much! =D

And I'm happy that you are enjoying this story.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I should have the next chapter posted in a few days.

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

hi, awesome chapter.
Interesting the mystery of girls getting killed that look like Bella. I can't wait to see how this plays out in the story. Is it possible for the person to have an orgasm when she is marked by a vampire? B/E are so cute when their "getting intimate" especially when he gets all possessive and shouting "mine." This is 1 of only a few Edward stories that I like right now. A favorite is falling beyond redemption. So I get so excited when I get an email that this story has been updated. Loved the chapter and can't wait to read the next update.



Author's Response:

Hiya fall up,

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter. And yup, a human can have an orgasm when marked by a vamp, just depends how much marking venom is injected into the bloodstream. =) I'm not sure what chapter this will be in, but there will be a male vampire that challenges Edward, wanting to take Bella so...Edward will mark her possessively in front of the other male. He'll inject enough venom into Bella's body, causing her to orgasm in front of the vamp, deterring him. Edward will be more possessive of Bella after they have sex in ch. 10...so there will be more marking. lol Thank you, glad you like E&B. Ooo I haven't read Falling Beyond Redemption. I wish I had more time to read, I have a list of fics that I would like to start.

Thanks again. I will update this week. I wanted to do it sooner like last week, but RL is a little crazy for me right now.

Reviewer: rombursuc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

i really like your story. I usually don't  for AU stories but yours has such an original take and it's well written than I have no choice but love it.Are you on FanFiction also? under what name>



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm happy that you gave my story a chance, and I'm glad that you are enjoying it.

I do have a fanfiction account under the same penname but I don't post there, just because of the mature content.

Thank you for reading! =) And for the comment. I hope that I can keep you interested.

Reviewer: JenDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh I can't wait, I love your story. It's so hot and they haven't even gone all the way yet, can't wait to see what's it's like when they finally do. PLease update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're enjoying the story.

I will post more soon. I'm almost finished with chapter 10.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved the chapter. I so want to have vampire style sex w/ Edward. Vampire porn- too funny. So cool how Peter and Char came to Bella's rescue. You are fleshing out the story nicely.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed this chappy.

The sex scene will be coming up in ch. 10, which I'm working on now. lol And Peter and Char will be around more often. They're a little older than the Cullen kids...they attend an all Vampire University.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

i already told you how i felt about this chapter. i absolutely love this shit. faaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccceeeeeeeeeee lllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiccccccccckkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnggggg

totally fucking hot! This was a brillant chapter and i can't wait for more. it was so informative. now i bet next chapter we can coast and read, now that we've imbedded rules into our LAV thinking lol.  oh gosh pweetttty pwease update soon! luv yah much



Author's Response:

Tygggggggggggggggggggggg! Hi. *waves

Awww thanks =)

LMAO@ faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccccceeeeee llllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggg!

LOL. Yeah, it was waaaay informative. Next chapter will be fun...I hope. LOL cuz the mating...Angela....and some other stuff. LOL@pweettty pwease. Hmmmm....I still think you could do ch. 10 better than I could. Soooo do it! lmao. Fine....I'll finish it. =/

Laters xo

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope the venom not change her or kill her.

Good chapter again.



Author's Response:

No, the venom won't change or kill her. In this story, in order for a vampire to change a human, the vampire must inject a lot of venom into the human body. A few bites from a vampire won't do anything, but it will burn.

Thank you =) I'm happy that you liked this chapter.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good first chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love your story it is nowin my favorites !!!  How often do you update?   Can't wait for Bella and Edwards true marking (while sex)  but that will be   HOT!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. I used to update once a week because the chapters were much shorter. But now it's like every two weeks, however I've already started chapter 10 so I may be able to finish much sooner... Hopefully, by the end of this week. I guess the longer the chapter, the longer the wait.

I hope that you will enjoy the next chapter. And thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! =)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

Nice cliffhanger!  Let's see, who's approaching?  Possibly memebers of the Volturi?  I don't think it's Peter and Charlotte because Jasper would recognize their scents.  I'm looking forward to finding out who it is though!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter.

And thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

So I was following this story on Freedom Fan Fic and was uber excited to find it here! I can't tell yo how much I'm loving this story, and I look forward to the next chap!



Author's Response:

Hiya helluvabell! Yeah, your penname looks familiar.

Thank you so much!!! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story!

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it =)

Reviewer: saniaast27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow can wait for them to finally be together......

Author's Response:

I hope that you will like it.

Thank you for reading and commenting! =)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

must be james in the woods.    Cant wait for ANgela to vist so she can meet ben. 

Volturi need to be desposted



Author's Response:

I'll reveal soon who it is ;)

Thanks again!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

poor B.   Hope Vikki gets whats coming to her.   Yea for Peter and Charlotte.



Author's Response:

Glad you like Peter and Char. They'll be coming around more often.

Thank you for reading and commenting! =)

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really love this story so thank you for another update. I am already speculating about who the peeping tom bush vampire and the latest arrival is and there are so many possibilities of vamps that have it in for Bella in one way or another, so looking forward to where you take this story!

REALLY looking forward to the next and future chapters! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm happy that you're enjoying this story =)

Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope that I can keep this story interesting for you.

Reviewer: raedeath13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

ooooh i hope you update soon!!! like...yesterday soon. lol i love this story. it's the perfect mix of gore and suspense and romance. i'm soooo looking forward to the girl time and Vampward and Bloodella getting feisty in between the sheets if ya know what i mean. and i'm thinking Ang and Ben...? yeah?

 

i hate Aro, btw. he sounds like a huge douche. him and a handful of the vamps you've got in here. i swear, i was so close to crying when they were talking about "blood bags" and how bella's just a insignificant human. so not fair to our bell.

 

looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: LOL. I'm already working on ch 10. Thank you, I'm happy that you're enjoying this story! Hahaha love the Vampward and Bloodella nicknames =D Yup definitely Ang and Ben will get 2ghtr ;) Yeah, Aro is a major douche...and his army and all the rest of the mean vamps. He's twisted, sick vampire who hates humans.=( Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sunday night 8:00 I check my email, I see one from TWCS! Could it be? I hold my breath I hit open... It is It is she has updated!! I do a little jig around my living room!!! Oh but may family is up they will bother me, so I wait I wait so excited to read the next chapter of my favorite story...10:00 FINALLY my family is in bed the house is all quiet I poor a big glass of wine and savour every written word... Then before I know it, it is over the newest the hottest chapter is over and I am sitting in the dark hoping the next chapter will appear like magic..... Sadly it does not......

So that was my Sunday nite how was yours??

Thank you so much, you can sure tell a story!! As usual I will be waiting for the next great chapter.... Can't wait tell Angels meets our Edward



Author's Response:

LOL. Awww thank you! Love your comment!=D

I'm already working on ch. 10. Hopefully, I will have it finished soon.

Sunday night was crazy 4 me!!!LOL Big fan of horror movies. =)

Thank you so much for reading! and commenting! I appreciate it. Hopefully, you will enjoy the next chapter too. Thanks again.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

F'un times can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going to guess it is peter and charlotte.

Too soon for James or aro. Thnaks for sharing the story.
Meg

Author's Response:

Thank you!

You'll see soon who it is...working on the next chapter already.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. =D

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

This was a longass chappy but worth every second of reading!!  great job.



Author's Response:

LOL. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

The public marking almost turned into a public mating! I was nervous there for a minute! Totally loving this story!



Author's Response:

lol Yes it almost did! Good thing Edward has some self-control and great upbringing or Bella would have been in a really awkward position if he would have mated with her publicaly.

Thank you so much!

So glad you are still enjoying this story! =D

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is such a wonderful love story (amongst donating blood & feuding vampires)! I'm sure Edward is not happy with Bella giving blood!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you =) I'm happy that you're enjoying this story! Edward will be livid!

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love a possessive Edward! He's such a savior! And Bella gets to be marked by Edward ... what could be better? Sounds so sexy!



Author's Response:

Awesome! I'm happy that you like a possessive Edward =D Thank you!

And I hope you'll enjoy the marking(s).

Thanks again for reading! =)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad to see Edward arrive, but now Tanya is causing trouble! I hope she is just "venting" and not a real threat! Unforunately, Bella seems to have few options!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I hope that you will like my version of Edward. And Tanya is just horrible! =/

Thank you for reading/commenting! =)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

School didn't seem so bad until this last vampire came out to bite! Poor Bella - how stressful for her to be in that school!



Author's Response:

Yeah, very stressful with all those vamps. I'm sure it will get much better though for Bella ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the idea of Charlie as a vampire - he seems very compassonate! Enjoying the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Yes, Charlie is very compassionate. He treats Bella like a biological daughter.

I'm glad  you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading/commenting.

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

JUST TOO GOOD 4 WORDS

I ADORE UR WORK

IT'S PURE GENIUS

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! =)

I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: kate1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

yayyy you updated finally. THANKS ;)



Author's Response:

Welcome. =) But Thank you for reading! =D and commenting!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter. please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'll post more soon. Already started on ch. 10.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

Another great chapter - the plot thickens.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

And thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: jvcoleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

I just love this story. I love the plot and detail that you are putting into it. This was another great chapter. I can't wait for the next update. Hope that it is soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you're enjoying this story.

I'll post more soon, already working on ch. 10.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great cliffy!  Wow, what a chapter, a lot happening and it was all great reading.  Thanks for writing this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you =D I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter! LOL. I couldn't resist the cliffy.

But thank you for reading this story!

Reviewer: SummerMeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

 

hurry and update soon



Author's Response:

Already working on ch. 10 =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: miclew Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

Excellent!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) So happy you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading/commenting!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Already working on ch. 10. =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

YEAH intimacy! I figure if Edward's protective now wait till he gets a piece of Bella. Watch out other vampires who even so much as LOOK at her. lol I love this story. I'm so glad you updated. thanks and keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

LOL. Yes, Edward will be way more protective of Bella. And the more he marks her and once he starts feeding from her on a regular basis, he'll become more protective as well. He'll be able to start feeling her emotions when he drinks her blood...so when Bella feels threatened, he'll feel it...and that vampire will have to answer to him.

Thank you! So happy you are enjoying this story =D

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: i am ms emmett cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

awesome chapter loved the edward bella time alone (i won't tell Carlisle ;P)

can't wait for the next chapter

May



Author's Response:

LOL. Yes, shhhh...let's keep it on the DL.  ;)

Thank you! =D I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter! I'll post more soon.

Thanks for reading/commenting!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Really loved the chapter.  I wonder what Aro will think of Edward bonding with a human.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter!

You'll find out soon what the crazy, twisted  Aro thinks. lol

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you =D

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

I squee like a total fangirl when this story updates and this one was epic! 



Author's Response:

LOL. Awww thanks! =D

I'm happy you liked the chapter!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9

very awesome



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: mebk03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Still really love your story.  You should never be regretful for writing too much.  I love the story so I'll take everything you are willing to share with us (I know how selfish of me).  Thanks again so much for sharing your talent.  Can't wait to see where this goes next.  Looking forward to your update.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story. LOL@ I know how selfish of me. =D Not at all. lol  I'm glad to know that you enjoy long chapters because the next will be a monster chapter as well.

Thanks again for your kind words and thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ellenah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so caught up in this story it really different and I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you're enjoying the story.

Thank you for reading/commenting.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

WHOA this was an awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: TeqSun Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great job, update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I will update much sooner.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh good!  SO glad to see a new chapter...it's been waaaay too long!  Love the scenes at school...and Edward's gonna want to have a certain violent female vamp for dinner.  Can't wait to read more.  Please???



Author's Response:

Awww...sorry for the wait. I agree, it was a long time...over 3 weeks. I'll try to post more sooner. Hopefully by the end of this week or beginning of the next.

Thanks =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah, Edward will be furious!!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great and crazy chapter:-)  Who is killing Bella lookalikes?  I think its James.  I wonder what Edward will do to Victoria when he finds out it was her that hurt Bella.

I am glad Peter and Charlotte are in your story.  They are always good fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you! =) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

I agree, Peter and Charlotte are always good fun. =) *lips are sealed* about the vamp killer. lol  But I will reveal soon, and maybe throw in some clues beforehand. Edward is going to be sooooo furious when he finds out about Victoria.

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

Another great chapter can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Reviewer: Werewolfgrlz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

please write quickly! i love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'll post asap.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

What an incredible story! Keep up the fabulous work ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad that you are enjoying the story!

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well Vic just signed her death certificate now what I'm wondering is it it will he by Edwards hand or Charlie.. Hmm so we have someone looking and killing look a likes of Bella..

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Victoria better watch out! lol You'll see what happens next =) Yup, there's a vamp obsessed with Bella who's doing the killings.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!



Author's Response:

Thank you =D I'm happy that you are enjoying this story!

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll post more soon.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

OOH EDWARD'S PISSED!! I LOVE this story. its so great and jealous Edward is hot hot HOTT!! I can't believe the way they treated her at the store and Mike who follows her everywhere couldn't even get out there to help her? thanks god for Peter and Charlotte. I thought for sure she was a gonner or worse.  :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you are enjoying this story!

Happy you like my jealous Edward, he'll get more protective, possessive and jealous because of the Victoria situation and the Bella-look-a-like killings. He won't let her out of his sight. Yeah, Mike is infatuated with Bella...but not very brave. lol Keep your eye on the creepster, he's a lot more crucial to the story than you think. Yeah, Peter and Char will be around more too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing =)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow! So messed up! love it!



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you =)

Thanks for reading/commenting!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

First let me say I LOVE the long chapter keep it up!!! This chapter was so worth the wait.... I just think this is the the best FanFic story out there right now!! You are so talented! I just LOVE your story I know it is hard to juggle RL and  FF but girl you are Awesome!

So can't wait until next chapter (as usual) but PLEASE update soon!!!!

Can't wait to know what happens with Angela/ Ben's party!!!

Thanks again for your GREAT story!!!!

                                           Wendy



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! Your comments/compliments make my day! You're awesome!I'm so happy that you are enjoying this story!

I'll try to post ASAP. =D

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Lots going on. Thanks for the update. Please don't apologize for long chapters. I love them!



Author's Response:

Thank you =D Glad you enjoyed the long chapter!

Thanks for reading/commenting!

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

thnks a lot,awesome chapter by the way!!!!!!!!

thnks a lot for updatint!!!!!!!!

please update again here,we're dying here!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =D I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I'll post more soon. Should have something hopefully by next week.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

 

fAAAAAAAAAAAACEEEEEEEEEEEEE LIIIIIIIICKKKKKKKKKKKKUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG

“Mmmm,” Edward purred, licking my cheek. “You taste so sweet, kitten.” He nipped my flesh playfully as his elongated fangs scraped against my flushed skin..

 

tHIS WAS A TERRIFIC CHAPTER jells. What do i have to do to get chapter 9 out of you!, i widh you luck on your test and anything upcomming for school.  i know it had to be hard to write and study. i miss youuuuuuuuuu!

I love all the information you gave! the forshadowing with Mike is awesome. the brunett girls...PURE GENIUS. i love this story so much, as soon as i saw you update i had come home. i love this story and i can not wait for more. i'm s'cited lmao. i really admire the way you write jells! the ideas come together so smoothly and i can't wait to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

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Hahahha! I write the face licking just for you. LMAO

Awwwwww Thanks =) I'm happeh you liked the chapter. Pain in the arse but I'm glad you liked!  Glad you really like this story too! Awwww  Love your comments and compliments , makes my day!!! =)

Thanks sooooooooooooooooo much!!! I'll catch ya later.

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

oh poor bella, edward's not going to let her out of his sight - especially once he hears about all the girls that look like her being killed. but hey, big hot vampire totally in love with you protecting you 24/7? i know i wouldn't complain, haha. great chapter, hope you get to update again soon, love this story!



Author's Response:

LOL. Yeah, I wouldn't mind being with Edward 24/7 either.

Thank you =) I'm happy that you liked this chapter and that you are enjoying this story! I should be able to update much sooner. Hopefully by the end of next week.

Thanks again for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

love the chapter cant wait to read next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I should have the next chapter finished much sooner.

Thanks for reading and commenting !

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

love it and cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Glad you enjoyed it!

I should have the next chapter finished much sooner.

Thanks again for reading / commenting.

Reviewer: emmeylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

I just want to say, please don't apologize for long chapters! I love them! Long chapters normally mean details and depth and that is never a bad thing. Love your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you are enjoying my story. And ok, I won't apologize for long chapters anymore. lol I do enjoy writing long chapters. Like you've said, lots of details and depth.

Thanks again for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the long chapter!  I loved it.  You've done an excellent job of making it sexy hawt without really having any sex yet!  You're doing a great job with your story.  I'm always so excited to get a new chapter.  Always worth the wait!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you enjoyed it! And thank you for your nice comments, makes my day =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great work.  The drama. the tension and of course the romance - a perfect balance, and may I just say, "Nice cliffhanger you have there!"  Kudos!  I'm looking forward to that E & B scene!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And of course thanks for reading and commenting =)

 

Reviewer: buffygal_87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

I didn't think it was too long ;D...as always I enjoyed the chapter and look forward to more = )



Author's Response:

Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it and you didn't think is was too long. =D

I'll try to post the next chapter by next week.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: OliveTrusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

I LOVE long chapters, so bring it on!!!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks =)

LOL. Kay, I'll bring it. How about 20, 000 word chapter then??? LOL

Thank you for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hell yeah there's a lot going on. So my first question is the way she described Vitoria chocking her she should have had pretty nasty hand print marks around her neck yet it wasn't mentioned at all. Is this because they cuts were more serious and they only thought to deal with that? Also when she was passed out why didn't they lick her face to seal the cuts thus leaving her face scar free? Also Edward's peen seems to me mad large is this going to be a problem? I mean the girl's not a porn star lol. Sorry couldn't help myself had to put that in there. Love that Peter and Char are in this and apparently the good guys. Mike doesn't seem so bad just kind of creepy as hell and somebody give me a match because that mom in the store was a real bitch. Hey Edward and Bella being bonded he can't tell when somethings not right with her? Like some ind of stress call or something? They seem so in one with each other every other way, just seems strange that they wouldn't be in that way as well. Please tell me that after everything that's going on that they decide to keep Angela away next weekend and skip the party as well? By the way if the girls that were killed were also raped shouldn't they have that Vamps scent all over them thus making it easy for Charlie and his crew to hunt them down? From what Ben said in math class the sent should be pretty strong for the males to pick up. They all live in town together and it seems everybody knows everybody shouldn't they know their scents as well? Furthermore where the hell is Edward? He's stuck to her hip all the damn time, so what was he doing that he wasn't at her house or demanding she be at his?



Author's Response:

LOL. Yeah, told ya. Lots of stuff goin' on.

Anyways, for your q's. Yes, you are absolutely right about bruising on Bella's neck. I didn't focus on that in this chapter because the cuts which are on her face were more serious. But you'll see in the next chapter when Edward reacts to her cuts, he'll go crazy about the bruises too, he'll be angry aout every little scratch on Bella. A little of darkward in the next chapter because of Victoria, but not much. He'll want to hunt her down immediately.

 Okay now for the face licking question. lol. Charlie and Renee didn't lick at the cuts because you'll find out that when a male is bonded, like Edward is to Bella, usually the male takes her of his female. But the cuts won't be a problem, once Edward licks them since they are new, they'll go away, leaving her face without any scars.

Now as for your Edward peen question....LOLOLOL....love it btw. Yeah, it shouldn't be a big problem, but as you know , these vamps are huge....so that means everything on them is much bigger, including peens.LOL It'll be interesting when I write the sex scene ;) I think the first time they 'do it' it may be a little challenge.

Aww glad you like Peter and Char. They will definitely be around a lot more. Yeah, Mike isn't too bad. But yes, waaaaaayyyy creepy. He's definitely infatuated with Bella, but I hope for his sake that he'll back off more. LOL yeah that mom in the store was a real bitch. And yes, Edward will be able to feel Bella's stress soon. The reason why he didn't feel hers right now was because she's human and the bond although strong between them, is still different if she were a vampire. It will take him longer to sense that something is wrong with Bella, the more he'll mark her, the better.

What fun would that be to keep Angela away, don't you like the conflict? LOL Nah, don't worry about Angela....yet. She'll be fine because she'll be surrounded by a bunch of good vamps, and Charlie and Edward will make sure that the girls are not left alone at any time. As for the party, they'll still end up going. And Edward won't let Bella out of his sight, he'll be way more protetcive of her now since the Victoria incident and the killings. But I think the party will be a more positive experience for Bella than negative. But you are absolutely right, there's a psycho vamp out there that is killing human females that look like Bella. So all the vamps who care for Bella will be very alert.

Now for the scent question. When the human girls were sexaully assualted, the male vamp didn't leave his semen behind and his body scent was washed away by the rain. Also there are no fingerprints. I will try to cover all of this in the next chapter.And yes, the vamps do know their each other's scents, but some vamps won't care that Bella belongs to edward. They still see her as a blood bag. All I can say is that i hope that they will give Bella the respect she deserves soon because Edward won't tolerate Bella being disrespected. And some vamps that do respect Bella is because she belongs with Edward, and Edward is freared. Now the bad vamp will be eventually caught because he'll be careless and leave his scent behind. Someone will recognize the scent and know it was that vamp who commited those crimes.

LOL Yeah, Edward's usu. stuck to Bella's hip but he doesn't want to be too overbearing for her either with his protectiveness. He does want to give her some space, but that won't happen now bc of the Victoria incident. He's going to be quite protective of Bella.

I hope that I answered all your questions. Love 'em btw.

Thanks for reading, the comments and the q's =)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

relly looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Awww thanks =)

I'll post more soon, hopefully by next week.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: genuinef250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

love the long chapter... i do have a question,,,,, how will this relationship be.. i mean bella wont live as long as edward so will he then kill himself when she diees.. she will age faster than him... so is ther a way to change bella into a vamp? 



Author's Response:

Thank you =)I'm glad you enjoyed the long chapter.

Yes, there is a way for Bella to stay with Edward for the rest of eternity, and that is if she is changed into a hybrid. You'll find out the differences in future chapters between half-vamps and vamps. But Aro doesn't allow vamps to turn humans into hybrids, it's a law punishable by death and there's a reason for that. But I will reveal that later on too.

Thank you for reading and commenting =) 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

lovin the suspence of this ch.  this might be stupid but bella is able to be turned isn't she,love this story,keep  up the good work,until next update,c.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy you liked!

No not stupid at all, I love q's. And yes, Bell will be able to be turned, but she'll be a hybrid. She'll be able to live for the rest of eternity with Edward but you'll find out in future chapters the diffferences between half-vamps and vamps. But Aro doesn't allow vamps to turn humans into hybrids, it's a strict law punishable by death. And you'll find that out later on too.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: Lblinky_Winky Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

Im loving this story sooooooooooooo much hahahaha every time I see and update I'm like YAY! hahaha anyways great chapter once again, oh and a question for you, can humans be turned into vampires in this story or do they have to be born that way?



Author's Response:

LOL. Awww thank you so much =) Glad you are still enjoying it!

And yes, humans can be turned, but they'll be hybrids. So Bella, if turned into a hybrid, could live with Edward for the rest of eternity. You'll find out the differences between half-vamps and vamps...I was going to say soon but it's actually still kinda far away. Now, Aro doesn't allow vampires to turn humans. It's a law that is punsihable by death for both human turned hybrid and the vamp. Aro fears hybrids and you'll find out the reason why later on.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: Supernova8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love your story.

Can humans be turned into vamps in this story or not?



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Humans can be turned into hybrids (halfbloods). Hybrids are also immortal.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you =D

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

well worth the wait

Angela's coming to town.  We meet p & c.  Plus a serial killer it seems.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

I believe Angela will be coming up in ch 11. There will be more of Peter and Char in future chapters. And yeah...there's a crazy vamp going on a little rampage, but there's a reason why he's killing.  

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: TeqSun Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please tell me you are updating soon, I am dying here. 



Author's Response:

Yes, very soon. I should be able to post in a few days. I'm almost finished with ch. 8. I will definitely update this week. I apologize for the wait, exams have kept me away. =(

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

Just read all the chapters again. Love it.  James and Tanya deserve each other.  I wonder about the pills, effect of all the donation on Bella's body, the way things are going she'll not make old bones.  The impact Bella and Edward's mating will have on the wider community human and vampire.  Looking forward to your next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. Carlisle's concern about the pills is coming up, just finished that part actually. lol  And you'll find out soon what the vamp community thinks about Edward and Bella.  There's so much to cover, it's exhausting. lol

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'll have the next chapter finished soon.

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

THAT STORY IS INCREDIBLE AND SO DIFFERENT!!!!!!!

PLEASE REVIEW,I am dying here!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

I'm happy that you are enjoying it.

I'll post more soon =)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

really creative story. can't wait to see where it goes, love the whole marking thing pretty interesting. so can they not turn humans into vampires? so bella's just going to die one day :( that seems really sad. hope you start writing edward pov's, it would be epic :D



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Glad you like the marking. Actually, my vamps can turn humans into vamps, actually hybrids. So if Bella becomes a hybrid , she'll be able to stay with Edward for eternity. Now Aro, president/king of the vamps doesn't allow vamps to change humans...there's a reason for this. Which I will reveal in future chapters.

I'll try my best with EPOV. =)

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!

Reviewer: OliveTrusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

I would love EPOV outtakes it you have time.  This story is wonderful!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'll try my best with EPOV outtakes =)

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: TeqSun Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

I am in LOVE with this story.  Very original.  Very excited to see where this goes.  Feel free however to hurry up to the smexy times.  =D



Author's Response:

Aww thanks =) Glad you are enjoying it! LOL at hurrying up to the smexy times. =) I'm guessing that ch 10 will be the first time Bella and Edward mark and mate since ch 9 will prolly cover the birth control. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

As a physician, I can't think that Carlisle will be any to pleased to see Bella's arms and know that the medication they want her to take could cause her body to react adversely.  The rest of the family tends to be very protective as well.  They will "not be amused", to quote Queen Elizabeth I.  How to spare Bella?  Turn her or have Carlisle taker over her care.  She'll die soon anyway.  Collapsed veins do not heal.  You have it all in here.  The intensity of love to the intensity of terror and fear.  Bravo!                                                                                                                    



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

There definitely has to be something that needs to be done right away. Like you have said, turn Bella (although creating hybrids is punishable by death-maybe it will be the only action left) or have Carlisle take over her care. I hope the vamp gov't won't cause too many problems. Bella needs help...fast!

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

good story thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope Carlisle explains what's wrong with the medicines and what strength or prescription would have been more appropriate.



Author's Response:

Carlisle will def. explain what's wrong with this medication.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

I really like the chapters I've read so far.  It's different.  Please please please

keep writing :-)  Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'm happy you like the story so far. Hopefully I can keep it interesting.

I'm working on the next chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: frances Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

Interesting, new story idea. I like your writing and characters. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

 I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I'll post more soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Roxy Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

more more more



Author's Response:

LOL.

*working on it*

Thanks for reading/commenting =)

 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very Cool Story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you are enjoying it so far!

Thanks for reading/commenting.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the happy face. Love 'em!

Thanks for reading! Glad you are still enjoying the story.

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