Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
omg so excited for the next chapter!!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much for reading and commenting! I totally appreciate it!
I'll post more soon, hope you'll like =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm me thinks that she specifically is being targetted by the Volturi cause of something special in her blood.
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon (not sure what chappy yet tho) what is happening with the vamp gov't and the pills/increased blood donation. =)
Thanks so much for reading my twisted tale and your comments. I totally appreciate it! I hope I can keep you interested.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
poor B
Author's Response:
Yeah, she doesn't have it easy being a human =(
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
I thank u for writing such awesome long chapter. Your the best. I so loved how E marked Bella. It was sexy. Edward's Pov would be so appreciated, but I so get the RL thing. I can't wait to to find out the trouble Bella will get into on her errand for Renee.
Author's Response:
Awww...thanks. =) I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. And I'm happy you liked the marking =)
Yeah, I'll do my best with EPOV, hopefully school won't get in the way. lol But I think I'll write ch 8 first.
I'll post more soon. And I hope you'll like ch 8. I'll try to write another long one. lol
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
yumminess. Eddie is acutally sexy, not like his wimpyness in SM world.
Author's Response:
lol. Glad you like my version of Edward. I like him fierce ;)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
ugh..... Poor Bella
Author's Response:
Yeah....but things will get slightly better for her bc Edward is in the picture now =) lol
Thanks for your comments!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ugh.....the slimeball must be james
Author's Response:
Yup. lol =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
ok you have me nervious about the music box. hope no one takes it from her.
Author's Response:
Something will happen and it revolves around the music box melody and one of the vampires...but I haven't gotten there yet. lol This story is slow paced. Thanks for reading =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't blame her for being jaded.
Author's Response:
I agree. Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
awesome chapter. i loved it. can't wait for more. story is so unique and different
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!=)
I'm glad you are stll enjoying the story. I'll post more soon
Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved the vamp tattoo's!! Can't wait to hear what Car says about the meds!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked the vamp tatts! I'll post more soon. Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
:) very good & neat this here is
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story! And boy...you couldn't get much more public for a marking than Forks High's lunchroom! Yep, bet they'll all be talking about that one for a while!
Looking forward to the story about the medication and what's actually going on behind the scenes..the politics that may be more terrible than they know. And somehow, I doubt Edward's going to be willing to let someone else take and drink Bella's blood from now on.
And yeah...really want Angela to come visit. Hope she gets along well with Edward and the Cullens!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you =) I'm happy you are enjoying this story!
LOL. Yes very public indeed. I couldn't resist.
Oh yeah, there's a lot going on with the meds and the increased donations. The vamp gov't is...panicking.
Edward def. doesn't want to share Bella's blood. Hopefully some things will change for Bella, although it may take time. The vamp govt is really strict.
Glad you're happy about Angela's visit =)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
i love this story! This chapter was awesome, but how stupid is Alice letting Bella go off alone to get napkins!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you =) Glad you liked!
LOL. Yeah, Alice didn't think James would be such a moron and go after Bella esp. after Edward threatened him the last time. But they need to be careful and keep an eye on Bella bc there's other vamps that want her...not just to mate but for blood also. *shivers* lol
Thanks for reading =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Still loving it. Great chapter, can't wait to see where you head wtih this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comment and for reading. Glad you are enjoying the story still =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was awesome, no surprise there. I really like how all the chapters are so long. There's so much going on and the way you write I feel like I'm watching a movie. I can't wait to see what happens next. With Bella having trouble at school and all I would think that they wouldn't allow her to go anywhere on her own. I mean yeah she goes to school and all but out in the community with her being the only human and having it all so new it just makes sense that she have someone to protect her if need be. No I don't think this is the Cullen's job but Charlie and Renee should be thinking this way. Hey are they going to get her a car soon? I think it's safe to say she's not going to be running away. Please don't give her that nasty truck? Especially with them driving and Escalade. Also I'm surprised there's no rules about marking a human. Before it was said that Vamps give birth and it's safe to say that they will be getting it on. Being that they kill Hybrids, why would they not make some kind of law against that? Speaking of, does human birth control even work on Vampire spunk? K I know I'm talking your ear off but it's your fault for writing such a kick ass story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I agree, Bella shouldn't be venturing off by herself without protection but she'll persuade Renee by going by herself bc the little grocery shop is really close by. And this would create conflict. I think Bella feels brave bc she's Edward's mate. But she's kinda nutz in a way bc any male vamp could take Bella away and claim her as his own or any vamp in general could harm or feed from her. Very dangerous situation. Charlie and Edward won't know about Bella doing an errand alone....until it's revealed. They won't be happy at all.
Yeah, I say ney to the truck too. lol I want something kinda ...sexy for her to drive.
Yeah, there's no rules about marking a human bc it's very rare. So far Bella is the only human with a vamp mate. Vamps didn't think it was possibly for a vampire to have a bond with a human- a mate bond. Oh there's a law for creating hybrids and it's punishable by death bc some vamps have mated b4 with humans and have created hybrids. Aro doesn't like that one bit. lol
Great question about the human birth control. No it will not work on Bella. You see a vamp's semen is way more potent compared to a human's. The vampire pregnancy rate is a lot higher, She'll need to take bc pills created for female vampires. Carlisle will have to help in tht department. lol
No don't worry, I love questions. Ask any you like. It really gets me thinking.
Thanks for your awesome comment and questions. I hope I answered them for you and of course, thanks for reading =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
awesome chapter!!! loved the marking in front of James. cant wait for the next chap
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was hesitant at first but I figured my Edward would do it, he's fierce that way. lol
I'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Glad you are enjoying this story!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was a great chapter. Lots of exciting things going on! You're doing a great job with this story and I'm always excited to read a new chapter! I'd definitely be interested in outtakes, if you have time to do them.
I saw one typo that I thought you'd want to know about. In the sentence: “Alice told me that the first mating usually involves sex.” I believe it's supposed to say "first marking" instead of mating. That seems to make more sense, but I could be wrong. Hope this helps!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I'll try my best with the outtakes. Maybe I'll manage one about once a month or every two weeks. I guess it depends how busy my teachers keep me in school. lol
Thank you soooo much for pointing out my errors. I really appreciate it because my chapters are so long, it's crazy trying to catch everything. You're absolutely correct, its marking instead of mating. Ooops. lol
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is a very erotic way to tell the story of the vampires. I really like this!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow that marking thing was just WOW!! hot and possessive just the way I love Edward. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for another update. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. IKR? I love a possessive Edward...he may get more possessive tho. ;) Hope you'll like!
I'll post more soon!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
SO in love with your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm happy that you are still enjoying the story!
Thanks for reading and commenting!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Enjoying your story, looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm glad you like. I'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I abolutely love what you have so far; keep up the great work! I can't wait for your next update (but I'll be patient until then)!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm happy you are enjoying the story so far. I hope I can keep you interested.
I'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay first let me say you should not be hiding behind anything! You should be jumping up and down screaming I WROTE THIS IT'S GREAT!!! Because it is great! I loved everything about this chapter all the twists I so did not see Edward marking Bella in the school cafe', and craving her name in his chest!!! Where do you come up with this? It is so creative...
I understand RL is totally crazy and I am so greatful that you share your amazing talent with us... I would so look forward to EPOV if your time allows, okay that being said..... I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE LAV!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!! LOL Thanks again, and have a happy weekend!
So long, Wendy
Author's Response:
Awwww wendemyre! Your comments make my day and make me smile!
Thank you so much =)
I have no idea how I come up with some of this stuff. LOL My mom always said ever since I was little that I had an overactive imagination. lol I dream evrynight too, some scary dreams while some are ....so strange. lol
I'll try to post an Edward's POV soon. But first I'll work on the next chapter. I'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and your kind words, i totally appreciate it =)
Have agreat weekend!
Until next time,
~Janine
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is a great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you are still enjoying it =)
Thanks for reading and commenting, totally appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love these vampires. So hot how Edward marks her as his.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm glad you like my vamps! I love marking, as you can tell. lol ;)
Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really love this story. Please keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Glad you like. I will post soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
IBTAV:
I immediately stop what I'm doing when I get a notice
of your update and read your next chapter.
Loving it!!
Michelle L.
Author's Response:
Awwww Thank you so much =)
I'm happy you are enjoying the story.
Thanks for reading/commenting, reviews make me smile! And write FASTER! lol
~Janine
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
damn right bella He could lick me anytime that he wanted to too. lmao
licking sessions. is my new favorite word. this was a great chapter. i was so excited about it. i can't wait to read more. James is really a douche. so is it the fight that edward is giving to him making him challege him, or is he one of those vamps whose finds a female unbelieveable attractive they try to mark her anyway?
can't wait to see what you come up with next . this was a wonderful chapter
Author's Response:
LMAO!
Glad you liked!!! =) LOL@licking sesssions!
About James, it's a little of both ( desire and jealousy) . He finds Bella unbeliveably attractive but he has this twisted sick idea of what he wants to do with Bella which turns him on ( He's invovled in illegal activity) and his perception of love is twisted as well. But James has always been jealous of Edward, he wants what Edward has...to be feared and Bella. So he desires Bella extremely but it's also a game to hurt Edward too, he wants to win, be the ultimate vam[pire.
Hope that makes sense. lol Studying has my brain all screwy.
Thanks again, Tyg =)
Laters
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it. Now that Edward has marked her will James back off or become even more determined.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
James will most definitely not give up. He has this twisted idea of what love is in his mind. He also wants what Edward has...Bella and to be feared!
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
Those pills give me the creeps too...to say nothing about the enforced donations and "Nazi concentration camp-like tattoos". Sufficiently creepy! Edward will not be a happy camper when he sees how Bella's body was abused. Great work here. If there were any readers not hooked by this story, they are now!
Author's Response:
There's something...strange going on to say the least. The vampire gov't is panicking for a reason. I wonder what Carlisle will think...maybe he knows something?
Thank you =) I try my best at creepy. lol I guess I have suceeded. And Edward won't be too happy. Oh boy! *runs and hides*
Thank you so much for reading/commenting and sticking with this. Hopefully I can keep you entertained =)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Seems the first thing Charlie and Renee would do is take the pills to Carlisle and ask him what he thinks is going on. Something stinks to high heaven.
Author's Response:
Yes, Charlie and Renee wont allow Bella to take the pills until Carlisle can take a look at them, however Bella may not have a choice due to the vamp. gov't 's strict rule. And you're correct, there's something amiss.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Glad you are enjoying it. I should have the next chapter posted in a few days. Thanks again!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hi! just stopped by to say that i looooove your story!!! (and your Edward!!lol :P)
I am so looking forward to the marking scene between Bella and Edward!I hope it will be kinky(i know i am sick..hehe) and hopefully they will be more than one scenes!!!
questions: what happen to your vampires when they go out to the sunlight?
Is Angela dating a vampire too?
Is Jacob going to be part of this story? and werewolfs too?
And last but not least :let me guess, you are fan of true blood aren't you? So...Eric or Bill??
I am neither enlgish nor american...so I apologize for my bad english..:)
Thank you,Michelle
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it =)
And thanks for liking the story and Edward ;)
No, you're not sick. I'm sick for writing it. lmao. Just kidding. We enjoy kinkiness, can't help it. lol And YES, there will be LOTS of marking scenes. The chapter I'm working on now will contain two marking scenes and you'll see why next chapter. I hope you'll like.
My vampires aren't affected by sunlight. They're very strong and powerful...almost invicible, almost. You'll find out about their weaknesses soon. There's only a very few.
Angela at the moment is not dating a vampire, but she'll be coming up soon. I plan on having her visit Bella. =) Wonder how that will go? *shivers*
As of now, there are no werewolves. I may include them but that will be much later. It's tempting tho. It would add more conflict =) And I love conflict. lol
LOL. Yes, I do like True Blood, could you tell? LOL I like Eric more than Bill. =) At first it was Bill...now it's Eric. lol
Don't worry about your English, it's not my first language either. I can understand you just fine.
I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter *fingers crossed* I'm almost finished with it.
Thanks so much. Love your questions.
Until next time,
XxOo
Janine (jellybean)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh no fair leaving it here!! can't wait to hear edward's pov. hope he marks her soon. looks like he is not happy about it. wonder why the pills are happening and why she has to give her blood more often. something seems not right here. please update soon
Author's Response:
Awww...sorry. I was already at page 33 on the word doc. lol I could have kept on writing 'til page 50. lol Edward will mark Bella in chapter 7 so I hope you like. *nervous* You'll find out soon the reason behind the pills and the increased blood donation. The vamp gov't is panicking so they are stocking up on blood, you'll see soon =) I've already started ch 7 so I should be able to update no later than 7 days. *fingers crossed*
Thank you for reading and sticking with this story =)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved it. I just want to eat Edward up. I'm so glad you did not make Alice a whiny wanting to play dress up Bella Barbie. Nicely written her conversation w/ Bella about mating. Shit, now I'm all scared with Bella taking the new pill. I can't wait to see how that plays into the story and of course so wanting E to mark her.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
LOL@ whiny Alice. I'm glad you like her. I'm totally not going to have a hyperactive Alice. And NO to BELLA BARBIE! LOL I've read so many fics like that. Some were really great but I can't portray her like that, Sure, Alice is still a girl, she enjoys makeup and shopping but it won't have her drag Bella all over the stores and torture her with dress up.
I hope I won't disapoint with the marking scene. I'm going with my gut feeling on this one. lol
And yeah, the new meds will cause some problems. Hopefully, Carlisle can help.
Thank you for reading/commenting =)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm having fun with this variation.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVING it!!!! poor bella now has to donate blood twice a month!!! question? if edward marks her then will there be any chages or problems with the blood that she has to donate??? cant wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =D
Great question! I was wondering if anyone would ask. lol But yeah, Bella's blood will... differ, but that's all I can say for now. =) It may cause a problem.
I'm writing ch 7 already so hopefully I can post within the next week. Thanks for reading/commenting=)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
more more more
Author's Response:
LOL.
I'm on it * typing ch. 7*
I should be able to post in about 7 days, maybe sooner.
Thank you for reading/commenting =)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love, love, love this story !!!! WHat an awesome chapter...... I can 't wait until next update! Thank you so much... Wendy
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much =D I'm happy you are enjoying my twisted story. lol Glad you liked the chappy too. What a relief. I'm already working on chapter 7 so I should be able to post again within 7 days. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it! ~Janine
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
I liked you chapter. I'm still drawn to this story with the way you have developed the characters and the story line. I look forward to seeing where you take them next. thanks again for sharing with all of us.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you like the story still. I hope I can keep you interested. Your welcome. And thank you for reading.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
loved this chapter!! so excited for the marking!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I hope you'll like the first marking.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE it so much :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =D Glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great story, very interesting!
Author's Response:
Thank you =D
Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
W-O-W!!!! I'm sooooo excited for more!!!!! I love this version of a Twilight vampire/human romance!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you are enjoying my twisted tale. I'm working on the next chapter already...So hopefully I can post within 7 days. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really good. I love your story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you really like.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
so very well writte & described everything is in this here chapter most definately can't wait 2 find out what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you so much=)
I'm working on ch 7 already soo...I should be able to post within 7 days. =)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm soooo loving this story. It is
different than all the rest. Refreshing :)
Sincerely,
Michelle L.
Author's Response:
Hiya!
I'm happy you really like =)
Thank you!
~Janine
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
.......Face licking..........................................i loved this chapter! i can't wait for more! i was so mad when i got to the end lmao! i was like "fuck! i want more!" i loved that he had to ask renen and charlie for permission. this chapter was hot. face licking......... but i feel so bad about the blood donation thing, nothing good can come from that. they must be running out of blood. the way you decribed that lady it's not looking too good. i hope ed and bells relationship can survive.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!!
Thank you =) Glad you liked! That was a freakin' monster of a chapter. Shit! LOL
LMAO@face licking. That was especially for you Tyg! ;)
Yeah, Edward had to ask permission, Carlisle's orders. LOL . Edward's a good vampire but he's got his bad boy side, which likes to take over...a lot. And yes, unfortunately this whole blood donation stuff and the pills will complicate things further but...you'll see.
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking =)
See ya around
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ok no one has throw this idea out there..What about miss lil Tanya she said i will make you pay. I am guessing but she had something or called in favor to get her blood drawn more often and the pills. I can tell you I just had 22 vials drawn yesterday mostly big ones. It does make you weak after esp if you dont eat something after it and before too. Side note i am pg why and they are looking more into blood disorder.. That is why so much.. blood. I am so enjoyin this plz update asap.
Author's Response:
I like the way that sounds about Tanya's payback. Really intriguing. Thanks for mentioning it. Wow! 22 vials of blood? I'm sorry about the blood disorder. Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you like the story =) I've already started chapter 7 sooo...I should hopefully be able to post within 7 days. =)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think as a side effect to the new pills Bella will start to change little by little because of Edward marking her will his venom. The thing is I bet she is different from others and will be the only one to have this side effect. The government till find out and want her, to run test or whatever. I can't wait to see of I'm right
Author's Response:
I like the way you think. Bella's side effects will come slowly. And the marking venom will play a role =) And you'll just have to wait for the rest and see what happens next. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter! I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next. You're doing a great job with this story. One quick correction: during the part where the nurse is taking blood from Bella you use the word vile when you mean vial (definition: a small glass container usually used for liquids and having a lid). The last time you mention the vials, you have it spelled right, but the first references are wrong. Hope this helps!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
And thanks for the correction. I'll change it.
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking lol
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
great story please keep updating thanks can't wait :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
yep I do too. I think they might just interfere with BIRTH CONTROL. lol well one can hope. that nurse was a real bitch. I can't believe her attitude and then the "big vampire" who came in calling them blood bags, wow what a jerk. keep up the great work. I love when this story is updated. its getting so good and all the marking talk is hot. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Hiya! Thank you=)
Yeah, the pills won't be a good thing...but you'll see. Glad you are enjoying the marking talk. Edward won't be able to hold out too long, he'll mark her next chapter. Bu tI wonder what you will think about the bloodplay in future chapters. Hmmm...lol
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. I loved how crazy and passionate Edward was. Cannot wait for the marking!! I'm curious about these new pills as well. Edward seemed mighty pissed off when Bella came back. I can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I've started chapter 7 already. Hopefully, I can post it within 7 days. *fingers crossed* I hope you'll like the marking.
Thanks again
Date: 17 Sep 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Couldn't Bella just let Carlisle draw her blood or maybe let Edward take it directly??? It would surely hurt less right?
Author's Response:
I see you're thinking ahead. lol
Carlisle will try his best to intervene and take her blood but it won't be so easy for him to do so. The vamp gov't is very strict about blood donation protocol. Hopefully, Carlisle can take over in future chapters. And as for Edward....well let's just say that's where the bloodplay will come in. Not sure what chapter tht will be yet tho...
Thanks for reading/commenting
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
What a full chapter - loved it - What a horrid blood bank. Twice a month seems a lot - what does nine vials equate to?
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I did a little research for the chapter.lol There are different sizes of blood vials. There's 5ml, 7ml, 10ml and even 15ml. There may be larger ones but I'm not sure. For this story, I'd use the 15ml vial so that's about ml 135 of blood.
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
What an exciting chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm relieved that you liked! I had mixed feelings about this chapter.
I'll update sooner, most likely will be a smaller chapter tho...this one was a monster to write. lol
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking
Date: 12 Sep 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it <3 please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'll post the next chapter this week.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it loved it loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Please update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'll try to post by this Fri or Sat. I usually post the next chapter within 7 days BUT RL is keepin' me more busy than I like.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
that was all types of hot :D
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you like!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE! this story! I cant get enough of it, I've been looking for a story with vampire mates for ages until I came across yours I just love the whole idea of vampire mating on instinct. marking etc... I think you protray it brillianty too, please update soon cant wait to see where your going to take this story! oh and by any chance you would know of any other story with the whole vampire mating instinct?
Author's Response:
Hiya!
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you like it.
Yeah, its difficult find 'vamp mating' stories. But the author Jasper'sBlackRose has some very good stories with vampires mating and such. I haven't read them in a long time so I can't remember which contain more marking and mating. But go through em, maybe you'll find something that really catches your attention. There's another story by rmcrms5 called "Creating A Mate" that will contain marking. Hmmm...trying to think of some more... Oh there's a story called "My Mate" that has the mating instict too. It's on FF.net tho. I think the author's name is Different-kind-of-vamp, I think. Although someone else took over the story, you can still find it under that pename. I hope that helps.
And thanks for reading/commenting/liking. Hopefully, I can keep you interested. =)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!!! It's different than a lot of other things I'm reading. Your Edward is so HOT!! Bring on the bloodplay!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you like! I hope you'll like the bloodplay too ;)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW!!! tanya is such a stupid bitch!!! good thing that edward was there to save the day again!! YAY!!! im happy that edwaed straight out told her that he knows how she feels for him and that he feels the same way for her!!! they had an amazing KISS!!!! cant wait for when edward actually marks her as his!!! LOVING it!!! cant wait for more!! :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the kiss! That was the pain in the ass part for me. lol Well... not just the kiss but the instantaneous attraction.
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking =) I'll post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Just love Edward. Glad Tanya got told to stuff it.
Author's Response:
Glad you like Edward! Thanks=)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
The marking might be kind of kinky, but it's sweetly sexy in this case. Donation time? Why not let her give it straight to Emmett...he likes O+ ! Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
LOL. There will be bloodplay int future chapters.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great Chapter! When I first started reading this story I wasn't sure about the vampires with fangs but you've definately made it work for your story. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Yeah, my vamps needed some fangs, lol, for this story.
I'll post mores oon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is so refreshingly different :D
Love it ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I appreciate it!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
No honestly the whole marking thing is hotter than hell! I've been trying to find a good story where Edward marks Bella as his but I can NEVER find anything so I am IN LOVE with this story. keep up the great work and I can Not wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm glad you like the "marking"! I agree, I find it hot too! LOL I can't resist. I hope you'll like the bloodplay between Edward and Bella too in future chapters.
Thanks again. I'll post more soon.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
The conversation between Renee, Charlie and Bella flowed nicely. Edward is yummy. I love vampires that mark their mates. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I'm glad you like my version of Edward! And vamps that mark ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it! The idea of marking is just hot
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I'm glad that I'm not the only one that finds marking hot! LOL
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
so very neat this here is written well also
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow, weird but good, almost like a nightmare.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I do enjoy horror movies and stories, although it's not dark compared to some of other stories I have written which I haven't posted. LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really good chapter. Love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love your story. It's so inventive and original. I like that you're trying to change up some of the vampire characteristics. The marking thing is definitely hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm happy that you appreciate my version of vamps. I wasn't sure if readers would like them since everyone is used to the sparkly kind. LOL
I'm glad you like the marking too. Makes me happy I'm not the only one that finds it hot.
Thank you for reading/commenting!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. i love how you make the cullens (well, really all the vamps) more like normal vampires instead of all the sparkly stuff that stephenie meyer pulls. i love the fangs, the different types of venom, the mating-everything! can't wait til next week!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I'm happy that you appreciate my vamps! And my story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter may have been a pain in the ass.... But it was goooooooood!!!!!!!
Thank you so much I can't wait for the next one... Iam "Marking" this story as my favorite!!!! Wendy
Author's Response:
Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked!
It was def one of those chapters where I could've edited it forever and still not have been satifsied with it entirely. I'm happy you liked tho! =)
LOL@ "marking" this story! Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
~Jelly
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yes!!! I love your story, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =)
I'll post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
amazing chapter! Loved everything!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
i don't why ....but the face licking...is fucking hot lmao! i loved this chapter sweets
Author's Response:
Thaigher!!!!
LMAO! I LOVE face licking too. Shit. I'm gonna have some more of that for sure!
Thank you =) See ya at FFFW!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
cool story I really like it great imagination please keep updating thanks :)=
Author's Response:
Thank you =) LOVE the face with fangs!
I'll post more soon.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am so glad that skank Tanya got what was coming to her!!! I thought that this chapter was sooo sweet! I love your Edward and I can't wait to see the bond/ relationship between B &E blossom! And no...you are not twisted. I like that you made the mating venom red!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you don't think I'm twisted 'cept you may change your mind when E&B engage in bloodplay in future chapters ;) LOL I hope you'll like it. Thank you, I'm happy you like my Edward =) I hope you'll continue to find this story interesting. The red venom came to mind when I thought about E&B's love. Awwww LOL
Thanks for reading/commenting/liking.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm soooo in luv with your Edward!!!! Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like my version of Edward =)
Thanks for reading/commenting.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmm I don't think u have a twisted mind l for one love the whole marking thing. I'm glad she finally told Charlie and Renee about Tanya and her threat. Wonder how Edward will react when she has to donate blood. Cant wait to see how meeting the parents goes for Bella..
Author's Response:
Thanks=) Glad you don't think my mind is twisted. My friends happen to think so. LOL They don't get the whole vampire thing. You'll see how Edward will react to Bella's blood donation =) And how Bella does with the Cullen clan soon. Hope you'll like!
Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. like story. so different. please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'll post more soon.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I totes appreciate the happy face!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks =)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gotta love that welcome wagon known as Tanya! Great chapter. You define the characters really well here.
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =)
Thanks for reading/commenting too.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story. It's quite different from others that I have read.
Why is everyone intimidated by Edward? I guess we will find out more about that later.
I despise Tanya and I can't wait for her to get her due. I doubt that she has as much power as she insinuated that she does.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like this story so far. =)
Yeah, I hate Tanya too. Hopefully, she'll get hers soon.
Thanks for reading/commenting =) I'll post ch. 5 soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
i love this story and where it's headed... but please dont let bella be the quiet type not to share her problems, that happens in far to many fan fics already....she so should tell on tanyas ass and not keep quiet about the threats...but i do understand that each story has a process.... i also love the retractable fang factor thats hot!!!this story has a the feel of true blood with some of the elements such as the retractable fangs but i love that...i hope you keep the stroy risque with loads of blood bonding ( sort of how sookie and bill do during sex) that would be hot also...but really i can't wait until darkward marks bella....cant wait to see where this will go....i have a feeling this will be a fan favorite of all time
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I totally understand about Bella keeping quiet. I agree that she should tell but I guess I won't know until i start writing when that will happen. I can assure you that I won't drag out the whole keeping Tanya's secret thing. Something will happen before chapter 5 ends.
IKR? I LOVE fangs!!! You can tell right? I only mention the fangs like on every page. LOL Yeah, I'm totally fan of True Blood. Love the part where Sookie and Bill have sex and he feeds from her! Totally hot! There will be LOTS of bloodplay/blood bonding with Edward and Bella (might get a little kinky). I just have to develop their relationship further ANd that is why I can't have Bella keeping the secret for a long time. Like I said, hopefully I can pull off that 'something' that I want to happen in chappy 5 that will resolve Tanya's threat sitch. LOL
Yeah, I'm totally looking forward to him marking Bella. Should be interesting when Bella gets marked =) I hope. LOL
I hope I can keep this story interesting for you.
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
so very neat this here is can't wait 2 find out what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'll post more soon
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
chapter very neat
Author's Response:
Thank you
Thanks for reading/commenting. I appreciate it =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
just very good & neat @ the same time
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you like
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
so very neat this here chapter is
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just love Edward. Thanks for not making him a wuss or little choir boy. Are you going to do any EPOV in this story? I like how Bella's thoughts are getting more assertive. Your banner rocks.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you like Edward. Welcome about not making him a wuss/little choir boy. LOL I couldn't do that to him. He has to be fierce ;)
Yes, I think I will do an EPOV but I'm not sure if it will be included in the story or outtakes.
Yup, Bella is getting more assertive. She'll transform even more as the story goes on =)
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
AAAAHHHHH!!!!! tanya is a bitch!!!! tanya, james, and victoria need to be killed off!!! great chapter!!!! cant wait for more!!! LOVING it!!! :D
Author's Response:
LOL.
Thank you. Glad you like! =)
Yep. Tanya is a major bitch! LOL. Yes James, Tanya and Victoria are the main villians in this story. And James isn't done playing with Bella yet. But that may not be revealed for a while.
Thanks for reading and commenting =)