[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yay Edward saved her and flirted with her. Ugh stupid tanya now Bella is going to do something stupid to get edward to forget her, at least now shes having feelings for Renee and Charlie. Cant wait to see of the cullers have any special powers..
Author's Response:
LOL.
Yeah, Tanya is such a problem. Don't like her one bit! Hopefully Bella will know what to do. She's in love with Edward so it will be really difficult for her to stay away from him.
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really liked ths chapter. I'm truly enjoying reading this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked! It gets kinda nerveracking posting a new chapter because you want ppl to enjoy the chapter/story. I'm happy I didn't disappoint. lol
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
cool story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you like
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Makes me happeh that you like!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved seeing her meeting all the Cullens.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I must admit, I'm out of my element with writing the Cullens so nice. They're usually dark. LOL
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
This story is so GREAT!!! I am lovin it!!!! Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you are still enjoying this story!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hate Tanya!!!!! But i love Edward!!!! lol please update soon!
Author's Response:
LOL.
I hate Tanya too. She's so evil! Hopefully someone will put her in her place!
I LOVE Edward too. I hope you are liking my version of Edward!
Thank you =) I'll update soon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ahh, I've been checking for this update like twice a day, lol. Thank you!
I'm curious if Tanya is just full of hot air or if she really thinks she could do something....
Author's Response:
Aww..thank you =) Yeah, I wanted to update sooner but RL kept me away =( I'll try to update once a week.
You'll see about Tanya. She does have friends in low places tho...lol.
Thanks for reading/commenting. =)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Pardon my french but... I LOVE THIS FUCCCCKINGGG THEORYYYYY <3 HOLY SHIT. I AM IN LOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Author's Response:
LMAO!
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =D
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
it was great i wish you'd update soon. fucking tanya that bitch. bella should realize that people are scared of edward. if i were her i'd tell. fuck tayna
Author's Response:
Thaigher!!!
Glad you liked! I'll try to update soon. If I have time, I'll write chappy 5 this weekend.
I agree, Tanya is a friggin' bitch! Tanya doesn't think Edward will hurt her.... but if it concerns Bella, Edward won't hesitate to rip her to shreds!
Thanks for reading/commenting!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella just as she was calming down and getting to know Edward and the Cullen's. Lets hope Tanya gets her ass kicked and soon.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, I agree. Tanya needs a serious ass-kicking. LOL
Thanks for reading/commenting =)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wrote a nice long review for this chapter a few days ago, but when I went to post it, my log in time had expired.
Basically though, I loved it and I cannot wait for the next chapter! WooHoo!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm working on ch 4 now. Hopefully, I will be able to post in a few days. =)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
If I were Bella, I think I'd opt for homeschooling! You really go for the details...I hadn't thought of lunch in a school of vampires! Great stuff!
Author's Response:
LOL. I think I'd prolly want to be homeschooled too. Thank you =)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
I just adore this story. Your writing flows nicely. I love how your vampires are different from SM. I like Bella, her anxiety and fear is real. Hell, if I was in her situation I would have been taken to a mental ward for constantly having panic attacks. Awesome, how J,A,EM have treated Bella. I hope they stay nice to her. I'm so excited to meet Edward and see his instant connection to Bella. I'm hoping he will not be abusive towards her. I don't like a wussy Edward but adore him being sweet to Bella. I can't wait to read the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoy it so far. I can assure you that J,A, Em will stay nice to Bella. When I first had planned to write this twisted tale, I wanted to make the Cullens dark BUT I decided against it. There would be no chance of Bella ever being happy if ALL the vampires were dark. There will be an instant connection when they both meet and no, Edward won't be abusive towards her. He won't be a wuss either, he'll be fierce but sweet to Bella. Edward will be feared by other vamps because he's kinda like...umm...I guess you could say the Alpha. lol But I can assure you that he'll be awesome with Bella. I hope you'll like my version of Edward. lol I'm working on ch 4 already however I'm not sure when it will be finished. Life is a little nutzo with my fam getting back from vacay. I'll post more soon =)
Thanks again,
~Jellybean
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
so far I like the story please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I will update as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, great story. Umm anyone see anything wrong with a human in a vampire school?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you like so far =) LOL yeah there's something wrong alright. Hope I can keep you interested!
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, dear. You're killing me, here!
Update soon please!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading =)
I'll try to update as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Curious to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'll update soon.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
very interesting
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
The concept of this story is very intersting. I can't wait to see which direction you take it!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I hope I can keep it interesting.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait 4 mre
Author's Response:
Thanks =) I'll post more soon
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
OOOO I like this story. It seems so different than stories I have read in the past, I like that. I can't wait to read what happens next. I know your life is busy, but I hope we don't have to wait to long. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) You won't have to wait long. I'll try to have something by the end of this week, although it may be a shorter chapter. I'll try my best =)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
omg!!! poor bella!!! tanya, victoria, and mostly the rest of the vampires are assholes!!! cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. =) I'll update soon. Yeah, most of the vamps are assholes because humans are just food to them. =(
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Love the happy faces btw. lol
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really, really liked reading this chapter. I hope someone stops james. before something happens. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'll try to post more soon
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
tha damned james! i can't believe you stopped it here you so have to give us one more chapter!!! i really love this story lmao!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thank you =) I'll try to update soon.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Your story is interesting. I look forward to reading more chapters.
One correction for this chapter: Bella is nauseated NOT nauseous. The difference in the two words is similar to the difference between poisoned and poisonous. The thing that makes you feel sick to your stomach is nauseous (for example, rotting meat is nauseous). A person gets nauseated, not nauseous. I hope this is helpful! Unfortunately, it's a common mistake.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
And thanks for the correction. I will change it. That word gets me EVERY time. LOL
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Some freaky stuff in this chapter. Totally believable in it own universe, though. Awesome!
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, it's definitely twisted. Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
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Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you like the story!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
I know Bella has a right to be worried and anxious but I have to admit she is starting to get on my wick a bit. I wonder who will save her from the vampire (bet its James).
Author's Response:
LOL. Don't worry, she'll change or there wouldn't be a point to this story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
You're awesome - thanks so much for the fast update! I really appreciate it, since this is one of the main stories I'm looking out for right now. Super job on this chapter. Poor Bella!
And I like the details you're giving us so far on how your vamps are different than SM's. I've always thought that they should be tall, too.
Author's Response:
Thank you...and thanks for reading too. =)
Poor Bella indeed. She's trying to cope.
I hope you'll like my vamps, you'll learn more about them as time goes by through Bella's POV. And yes, the tall characteristic was a must. LOL In all the vamp books that I have read so far, esp The Black Dagger Brotherhood, they've all been really tall.
Thanks again.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
poor bella!!! cant wait for when she's at school!!!
Author's Response:
Poor Bella indeed. Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
its different, i like it!!! good start!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is a unique story idea. A great twist with a lot of possibilities. Nice!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Your story is really good, it is so different... Keep it up can't wait to read more..
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it =) I'll post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
u had better update soon because i am hooked lmao! i love this story sweets continue and i'll follow this is really fucking good. it's better and more original of a good bit of the vamp fic's i've read
Author's Response:
LMAO! Sure thing, Thaigher, I'll post more soon. And thanks so much for reading...and liking this twisted tale =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
you should i love it! i hope you post more chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Already started on ch 3. Love your penname btw....sounds familiar...I think I heard it at FFFW.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
more please! i love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'll post more soon
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella seems to be in a state of near panic most of the time. If she is so afraid may be she should try a be a bit more careful so she does not cut herself.
Author's Response:
Yes, poor clumsy Bella. lol She will have to be extra careful when she's in school. Hopefully, her fear will start to fade over time.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
:D :D :D
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:D :D :D
Please Please Please..*
:D :D :D
Alice R..*
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you. I will update as soon as I can =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you like so far =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant - can't wait to see how Bella's first day goes. Ugh I can't even imagine what a vampire Mike will be like!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) LOL@vampire Mike! He'll be quite the character!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like the story, very original. please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll post more soon =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
i like the sound of the story so far :D
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh I like it! Can't wait to read the next chappy!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Just finished chapter 2. I will update in a few hrs. =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)I hope I can keep you interested.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is different ... like your beginning ... keep going ... I'm intrigued.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is seriously the best story of this type that I have ever read - and I don't say that lightly. I will be EXTREMELY disappointed if you don't continue this story. This chapter was excellent. Good job. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate the compliment. And yes, I plan to continue. Chapter 2 is almost completed. Thanks =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting idea
Author's Response:
Thank you. I just hope I can keep it interesting. LOL
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love it! can u please write more?!? and quickly if u can! how do the cullens take part in this story?
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm about halfway finished with ch. 2. I might be able to update tomorrow. And as for the Cullens, you'll see in ch. 3 =)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love the idea
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is good, I like it!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I also love this story! I hope you continue it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I will continue it. I wan't sure if anybody would like reading a story like this.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loves it! Can't wait until the next update. Keep up the good work. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)