[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Another great chapter, with a nice little twist on the end. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow. My poor beta is having some rl issues atm so i'm trying to self edit a 15 k chappy myself. lol
Thanks again,
xoxo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
interesting chapter i hope to read more soon
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'll ahve it up today or 2mrw.
Thanks again,
xoxo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hi, I love, really loved your story so far. I think it's amazing, and really bless that freaking imagination that u have. The period crap I think it was brilliant but freaking gross as hell too. It sucks that he can't bite her...yet. I was wondering where James was, since we hadnt heart from him for awhile. And that poor Bella can't catch her breath. SMH. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! That means a lot to me. =)
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. My poor beta is having some RL issues atm. So i'm self editing a 15k chappy myself lol
Thanks again,
xoxo
Jells
Date: 23 Oct 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
When I saw that you updated, I was SO excited, I might've peed a little!!! LOL! :) But, seriously, I was so happy to see an update, and I'm really excited that we won't have to wait too long for another update because your cliffies Are. Killing. Me!!!! :) Wow, ok, interesting direction with the Tanya thing. I'm looking forward to seeing where that goes. I can't wait for Bella to be hybrid so she can't kick some of these vamps ass!!!! How cute is Bree, but OH NO, NOT JAMES!!!!! Im whole-heartedly addicted to your story! :)
Author's Response:
LMAO! You're comment made my day! Thank you so much! That means a lot to me =)
Ch 19 will be posted today or tomorrow at the very latest. My poor beta is having some tough RL issues atm so I'm self editing a 15k chappy myself lol
Thanks so much,
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
I so love, love, love this story. Each chapter just keeps getting better and better. Nice cliffhanger by the way, hahahaha. Now I'll be on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
hugz
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Your comment made my day *big hugz*
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. My poor Beta is having some RL issues si i'm self editing a 15k chapter myself lol
Thanks again,
xox
Jells
Date: 23 Oct 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't really trust Bree. Glad that Angela and Ben are back. I hope Bella gets out that house. Where is Edward?!
Author's Response:
Hey *waves*
I don't trust her either, but you'll see in ch 19 why. Edward is on his way, but there's something that you'll discover about the blood bond and Edward.
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. My poor Beta is having some RL issues atm so I'm doing it all myself, all 15k lol
thank you,
xoxo
Jells
Date: 23 Oct 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad to see you back in the saddle with this story. I've miss ya jells
Jukie
Author's Response:
Juuuuuukie *runs and scoops you up into a hug* I missed you too!
Sorry for the late reply. I'll have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw at the very latest. I have to finish editing like 15k lol
Thank you,
xoxo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Eddie is going to rip him a new one!
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
*grins* I think he will
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. I have to self edit, my beta's life is crazy atm.So 'll post when im done.
Thank you,
xox
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'll have More today or 2mrw.
Thanks again
xox
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Jellybean what a mean cliffy (glares) I'm just messing with you. Great update. I don't think Bella should trust Bree, what if she's in on it. Maybe James is using his cousins to get to Bella. Anyway just a thought. I'm probably wrong. I'm looking forward to that update in a week. Don't forget. (smiles)
Author's Response:
LMFAO!
Pfft whatever. You know I like cliffies. BUT not more than mindfuckery.
You might be right...or not. lol
I know, I know. I'll post today... or 2mrw. I only had 2k on Saturday which means I only had half of the first scene written which was almost nada.
Thank you and see ya later,
xoxo
Jellybean
Date: 22 Oct 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my........hope Bree's cousing James doesn't cause them any more trouble. I don't think he's given up on trying to take Bella away from Edward yet.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
You're absolutely right, he hasn't given up. There's a lot more to James and his connection to Bella.
I'll have ch 19 up today or tomorrow the latest.
Thank you,
xox
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh god, he's their cousin??? ugh...
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
Yep, nuts huh? And there's more to it. I can't resist the mindfuckery *grins*
I'll have ch 19 up today or tomorrow.
Thank you,
xoxo
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was glad to see and read the update! I wonder what the cause of Bella's bleeding was. I'm also curious about what they will do about Bella being a human true mate and Angela's pregnancy. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
Carlisle will find out what's wrong with Bella soon. Most likely ch 20 or 21. And the trial is coming up rather quickly as well.
Thanks so much for reading! I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow the latest.
xOxo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
great update see you in a week thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll post today or 2mrw.
Thanks again,
xox
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
:):):)
Author's Response:
Thank you =D
xox
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
that is a seriously scary picture!!! it's hard to imagine Bella finding him attractive with those fangs lol. anyway, good banter and good characterisation. James is seriously scary too. I love the tension you're building.
Author's Response:
LOL yeah his glowing eyes and fangs can be quite scary lol
Thank you so much. It was a pain to write.
I agree, James is totally scary. He's crazy too.
Hope you'll like the next chappy.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH NO! Please!?!?! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
Sorry for that cliffy, but I'll post ch 19 today or tomorrow at the very latest. I decided to write a full chapter.
Thank you
XxOo
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Cullen has his problems here yet mnogo.A Angela with her pregnancy, she will thinkthat should get rid of her, (that's the law) then even the Cullens little to help or they may be accused of too posobnichestve.Vot father Ben poraduetsya.Pora to decide their problems, rather than shifting them to others.
Author's Response:
Hiya *waves*
I agree, I think Angela will not only put herself and her unborn child only in danger if she decides to go through with having the baby, but the Cullens, Bella and Ben will be in danger as well. It's the law, she should stick to it. But you'll see what will happen. =)
I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow the latest.
Thank you
xox
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the update I don't trust Bree. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading/commenting =)
I totally agree with you, I don't trust her either.
I'll have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw the latest.
Thanks again,
xoxo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I just love this story. I am wondering about bella illness what it was. Seems car knows but is afraid to say. I wonder what will happen when family and ben find out angela is preggo. Great job of writing. I am recomendin this story to a person I am beta too. I do hope you update soon esp with that kind of cliffy.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves* Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
I should have the next chappy posted today sometime or tomorrow the very latest.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 22 Oct 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
xox
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was wondering when james would be back, plz update soon
Author's Response:
I'm working on ch 19 right now. I've been up for 21 hours straight so i'll keep pushing as much as I can. But I'll have an update in a week, even if it's 3 pages long. lmao
Thank you
xox
Jells
Date: 19 Oct 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
i just read this story again.... i love it so much i hope you post a new chapter soon.... cant handle the suspense
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me. I'm doing a self edit of ch 18 right now. I'm on page 17 of like 35. As soon as I'm done, I'll post the chapter. It should be in just a few hours.
Sorry for the wait.
Thanks again,
xox
Jells
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Update soon please!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hiya *waves*
I'll have the next update posted in a few days unless I can finish the editing myself tonight.
Thanks for waiting and sorry for the wait.
xo
Jells
Date: 07 Oct 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Consumed this story in a day and though I'm half asleep, still wanted to leave some positive vibrations:
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I honestly can't remember ever reading such deliciously savage, carnal vampires. I'm completely mesmerized by them.
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Love the idea of another species which rules out any preconceptions.
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Cheek licking is just f* ultra hot.
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Crazy unpredictable chapters! You made me gnaw my nails and utilize various tension relieving methods- some of them quite pleasant though:).
Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Kaxia
Author's Response:
Thank you sooooooo much! Your comment made my day!!! I'm totally flattered that you like this story. Next chappy will be posted in a few days.
Thanks again,
xo
Jells
Date: 02 Oct 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
You should make bella have a baby. That would be cool as hell
Author's Response:
*grins* You never know, there are so many twists and turns in this story. Thanks for reading. Next chappy will be posted in a few more days.
Thank you
Jells
Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! Update soon, please =)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
I'm writing the rest right now. I'll have it up soon.
Thank you
XxOo
Jells
Date: 24 Sep 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella: Under Cullen Protection...mate to the ultimate, immune, vampire. I love it! Your writing flows so easily. I feel in touch with all the characters, the plot has good movement, and there is good mystery and vampire technicalities. MORE!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Thanks again,
xxOo
Jells
Date: 24 Sep 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Any of the vampires could be scary for Bella, but Tanya makes an impressive villain. I'm curious what she could do to Renee and Charlie. Emmett is love, Edward is liquid sex, and Alice is sweet, supportive and non-threatening. Great chapter.
Date: 23 Sep 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm loving this story. Bella's fright is palpable. It seems even the nice vamps don't really understand her fears. James (?) at the end there...truly menacing.
Date: 23 Sep 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I rarely read a WIP but the summary just looked too good to pass up. I love the first chapter so far.
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
jelly
i have to say i'm very satisfied with this chapter it was very long and it took me two days to read i loved everything this chapter, the blood disease thing is some crazy shit but im excited to see where it goes next and the bitch is back tanya her crazzy ass lol when will she learn. i also love!! edwards new size :).... until next time darling
Author's Response:
Audasia! *waves*
Aww thank you =) Awesome glad you liked it. The next chapter is very small, about 3k at most. RL is tough right now. But hopefully it will be satisyfing as well =)
Thanks so much, sweets!
XxOo
Jelly
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great story and a very interesting story line. The summary caught my eye when I was browsing. It was so different that I broke one of my long standing rules of not reading anything that was not finished. Please update soon. As you left me wanting ALOT more. In the mean time I am going to check out some of your other writings. I liked the way the story has progressed and that the sex in is a part of the story and not the whole story in itself. I see lots of possibilities for the direction of the story line. Please hurry with an update! And yes I know all about real life and how it tends to get in the way, but don't wait too long.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! That means a lot to me! =)
I'm working on the next chapter.
Oh there's so many possibilities. You should see the stacks of notes I have for this story lol
Thanks again and the wait won't be too much longer.
Jells
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
Even if you did leave us with a major cliffy, this was still an amazing chapter and I'm really looking forward to more. You're such a great writer.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late reply.
Thank you so much!! Your comment made my day =)
Yeah, cliffy...again. lol I'm working on the next chappy, I'll have it up very soon.
Thank you for sticking with thsi story. It means a lot =)
XxOo
Jells
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
They should have stayed home like they were told. This cannot be good at all!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late reply.
Yeah they def should've stayed home. lol
Thansk for reading. I'll have the next chappy up very soon.
Jells
Date: 20 Aug 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
omg!!!! Can't believe it!!! The guys will be furious!!!!! They told them to stay at home and they went out... What were they thinking??? It is too dangerous for Bella...!!! Will Tanya attack her now that Edward isn't here???? Of course Rosalie is there but it isn't the same...
They were all terrified at first that Bella was going to die... but Rose saved her even if it wasn't her first intention...!!!!! Why didn't Edward drank from her???? His instincts should have told him right??? But the good news is that Rosa will do anuthing to protect now!!! And Edward's marking venom stop the infecton from developing??? As long as he inject his venom in her everyday everything will be fine????
I loved that you show that Edward starts to want to take Aro down... He is thinking about it more and more everyday...!!!!And Bella is starting to change or something??? No!!! But she is starting to have more and more features that vampires are having...!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read more.. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!!! I love your comments.
I hope you'll like ch 18. I'm trying to finish it this week. I really hope you'll like it.
Yeah They should've stayed home. You'll see what will happen ;) And you're right, ikt isn't the same as if Edward would be there.
And Edward should've drank from her, but he was so disrtaught that it was getting to him. Hopefully, Edward's marking venom will stop her infection from spreading. =)
Thanks so much!!
XxOo
Jells
Date: 19 Aug 2011 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
omg!!!!!!!!!!! First Edward and now Bella???? Thank God that Edward was only going through the Change.... But what is wrong with Bella??? Is it the medicine that she is taking for her blood??? Edward will be furious and so worried...!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved how he wanting to have sex with her when he was going thfough his Change... But why did he when through it so early??? Can't wait...
Author's Response:
sorry for the late reply. Thinsg have been crazy!
I'll have up the next chapter very soon.
Thank you so much! I loooooooooooove your comments!!
Hope you'll like the next chappy.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter,update soon. I like this bond between Rose and Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! . Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
The blood bond is very strong between her and Rose =)
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow!!!!!! Perfect!!! I wasn't expecting Edward to get through The Change...!!!!!!!!! And so soon...!!!!! Is it because he is the Ultimate Vampire??? He is so huge and powerful!!!!! WOW!!!!! Too bad that Bella could expirience The Change with Edward!!!!! What is wrong??? Why Aro isn't coming???? And how will it affect Edward and Bella???
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!!!! Sorry for the late responses. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH. Living Amongst Hell, which is a dark version of this story. Dark Edward and Cullens etc.
You'll see soon why ro cancelled. Keep in mind he's a monster.
Thanks again,
love hearing form you!
XxoO
jells
Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
omg!!!!! Bella is so furious!!!!! Of course she is right and Edward should respect her more but she should have realised by now that when Edward is feral he doesn't think...!!!!! Even Mr Greene??? He should be more controled!!! And he thought that he could win... hahahah... God!!!! What happened with Edward??? Vampires don't get sick right???? Is he going throught some transformation or something???
Author's Response:
Yup, definitely a transformation =) You are right!!!
Yeah, Mr. Greene is such an old, lonely and horny vampire lmao He shouldve been more controlled. ;)
No, technically vamps can't get sick, BUT, you never know.... I love mind games. I have lots more up my sleeve,
Thank you
XxoO
jells
Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVED IT!!!!! Mike finally is dead... Edward should have killed him the first time that he wanted to... Thank God that he felt Bella's feelings!!!! He shouldn't have left her alone... And Tyler is crazy too helping Mike with all this girls!!!! He is going to prison now!!!!! Will they accapt Bella's words about Mike being the one to kill all this girls???? The Cullen and Swan were so worried about Bella!!!! But she is fine!!!!! And what is going on wih her period??? Is she in truble??? She didn't know what would happen...
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! Have I told you have awesome you are. I'm adoring you and your reviews! I appreciate it so much! I get all giddy seeing a comment from you!
I will write Tyler's trial very soon, hopefully ch 19 =) Vampire court should be interesting, at least I hope lol
XxOo
jells
Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
omg!!!!!!!!!!! Shit!!!! Mike is so dead when Edward get to him... He is crazy!!!!! He has totally lost his mind!!!!! Is bella all right??? Will Mike take her??? Or will Edward get back in time???? Mike was the one to kill all this wommen??? Poor girls!!!! Can't wait to read more...
I'm so happy that Ben and Angela mated!!!!! YEAH!!!! But Ben's father... He is an idiot!!!! So anachrnistic!!!! He was ready to kill his own son... Either be literally killing him either by killing his true mate... He only though of himself...!!!!! Where will Ben go?? Will he stay with the Cullen???
Edward and Bella can't keep their hands off of each other... Perfect!!!!! And what Carlisle had to say... God!!!! That's why Aro does want hybrids!!!! He is so afraid that someone will take his throne... Can't wait to see what will happen with Edward...
Author's Response:
Thank you!! =) You are so aweosme!!!
Ben's father is a monster. He'll try to break Angela and Ben apart. Will they survive? Hmmm...
Ben and Angela will have to live together. It would be safer if they stayed with The Cullens. Since there is strength in numbers. But....you'll see ;)
Thanks again,
Xxoo
jells
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!! What doea Aro want???? For Edward and Bella to visit??? Can't wait... Angela is great and they all loved her!!! She will be with ben right??? And I totally love all this sex with Edward and Bella... It;s awesome and so sexy...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yup Ben and Ang are a true mate couple ;)
Thanks again, loooooove your commments
xxoo
jells
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
so very awesome written & described so9 well everything is can't wait 2 find out what happens next :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
Xxoo
jells
Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh NO! They should have stayed home!!! I hope Rosalie doesn't get hurt!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
XxOo
jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
PERFECT!!!!!! Aro sent only two???? And they were stupid... They hadn't taken the rumors about Edward to be true... And now they are minus one guard... But they should be more careful about what they said to Bella...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the same goes for Mike, Tyler and Garret... They stupid to fight Edward!!!!! And they had sex!!! Loved the lemon!!!! Angela is here... She will mate with Ben, right??? And she will come to stay here with Bella??? Why are they inportant???
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!! Ben and Ang are important for future chapters. They are the only other human/ vampire true mate couple around like Bella and Edward =)
XxoO
jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! Edward was furious about Victoria and so consern about Bella's safity...!!!! The same goes for Charlie and the other Cullen!!!! Who is after her??? Not James... But who??? And right now in the woods???? The crest was amazing!!!! And Emmett was hilarious in the end with Alice... hahaah... Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much. I cant say it enough
XxOo
Jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!! Edward is furious.. What will he do??? And who is after Bella??? James???? Can't wait to read more... Victoria is an idiot!!!! She really thinks taht Edward won't go after her??? And Charlie too??? Ben was great to support Bella against Mike and invite her to his party!!!!! Bella shouldn't forgive him... Will he think that now he have hope to gain her???? And who are Peter and Charlotte??? How do they know Bella????
Author's Response:
Peter and Char are Jasper's best friends. I will have more of them in future chapters, but much later. They will be important to the story. They are in college, at least that's how I want it. lol can't wait to take you on a tour of a Vamp Univeristy =)
Thank you,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG it seems like forever since you updated but I can deal with that if they are all this big and good WOW. What is wrong with Bella is her body trying to change with out the special venom???? Tanya oh shit! Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
You'll see soon what's wrong with Bella. I love mind games lolol
Thanks again,
XxOo
jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
methinks the officer needed a list of everyone to keep away from Bella and the girls.
SO...I'd totally vote for Rose to end Tanya if I didn't think she'd get in trouble for it...and if I didn't want Bella to end Tanya herself after she becomes a gifted hybrid and has control over herself.
also...is Angela pregnant? I mean I doubt she was taking vampire strength birth control pills before she met Ben and vampires are really fertile right?
was SO happy to see this story was updated! I love it so much that after you had updated with ch16 I decided to work my way through the story again to try to hold off any story withdrawals I might start suffering.
SO...since they're cutting back on the amount are they gonna find out the hard way just how much birth control she needs to take to not get pregnant? also if a human did become pregnant could she be safely changed so as to have a better chance of carrying the child to term*and surviving herself*? what would happen to the child I wonder...would it still be half vampire and half human or would its mother being changed effect what it is...
also somehow I'm thinking someone might have overheard Edward's joke about her being pregnant...or maybe security cameras hearing/seeing what he said. I mean if I was in Aro's shoes*thank god I'm not* I'd want to keep track of any threat there might be against me by constant surveylence at least through technology.
I would not be surprised if Edward will grow more yet...totally like that he has a better sense of those who would pose a threat to his bond with his mate.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
btw, we gonna eventually see Bella and Edward pregnant? if he's this possessive/protective NOW I'd love to see how he'd be with his mate expecting...methinks he'll want a whole house/mansion/palace-hold of children
Author's Response:
Hiya *waves*
Thank you so much for reading and the awesome comment. It made my day when I saw it!! But I'm Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
You'll see soon if Angela is pregnant ;)
Love all your questions. Carlisle will have to be careful, he will need to give her a dose high enough for Bella not to become pregnant. As for Bella having a baby if she is changed before giving birth and/or conception, the baby would still be considred a hybrid.More powerful than a hybrid who has a human mother, but a hybrid nonetheless. But you'll find out in future chapters that human women can carry vampire offspring and survive...it is a risky birth tho, very gory if the baby doesn't get out of the mother's womb when it's time or gets stuck. They'd chew their way out to survive. My baby vamps and hybrids are born with two tiny fangs, the teeth will come later like human babies. I'd say it would be recommended for a human to be changed first before having a baby by a vamp, but since changing humans is forbidden by Aro, most human women are forced to give birth as humans. And even that is risky b/c the chance of dying can be high if the baby can't leave the womb and havingbaby hybrids is also forbidden. So much isn't allowed. lol
Yup you're right. Aro could be listening or any one for that matter. But Edward isn't worried. Not yet...anyway ;)
And yup, you never know if he'll grow more. If his mate is trouble, he may grow a bit more. =) it's like a natural reaction he has to her. That is why The change hit him so early.
Pregnancy for Bella will come much later unfortunately. But I hope you'll like it and i can keep you entertained til then
Thank you soooooooo much. Love your comments and questions.
Thansk again,
XxOo
jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward was furious when he saw Bella's arm!!!! He wanted to kill them all for treating his Bella like this!!!! Will Bella be able to give blood now?? Doesn't she have Edward's venom in her system now??? Edward will try anathing to not allow them to take Bella's blood!!! I loved the idea about Carlisle taking her blood every month!!!! What is goigng on with the pills????Can't wait to read more...
James was stupid... to thinktht he will mark Bella before Edward!!!! Is Bella his mate too??? I loved that Edward marked her in public... He shown to everyone that Bella is his!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Bella isn't James' mate bUT he has this sick and twisted obession with her. He's crazy!
XxoO
Jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
PERFECT!!!!! Edward is so loving... They can't keep their hand off of each other...!!!! Loved it!!!! And Alice was amazing to warn Bella what to expect from the marking!!!! Esme is so sweet!!! And Charlie and Renee so happy fo rBella finding her mate!!!! And they were furious about Bella haing to give her blood!!!!! Will Edward allow her to do it again??? And she have to continue giving blood even now that she mated??? Does she have to stay healthy for her vampire???
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!!!
Bella definitely has to stay healthy. The cullen's will do everything they can to fight for Bella's rights for a human.
XxoO
jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOVED IT!!!!!!! It's amazing that Edward amted instantly and that Bella accepted it so quickly and well!!!! She even want the claiming and the maring... She doesn't care!!!! And then Tanya... God she is totaly stupid!!!! Thank God that Edward was there and heard everything!!!! Will she go after Bella again in the future?? When she find out that Bella is his mate????
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Love reading your comments!!!!!
The answer to Tanya finding out about Edward and Bella being mates will happen in ch 18, which i still have to finish. The story is kinda slow paced, I take it day by day pretty much. lol And Tanya doesn't like to give up, she's a challenging female which you will read about soon, If you still like the story that is .lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
LOVED the chapter!!! Edward was so sweet!!!!! He was ready to kill James and then Mike!!! He is really powerful among the others... They are afraid of him... Does he knows that Bella is his mate??? Alice has saw her??? Do they even have powers??? And what about Tanya??? Will Bella listen to her or talk to Edward????
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you gave my story a change. I really appreciate it. If you any questions. Ask! lol I'll have time to respond to comments later when I get home, I always do even if I'm running waaay behind.lol They'll know soon enough that Bella is Edward's ;) No, my vamps don't have any powers, but you'll find out who will later, like a lot later, I still have to write that scene. lol I hope that you continue to enjoy it. =)
Thank you
XxOo
Jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG!!!! Is he James??? James is drinking from her??? What about Edward???? Where is he???? Will he save her??? Can't wait to read!!!
She already met Emmett, Jasper and Alice!!! She really liked them but they are vampires after all!!!! And Tanya... she is such a bitch!!!! Mike will be after her too???
Author's Response:
Yup, James is bad. I'll tell ya a little itty bitty secret, well kinda...lol. Just keep in mind that James is involed in illegal activities.
Xxoo
jells
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Jellllllllllls!!!!
OMG, what a chapter that was!!! A lot to take in, but there is so much going in- it makes sense! Oh boy...I don't even know where to start! Oh well, how about the beginning- WTF?! That scene was just so...GAH! The idea of choking from your own blood, basically drwoning in it...damn! And all S.M. had was a loudy papercut! =) Poor Edward was utterly helpless and Rosie had to save the day be feeding on Bella! That one really had me wondering- since the feeding created this special bond between them- with all that shit that's lurking around the corner and wating to attack, shouldn't they all just feed on her? Only for safety reasons, of course =) LIke a Blood Bar de Bella lol! ^^
But seriously, there so much stuff threatening to happen! It's not even a question about who is going to attack them (except you have more villians up your sleave we don't know about yet! *raises eyebrow*) or the how, it's about the when! When are they going to attack, or better, in which order!!!! Ungh...don't they have any rainbows and butterflies in Vampiro World? Must there always be a dark cloud of foreboding hanging over their heads?! Damn you! I fthis all just foreplay, I'm not sure I can handle the main act/ climax =) Bb, You. Are. Killing. Me! But I still luv ya and your crazyness lots! Kepp your madness coming!
Mwah ~ Sue
Author's Response:
SUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for the late effin' response. Between RL and working on a chapter for LAH made me crazy busy. It was nutz >:(
LOOOOOOOOOOOVE your comment!
Hehe you're absolutely right, they all shoudl take a bite outta Bella. Coudl you imagine all the overprotectiveness over her? They'll all me crazy, but she'd be super safe =) Love the way you think. LOLOL@ Blood bar de la Bella!
Yep...there's more villians...and some are not what you expect...and when they will strike *shrugs* *laughs*
Anyhoooooooooooooooooo, when R U POSTING???? I'm dying here. U R Killing me missy! I have some time to read now, and u haven't posted =(
Thanks again,bb! Your comments always make my day/nite/ afternoon whatever the time of day it is =)
XxoO
Jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH. It's and I sent it to Tyggy. I'll post it asap.
Thanks again,
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
ugh Tanya is back. Wonderful chapter Jellybell!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
Xxoo
jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella was terrified!!!! So afraid that Charlie or Renee will drink from her... But both of them were amazing and so caring!!! The same goes for Carlisle too!!!! What about the music box??? How will Edward react to her??? Will he knows that she is his mate at once??? Will her blood sing to him??? And what about the other vampires in the school???? Can't wait...
Author's Response:
Hiya ! =D
The music box should be coming up soon. I had to keep pushing the scene back, hopefully by ch 20 I can get into it =)
Love reading all your comments.
XxoO
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
thank you great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
XxoO
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this story Jells and Thaigher Lillie...it is just amazing.
I love the purring Edward...or Purrrrward...lol.
I am completely addicted to your story.
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
Thanks again!!!
XxoO
Jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like how this story is... And the alternative universe you have created but I can't wait to read more... Poor Bella!! she lost all her family in a year time!!! Will she accept Edward quickly or not???
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving my story a chance.
Xxoo
Date: 12 Aug 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
XxoO
jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
This connection of blood with Rosalie to break. This is unacceptable and should be Edward merzko.Tolko relationship with Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
The blood bond with Rose will break off eventually because she doesn't feed on Bella's blood anymore. =)
Thanks again,
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
J'adore vos écrits.... mais je vous maudit pour la longueur de vos chapitres, lol... long à traduire
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
I'm so sorry. =( I should have split up the chapter in three parts. I apologize.
Ch 18 will be much, much smaller. =D
Thanks again,
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
O.M.G, that was an awesome chapter. It was so much to take in. I had to read it all day. Love it so much !!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
Thanks again, your comment made my day!! =)
XxoO
Jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that was some chapter! I had to read it 3 times just to take it all in..... Worth. The long, long wait.... :-) just kidding I know you have busy crazy life just appreciate the update....
I think you should make Angela's mother Mr. Cheney's true mate... Would that not be awesome? Haha can you imagine ?
Okay girl glad updated and are okay I was getting worried about you .... Hope all is well and thank you as always I so appreciate all your hard work
Wendy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.<-- crazy chapter, for real. Should I even post it? lmao You're going to think im nuts with a scene in there...maybe even grossed out? *bites nails*
LOL, ikr? It's a lot to take in.
It has been a little too long, but im starting ch 18 later on today. It'll be small, but hopefully it'll be okay. I always worry. lol
OMG, Mr. Cheney would be floored, could you imagine? I wonder what he'll think then? He'd have to love a human ;)
Thanks again, Wendy. Love hearing from you
XxOo
jells
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, what an amazing chapter!! I was really scared for Bella when she started bleeding. I hope it's nothing too bad (first thing we have to worry about). Then we have sicko Aro killing his son, and we know he is going to cause trouble (major thing we have to worry about). We have weird Mr. Cheney acting all crazy (something else to worry about). And now you give us Tanya for a cliffie!! How much worry can your readers handle? But mixed in with all this worry, you give us such glorious lemons. Possessive, aggressive, sexy Edward can fix all the angst you give us. This story is just so outstanding; and you are amazingly talented. I can't wait for the next chapter, and the next update of LAH.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH. My co-writer Tyggy has it. I'll post asap when i get it back. =)
Thank you so much. Your comment made my day when I read it. *blushes* Thank you, it isn't without effort, lots of it. And even then, it's frustrating at times.
You're absolutely right, there is always something to worry about. Hopefully they'll be able to catch a break soon....or maybe not ;) lol
Thanks again, love hearing form you.
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, so much going on. I loved the super long chapter. You've got a great creative mind. I was all nervous about Bella leaking blood. Nicely written. Of course I'm all scared about Ben and Angela. Ben's father is off the hook scary w/ wanting to drain Angela. I will be so sad if Ang or Ben dies. I know I will just have to wait and see. (lol). I really loved how you wrote the scene of E/B running into the other vampire w/ his human girlfiriend. The vampire sounded sexy, E needs some tats. Digging E increased super vampire strength and possessiveness. Love this Edward. Rose forming a blood bond w/ Bella. Still up in the air about that. B already has one w/ Edward correct? so I guess it's good she has one w/ another family member. Glad it wasn't Alice.
Side note-I joined freedom writers site just so I could read this story w/ pictures. I have no idea how to navigate the site. The UI is was more complicated than it needs to be which is a shame b/c I would also like to read some original stories. End bitching rant. I got to your home page. How do I get to LAV chapters?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
I LOVE tatts!!! ikr? Ed needs some too! Thank you, so happy that you liked it. I really liked the tatted vampire. He was hot. If I can find a pick of him and alter it a bit, I'll post it. =)
Yeah, some like the Rose/Bella bond, some don't, others are unsure. But just remember this, the blood bond can be broken or it'll fade over time. When Rose doesn't feed from Bella, it'll fade. =)
Yup exactly, B has a blood bond with E. And the more of her blood he drinks, the stronger it will get.
Yeah FFFW is abit tricky. It took me a while to get used to it. Here is the link to LAV: http://www.thefreedomfanfictionwriters.com/group/adultahautwilightfanfiction/forum/topics/living-amongst-vampires-story (but I haven't posted ch 17 there yet, i'm a bit behind. It takes a while to post the story with pics. Here is also my profile page. Add me as a friend and I can help you navigate =) http://www.thefreedomfanfictionwriters.com/profile/JanineSanchez
Thanks again, fall up. I appreciate you reading and giving me your thoughts, questions etc...
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
OHHHHH I can't believe you left it like that! Well I guess i will be biting my nails until your next post!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH.
Thanks again,I'll post asap
XxOo
jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Dun, dun, dun.... Tanya's back!
Thank you, I was so happy that there was finally a new chapter to read. And now I'm yearning for the next, again... ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH
I'll post asap.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait for next chapter. I really hope Tanya cant get in between Bella and Edward. Someone really needs to show that Bitch that Edward is NOT hers. Love the story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
I agree, Tanya neesd to go. She's a total bitch.
Thanks again,
XxOo
jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh shit had to bring tanya back. that was just shitty. Lovin on that Edward lovin !!!! so muchin this chapter. a+
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Tanya is just crazy...but I don't think she'll be around for too much longer. ;)
Thanks again! Love hearing from you.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
hihi i want to go all fan girl now but we dutch girls don't do that ( well most of us don't) but this chapter was great i couldn't stop reading like with a good book you want to read over and over again
Author's Response:
Hiya *waves* lol
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Aww thank you *blushes* your comment made my day when I read it.
Thanks again, I'll post asap
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
uh oh! Its Tanya! but you scared the hell out of me with the whole Bella leaking Blood thing. I knew it was the pills. I'm also a little mad that Rosalie formed a bond with Bella bc just like with BDawn EDWARD is Bella's mate and takes care of her and with this bond rosalie seems to think she does. That always irked me. but its a good thing she did save her life. I LOVE possessive Edward. That whole scene in the hallway with him biting her and drinking her blood: yeah SHAMWOW!! lol thanks again can't wait for more. thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
LMAO@ SHAMWOW! <-- love that, too funny! =D
My vampires are abit different when it comes to a blood bond. You'll see when Rose doesn't drink blood from Bella anymore, the bond will begin to falter and break away.
Thank you. I love possessive Edward too ;)
Thanks again, love hearing from you.
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, this chappie was extra packed with info! I do despise the cliffies.....not really, just anxious to see what happens with Tanya. Curious about Bella's blood infection. Going to check out "Wolf in Sheep's Clothing" now. Thanks for another excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Thanks again, I appreciate it! =)
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
tanya is crazy i know:)
Author's Response:
lol that she is!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Thanks again,
xxoo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hey jells thank you for updating. I hope they find a cure for her blood disease and get the rights she deserves. Looking forward when Ben's dad and Tanya get theirs. Keep up the great writing.
Love Jukie
Author's Response:
Thank you so much jukie!
Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
They will get theirs soon ;) Love hearing from you,
Thanks again,
XxOo
jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
I know this is stupid, but i am reviewing this as...
im so excited that you uploaded and even better you uploaded on my birthday :)
I wish i had checked twcs yesterday now :( would have been the best birthday present ever!!!
Anyway, im going to read the chapter now and review again :)
Author's Response:
Aww Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Thanks again, hope you liked it.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yay update. I'm so happy. But Tanya oh my what trouble will be coming along now
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Tanya is just horrible. =/ lol
Thanks again.
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
God, I hate Tanya.... I'm worried that she won't give up, like you said. And the deal with Bella's illness, WTF....scary! She could just bleed out!?!?!
For some reason, when I was reading this I thought I had more to say....
Just know, it was awesome, and I was a happy girl when I saw that you updated :)
Oh, exactly how tall is Edward now?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Yeah I hate Tanya too. It's funny b/c in my other story I really like her. lol But here *shakes head* she has got to go.
I have this in my notes somewhere. You should see the stack of notes i have for this story. It's crazy lol But off of the top of my head I want to say that Edward is now a little over 7 feet tall...between 7'2" to 7'4" he's insanely tall...the male vamps are around 6'8" on average.
I'll have to look it up for exact. lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh gosh if anything happens alice is going to be in so much trouble and poor esme, why oh why didn't they stay home?? or at least send out just esme or someone to get food, since bella isn't going to be able to get anything for herself. that was some crazy start to this chapter, no idea what the heck is going on!! seriously can't catch a break, can they?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Nope, they can't catch a break lol...nit yet anyway. =)
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
OH MY GOSH! I really hope Tanya doesn't cause too much trouble! Also, I hope they find out what happened to Bella, that is serious! I really loved this so much :) Cannot wait for the next update of this and LAH :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story. And yup it's LAH that I finally finished. =D I sent it to my co-writer for her to preread and I'll post asap when I get it back.
Thanks again. Love your comments.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ooohhh shizz. Tanya. *waves* hi Jells! Great chap. Loved the history lesson while at the museum. Bella has a blood disease, figures. McChomp,,,aahahahahaha that is all on that. Ooh and loved the barbed peen of course!
Author's Response:
Lambyyyyyyy *waves*
LMAO@ McChomp I have no idea where that came from. lmao
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story. <--- LAH fyi *giggles*
Thanks again Ms. Barbedpeenward, BTW I will post LAH as soon as I get it back from Tygs, she's lookin' it over. Damn chapter took me the entire time to finish since i posted ch 17 LAV. Nutz! Im exhausted. lol
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
GAWD where do I begin with this humungous chapter. Glad bella is doing better. Still think it has something to do with those pills. The museum was interesting too. Uh oh Skankya is back.
Author's Response:
LOL. Love your comments!
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad to see your back. I really enjoyed the update and can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
I'll post asap. Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
thanks for the update. it is always intersting to see what you have cooked up!! it is always orginal and totally messed up!! you have one creative mind. you still haven't really told us what is wrong with bella and how it is going to effect everything in the long run.... hummm!! well thanks again and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.
Yeah...I love mind games. lol You'll find out soon.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
come on update............
what are ya waiting for?
Author's Response:
Hey! Yeah I'm posting today, just finishing my edits (combining two chapters in one). It's been a crazy past month. I apologize for the crazy wait.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to your update, is it soon? Good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =) Yes, I should be able to post in a few days. I added chapter 18 to 17 to make it an extra long chapter since RL kept me from posting.
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
frreaking love the story!!!!!!!1 you have no idea how happy i was when i realized that living amongst hell wasnt the only story written!!!!!!!! did you introduse the plot to that one???? i see similarities.
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much! Your review totally made my day!!! =D
Living Amongst Hell was my original idea that I'm writing right now with my co-writer Thaigher Lillie. She def adds the dark element to the story. Now Living Amongst Vampires is an alternate version (mild version of LAH) that I decided to post first because I wasn't sure how LAH was going to be preceived. You'll see many similarities between the two, but the vampires and some things will also differ a lot as well. I really hope that you'll continue to like both of them.
Thanks so much again!
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
oups... mon commentaire n'est pas arrivé. Je vérifiais... j'ai tellement hâte de lire le prochain chapitre.
C'est mon histoire préféré de vampires, ils sont extraordinaires. Vos personnages sont tellement originals.
Ces derniers chapitres sur les règles de Bella sont une perle!
Author's Response:
Fleur! Thank you so much and sorry for the later response. Life has been crazy!
Thank you. I'm happy that you continue to enjoy the vampires I created. It means a lot to me. =)
I'm adding to chapter 17, combining chapter 18 to make up for the long wait. lol
Thanks again, love hearing from you.
xxoo
Jells
Date: 16 Jul 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Fantastic chapter. I feel like I'm living in this world w/ all the details you give.
"I haven't posted any pics here within my chapters, but I have tons at the other site that I post with this story."- Where else is the story posted? I would love to read it with pictures. Awesome how you see werewolves in the story.
Author's Response:
hiya *waves*
Sorry for the late reply. RL is crazy.
Thank you. It's definitely not without difficulty writing a detailed chapter. lol
Oh yes, I post this story at Freedom Fan Fiction Writers site as well. I have lots of pictures posted there and a bunch of different banners, too. The link is on my bio page here if you want to join. =)
Anyways, thanks again. Love hearing from you.
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 14 Jul 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
There are no words to describe how much I love this story. Can't wait for the next update and keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Omg thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply. RL is crazy, but I'm combining two chapters to make up for it. lol
Thanks again, I really appreciate it!!!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really looking forward to reading he next chapter, since you left such a marvelous cliffhanger at the end there. Good chapter as always, though; I'm absolutely in love with your vampires.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
And thank you, I'm happy that you like my vamps. To be honest, I wasn't sure if any one would since they are quite different from SM's.
My beta ran into some RL issues, but I'm hoping to have the chapter posted this week sometime.
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have rated every chapter but wanted to catch up before I wrote you a review. This story is outstanding. Lots of plot, drama, loving, kindness and cruelty make it an excellent read. It was recommended by Robshandmonkey author of Edward's Eternal Kiss." I am looking forward to chapter 17. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! =) I squeed a bit when I read your comment.
I'll have to thank Robshandmonkey.
I'm happy that you enjoy the plot. And there's so much more to cover. I can't wait to have it all written and completed.
Thanks again, I hope that you'll continue to enjoy.
xxoo
Jells
Date: 09 Jul 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 09 Jul 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure yet, will keep reading.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 08 Jul 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story!!! I love any type of Edward, but Vampire Edward is more than enough to get me hot and bothered. It is amazing how complex this story is and I cannot wait til the Ultimate Vampire takes his shot against Aro and becomes King. At least I hope that is the direction you are leading. The sexual tension, the drama and not to mention the raw, hard sex is such a turn on!!! I know you will keep it coming.
Also, I hope you will get back to Living Amongst Hell becomes mean vamp Dickward is just as hot as our Ultimate Vampire in this story. Just saying it is added to my list of favorites and I am waiting for that update.
Anyway, keep up the good work and honestly, I have to say this is one of my most fav of the stories. Thanks. You rock!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day.
Most definitely I want Edward to be king and have Bella be changed into a hyrbid.
As for Living Amongst Hell, I should have a chapter posted soon. You see, my cowriter for L.A.H. and I are in a contest, so it takes a little bit longer to update. But I'm hoping I can post LAH by next week sometime. Thanks for adding it to your faves. I'm flattered that you like both stories. =)
Thanks again and you totally rock. Loved hearing from you =)
Xxoo
Jells