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Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

hmmm messy sex, my favourite!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hi!

Just wanted to tell you  how much I enjoy reading your stories.

Your mind must be a fascinating place to live in.

Can't wait for what happens next!

 

SIGN ME,

INTRIGUED AND ENTERTAINED. 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much =) That means a lot to me.

I should have the chapter posted soon.

Thanks again, your comment made my day =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Damsel w Dreams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh please, oh please, oh please.....

Author's Response:

Hiya!

I should have the chapter posted really soon.

Thank you =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: ggmt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

GAHHH!!!! I love this story soooooo much! I don't want it to end so I hope you're planning on making this a long story :) Thanks so much for such frequent updates and I cannot wait until the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much! I'm happy that you like =)

It will be a long story.  I've only covered 1/4 so far. There's so much more that will happen.

I should have ch 17 posted really soon.

Thanks again, I appreciate it =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMG! is Aro putting crap into the human food supply to get them to produce more blood or something? kinda like how most food nowadays has folic acid to try to prevent birth defects in pregnant women? methinks they should get their own cattle, chickens and crops so they have things that can't be as easily tainted...

or am I completely off base in what's wrong with Bella?

 

so Edward's probably one of the biggest vampires ever then? man is that kinda funny...biggest vampire in history listening to his tiny human mate.*snickers*

 

totally LOVE this story and was SO HAPPY when I saw that you updated...and I just LOVE your long chapters! oh and how possessive Edward is but he still is gentle with Bella.

 

I hope that you'll update soon! I'm seriously addicted to this story I think!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Love your theories =)  You'll see soon.

Yeah, Edward's the biggest vamp. And he listens to his tiny mate. LOL  The male vamps in this story may be dominant but they cherish their mates. So glad you like. =)

Thank you so much =)

I should have the next chapter posted very soon.

Thanks again, love hearing from you. I appreciate it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

 

First let me start by saying......OH MY FUCKING GAWD!

WHEW...

Okay now that is out of the way! I am so bad that once I saved up the three chapters that I didn't take the time to comment on each one because I was so in to these new pieces of chocolaty heaven that I wasn't about to stop for nothing...and well now obviously I have been forced to....

Jesus those last few chapters were just GAH!

I loved each one....but I crack up each time I read Bella being so totally full of herself that she refers to her own blood as tantalizing....!!! that is just too freaking funny....conceited much there girlfriend? he he...

So now Edward is....cue bionic man music from the seventies?

Bigger...Stronger...Faster...and uh well er uh...um....shall we say MORE ENDOWED!?

Yummy!

Awesome...I can't so wait to see where this goes but girl you and Tyggs are going to have to get an update on LAH!!!

I am seriously going through withdrawls...and you all left us hanging....

Sigh!

Happy Fourth and hurrrrrrrrrrry!

I thought I would lend you my green eyed Purrward and revamp him to your Crimson eyed Purrward.

hope you like!

xoxox

Drea aka Robshandmonkey

♥∫♥∫♥

 



Author's Response:

OMG!!! Cover your ears b/c I'm going to squee. lmao *squeeeeeeeeee

Thank you so much!!! I LOVE the crimson eyed Purrward. I'm soooooo going to use that for ch 17. Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!

*giggles @ concieted Bella. Yep, she knows the dealio that she's the shizzle. lmao

Yuppo, Edward has to be bigger and stronger IF he takes on Aro and his guard. And then there's Bella too....she'll be important as well.

*shakes head sadly* Ikr? I'll have to finish the LAH chapter asap. It's going to be crazy. lol

Thank you =) Hope you have a happy 4th too.

*hugs

Jells

PS: I found a pic of a green eyed Edward. I'm so going to have to try making manips/banners. They seem fun to make =)

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

This might seem strange, but can your version of vampires tell their mate through smell... i should probably know this as i have read this at least twice over but....

If they do, what was Edwards reaction after Carlisle came home from work this day??

:)



Author's Response:

Hi again!

 

Yes, you're absolutely correct, my vamps can tell their mate thru smell.  So going back to that night....Carlisle was at work; he came home with many scents on him.  His time with Bella was limited and they weren't hugging each other; etc... it was basic patient/doctor contact.  He also saw several patients after her, causing their scents  to be mingled and muted... So by the time Carlisle got home, Bella's scent was too faint to be picked up thus he couldn't tell that she was his true mate.

Awesome question btw. Hopefully I can finish the outtake soon with Edward's POV. So far I have written his POV before he meets Bella and during the time he saves her.

Thanks again, love getting questions.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

AHHHHH!!!! LOVE IT!! This is one of those stories which i wish i hadn't found until it was finished as i really want to read all of it!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day!! There's so much more to cover still.  This story will be around 30 to 50 chapters.

I should be able to post ch 17 this week sometime, =)

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

 

Reviewer: busybee37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fabulous chapter but I have one question, is Bella ill because of the tablets that she has to take?



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Thank you so much =)

Great question. I will reveal that very soon. =) The pill can cause her eyes to bleed as well as from the ears, nose and mouth...but....it may not be the pill.

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

What the hell, Jells?!?!?!?! Cliffy bitch, much?! That was so bad- downright cruel!!!! OMG!!! Isn't there enough on their plate as it is?!?! GAH!!!! Bella's eyes bleeding...what?....hell to the motherloving no!!!! I remember that bleeding from the nose,ears and eyes was one of the first sideeffects of the meds the humans have to take to increase the red blood cell count or something like that AND that it will eventually lead to the death of the victim once it developes further...! So once again- WHAT THE HELL,JELLS?!?!?! If that's really the cause why her eyes bled (not that I could think of anything else that would cause such a reaction) and there is no way to cure it- Bella needs to be turned into a hybrid, asap! Like, now!!!  Aro is after them anyway- why not give him a reason, at least?! Speaking of the devil- that sick fuck! Public execution of his own son?! I don't think that will sit too well with his 'fellow vampires'.... Serves him right!

Ungh...I have absolutely no idea what to fear the most that could possibly happen to our beloved vamps (first, that is!)!!!! The list just keeps on getting longer and longer!!! Right now we have Aro, the possibility of Bella being really sick, a certain vamp that is on the loose and now that you also mentioned the werewolf-species- which is in a constant battle with the vamps over dominance- and could come down to good old planet earth and start another war...who also happen to be carnivores...so- doubled thread for all humans to get eaten!!!! GAH! GAH! GAH!!! Hells Jells, really? You're such a damn devil! You and that wicked brain of yours!!! =)  Jeeez- the suspense is effing killing me!!!

I serioisly can't wait to read the next chappy!!! I love your twisted yet brillaint mind, bb!!! Oh, did I mention that the shower scene was damn hot? If not- the shower scene was really, really hot!!!

Biting my nails until the next update! Luv ya,bb!

-Sue



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO!!!!

*waves* =)

IKR? I LOVE cliffies as much as I LOVE mindfuckery. And the funniest part was that it wasn't even an intentional cliffy, I was going to keep writing..Buuuttt...I got tired *grins*  So yeah lmao

But no worries, I should have ch 17 up this week sometime *crosses fingers*

Yes, exactly, it could be the medication.....but *shrugs* maybe not. I do live a good mindfuck, ya know. lol

I think Bella will be human for another 11 chapters at least. lol Yep. So much more to cover, but you never know...I don't always stick to my outline. The ending is the same, nothing changes there, but what happens in between tends to be twisted. I have like 3 outlines for this story. lol

*giggles* at wicked brain. You should see my dvd collection, it's mostly horror.,,,99.9 % of it. lol

Yeah, there's so much going against them. And the werewolves, if they decide to invade....things will get really messy. Sooo idk...we'll see.

Thank you so much. Glad you liked teh shower scene. That was such a pain in the a** to write. So thank you, that means a lot to me.

Anyways, I LOVE your comments. They make my day!

I'm anxiously awaiting an update for RITD! I'm having withdrawals. =(

Hope to talk to you soon, bb!

Love ya, smooches! <3

XxOo

Jells

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow  poor Aro's kid.    Cant wait till Edward gets to kill ScumRo.     yummy times for our kiddies, ed and B



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Thank you=)

LOL@ Scumro <--- love that btw!

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, seeker =) I'm happy that you still like the story

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Jells what the hell????  Bella's eyes are bleeding?  facking hell.  Cant they catch a break already.. They had mad barbedpeen sex and now her eyes are bleeding? haha



Author's Response:

Lambyyyyyyyyyyykins *waves like a crazy person* Hi =)

IKR? There's always something happening.*giggles* I can't help it.  lol Things will get worse before they can get better. Lots more twists coming up.

I LOVE mad barbedpeen sex! Still haven't found a pic of a barbed peen yet. ='( I think I'm just going to make a pic of a barbed peen myself, add the barbs and voila!...got yourself a barbed peen. Dare me to post it next chapter? lmao

Anyways, thanks for reading. Love hearing from you Ms. Barbedpeenward

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =) So glad you still like.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

I bet you it's those pills they have her taking that Carlisle didn't want her taking. Edward isn't going to be happy cuz she's going to be close to death. Leaving him with no other option but to change her or lose her. Aro will see this as a betrayal especially cuz of what just happened with his son. Yep the shit is about to go down. Oh and madd props to Bella cuz if a cock that size was coming at my whooha I would close up shop. Sorry anything over 9in is just too much for me I do like to walk lol



Author's Response:

Hiya waves*

Love your thoughts. You'll see soon what's going on with Bella. I love mindfuckery ;)

LMAO yeah, Edward's umm...peen is quite large...but so are all the male vamps in this story *giggles* Oh speaking of peens, Tygs and I found this article on this guy...I think he's Columbian or something, can't remy, but anyways, I kid you not, his schlong was looong. All the way down to his knees. At first we thought it was fake, but it's real. The pic was old. Poor guy, there's no way in hell he'll be able to get that up. =/

Anyhoo,

thanks for reading and your thoughts

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

What's wrong with Bella?



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

You'll find out soon ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter.  Pleasssssssssse put the next chapter soon.  Tugs hair and pouts a lot. 

Jukie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

LOL. Aww don't pull out your hair, I should have the chappy posted this week sometime.

Thanks again, love hearing form you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

what's going on with Bella,is is the pill to increase her red blood cells???

but she didn't take it???or is it linked to being edward's mate???

it's so frustrating  but so gooooooood!!!

please update soon

 



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves* =)

LOVE your guesses.

And you're absolutely correct, she didn't take the pill. Carlisle gave her a harmless red blood cell production pill instead. But what about her birth control pill? Nah...maybe not, right? hmmm.... lol You'll see soon what's going on with Bella. There could be so many things.

I should have the chappy posted this week sometime,

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: FangMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

Absolutely LOVED it. Muah...thanks for the awesome chapter. From the fuckhawt lemon to the awsome info to the insanely gruesome cliffy... Wow.

Muah ~ Fangs

Author's Response:

FANGBANGER! Lmao! Sorry for the yelling, couldn't help meself ya know? I'm all hyper like Fred *sigh* and I sound like a chipmink right now. =P

I'm sooooooooo happy that you liked the lemon. It took me forever to write, and I did it by myself. lmao Lemons are such a pian for me. Gaaaaaaaaaah! *runs away screaming*

Tank you

XxOo

Jellybeany

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

so very neat this here is



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you're still enjoying the story, Shiftyless =)

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: cgooden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

I've been enjoying this story so far.  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so  much =) I'm happy that you like so far. Hopefully you'll continue to like.

I should have ch 17 posted this week sometime.

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: BGinny7606 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

jellybean! wonderful chapter  but  a bad, bad cliffy :-P



Author's Response:

Ginnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! *waves*

Thank you. IKR *giggles* Very BAD cliffy. lmao

No worries, ch 17 will be up soon.

XxOo

Jellybean

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

so glad the next chapter is almost ready, that is such an intense cliff hanger - don't make us wait too long please :)



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Yeah, very intense cliffy. lol I should be able to post this week.

Thank you,

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

holy crap, her eyes are bleeding what the hell??????   great chapter adn lemons !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad that you still like =)

Thanks again,

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: JustWannaRead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fantastic chapter! really loved it! ♥ would love it if you put picture in the chapters. :] don't think that it would ruin the flow of the story, quite the opposite, I think, it can help the readers to, even more, see what you are trying to portray. I'm not trying to critic your writing, I'm just saying that it will be the cherry on the delightfull sexy sunday that you're creating for us! (^.^)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thanks so much =) Glad you still like.

I agree, I do love pics myself. I post a ton with this story and my others at the other site. I'll try to go back and post some pics with the previous chapters and upcoming chapters.  

Anyways, thanks so much. Love hearing form you =)

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am on pins and needles.  I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =) So glad that you still like.

I should be able to post this week sometime.

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: ivelisse lola feliciano Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 16

omg what up with bella eyes



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Awesome to see ya here.

You'll find out soon. I should be able to post this week sometime. =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no, oh hell... oh shit!  WTF?!?!

 

Ok, I will be internally dying now until chapter 17 comes out! *sighfaints*



Author's Response:

lmao!

I should be able to post this week. =)

Loved ur comments btw.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

What in the Hell is going on with B?



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

You'll find out soon.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Once again WOW! the lemon? AMAZING! and then the cliffie? yeah not so much. Lol I loved the thrall part right before Edward went hunting. That was great. I can't wait to read more. But those sacs are tiny sacs right? He doesn't have like balls hanging from his chin right? Lol thanks again bye for now. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day. As soon as I read balls hanging from Edward's chin, I choked on my water. LMAO I don't know if I'll be able to rid myself of that image.  lol Think of really small poison sacs deep inside. You wouldn't be able to see 'em, you'd have to press down on Edward's throat to feel 'em. I guess think of snake poison sacs?? lol  Yeah *looks guilty* Sorry about that cliffy =( BUT I'll have ch 17 up asap, hopefully by the end of this week. *crosses fingers*

Thank you =) Glad you liked.

Thanks again, love hearing from you.

XxOo

Jells 

Reviewer: Lil_rebel_devil Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

omfg!!!

update!!! evil cliff hanger lol

love it cnt wait for more x x x



Author's Response:

lol yeah little evil cliffy

Hopefully I'll be able to post this week sometime when I get the chappy back =)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thanks so much,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: JenDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

ok 2 guesses, first is that she's pregnate and second is that she being changed. Can't wait to find out what happens.



Author's Response:

Great guesses. It will be revealed soon. =)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 16

wow great chap keep it up :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) Glad you liked.

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Just keeps getting better!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! Glad you still like =)

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

man girl more twists and turns... you have one twisted mind... you set up for the werewolves to come and good old aro there is lots of people who don't like him...he is really going to freak out about ed.  is she pregnant?  i have a feeling she is.  that isn't going to be good.  ed is soooo f-ing HOT!!!!  damn!!!! can't wait for more and thanks for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) So glad you like still. There will be so many twists and turns and kinky twistedness coming up soon. lol

Many vampires won't like Aro anymore. He really did cross a line. Vampires are very protective of their mates and families. But Aro, he's just a monster, killing his own child. Very sick vamp indeed.

Your question will be revealed soon. =)

Thanks again. Love hearing from you. And thanks for reading =)

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 16

This story just gets better @ better.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Glad you still like. I'll have ch 17 posted soon.

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

What the hell is wrong with Bella? I can't believe she let him kiss her with that dirty mouth! The shower scene was hot though. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I'll have ch 17 up soon.

Thanks again, love hearing form you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

Jells.....

First off- I'm so, so, so, so terribly sorry that you're still waiting for a response to your lovely mails and that I only now found the time to read your new chapters!!!! I'm working on rectifying it right now! First reading and reviewing and I give you a pinky swear to mail you as soon as I can- weekend the latest!!! I would have done so earlier but there really was hardly any time- too much shit going down here... ANYWAY- as for the chapter....

OMG- I blushed so hard reading this! Seriously! I thought Bella turning on every male Vamp in town with her period-causing them to absolutely freak out over it- and everybody knowing about it in the last chapter was bad. BUT trying to have sex with your new, improved, stronger and foremost bigger mate, who happenes to be a horny vamp, while your soon-to-be father-in-law, supported by your soon-to-be brothers-in law try to prevent that from happening! Like, literally pulling you and said horny and lus-crazed mate apart from each other- while your doing it.... Yeah, stuff like that would do that to me...!!! =) =) =) OMG!!! That scene was so wrong in all the right ways!!!!!

And the fact that Edward went through The Change already....tells me, that he needs to be prepared for whatever shitstorm is going to come upon them and already know you have in mind for them! Don't even try to deny it- you admitted as much =P The whole Aro thing is so shady- nothing good can come out of it when he is involved! We already know that Edward and Bella both are part of this prophacy- so he is definately after them! GAH!  Yeah, I'm really curious to see what the heck will happen to them all! BUT they should definately make sure that Bella gets somewhere secluded from the very beginning in 28 days- so much drama will avoided then!^^^

Awesome chapter,bb! You're doing an amazing job, but you already know that! Up to read the next chapter now, so- read me in a few! =)

Luv ya!

-Sue



Author's Response:

Sueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee OMG *waves like a crazy nut*

No problem, bb! Take ur time. No rush. I totally understand the RL thing. I've been crazy busy myself. Write when you have time. =)

LOOOOOOOOVED ur comments!!! *giggles* IKR? I'm such a perv, I couldn't help myself. Daddy C, Emm and Jasper just had to pull Bella away from Edward. And Edward's still trying to thrust. lmao *hides face and blushes* I have my pervy moments...err...correction, Edward AND Bella have their pervy moments. I just write what they do *looks innocent and grabs halo*  =P

Thanks again,

Hope all is well

Love ya, bb!

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

well what can i say bitch? I'm not surprised at the cliffy seeing as to I KNOW what it it lmaoooO!!! Just had to rub that in someone's face lmao! This was a great fucking chapter and you never let us down. I'm just addicted as i was when i read the first chapter. You did good you mongolian whore. Send the chapter to me cause i wants to read it now <--- YEAH I'M RUBBING IT IN YA'LL FACE LMAO!!!



Author's Response:

lmaooo xD

Love ur fucking comments bitch!  I'm so losing my touch tho....can't get the shit right anymore like I used to.

Oh and dude, my cell is still effed up. I gotta buy a new one. >:(

Anyways, keep an eye out for two emails. LAH and LAV will be coming ur way soon.

Thanks, seed slurper. Love ya to bits

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMFG I love the detail you put into this story but I hate the cliffy's lol  I cant wait to find out what is wrong with her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Sorry for the cliffy. lol Promise the wait won't be long

Thanks for reading. Love hearing from you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  I wonder what is wrong with Bella?  Also, I don't think I could have watched Adriano die either...ew.  Cannot wait for Chapter 17 and Living Amongst Hell update :)



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves* Thank you so much =)

Yeah, Adriano's death was quite gruesome. Aro is literally a monster. =/  I should have ch 17 posted soon. And I'm close to completing LAH chapter as well.

Thanks again,

love hearing from you

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: TishPhoenix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

this was probably one of the most original fics I have seen in a long time. It kept me enthralled every step of the way. I couldn't put it down so to speak. The way you have developed this new world, the characters just fitting still into what the twi fans love as well as fitting into your own creation was a magnificent blend. There are many ways that something of this sort could "go wrong", however your story is perfect. So much of the same thing is done now-a-days, and this just left me in awe and took me on a journey much the same as the original series did. Few fics capture me like that, I'm in awe. Great job, and I hope to read more soon. 



Author's Response:

Omg! When I read your comment, I must admit, I squeed! Thank you so much. Your comment made my day. I was at work and I wasn't able to comment back until now.

I'm so happy that you gave my story a chance. And I'm even happier that you like it. =)

This storyline had been in my mind for a long time now, and I just had to write it. Whether any one would like it, I wasn't sure at first. And to put it all down on paper can be quite a challenge sometimes. So it means a lot when I recieve a review such as yours.

Thanks again for reading and kind words. I really appreciate it that you took the time to comment.

xoxo

Jells

 

Ch 16 snippet (sorry for any mistakes, the chapter is still with my beta)

Bella's POV

 

OoOo

“Hunt,” I squeaked. “Hunt what?” I came to a stop in front of four massive vampires whose dark crimson eyes locked onto me, gauging my reaction carefully.

 

Edward sighed, walking up to me. I immediately noticed that his gait was no longer wobbly. His steps were calculated, stealthy. Predatory. He was much more in control of his new body just like Carlisle said that he'd be. I gawked at my vampire, taking in his powerful muscles as they shifted and rippled fiercely underneath his pale skin. He was astounishing. He was emitting sheer power as he moved towards me. If I hadn’t been his mate, I would have shrunken back from intimidation of his immensity and the power that was rolling off of his body.

 

“Kitten…” Edward purred, gently brushing his knuckles against my cheek. “Go back to sleep. I’m sorry that I’ve awakened you.” He leaned down and brushed his cool lips against my forehead.

 

I caught Edward’s large hand in both of mine. I tried to pull him down to my eye level to grab his attention, but it was to no avail. He quickly averted his eyes. “Edward, please…please look at me…tell me what’s wrong. Why did Emmett say to go hunt?” The word “hunt” made my blood run cold and twisted my stomach into a big knot. My immediately bombarded itself with images of my parents being hunted down by that vampire the night they were attacked and killed.

 

My head began to spin as the blood drained from my face...

 

“Bella.” Edward caught me in his arms as my knees buckled and lifted me up, clutching me to his chest protectively. “Please, don’t worry. It’s nothing. Just go back to sleep, love.” He walked over to the couch and set me down gently, before he stepped away and began to pace in the living room like a wild caged animal.

 

“Dude, bro…just tell her. She can handle it. She’s a tough little human,” Emmett argued, crossing his arms over his chest as his crimson eyes followed Edward’s every move. “Tell her!”

 

Edward whipped his head back as his fangs punched from his gums and roared deafeningly at the ceiling, silencing his brother. I saw Carlisle and Jasper move closer to Edward out of the corner of my eye. “I DON’T WANT TO FUCKING SCARE HER!” Edward bellowed, snapping his dark gaze onto Emmett.

 

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful chapter.

I hope I explain this right. From the last chapter. the whole "female" term was handled so nicely in this chapter. It just flowed into understanding that it was not Edward being disrespectful. 

Swooning about Edward 2.0. Yummy.

Bella's interactions with the vampires at the store were awesome. Vampires have no shame (LoL) getting all sexy and not being able to control their urges. I really want one.

Excited to read the update

 



Author's Response:

Hi fall up!

Thank you so much! =) So glad you liked.

Yes, that's exatly right. Edward wasn't being disrespectful. But Bella being human and all, she saw it a little differently, but now she understands. Even though Edward did order her around in ch 14, but he was only afraid for her life. And then of course he was all feral. lol But he'd die if Bella got hurt or worse. Although my male vamps are dominant, they still cherish their mates and do anything to keep them happy. Kinda think of it as a really twisted Dom and Sub relationship thingy but Vampire style. <--- I don't know if that makes sense, but it's my version of it. LOL

Thank you. I love going into details like vampire grocery stores. There's so much more for me to cover like vamp jails, vamp amusement parks, illegal human hunting clubs etc. lol

IKR? I want a vamp too. *sigh* And yes they have no shame. Gah! Could you imagine if this was real? OMG! *blushes* I don't think i couldn't handle it. lmao

Anyways, thank you for your awesome comments. I appreciate it.

I should have the next chapter posted by 2mrw or the next day.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Oh PS: here's a tiny snippet of ch 16: (sorry for any mistakes)

Bella's POV ch 16

I watched Jasper’s and Emmett’s fangs grow longer and their expressions turn fierce as their eyes changed from crimson to black. Edward and his brothers didn’t waste another minute as they stalked out to the balcony like the natural predators that they were. Their big bodies moved lithely with each calculated step they took, their powerful muscles rippling fiercely underneath their pale skin. I followed them out to the balcony quietly, but halted my steps abruptly as all three males simultaneously whipped their heads back and growled, sniffing the air. I watched in terror and in awe as the moonlight illuminated their long white fangs. Their hunting senses became alert, immediately kicking in as they perched on the railing, scanning their surroundings. I wasn’t prepared for another feral growl to tear from Jasper’s chest so I instinctively jumped back and squeaked in surprise. I caught Edward’s attention as his head snapped in my direction. His lips curled back from his extended fangs while looking over his shoulder at me. I gasped and stumbled back in shock. His eyes. I was caught in his dark gaze, hypnotized by his black orbs. Those eyes. Those terrifying eyes were staring straight at me and right through the very depths of my soul. But I couldn’t look away…no matter how wild he looked, my eyes locked with his, drawing me further into his black pools.

 

I didn’t know how long I’d been paralyzed on the balcony, completely captivated by Edward’s gaze. His predatory eyes. But my breath suddenly hitched in my throat when his mesmerizing gaze grew more intense. I felt like prey caught in the eyes of a powerful predator, a predator that could rip me apart if he chose or sink his fangs into my delicate neck and suck my hot blood into his parched mouth.

 

My heart began to race. I couldn’t tear my gaze away as his eyes continued to burn into mine.

 

Beautiful black smoldering orbs…so beautiful….

 

“Bella don’t worry, stay calm.” Carlisle’s soothing voice was right next to me, calming my frazzled nerves a bit. But I couldn’t look at Carlisle when he spoke. No matter how much or hard I tried, it was fruitless.

 

~ Yeah....confused? lol No worries, it'll all come together.~

 

Reviewer: nicnak55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

Just brilliant!!! Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)  I'm so happy you liked.

Next chapter should be up sometime this week.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

PS:

Here's a tiny snippet from ch 16: (sorry for any mistakes)

Ch 16 Bella's POV

~*~

“Black blood…” my voice trailed off as I stared at my vampire.

 

“Yeah, black blood,” he confirmed with a nod.

 

“Ick, that sounds disgusting.” I grimaced.

 

Edward chuckled, kissing my cheek. “Nah, Carlisle said that mutt blood is much worse.”

 

I pulled back suddenly, locking my eyes with his. “Mutt blood?” I inquired, arching my eyebrow.

 

“Not dogs, kitten… but an actual species, half-man and half-wolf, lycanthropes. Or what you may know them better as…werewolves,” Edward remarked, his partially elongated fangs stabbing his lip with each word.

 

“Werewolves? They exist, it isn’t a myth? Really?” My eyes widened at this new revelation.

 

Reviewer: JustWannaRead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love the chapter and love how you spoil us with so many chapter during such a short span of time!  :D ♥

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

I'll post ch 16 as soon as I get it back.

Thanks again <3

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: busybee37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

Fabulous as usual.  I really enjoy reading your story and I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

I'll have ch 16 posted really soon.

Thanks again, I appreciate it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

so very well written & described everything is



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Love hearing from you

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 15

Two chapters in a month!!! YAY I love summer!!!

So, what is going on with Edward ? Is he going to be okay ? I wonder why he went through the change so early.... This chapter caught me off guard ... I was so worried when Bella left to go get blood.... I hope Edward gets to run into Tim I think he needs a thank you, that could have been really bad...

So next chapter!!! Can't wait so excited it is almost done... Have I told you how much I love summer!!!

 

Thanks Jells ,

Wendy



Author's Response:

It's going to be three chapters really soon. I finished ch 16 so i'll post when I get it back. Possibly four chapters even. I'll start ch 17, but I have to switch back and forth between LAV and LAH, I'm going to try to finish LAH ch 7 part 2 also.

Carlisle has a theory about Edward's rapid change. Yeah the chapter was a total twist. there will be more, lots more. lol

Thanks so much. I love summer too. ;)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

So when I was re-reading the last couple chapters it suddenly occured to me I never reviewed this F*** awesome chapter ....So SORRY!!!

Jells it was good... No scatch that it was GREAT!!! I loved all the down and dirty parts Oh yeah !!! You had so much going on in this chapter but it works.... 

Thank you



Author's Response:

Wendy! Hi *waves*

No problem about not reviewing. so glad you're still liking it.

IKR? There was lots going on. lol Squeee thank you Glad you like all the dirty parts. there will be more, lots more lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love the chapter. Are you planning to do a Edward POV? I would love to see what goes on in his head. cant wait till next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

I would love to do an EPOV. I have an outtake partially written before he meets Bella in ch 4 and after. But ch 16 is still in Bella's POV. I'd love to show you what goes through Edward's mind. He's very unique. lol

Ch 16 is complete. I'll post asap after I get it back from my beta.

Thanks again,

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

Am i the only person who found it hot edward said pussy?



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO! I think so, Tygs, I think so. lmaooo XD

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

nice and really surprising

i didn't expect this turn of event,thought that the force of their connection caused the pain when Bella got mad with him!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon please!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Yeah, you would have been totally correct because that's exactly what would have happened if Bella denied Edward. He'd die slowly. And he'd be in a lot of pain physically and emotionally. But in this instance, it was The Change. Loved your guess btw. Thank you

Ch 16 is complete. It should be posted really soon.

And Thank you soooo much, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

Is Aro's something bad knowing that Edward has changed????  How much biger  is he than her????  Thanks for the quick update it was great.



Author's Response:

Hiya!!!

You'll see about Aro =) Great guess btw.  

So Edward is a little over 7 feet tall and Bella is 5'4". IKR? Big difference. He's taller than Emmett now, but he isn't as bulky. He's still leaner, but he possesses massive strength. My vampires are really tall. The females are around 6 feet (except Alice she's 5'8") <--- smallest vampire. lol The avergae male is around 6'8". It's a little hard for me to imagine the height differences in my mind between the humans and vamps since I'm so used to them all being average height.  

Thanks so much. Glad you liked.

Ch 16 is complete. I just have to edit and send to my beta. I hope you'll like.

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxoO

Jells

Reviewer: BGinny7606 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

jellybean my dear, fantastic chapter. Edward's transformation was brilliant. It was needed if he'll become the vampire king one day. don't keep us waiting too long



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!!! *blushes*

Ch 16 is complete, Ginz.

Love ya,

Xxoo

Jellybean

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

With this story, there's never weird! Trust me! That whole part was fantastic and then Edward waking her up that way? Yep I definitely need shamwows when I read this story. Soo freaking hot! I can't wait for more hot horny Edward! Keep up the great work & please update again soon. Thanks again! Bye for now. 



Author's Response:

OMG! Your comment made my day!!! LMAO@ shamwows. Thank you!!!! I feel like I'm doing an alright job then.

Ch 16 is complete. I finished it today. I just have to edit and send it to my beta. Hope you'll like.

Thanks for reading. LOVE your comment.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

squeeee!!! *waves* Hi Jells,Tyggy!!!!!!!

Great chappie! ooooohhh an even BiGGER barbedpeenward, who says bigger isnt better?  What is up with Aro?  dun dun duuuuunnnnnnn... love you guys



Author's Response:

Lambyyyyyyy!!! *waves back*

hi! =D

Thank you. LMAO@BIGGER barbedpeenward. IKR? BIGGER is better. And more fun. Now Ed-I mean Barbedpeenward is more feral and is more likely to take Bella publicly. Gaah...Im twisted lmao

Can you believe it? Ch 16 is complete. Just gotta edit and send to my beta. Buuuuuuuuuut I'm going to finish Living Amongst Hell ch 7 part 2. That will be posted very soon. i'll work on it this weekend.

Anyhoo,

Thank you

Love ya

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Gawd,,,,,,, I am so in love with this story. Edward just keeps getting hotter and hotter and better and better. Bella is one fuckin' lucky human.

Fantastic storyline. You never disappoint.

Thanks again for sharing, I really do appreciate it. I'm already anxious for the next chapter.

hugz



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day! I'm So happy you like.

Ch 16 is complete. I just have to finish editing and send to my beta. I hope I won't disappoint. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow!  Délicieusement tordue, lol, j'adore!  J'ai beaucoup aimé la longueur du chapitre... facile pour la traduction...merci.

 

Le prochain chapitre sera attendu avec impatience.Je suppose que Edward sera plus en contrôle mais toujours affamé... de sexe, lol



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie beaucoup. J'aime tordu et je l'aime encore plus que vous l'aimez aussi. lol

Ch. 16 est en fait déjà terminé. J'ai juste pour le modifier et l'envoyer à mon Bêta.
  J'espère que vous aimerez. L'histoire aura plus tordu que le temps passe. lol

Merci encore,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

yummy chapter.....hmmm an even bigger and sexier eddie huh.    Aro cancelling doesnt sound good.



Author's Response:

Yep. I couldn't help myself. He just had to be sexier and stronger. lol

Hope you'll like next chapter.

Thanks for reading and commenting, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

omg wow love it!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Aro must know about Edward and he's trying to see what he can do to bring Edward to work for him. According to the legend Edward is suppose to take him out one day so maybe he's trying to  handle Edward before he gets handled. Since they believe in all that legend stuff. What's with all the vamp/human talk now? I really don't like it can we get back to the cute pet names again? Oh and how is Angela/Ben



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Aro definitely wants Edward close. It's kinda like that old saying "keep your friends close and your enemies closer." But you'll see what happened with Aro for now next chapter.

LOL. The vamp/human thing is something that just kinda happened, but he still calls her kitten. Depends on the charcaters, ya know? Anything goes. lol

Ang and Ben are coming up in ch 17. IDK if I can squeeze them in ch 16, the chapter is already finished.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Autumnltd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not what I expected but I love that about your story!!!  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) There will be lots more twists. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Excellent!  Very exciting!  I love the fearless way you write this story and include things (like menstration) that other authors shy away from.  Your alternate universe is so fascinating.

Wonderful cliffy at the end!  Looking forward to the next chapter (as always)!



Author's Response:

Hi Coleen!

Thank you so much. I always wondered in Twilight what would have happened despite the entire "dead blood" scenario. So I just had to try to write it myself, even if my version is a little twisted. lol I'm definitely having fun with this A/U.

Ch 16 is complete. I hope you'll like when I post.

Thanks again, love hearing from you.

XxOo

Janine

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bella sure is brave. If I lived near vampires I would be taking birth control pills ALL the time. Just to be sure I was safe.



Author's Response:

lol ikr? I would too

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

i thought it was great, a third change.  very interesting.  i love that she ran out and got him blood.  loved how the guys had to pulll him off of her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. =) Glad you liked.

Carlisle has a theory for Edward's rapid change. Hope you'll like ch 16.

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: FangMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!!!! Send me chapter 16... Quick. I adore this story. You rawk Jellybean. I cant wait for more. Muah ~ Fangs

Author's Response:

Fangsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss *waves like a crazy person*  lmao

I'm almost finsihed with ch 16, but you're gonna hate it. lmao No, not really. Or at least I hope not. *snort

Thank you so much.

And where the hell are you? I miss ya.

XxOo

Jellybeeeean

Reviewer: JenDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love it, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. =) so happy you like.

And thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

I absolutly love this story, and thank you for updating so quickly, after the last one I can't wait to see what happens with Aro.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm so happy you like.

I should have ch 16 posted really soon. I'm just wrapping it up then I'll send to my beta. =)

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

i'm so happy you updated.. this chapter was aswone.. haha but i have to say i can't picture edward being bigger that emmett though that's just a weird idea.. but it works for this.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much! =D

IKR? I was actually worried that some readers might think that Edward will look like The Hulk lmao b/c of the way I described his transformation. Here's how I picture the new Edward...think taller than Emmett, but his muscles are leaner yet he's still stronger. It does work for this story, he's gotta be the ultimate vamp, ya know? lol Thanks so much, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: shadow4092 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love reading your story, so excited to 'see' what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

So happy you like. I'm so close to wrapping ch 16 up. Hope you like.

Thanks again, I apprecaite it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

This is absolutely one of my favorite stories. I was so excited to see the update, and I loved it. How ingenius of you to come up with the idea of "The Change" for a vampire. Now he's just that much hotter! (like we needed him any hotter :). This is one of my favorite stories...it is just really, really good! As to what is going on with Aro, I have no idea what you have cooked up in your very creative brain. Whatever it is, I'm sure it will surprise us. Thanks for the great chapter. You're the best!



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

OMG! Your comment made my day. =) Thank you sooo much. I squeed when I read your review. So happy you liked! =D

I hope you'll like the next chapter, too.

Thanks again, love hearing from you.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Pretty cool chapter.  I wish I was half the writer you are.  Can't wait until next time.

Jukie



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much. =) Believe me, there's times I wish I could write like some of my friends. It seems so easy for them...While I wanna pull my hair out at times. lol

I hope you'll like the next chapter. *=)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

XxOo

Jells

 

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

so niceeee;)



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh wow!!!   What could have happened for Aro to cancel...

 

I am wondering who is drinking Bella's donated blood...

 

I cannot wait to see what made them cancel, and I think Edwards change had something to do with it.  Edward is a special one, and I think they know that, even if the Cullens dont.

Wow, I am excited to see how that goes down lol  ;)



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Thank you =)

It could be anyone drinking Bella's blood. You never know. lol I already have a vampire in mind, or two that may appear. ;) BuT I won't reveal that for a while. There's soooooooo much to cover, it makes my head spin LOL

I hope you'll like ch 16. I'm so close to wrapping it up.

Thanks again, love hearing from you and your thoughts.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: kmk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Umm WOW OMG loved it. i always can count on an awesome update from you. Wonder wat happened that made ARo cancel

Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much. I'm happy you liked. =)

I'll post the next chapter soon, I'm so close to wrapping it up.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Okay, so this is one of my favorite chapters. I got to tell you, I was getting a little squigged out reading about the Cullen boys' arousal to Bella's scent. Mainly because she sees them as family, but I totally get the vampire reasoning behind it.

But yeah, I felt a little bad for Edward and Bella when they had to be seperated :(

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hiya! *waves*

Aww thank you so much =) Glad you liked. IKR? When I was writing that scene with the Cullen guys and Bella's period I was like OMG, what am I doing?! lmao But yeah, they're vamps so that's the only reason why I left as is.

I felt bad for Edward and Bella too. But maybe they'll get a chance like this again? You never know. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

okay you got one messed up mind!!  this story is like sooo out there and i have to admitt that i need more!!!  are they ever going to change her?  can she get pregers?  is aro nervous because ed is the one that is going to take over?  why did he change so fast?  damn i have a ton of questions and i know you aren't going to answer :(  can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

*giggles* Thank you so much. It is so out there, isn't it? You should've seen me when I was writing this chapter. I question myself sometimes and my twistedness. LOL Thank you. So happy that you like.

Oh but yes, I'll answer some q's- the best I can anyways. lol  Since this story is a HEA, Bella has to be changed eventually. As for the pregers question though, you'll just have to wait and see. lol But technically, a human can get pregers by a vamp unless on birth control pills with the correct dosage, then I'd say no. And yup, Aro is nervous about Edward. He knows what the legend says about him. He is also in awe of Edward. Edward is going to have to watch his back, Aro is sneaky. And for Edward changing so fast, that will be explained next chapter. I think Carlisle has a theory. =)

I'm working some on the chappy. Hope you like. =)

And thanks again, love hearing from you and your q's.

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it!  Yay for Bella and Edward ;)  I wonder why Aro cancelled?  Also, cannot wait for their first date :)  YAY!  Wonder how much longer before Bella is changed?



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much =)  Glad you liked it.

It's going to be at least 10 more chapters before Bella is changed. I hope you'll continue to like. =)

Thanks again. Love hearing form you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!!! Loved it!! Can't wait for the next part :)

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much. I should have ch 16 up really soon =)

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I found this story this past week and I reallllly like it.  I hope Edward is okay.

Please get the next chapter up soom

Jukie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm happy that you gave my story a chance. Thank you. =)

My beta still has ch 15, but I'll post the same day I get it back. Hope you'll like ch 15.

Thanks again,

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: ggmt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE THIS STORY! cant wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you soooo much! I'm happy you like.

My beta still has ch 15, but I'll post the same day I get it back.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

UGHHHHHHHHHHH THE SUSPENSE IS HORRIBLE

IT WAS DEFINITELY INTERESTING

WATS HAPPENING TO EDWARD?????????

HIS POSSESSIVENESS IS SO SWEET AND HOT BUT HE WAS INDEED A BIT DISRESPECTFUL

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

KISS KISS



Author's Response:

I know the susepnse is crazy. sorry about that. =( Buuuuuut, I shouldl be getting ch 15 back this week and I promise I'll post the same day I get it back. Ohhh and ch 16 is almost complete. =)

Thank you =) Love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: emmeylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

You are super lucky that I love this story so much... I have sworn every single chapter that I am not going to read it again until it is "complete" because your cliff-hangers and super long waits between chapters kill me. But then you post a new chapter and I have to stop everything I am doing to read it. This is probably my number 1 fanfic story right.

Just please, could we not wait so long??



Author's Response:

LOL. I guess I am lucky. Thank you soo much. I totally appreciate that you read even if LAV is a wip. That means a lot to me. And I promise I would never give up on this story.

I'm sorry about the cliffies. They are bad aren't they? lol

My beta still has my chapter, but I'll be getting it back this week sometime and I promise I'll post the same day I get it back. Aaaaaaand you'd be happy to know that I'm really close to completing ch 16. Phew! Lots of work. lol

Thanks again, love hearing form you.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

Fantastic chapter. Loved the conflict and how you wrote Bella feelings toward Edward after his sexy dumbass took a trip to vampire instinct land. I could see both their sides. Of course, my insane love for this Edward has me slightly swinging to his side. I am just to obsessed with him. Now if my human husband said that shit to me- it would of been on and I would of been looking for a divorce lawyer.  It will be interesting to see if Edward can understand Bell's perspective.

I would love to know what Edward was feeling during their ride to the hotel.

I so agree w/ Bella Old Cum smells nasty.

There are very few Twilight fanfiction stories that I am reading. I don't even open the story when I see an update. I will get back into them b/c some of the auhors are really good.

NOW-when I see that you have updated, I drop everything do a thank god and get right to reading. You rock.

 



Author's Response:

Awww fall up, thank you so much. Your comment made my day. Thank you so much for that.

I agree, i'm still favoring Edward. lol How could you not? But yes, if my bf said that to me, i'd be fuming. lol

I can't say thank you enough. I hope you'll like ch 15 as well. =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

Alright, B is acting like a snot nosed bitch. E has done nothing but treated treated her like a princess and she's treating him like a dog all because he acted on pure instinct. Maybe they'd be better off without each other?



Author's Response:

Hiya!!

OMG. Poor Edward if they break up. Yeah, Bella was being extremely difficult. But I hope you can forgive her, she'll prove herself in chapter 15. I hope you'll like it. My beta still has it, but I'll post asap when I get it back. =)

Thank you for reading and commenting. Love to hear what you have to say

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.    Bella has a right to be mad I'd say.    Hmmm wonder whats wrong with eddie....the bite from mr greene or her "rejecting" him right now?



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Great guesses. But You'll see. =)

As always, thank you for reading and commenting. Love hearing form you.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  On the one hand, I think Bella overreacted.  On the other hand, her reaction seemed in character.  I like the way you were able to create such conflicting reactions in me!

Poor Edward!  I hope he's okay!  Thanks for the chapter.  Your story is always worth waiting for.



Author's Response:

Hi Coleen. =)

Thank you. I agree, it was even very conflicting to write this crazy little chapter.

And thank you. I'm so happy you are still enjoying this story. Hope you'll like ch 15 as well.

Thanks again, love hearing form you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Chase Corin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

PLEASE post the other chapter soon I am dying here.... I need to know what is wrong with Edward!!! lOVE THIS STORY

Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much. Glad you are still liking this crazy story. lol

I promise I'll post the next chapter asap. My beta still has it, but she'll send it this week sometime, Hopefully 2mrw. =)

Thanks again, love hearing form you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: samsamr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter i'm thinking Edward is sick because the bond between them grew weaker



Author's Response:

Great guess, but nope. You'll seee. lol

Thank you =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: BGinny7606 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

 jellybean that was an awesome update, i wonder what's wrong with edward???



Author's Response:

Hiya Ginnzzzzzzz, bb!

You'll see =)

Thank you!!!!Love hearing from ya!

 

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: 4padfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yea yea, side across the floor.  I got a happy email notice and my favorite story was updated.  Okay you have made my day, after a crappy night of work.  Okay remember i just rammble as I read...Snickers pouting like a vampire child. Ha ha is he really trying to explain...he he sucks to be that principle.  Green, red now orange...okay. Oh crap, why did you stop it only takes a second for them to catch you.  All I can say is not a word for polite society.  Go Edward!!  Oh just go key the car as revenge.  Bella going to go off on Edward?  In his mood he'd enjoy it.  The Vampire Flu what color would the venom be then?  LOL.  No no no those evil little words I hate Chapter End Notes.....what is going on.  That is just evil.  I am going to bring Crazy Vampire Mike back and send him after you.  Be on the look out.  Otherwise great chapter.  Just to get myself thru I'm going to have to convert this to mp3 tonight so I can listen to everything to get over that cliffy there.   You should be proud of yourself!

Enjoy
Robin



Author's Response:

LOLOL.

Hiya!!! *waves like some crazy person* lol

Thank you sooooooooooo much. Your comments totally make my day!!! I smile like crazy and laugh when I read em.

LMAO. Fiiiiiiiiiiiiine. Send Mike after me. I can take him. lmao No worries, my beta still has my chappy 15 but she said she's working on it, I'll post asap.

LOL. I looooooooooooove cliffies. I really do. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

:O nooo what happend to edward.. stupid cliffy.. but great chapter..can't wait for the next one



Author's Response:

lol yeah, I couldn't resist the cliffy. My beta should have the chapter back to me this week. I'll post asap.

Thank you =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

omg what happened to edward?



Author's Response:

Hiya!

You'll see =) I'll post the chapter asap when I get it back.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: DarkwardLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

wtttfff OMGGGGGG WHATS WRONG WITH EDWARD!!!!!!!! OMGGG PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IM GONNA BURST INTO TEARS SERIOUSLY OMG



Author's Response:

Hiiiiiiiiiiii!!! *waves*

No worries, as soon as I get back the chapter this week, I'll post it the same day. =)

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: kmk Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

love it My guess is that Edward is in pain because of the mating bond

Author's Response:

Hiya!

Great guess, but you'll see. =)

Thank you. I'll post the chapter asap when I get it back this week.

Thanks again, love hearing form you,

XxOo

Jells

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